|| Lost || A One Shot

muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome OS! It was beautifully written. Specially liked how you described the guy. Would love to read more of your works. Do PM.. =)

-Shreya and Kanishtha.

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Gosh dr,d guy ws so crazy! Bt d stuborn grlz trd hrdr to stp hm frm dng tat sin 'suicide'.Finaly uska akal toh ayi! It ws wonderful dr!

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-GoluGudiya-

@-GoluGudiya-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Shreya that was WOW !! An original but still somewhere I could feel Taani and Rey ... Kya karu har jagah vahi dekhayi dete hai
Well coming back ... That was beautiful ... It was kinda cute the "love-at-first-sight" concept ... I mean the way the girl was looking at him and how you described almost every single detail was just too good ... And the way you expressed the girl's feelings ... Just outstanding ... And then the guy in black N white (Imanging our dear Rey) wow and He was crying and he wanted to commit suicide and I was like WHAT ! But yeah the whole plan of getting him not to suicide and their small talk ... Just mind blowing ... And you really have justified the name of the story ... Lost !!
It just an OS which would make anybody speechless ...

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Shreya its an outstanding, mind blowing OS, brilliantly written. Love the way u expresses the girl emotions and her trying to save a stranger while she found him hot lol. Amazing...

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Tahira-2013

@Tahira-2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wooow i loved sooo much, kitna bhi na chahun but maine ismein bhi Taarey ko imagine kiya , plzz sorry but it was really brilliant and you are superb writer dear btw you could also start a new ss/ff on this it's an fab concept , i would love to read more

brilliand os 👏👏

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cuppypie121

@cuppypie121

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Just loved it
A very well written OS 👏 👏
U really justified the title

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awwe beautiful

honestly ek baat bolu when you mentioned that its not a taarey os at that time i felt a bit odd to read this

but when i started reading it now you may call it a miracle but i just was lost in your description which god knows why reminded me of lavin(gosh bff khatam ho gaya par uska bhoot ab tak utra nahi hai😆)

seriously yaar it was mindblowing the way you described it

ok i know its a one shot but please continue it dear!😊

this guy in your os must be lost and i am kinda lost in lavin!😉

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