Story Writing Competition...*Results Link: 48*

AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

mehak.....ok...first of all this is for u.......🤗🤗

i really donno what say.but will say watevr i want..........

i know.ppl are so low......they taunt n scrutinize gals on d basis of their colour.......

but sweetheart......i dont think complexion is anyways important.....i mean wat matters is ur inside personality......i hope ppl shud understand this n grow up n stop humiliating others......

wonderful writin as usual......😳

thnx for d pm...😊

Edited by nikitasharma. - 14 years ago

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

very true story...

beautifully written

thanks 4 the pm

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Mehak this was lovely😊 And yeah such things do happen😊 And it's high time people realise that the real beauty of a person is inside them...a pretty face can fade away with time, but inner beauty always remains...and also that Beauty lies in the eyes of the Beholder....😊😊 the people who dont realise this are not worth being bothered about😊

Edited by amyluvsmayur - 14 years ago

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Oh my! The stories are great.....I'll see if I get time to write my own

And Mehr.....you had a beautiful story to which I could relate too...maybe i'll share my story as well about that

@Mehak your story really touched my heart

Edited by KaShBaarish..xx - 14 years ago

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

The story can be of any length right? No specifications na?

Edited by -Steffz- - 14 years ago

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

mehak.. it is reality yrr...

very well written...

thnx 4 the pm..

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

@drfizaahmed..
It was a touching story..and u've written it well...all the best ....

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

yaar, you write fantasies very well. just stick to that. leave the reality for me.😉🤣( woh bhi nehi choregi to main kya likkhu?)

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

well done mehak and yes its reality that many girls face.i don't know what is it with people.Inner beauty matters much more than just physical appearance.Yes i agree that people get attracted towards good looking people fast but thst doesn't give them right to mock at people who don't look good.thnx for writing this one

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

32

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

@Pari_RInki...hey sweetie 🤗

Just read your entry, and I must say it's beautiful. You've a very lucid style of writing, I love the flow of your language. ⭐️

It was very nice...simple and short. I love how it leaves behind a strong message despite the seemingly passive writing, it reflects your protagonist.

A beautiful character sketch indeed...Tista is a wonderful creation 👏

Great work. Thanks for the PM! I'd have missed out on something really good had you not told me!

Much love. 😳

~Khushboo.

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