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Hema

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: scratches-head
Amazing part ! The conversation b/w Prashant and Sandhya seemed so natural and sweet I guess I'm glad in a way that Sandhya didn't say yes, I mean, it's too early. Prashant hasn't sorted out his emotions as yet, and it would be wrong to marry Sandhya for reasons other than love, for both of them.

But I hope their story takes a good turn from here! ;) Keep it up Hema! I loved it =D

Wow that was quick! 😃 Thanks so, so much Aparjita!!

I do think Prashant has sorted his emotions. Only, Sandhya kind of misunderstood him. But yeah, it would definitely have been too early to say yes, because Sandhya needs to be more sure of what she wants..and yeah, she needs to love him.

Good turn, ummm... well, I can't promise that 😉 😆

Thanks again. That was really very encouraging! 😃 😃 😃

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#52

Aww I love this. I thought maybe they would get married, become friends, and then fall in love. But this is great too, to begin as friends!!

And I think he has actually erased Amrita from his life today. He hasn't completely realized that yet. I hope they keep crossing paths frequently.

Awesome part Hema!! But you should update more often!

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Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Goodie Hema di

Me thought u had forgotten about this one..*smiles*

But as said above..I totally loved the convo betweeen them..it was super cute and super honest!!!

Loved your writing style..u bring it out soooo well!!

Keep updating!

Love

~Aru

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-Pinky-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

hi..i was just randomly browzing through this section n found ur story..i rly like it!! 😃i like how u write it frm 2 prospectives...makes it even more interesting. it is also very simple which is another plus!.. i badly wanna read about wut happens next frm sandhya's pov. plzz update soon! just a question... r u gonna write this untill the end? just checking...cuz sometimes it happens that u start reading something....n then the writer leaves it in the middle...😆n thats dissapointing when its a rly good story😳

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

hey hema di..nice part..

Prashant really wanted to get married to her..but he couldn't explain the reason in the right way..

she was still pretty confused about the reason..n she took it in a wrong way..also she didn't want to get married to someone she didn't love ..

but i guess he really wanted it..n now he's willing to give it up, for her..which is sad.

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

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Hema

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nanshr
Aww I love this. I thought maybe they would get married, become friends, and then fall in love. But this is great too, to begin as friends!!

And I think he has actually erased Amrita from his life today. He hasn't completely realized that yet. I hope they keep crossing paths frequently.

Awesome part Hema!! But you should update more often!

Sravi!!! 😃 😃 😃 Thanks so much, I love your comment and the way you engage with the story 😃 I hope they meet again too - although the fact that Prashant was looking at her, knowing that it miight be for the last time may hint to the fact that he won't try to meet her again... but then who knows, where the story will go 😉

I will try my best to update more often. I do intend to do so, but then I'm so self-critcal that I spend ages trying to perfect what I write, and finally, it's still as pathetic as ever but I post it anyway 😊

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Hema

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Rafa.LunaPotter
Goodie Hema di
Me thought u had forgotten about this one..*smiles*

But as said above..I totally loved the convo betweeen them..it was super cute and super honest!!!

Loved your writing style..u bring it out soooo well!!

Keep updating!

Love

~Aru

Aruuuuuuu, thanks!!! 😃 😃 😃 Sorry, I'm a bit slow with updates, Every time I write something I hate it so much I keep editing and wondering whether to post. lol.

I like the convo too, since there's a lot that's unsaid behind what they say, especially Prashant because he has some difficulty with expressing himself through words.

Thanks for the wonderful comment. Love ya!

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Hema

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Pinky-
hi..i was just randomly browzing through this section n found ur story..i rly like it!! 😃i like how u write it frm 2 prospectives...makes it even more interesting. it is also very simple which is another plus!.. i badly wanna read about wut happens next frm sandhya's pov. plzz update soon! just a question... r u gonna write this untill the end? just checking...cuz sometimes it happens that u start reading something....n then the writer leaves it in the middle...😆n thats dissapointing when its a rly good story😳

😃 😃 😃

It's so thrilling to receive comments from 'random browsers'!! Thanks so much!! It's great that you liked this. I am very flattered. I am definitely planning to finish this, don't worry 😆 Thanks for the encouragement.

Can I call you Pinky, btw, if that's your name?

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Hema

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey hema di..nice part..

Prashant really wanted to get married to her..but he couldn't explain the reason in the right way..

she was still pretty confused about the reason..n she took it in a wrong way..also she didn't want to get married to someone she didn't love ..

but i guess he really wanted it..n now he's willing to give it up, for her..which is sad.

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish