Sidyaali FF:-Why??????(Session 2) Part 5 on pg 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intro:-

In this FF all the students have returned from their vacations n now the cultural fest is gonna take place.Sidyaali still ignore each other completely.Sid has stopped talking much to everybody.While the story proceed the mystry of Sid ditching Siyaali will be out infront of Simmi;Siyaali's best friend.So through her Siyaali will come to know the whole mystry.So lets see what this mystry turns out to be for Sidyaali n the people connected to them.
So guys first I wanna know all of ur reviews about it so that I can further continue with the concept which I have in my mind.
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INDEX
PART 1:-Page 2
PART 2:-Page 3
PART 3:-Page 3
PART 4 :-Page3
PART 5 :- Page 4.
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Without second thoughts, please continue :)

Instead of simmi, make niti know the truth..i guess that's gonna be more impactful..just a suggestion..I wouldn't mind reading simmi's part also 😊
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Originally posted by: Garima04

Without second thoughts, please continue :)

Instead of simmi, make niti know the truth..i guess that's gonna be more impactful..just a suggestion..I wouldn't mind reading simmi's part also 😊

Niti would also come to know along with Siyaali.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandhirrocks


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Niti would also come to know along with Siyaali.


Now that sounds perfect :)
Eagerly awaited 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please dude post asap..
Vaise hi we guys are missing our sidyali lyk hell..
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Originally posted by: Sidyali_06

Please dude post asap..
Vaise hi we guys are missing our sidyali lyk hell..


I agree to 😭
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Originally posted by: Garima04


Now that sounds perfect :)
Eagerly awaited 😊

I'll try to update till tomorrow.
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Originally posted by: Garima04


I agree to 😭

M missing them sooo much that its very hard to describe in words.
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Part 1:- Charlie:-Sid bro tu kahan khoya hua hai. Sid:-Aisa kuch nahi hai.Main boxing room mein ja raha hoon see u later. Charlie:-Aree par sunn toh... (Sid went to the wrestling room to sooth his pain.He was crying while punching the punching bag.Simmi was passing through the boxing room she heard someone's sob so she followed the voice.She peeped in to find Siddharth weeping) Sid:-M sorry Siyaali I could not give u the love which u deserved m sorry...but main karta bhi toh kya I was forced to do.Uttkarsh is my bro Siyaali whom I lost long years back n suddenly mom told me that he's my brother.She told me to sacrifice my love for u just for Uttkarsh n I had to do those things which I never wantd to do. It relly hurted me to hurt u Siyaali it relly hurted.I love u Siyaali I relly relly love u but abb iss sabb ka koi faayda nahi cause I broke ur hurt I broke ur trust.U don't deserve a spoilt brat like me Siyaali u deserve someone better than me.I have lost all my rights on u I have lost u forever. (Simmi was beyond shocked ,tears were rolling down from her face) Simmi:-O My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Sid ne itna bara sacrifice kiya sirf aur sirf Uttkarsh ke liye.Urmila mam itni matlabi niklengi maine kabhi nahi socha tha.Mujhe Siyaali se baat karni hogi. (Simmi ran to Siyaali while Sid fell lifeless on the floor with blood all over his face) Simmi:-Siyaali!!!!!!!!!!!!! Siyaali:-Simmi kya hua why r u crying? Simmi:-Wo Sid!!!!!!!!! Siyaali:-Ye larka kabhi bhi nahi sudhrega abhi batati hoon. Neeti:-Phir se uss ne apne nakhre suru kar diye. Simmi:-Tum dono pagal ho kya aur Siyaali tu...tune toh Sid se saccha pyaar kiya tha na then why didn't u trusted him dammit. Siyaali:-Simmi tu kya bol rahi. Simmi:-Sid ne tujhe Uttkarsh ke liye sacrifice kiya hai.Uttkarsh Sid ka bichra hua bhai hai jo bacchpan mein use dur ho gaya tha.Wo tujhse utna hee pyaar karta jitna tu use karti hai.Uss din usne tujhse jo bhi kaha sabb jhoot tha taaki tu use nafrat kare .Uski mom ne usseh yeh sab karne ko kaha. (Siyaali fell on ground with a thud while weeping.Now everything became crystal clear infront of her eyes) Siyaali:-O God ye maine kya kar diya jaha mujhe Sid pe trust karna chahiya tha wahan ulta maine usseh apney aap se dur kar diya. Neeti:-Siyaali tu shaant ho ja hum sabb hai naa. Simmi:-Iss waqt Sid ko teri zarurat hai Siyaali. Siyaali:-Mujhe Sid ke paas le chal Simmi. Simmi:-Haa mere saath chalo. (Siyaali went along with Neeti n Seemi to the boxing room.As soon as they reached they found Sid's face drenched in blood.Siyaali ran to him.) Siyaali:-Sid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!O God someone please call the doctor.
(Seeing Siyaali's voice all the students n teachers rcame there n soon Urmila Rajpoot came)
Siyaali:-Sid get up na please get u love me na then open ur eyes.
Urmila:-Sid beta...
Siyaali:-Abb aap kis haq se usseh beta bula rahi hain mam.
Uttkarsh:-Siyaali tu iske liye itna kyon ro rahi hai.
Siyaali:-Pyaar karti hoon main Sid se.
Uttkarsh:-Siyaali?????
Siyaali:-Bhai hai wo tumhara.
Doc:-Patient kaha hai.
Siyaali:-Doctor he's here.
(Charlie n other boys placed Sid on the bed)
Doc:-Aap sab please bahar jaaiye.
Siyaali:-Doctor main yaha ruk sakti hoon please.
Doc:-Ok but no noise.
Siyaali:-Ok
(Siyaali was just looking at Sid while the doctor was operating him.After a while doctor was done with his work so Siyaali approached him)
Siyaali:-Doctor howz he?
Doc:-Zyaada tension waali baat toh nahi hai bass inke body ka glucose level thora down ho gaya tha.Lagta hai bahot dino se theek se khaya nahi tha issi liye kamzori aa gayi thi.5 minute mein inhe hosh aa jaega.
Siyaali:-Thank u so much doctor.
Doc:-Ur most welcome.
(As soon as doctor left Urmila tried to go to Sid but Siyaali stopped her)
Siyaali:-Aaa aaa not allowed Mrs.Urmila Rajpoot.
Urmila:-He's my son I don't need to take any permission from u.
Siyaali:-Where was ur mothers love jab Sid ne apna pyaar confess kiya tha aap ke saamne haa.
Aap jitna selfish mom maine kahi nahi dekha jo apne ek bete ki khushi ke liye dusre ke pyaar ko sacrifice kar deti hai.
Urmila:-M sorry for that beta.
Siyaali:-Leave rightnow Urmila Rajpoot.
Sid:-Siyaali tu...
Siyaali:-Sid...
(Siyaali just hugged him while weeping .Sid was relly shocked he thought he was day dreaming)
Sid:-Yeh pakka mera dream hee hai.
Siyaali:-Dumbo m in real.
Sid:-Siyaali tu...
Siyaali:-M sorry Sid for not trusting u.
Sid:-What r u talking about?
Siyaali:-I know everything so just don't try to act smart.Simmi ne tumhari puri baat sunn li .
Sid:-That means...
Siyaali:-Shut up tumhe itna Mahan banne ko kisne kaha tha haan.
Sid:-M sorry for hurting u Siyaali I never wanted to do that.
Urmila:-Sid beta...
Siyaali:-Apne suna nahi mane kya kaha aapse .
Sid:-Siyaali tu please shaant ho ja.
Siyaali:-Nahi ho sakti Sid just because of her greediness ur here.
Sid:-Hey shhh don't get hyper.Mom m fine u please go n rest .
Urmila:-Hmmm...
(Siyaali just looked away while Urmila moved out.Sid's gaze fell on Siyaali's eyes which were still teary so he tried to wipe that away)
Sid:-Don't waste these precious pearls.
Siyaali:-I love u Sid.
Sid:-I love u too.
(Sid instantly kissed her to which Siyaali also reciprocate back.Both were kissing each other while crying)
Sid:-Finally it feels like my heart has started beating again.
Siyaali:-N I can feel those beats...
Sid:-Why is life so complicated Siyaali?Agar hamari life easy going hoti toh hum kabhi alag hee nahi hote.
Siyaali:-Sid life jitni complicated hogi naa hamaara pyaar utna he strong hota jaaega.
Sid:-Sacchi...
Siyaali:-Mucchi...
So guys as promised I updted the first part today itself so here u go...
Edited by Sandhirrocks - 10 years ago

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