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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello there! Its Mandy 😊 Whoa! This SS had me engrossed and I read all the chap non stop 👏Not for once did I think much about RajPreet! The nameless Shahni of the Pawaniyas was all I could think about and empathize with and considering this is a fanfic written on a show where readers generally look forward to reading only on the main characters esp the romantic lead and even if the story introduces some interesting characters, they don't seem to care about them. But kudos to you dear and your storytelling skills ⭐️
Its presented it really well and the person who has probably suffered the most is the protagonist, the bahu (I hope you reveal the name someday 😆) She is a simpleton who accepts life the way it is without any bitterness in her heart. The fact that she whole heartedly loves the child of her supposed sautan speaks a lot in itself. I understand Mannu cannot reveal the truth for the sake of his family but it is only fair that this woman gets to know the truth so that she can be relieved of the burden she is carrying of being a low born. I had assumed that Amba knew about Raj being a Bajwa but by the looks of it thats not the case 😲

Eager to read the next part and loved this story 😃 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I've done the index but I don't know how to do the links. I'll figure it out and get back to it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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At the top of your post next to Report u have another small button that will give u the link of that post. Then all u need to do is add them in the tag below (remove the empty space)
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Replace link with the actual URL and remove space before the closing tag.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

At the top of your post next to Report u have another small button that will give u the link of that post. Then all u need to do is add them in the tag below (remove the empty space)

[URL=link ]Title[/URL ]

Replace link with the actual URL and remove space before the closing tag.

Thanks! I was wondering what that button was for. I guess this is better than just linking the page?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
OMG !!
will Amba disclose Mannu's identity ???
Rajji-RAj-mannu-shahji-Preet- Bajwa's blood- Raman...
feeling pity for Mrs. Shahji ...
curious to read more..

Your updates left me speechless...the way you expressed each emotion...is just superb!👏
For you!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The story is going great and am waiting to see how the shahni will uncover Mannu aka Preet's identity. Superb 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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🥱My rant -
No I don't think it's karma or something the story was running like a jet so they had to do it ! 😕First this Raj is different from silent mature and introvert childhood Raj besides they fall in love like in seconds and I totally understand I expected this but it still feel bad Raj betraying manu she is now alone 😭😭😭
First her mumy left her and now that she loves Raj he is going the same road😲😭🤢
But instead ofaking a hell out of this I would say she need to be strong and took the advantage of fact that they are married and. Made him jealous😡 to the point that he confess his true feelings 😡😳😃hope a happy ending as Raman and simmi died a fateful death was quite sad. I loved those lovey-dovey kids !! They could have runaway have god's by now😳😆😆 anyway I hope your story reveal everything soon too... Feel too bad for manu she is so tired physically and mentally and still keeping up this facade I hope Raj would help her 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww she thinks they are both gay 😆 poor girl.
I can understand we all were a bit shocked yesterday. You still wrote your chapter and I would say well done 👏
About your point regarding karma,, I agree what Jagan did was far worse, but Raj seems to have done a very similar thing. I just have a hope that it's a plan. Let's see aage Kya hota hai.

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