Fatejo (the tantrums) - the lafandar and his shadein returns)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I hope it will be difficult for fateh to win tejo back. They need to bring back fatejo nok jok as the initial episodes to make the plot interesting with jealousy tracks . After the EMA some viewers won't find it easy to accept them . Some still love them though . So they need to gear up the intensity between leads onscreen to make them likeable like before so much so that viewers forget their bitter past. U can leave ur comments after reading


Fatejo tantrums - the lafandar and his shadein returns


After KVG exit.

A few days later

Tejo was so upset with all betrayals in a row with three men that now she felt depressed. She wanted to take out her anger but on whom. She was stressed . She behaved normal with family members and virks but there was one person she didn't spare .

Fateh singh virk , her ex husband.

Well, the other two men went far away and he was still around her. She was irritated to the core and wanted to release her frustrations.


On the other hand, fateh was glad that he no longer need to pretend in a fake marriage with jasmin. So he wanted to confess to tejo as he knew she still loved him. Unfortunately he didn't realize the fierce tejo coming in his way releasing all the earlier frustrations from betrayals upon him .


He was to be barbecued into a tandoor pit by his ladylove. It's gonna be difficult to win her.

Kushveer requested tejo to take care of the academy and help his son after she finished her classes. Sandhus and virks planned to unite them. Little realising that tejo was depressed and she needed some space for herself a while.Fateh was gonna be squeezed into a chutni in a blender .

Dialogues (English/ Hindi mix)

,2,pm

In the academy .

He was hungry. She will bring lunch. Then taking the opportunity , i will say i love u to her. She will run into my arms. She will be glad i no longer love jasmin

Minutes later

She came putting her file on the table. Removed the lid of her tiffan and started her lunch without looking at him. He felt the pinch. She ignored hin.

Fateh nervously:. Irrr tejo, no lunch for me.

Tejo sarcastically : no

Fateh taken aback

Fateh sweetly: why u didn't bring for me

Tejo rudely: u think i am ur servant

Fateh upset: why u talk like that

Tejo irritatedly: u should be thankful i am only talking . not doing something else

Fateh upset: u are rude. I didn't expect this

Tejo rudely: then don't expect.


He was silent. What happened to her. Here i am waiting to confess my feelings , she is throwing her tantrums. Isko ho kya geya hain? What happened to her?

Then he ordered through delivery services and ate his meal while she checked the details of the accounts files , still not looking at him.

As soon as he finished his lunch, he played some video games to relax. He was working since morning.

Tejo sarcastically: main tere baap ki nokar hun sale jo tu game khel raha hain.

Fateh shocked put away his phone . Looking at her , still upset. What happened to her. Why she behaving like this

Tejo rudely: aarti laun ya nariyal phodu. Yeh lo. Kaam karo. ( She threw a file at him and he caught it on the spot, sill puzzled).


After ten minutes

Fateh nervously: Tejo , i am sorry about the fake marriage thing but i did it for u . So u could move on" ( he thought she was upset about his past actions)

Tejo rudely : u are fake

Fateh upset; excuse me.

Tejo rudely: I don't excuse fake people. U are fake

( Now he had enough. She was getting on his nerves with her tantrums)

Fateh rudely: u did fake engagement so u are fake .

Tejo angrily: . fake engagement . Only ring exchanged. U do fake marriage . Phera, sindoor and mangalsutra. U are more updated. So u are more fake.

Fateh shaking his head in disbelief: u are being illogic

Tejo irritatedly: u are a crab who talks crap

Fateh confused, upset banging the file on the table : u call me crab ?? I look like a crab to u ??

Helo i am a man ok . Aadmi. U want a prove. He stood up willing to open his pant zip.

She threw her file in anger on the floor , glaring at him. : U are a crab becoz crab live in shell.

Fateh confused: huh!

Tejo continued angrily ; just like ur tiny brain in ur big skull.

Fateh furious : u insulting my brain

Tejo sighed : u have one??

Fateh upset : u insulting me being a man and my brains.

Tejo took her bag and was about to leave when he interrupted

Where u going??

Tejo smirked: u are the man . U do all the work alone.


Two hours later, he went to Buzo's place. Very upset.

Buzo sighed: u lost ur charm Buddy.. she doesn't find u handsome now.

Fateh upset: what shall i do

Buzo excitedly: go to salon. Do a makeover.

He obeyed. Varun dhawan hairstyle from the movie ' dilwale' and clean shaved.


The next day he decided to pick her up from the college and have lunch in a dine in. Waiting for the right moment to confess his feelings.

Dressed in black leather jacket and brown jeans with sunglasses , he looked marvelous. Hot and gorgeous. The female students eyed him as they passed by his jeep. But he was not interested.

Only keen on that one woman who he loved . Alas! She was throwing tantrums. What was wrong with her

Then he saw her walking to the taxi stand ignoring him. He stopped where she stood.

Fateh sweetly; want a lift

Tejo rudely: i don't take lift from clean shaven men. I don't like.

Fateh confused and upset : huh! What's the problem.

Tejo sarcastically: u look like monkey. No moustache no beard.

Fateh feeling insulted: now u insulting me again.


Tejo didn't answer and walked slowly towards her hse. It was a long walk

Fateh trying his luck for the second time.

Fateh sweetly driving along slowly as she walked towards the crop fields: come na, we go for lunch then i drop u home.

Tejo irritatedly while walking: i have two legs . I can walk . Tq.

Fateh upset( still driving): u think i have four??

Tejo ignored

Then he spoke again sweetly(still driving) : where u going.

Tejo was irritated. He knew she was walking towards her hse. Yet he enquired.

Tejo rudely: jahnum mey ( to hell)

Fateh was irritated with her sarcasm but was still sweet: sath mey cheltey hain.( We go together)

Tejo rudely:. No thank u

Fateh sweetly ( still driving) : walking to jahnum (hell) will take time. This hour no rickshaw and taxi. We go by car then can reach faster.

She took out her chapal and flung at him. He drove away speedily.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

Hi all,

I am having lunch and this is for fatejo fans in the forum

If u like it then i will continue later in the evening for second shot . I am attending online conferences now. On lunch break. By evening will be free to proceed further but first want to know u guys opinions if u want it to be continued.


It's a pity that that the forum is not lively any longer. We only have stories to share and nothing else. Even edt runs slow. Less participation.


Fatejo tantrums upcoming ( one shot)


After KVG exit.

Two days later

Tejo was so upset with all betrayals in a row with three men that now she felt depressed. She wanted to take out her anger but on whom. She was stressed . She behaved normal with family members and virks but there was one person she didn't spare .

Fateh singh virk , her ex husband.

Well, the other two men went far away and he was still around her. She was irritated to the core and wanted to release her frustrations.


On the other hand, fateh was glad that he no longer need to pretend in a fake marriage with jasmin. So he wanted to confess to tejo as he knew she still loved him. Unfortunately he didn't realize the fierce tejo coming in his way releasing all the earlier frustrations from betrayals upon him .


He was to be barbecued into a tandoor pit by his ladylove. It's gonna be difficult to win her.

Kushveer requested tejo to take care of the academy and help his son after she finished her classes. Sandhus and virks planned to unite them. Little realising that tejo was depressed and she needed some space for herself a while.Fateh was gonna be squeezed into a chutni in a blender .

Dialogues (English/ Hindi mix)

,2,pm

In the academy .

He was hungry. She will bring lunch. Then taking the opportunity , i will say i love u to her. She will run into my arms. She will be glad i no longer love jasmin

Minutes later

She came putting her file on the table. Removed the lid of her tiffan and started her lunch without looking at him. He felt the pinch. She ignored hin.

Fateh nervously:. Irrr tejo, no lunch for me.

Tejo sarcastically : no

Fateh taken aback

Fateh sweetly: why u didn't bring for me

Tejo rudely: u think i am ur servant

Fateh upset: why u talk like that

Tejo irritatedly: u should be thankful i am only talking . not doing something else

Fateh upset: u are rude. I didn't expect this

Tejo rudely: then don't expect.


He was silent. What happened to her. Here i am waiting to confess my feelings , she is throwing her tantrums. Isko ho kya geya hain? What happened to her?

Then he ordered through delivery services and ate his meal while she checked the details of the accounts files , still not looking at him.

As soon as he finished his lunch, he played some video games to relax. He was working since morning.

Tejo sarcastically: main tere baap ki nokar hun sale jo tu game khel raha hain.

Fateh shocked put away his phone . Looking at her , still upset. What happened to her. Why she behaving like this

Tejo rudely: aarti laun ya nariyal phodu. Yeh lo. Kaam karo. ( She threw a file at him and he caught it on the spot, sill puzzled).


After ten minutes

Fateh nervously: Tejo , i am sorry about the fake marriage thing but i did it for u . So u could move on" ( he thought she was upset about his past actions)

Tejo rudely : u are fake

Fateh upset; excuse me.

Tejo rudely: I don't excuse fake people. U are fake

( Now he had enough. She was getting on his nerves with her tantrums)

Fateh rudely: u did fake engagement so u are fake .

Tejo angrily: . fake engagement . Only ring exchanged. U do fake marriage . Phera, sindoor and mangalsutra. U are more updated. So u are more fake.

Fateh shaking his head in disbelief: u are being illogic

Tejo irritatedly: u are a crab who talks crap

Fateh confused, upset banging the file on the table : u call me crab ?? I look like a crab to u ??

Helo i am a man ok . Aadmi. U want a prove. He stood up willing to open his pant zip.

She threw her file in anger on the floor , glaring at him. : U are a crab becoz crab live in shell.

Fateh confused: huh!

Tejo continued angrily ; just like ur tiny brain in ur big skull.

Fateh furious : u insulting my brain

Tejo sighed : u have one??

Fateh upset : u insulting me being a man and my brains.

Tejo took her bag and was about to leave when he interrupted

Where u going??

Tejo smirked: u are the man . U do all the work alone.


Two hours later, he went to Buzo's place. Very upset.

Buzo sighed: u lost ur charm Buddy.. she doesn't find u handsome now.

Fateh upset: what shall i do

Buzo excitedly: go to salon. Do a makeover.

He obeyed. Varun dhawan hairstyle from the movie ' dilwale' and clean shaved.


The next day he decided to pick her up from the college and have lunch in a dine in. Waiting for the right moment to confess his feelings.

Dressed in black leather jacket and brown jeans with sunglasses , he looked marvelous. Hot and gorgeous. The female students eyed him as they passed by his jeep. But he was not interested.

Only keen on that one woman who he loved . Alas! She was throwing tantrums. What was wrong with her

Then he saw her walking to the taxi stand ignoring him. He stopped where she stood.

Fateh sweetly; want a lift

Tejo rudely: i don't take lift from clean shaven men. I don't like.

Fateh confused and upset : huh! What's the problem.

Tejo sarcastically: u look like monkey. No moustache no beard.

Fateh feeling insulted: now u insulting me again.


Tejo didn't answer and walked slowly towards her hse. It was a long walk

Fateh trying his luck for the second time.

Fateh sweetly driving along slowly as she walked towards the crop fields: come na, we go for lunch then i drop u home.

Tejo irritatedly while walking: i have two legs . I can walk . Tq.

Fateh upset( still driving): u think i have four??

Tejo ignored

Then he spoke again sweetly(still driving) : where u going.

Tejo was irritated. He knew she was walking to towards her hse. Yet he enquired.

Tejo rudely: jahnum mey ( to hell)

Fateh was irritated with her sarcasm but was still sweet: sath mey cheltey hain.( We go together)

Tejo rudely:. No thank u

Fateh sweetly ( still driving) : walking will take time. This hour no rickshaw and taxi. We go by car then can reach faster.

She took out her chapal and flung at him. He drove away speedily.

I almost spit out the water i was drinking 😂😂🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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They need to bring back the old fateh and tejo if they want to carry on with their intensity and charm as before.

I wrote this a few days back . I was predicting their nok jok will return. Makers might take that route. The mayank guy had confirmed on yt.

Hope they execute it well.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

Sorry guys miss u all since leaving the edt that i tagged u here

They need to bring back the old fateh and tejo if they want to carry on with their intensity and charm as before.

I wrote this a few days back . I was predicting their nok jok will return. Makers might take that route. The mayank guy had confirmed on yt.

Hope they execute it well.

ya hope makers don't do khichdi of this track!

Mayank said show will have beautiful scenes like initial episodes , if yes then I'm in for the aesthetics of UD

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hahahaha...this is so good. I am ROFL reading Fateh getting insulted. Awesome

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Originally posted by: 08_maria

ya hope makers don't do khichdi of this track!

Mayank said show will have beautiful scenes like initial episodes , if yes then I'm in for the aesthetics of UD


I am hoping for that Scottie wala scene again that he wooed tejo to tackle Jasmin

That was their best scene ever 🤣🤣

And the coffee shop with jass and Tejo

Hoping to see the cruel tejo sending him on roller coaster ride before accepting him. 🤣🤣

If i get into the time and mood i might turn this into ss or ff.

And congrats on dazzler

I just noticed

Finally ur efforts paid off after discussing the show crap in edt

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Hahahaha...this is so good. I am ROFL reading Fateh getting insulted. Awesome


Sorry i didn't tag u for this one afraid getting tomatoes as i know u don't want them anymore

I don't ship anyone. Fatejo or tejang

As long as i get good story i don't mind any ship

If get time and mood will turn this to ss or ff.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I was laughing when i wrote

If given time i might turn this into ss or ff

With more tantrums

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: thunderbird

I almost spit out the water i was drinking 😂😂🤣


Haha i wrote this few days back

I predicted they will bring back their nok jok to get back the viewers who doesn't want them after the EMA.

If get the time will turn this into ss or ff

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


I am hoping for that Scottie wala scene again that he wooed tejo to tackle Jasmin

That was their best scene ever 🤣🤣

And the coffee shop with jass and Tejo

Hoping to see the cruel tejo sending him on roller coaster ride before accepting him. 🤣🤣

If i get into the time and mood i might turn this into ss or ff.

And congrats on dazzler

I just noticed

Finally ur efforts paid off after discussing the show crap in edt

As we have finally accepted the crap makers are showing , so ya I'm ready for Fatejo reunion 😝iss baar katenge to bhi ghanta fark padega 😏

I'm all in for their nok jhok , I'm sure makers will pull in such scenes , that cafe scene of Fateh refering himself as 'nice guy'😂

They have shown so much negativity , atleast now they gotta show mercy upon us by bringing cute fatejo scenes like those initial episodes

Add in the Virk siblings also , they add freshness to such scenes😳

I'm waiting , pls write a fiction on upcoming fatejo , u have already written one but I want more😳i really love the way you write , fun and logical😌

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