How should story be carried forward after tejo injury track

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Dear forum friends

How are u all doing

Here is an upcoming plot that i have thought if i was in the maker's shoes

I would apologise i couldnt tag many

Others feel free to read

U can leave ur comments after reading perhaps can add ur own ideas to improvise the plot

The writers are so boring

So many ways they can make their show interesting and entertaining


The plot

Fateh breaks all ties with jasmin as he cant cheat tejo .

Jasmin shattered and decided to make him jealous by flirting with Amrik Fateh will be annoyed to see them together and warns Amrik to stay away from jasmin

Fateh still loves jasmin but sacrifing his love for tejo.


Fatejo bond becomes smooth but still no consummation as fateh unprepared. Tejo felt something was amiss that there was no physical relations between them. Fateh was miserable as he couldnt forget jasmin. It was tough .


In front of tejo he pretended he was happy. Tejo felt smtg wrong. Becomes suspicious and follows him one day . He was having lunch with a MALE partner in a dine in. That guy apparently was fateh's close friend who came to pay a visit and wanted to give tejo a surprise so fateh didnt inform her. They hugged before they took leave and the guy said

sweetheart kal phir miltey hai!

Tejo ko mat betana ok!

Tejo devastated

Fateh in relationship with a guy


For two days she ignored fateh and he felt the pinch

She was drifting. Then on the third day she couldnt hold any longer and furiously ambushed him in front of family

Why didnt u tell me u are having EMA with a gay!

Virks shocked. Biji chest pain. Couldnt take grandson turned out to be a gay. Fateh annoyed and under pressure blurted that he had EMA with a woman but not man. He is straight

All shocked

He was cheating earlier

All asked who is she

Then Amrik said

Jasmin!

All shocked again

Then amrik explained he had seen them together and nimmo add oil to the fire

Kushveer slapped him

Tejo torn into pieces. Ran to her room . Packed her things to leave but virks requested her not to. Biji suffered heart attack there and then

Sandhus were shocked and jasmin was grounded . Cant go anywhere except college. She still sneaked out to meet Amrik

Tejo stayed on with virks but drifted away from fateh. He was unhappy

Jasmin was still flirting with Amrik to torture him more by sending their selfies

Fateh amrik face off and amrik threatens to break his marriage . Fateh was afraid to lose tejo so decided not to interfere in jasrik matters


Two days later jasmin gets kidnapped by jas tejo's ex on her way back walking from the college. He comes for revenge . She was told to text tejo to meet her somewhere to frame the later as well so tejo gets kidnapped there and then. Both sandhus girls were held captives. Fateh frantically searching for tejo. Sandhus searching for jasmin. Missing reports lodged.

Three days no news. Fateh devastated. Missing tejo badly Thinking sntg bad happened to her. cut his wrist.

Suicide attempt but survived. Virks and sandhus thought he still loves jasmin and decided once the girls are found jasfa reunited. Rupi frustrated . Tejo had to sacrifice all the time . enough is enough. Decided to take tejo with him and go far away from everyone to live a peaceful llfe.

The next day jas called fateh and stated he kidnapped both. Further said he will kill one and spare one. Apparently jas realised his feelings for tejo and knew fateh loved jasmin so he will request to spare jasmin. Jas will pretend to have killed tejo but in actual he will flee with her and make her his. Plan backfired when fateh said

Pls give me tejo!

I dont want jasmin!

U can kill her!

I dont mind!

Jas shocked.

Jasmin unconscious

Effect of sedative

she screamed too much that he couldnt take it and gave her sedative to send her to a mute phase

Tejo was well behaved so she was sober She was conscious so she heard their conversation.

She was shocked when fateh wanted her instead of jasmin

Virks relieved and sandhus happy that he actually loves tejo not jasmin any longer.

Jas was irritated as he wanted tejo for himself

Fateh u take jasmin i take tejo ok!

I also love her.!

Fateh furious

How dare u !

She is my wife!

Jas calmly stated

U are second husband and i am first husband so i have the first right on her!

Fateh annoyed

I spent the first night with her first before u !

Jas excited

Thank u for reninding me !

My first night not completed but i will complete it now!

Fateh very furious

U dare touch her!

Just then he heard background sound of a moving train

Train station.

He figured out the location and offered jas money

The deal was 20 crore

Jas agreed to the lucrative amount to release tejo

Fateh rushed to the spot and saw jasmin there

Tejo was nowhere

Jas lying on the floor unconscious

Tejo managed to escape and ran away . Struck jas head with a small rock

She knew fateh will come for her

She doesnt want both.

She left a note for fateh

Dont look for me !

I dont want u both losers!

Rot in hell

Marry jasmin and be happy !

Leave me alone!


Fateh called the police and jas was sent to prison. He requested amrik to take the unconscious jasmin home

Tejo ran away to a nearby village and resided in one of the gurdwara

Fateh determined to find her. Search mission started with full force of police . Offered award if anyone located her. A needy person informed her whereabouts

She refused to return with him . He tricked her tied her hands and legs. Puts her in the car and drove off

Fatejo nok jok and biwi pethao mission followed by love confession. Finally tejo gives in and they lived as a happy couple

Jasmin on the other hand still thinks he loves her and keeps annoying him with her romantic messages and then he decided

To get rid of her

Starts searching kenneda wala for her.

Send her far far away

Finally got one for her and informed sandhus who agreed instantly liking the guy

Offered to sponsor the marriage as well

Got the invitation cards ready

During the functions he danced the most

Jasmin annoyed and amrik heartbroken

On the wedding day amrik kidnapped the groom and took his place .

Groom swap

Pandit bribed, who said

Dulha has to cover his face with sehra due to grehen

After marriage completed all shocked to see the groom face.

Fateh fainted








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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh man....this is hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Kaha se aate hain tumhe yeh ideas...

🙏🙏🙏


Seriously...Fateh ki seriously Phati hui hain and last ka twist 😎

I liked how you used Jas. Well written 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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More tagging

Sorry i cant tag many

An apology

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hilarious 😅🤣😂😆😹🤭

Nice one, funny

Writer should learn twist and turn from you

Edited by dva2vra - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Killer!!! I think this plotline would beat all roller coaster plotlines ever !!! 😂😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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omg.. what is this 🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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🤣

This would be a good comedy

Just Tejo has to bash Jas and Fa for treating her like an object 😆

The end though 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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super hillarious

tejo thought fateh gay

jas kidnapped jas and tejo

both men wanted tejo

lolz no one wants jasmine except amrik

loved tejo don't want any men she is self made

you have fatejo knok-jhok every time

lolz fateh arrange marriage of jaso with kaneda guy and sponsored it and most and amrik swipe groom

poor fateh sab kiye karaye mehnat pe paani🤣

Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣 I'm all for LGBTQ representation. 👏 Far better than jija-saali

Edited by sammy17 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Oh man....this is hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Kaha se aate hain tumhe yeh ideas...

🙏🙏🙏


Seriously...Fateh ki seriously Phati hui hain and last ka twist 😎

I liked how you used Jas. Well written 🤣


Tks dear

Inspiration for ideas comes from retro hindi movies😂😂😂

Their storytelling is better than latest craps which are mostly remakes

The show is boring now

Kidnapping track will be intriguing

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