HEART POUR: SUKOR.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys, today i was just going through my ms word writings and found this one. Actually i am brutally late to update it now but i know somewhere in the heart, we wanted a heqrt to heart convo of sukor. This is just a small one. I told what I wanted to hear. Do write what you want to hear.
This os is a part where chakor is disappointed when she gets to know the news of imli's pregnancy.Vivaan blames her for having relationship with Suraj.This was just after when chakor confessed her love to Suraj in their room.But the very next moment,vimli entered and here it was.Except imli,all the three were shocked on this news as vivaan could not father a child.This results in a quarrel between vimli.And Chakor completely unaware of the noise walks out of the room in disappointment.Suraj follows her realizing the intensity of confusion and heartbreak in her brain.
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Chakor sitting beside the lake crying as if her world is broken into pieces.
Hum usse pyar karte hain!woh hamare sath aisa Kaise kar sakta hai!woh aaj bhi imli se pyar karta hai aur humein laga ki who humse...Aisa humare sath hi kyun hota hai.
Just then Suraj sees her and comes to her.He sees her cheeks completely wet with tears and she is weeping with her eyes hidden between her arms.
Suraj: chakor!!! Humari baat Suno chakor!! Tum vivaan ki baton par dhyaan mat do.
Chakor stood up in a second and said crying,Suraj tumne humein dhokha Diya hai!...tumein andaza bhi hai hum kitna pyaar karte hain tumse.Humari zindagi tumse hi shuru Hoti hai aur tumpe hi khatm bhi hojayegi...Tumko...tumko pata hai hum par Kya beet rahi hai.Suraj thodhi parvah to ki Hoti hamari!!!!!!!!!
And she burst into tears even more worse than her previous ones.Suraj could not speak a single word.He had not seen chakor in such a condition not during her sports bann and not even on her breakup with vivaan.
Kya hum itne zaruri hai tumhare liye...Lekin sorry is baar Galat Tum ho.
Chakor fell on her knees.Suraj just held her and sat down with her.She was trying her best to move him away but her delicate structure was useless in front of that hard one.Suraj felt the need of some harsh act and he suddenly brought her close in his arms, hugging her with all his strength.Chakor could not tolerate being in his arms and tried to move away but all in vain.
After sometime she gave up and layed motionless in his arms.He held her more tightly and said,chakor!! Just listen to me.don't u trust me.i know vivaan can't father a child but that doesn't mean that I am the one.my heart knows that I have no feelings for imli.She is just your sister for me with whom I share a bond as u share with her. That's it.i have nothing left for her in my heart or rather I would say that I never had.it was just the matter that I was not able to see her happy with someone else carrying my child.i never loved her.it was my child whom I loved...,...I understood the true meaning of love for the first time when u entered in my life.i not only love u but I can't imagine my life without you.when u were out,I used to spend a lot of time with her but being with her never filled your place...after all if u don't believe me, believe your sister.!!!
Chakor listened to all this in rapt attention.But the thought of vivaan's infertility made her mind go into deep pit.
She finally uttered,if it's not u.and if vivaan can't be.then who else will do this.Is imli a ...She could not speak beyond this.
In all this she even had a thought that no one can imagine she could think of.Her brain which was fed up of this world told her that why always imli comes in her way to love.First, vivaan and now Suraj.She too was jealous of her when vivaan cared for her.She nicely remembered the navratri dance performance when she pushed her off the stage only suspecting that vivaan still loves her.All this was hell for her heart but she could not stop her brain from thinking all this.
Suraj,chakor,just tell me one thing.do u trust me or not.
Chakor nods in yes.
Suraj,then fine I will prove it to u that I am innocent.
Chakor,suraj,I want u to be innocent.But if u will be proved correct, should we blame imli.
Suraj,nope.i think vivaan is somewhere mistaken.i think it is his child only.i will have to find out.
He starts leaving when chakor holds his hand.She goes near him and says,Suraj if vivaan proves u both wrong.
Suraj,no way chakor.this time I won't let my relationship with you to be influenced by someone else.u love me and I love you.that is more than enough.
-Chakor I know u trust me in heart but the way u got disappointed in love before leads u to suspect me.i am yours and only yours.no imli chimli can come between us.-


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good convo
Wish there was something like this in the show

The highlight was no imli chimli can come in between 👏

Just wish suraj says this to chakor sometime in the show... I can wait as long as he says this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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An interesting conversation which is something we all expected to happen in the saop!
Thanks for this one!

Loved the last line of Suraj!

If only you were in CVs I think the divorce would have never happened! LOL

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