A three shot or two shot dunno yet

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey guys its naya again , with a two or three shot I dunno yet but I hope u like it
Baarish

Suraj tells kn that he wants to marry Chakor as he loves her and can't do anything bad towards her, Kn slaps Suraj and he has a mark across his cheek , Chakor meets Suraj who had been crying and he hides his face from her by putting his hand on his cheek , Chakor removes his hand and looks at his cheek , she feels his pain and cries a bit and then she slowly touches his cheek Suraj winces and Chakor then kisses his cheek and they hug , she slowly speaks to him and says "kn slapped you.. Right? Suraj says nothing to her but hugs her really tight, Suraj cries and Chakor hugs him , Suraj tells her that kn always treated him badly and differentiated between him and vivaan , Chakor lifts surajs head and wipes his face with her hands, she says "Suraj, don't worry, I promise you that from now on..." Chakor is interrupted by Suraj who covers her mouth and tells her to shush, Chakor wonders what's going on and then hears some rustling, Suraj takes hold of chakors hand and they both start to run towards a jungle area and they see that kamal Narayan has set goon after them, Suraj and Chakor run into the jungle and hide the goons go and the two love birds come out only to find themselves in the middle of nowhere "Suraj , now what do we do" "let's go that way" they start walking towards a hut which looked empty, they were almost there it started to rain and Suraj and Chakor run to the hut and go in they were both completely drenched and they found a cupboard that had clothes in , "Chakor take clothes and change here I'll go to bathroom and change" "okay" they change clothes and Suraj comes out wearing a black shirt and jeans with a jacket he gets dumbstruck looking at Chakor who is wearing jeans and a top with a jacket , her hairs open and she was drying them, she turns to see Suraj lost in his own world and goes up to him and clicks her fingers and says to him "what happened" he says" erm.. Nothing" "it's really late, we should sleep" Suraj says "yeh but there's only one room" Chakor says "so, u can sleep on the sofa and I'll sleep on the bed simple" Suraj makes a fuss but he goes and sleeps on the sofa that's in the bedroom , Suraj finds it uncomfortable and chakors sees this she goes to him and says "Suraj.. Go sleep on the bed and I'll sleep here" Suraj looks at Chakor and gets up he goes to lie down on the bed and Chakor on the sofa but then Suraj gets up and picks up Chakor from the sofa "Suraj yeh kya kar..." "Chakor be quiet" Suraj places her on the bed and he lies down on the other side and says "now sleep" Chakor looks at Suraj and thinks time to have fun and pinches his nose and then pretends to be asleep, Suraj gets up and looks around and at Chakor he touches his nose and then sleeps again, Chakor then pinches his nose again and pretends to sleep , Suraj gets up again and sees Chakor sleeping he then decides to hide , Chakor gets up and sees Suraj not there she looks around and doesn't see him Suraj comes from behind and whispers in her ear " looking for me" Chakor shivers and she turns round to see Suraj but she starts crying, Suraj thinks " oh shit , what have I done" Chakor hits him and says idiot , you scared me , you stupid, moron" Suraj hold chakors hands and pulls her into a hug, Chakor slowly stops crying and hugs Suraj tightly all of a sudden the hut doors are flung open and kn and his men walk through and they try to separate sukor but they both were holding each other tightly and didn't let go of each other, kn shouts to get them separated and then he shoots at Chakors hand Chakor cries but doesn't let go of Suraj, Suraj says "chakor show me your hand" Chakor doesn't instead she pulls out a packet of chilly powder from her pocket and she tells Suraj to close his eyes and she throws the chilly into kn and his goons faces and then she takes surajs hand and runs out of the hut , they run and catch a bus all the way to Lucknow where they stay with some villagers and Suraj bandages chakors hand and hugs her he then kisses her on her forehead and cheek and says " I promise you from today nothing like this will ever happen to you " Chakor looks at Suraj and hugs him then she touches his cheek and he closes his due to the softness of her touch and opens them to look at Chakor they slowly move close to each other and their lips are just inches away from touching and they finally find their destination and kiss each other slowly at first and then they pull apart from each other in need of air and they hug each other and sleep.

It's morning , Chakor wakes up and feels that she is lying on something hard but wakes up to find herself lying on Suraj's chest and finds that she was wearing his shirt and she then goes back to sleep and Suraj wakes slowly and sees that his hands are wrapped round Chakor , Chakor wakes up again and looks at Suraj they have an eye-lock and Suraj kisses her on her forehead then he says to her "you're looking gorgeous and sexy in my shirt" Chakor blushes and then tries to get up but Suraj holds her down and says "oh madam where are you off to" Chakor says "Suraj let me go, if one of the villagers come then" .. Suraj says "so what.. Let them come , stop worrying nothing will happen and stay here now" "okay fine" after an hour Suraj and Chakor take a walk outside and all of a sudden some goons surround them and attack Sukor , Suraj was defending Chakor and Chakor was defending Suraj but both shouted each other's name at the same time and Chakor was shot , and Suraj was hit on his head but luckily the police arrived and arrested the goons who were sent by kn and he was arrested too.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good one !
Try to make it three shots...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Thanks for the PM dear!
Nice and interesting start!
I wish for a 3 shots but you are the one who is going to decide.😉

Liked the bond between Suraj & Chakor.😊
Why KN can't accept Sukor? Is it the same thing like in story, I mean she is bhadhuva and all?
How come police arrived?

Sorry for asking a lot of question!😛
Will be waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome. I was imagining the story while reading. And it will be fun to read more chapters. Update soon.

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