sukor ts falling in love updated chap 5

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Hey guyz I am back again sorry for the long wait so the chap 5 is here but I also wanted to tell you that good response is not coming so I am confused that I should post chapters or not good response is not coming may be people are not liking too much my writing so those who want me to continue then hit likes and do comments so that I will post other Wise may be this is the last chap I am writing have a good day and read


Chap(5):
Both sukor breaks the eye lock all claps for sukor now suraj gets busy in talking on phone with his employed and imvaan are also busy in talking with each other chakor is feeling bore but suddenly a guy shake his hand with chakor he is a classmate of chakor his name is raj he had a evil eye on chakor he ask chakor to drink some juice with him chakor agrees he mix sleeping pills in juice chakor drinks the whole juice she feels headaches and gets unconscious guy takes the chakor to some room other side suraj also finish his call and starts finding chakor with imvaan now they all are worried that where did chakor can go at this time ?they trio goes to different areas of venues to find chakor suraj goes to rooms side when he heard some guys are talking

Raj: you know from the first day I had eye on this miss chakor buhavan lal I always try to make her impress so that I will take advantage and do some fun with this smoking hot girl but she is not that type so now I mix sleeping pills in juice now you go I have to go room and have fun and sex with this girl keep this bundle odlf note it is you're prize goodnight

Guy(waiter of hotel): thanks sir for giving me don't worry no body will came here have fun good night

Now raj goes in the room and locks the door and gets busy staring chakor's body with lust other side suraj catches waiter and beats him badly that he do such a cheap act he gets the room keys now he goes to room area to save his love chakor he fastly opens the lock of door and what he saw is shocking
Chakor is laying on bed other side raj is naked he removes his clothes himself and busy staring chakor's body shamelessly suraj just catches raj and beats him badly his blood boils that how can a guy is such a cheap he calls imvaan there also imvaan also gets shocked suraj tells about the whole incident to imvaan now he send raj to jail imli just hugs chakor makes her conscious by throwing water after some times chakor comes to her senses imli takes chakor with her and thanks suraj that he saves chakor imli drops chakor home and tells her about the whole thing vivaan and suraj also goes to there home in morning both imli and chakor comes in university both talks

Imli: chakor what are you thinking now? Don't tell me that you are still feeling scary on that last night incident you are save now nothing will happened relax

Chakor: I know I am save I am very thankful to god and suraj also he save me again because of him I am alright i should not trust on that cheap raj I am really feeling guilty o wanted to thanks suraj but I don't know if I will be able to meet him again or not


Imli: don't worry I know you will both meet qgin soon now stop thinking about cheap person raj let's go to the canteen

Other side suraj is busy in his office work when he attends the call of vivaan he tells suraj that he really impressed chakor now chakor wanted to thank him he gets to know about this from imli suraj also thanks god that finally chakor may be realized that he is not a rich spoil kid he is a good guy in evening suraj comes to university to meet chakor he saw chakor on road he also comes towards chakor and talks


Suraj: hey how are you now? I hope you are fine now?

Chakor: hello I am fine don't worry I just wanted to thank you for saving me two times I am really thankful of you you changed my thinking you are not a bad guy you just not save my life but also my dignity I will never forget you in my whole life m.r suraj rajvanshi


Suraj: no need to say thanks I am glad that finally you're thinking about me is changed I just want one thing from you in return can we be friends ? Plzz don't say no I am not a bad guy


Chakor: OK we are friends now but nothing more than friendship

Both sukor shakes hand with each other both share deep eye lock now suraj drops chakor to her home and also reaches his home he is on bed thinking about chakor and smiling other side chakor is also busy thinking about suraj and smiling and blushing


Music plays in background

Haan AA

Hansi ban gaye
Han nami ban gaye
Tum mere asmaan meri zameen ban gaye (2)

Han him badalne lage
Girne sambhlne lage
Jab sa hai Jana tume
Teri ore barhne lage
Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Mante the khuda Aur
tha wahi ban gaye

Hasi ban gaye
Han nami ban Gaye
Tum mere asmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye


Pehchante hi nhi ab log tanha Hume
Meri nighahon ma bhi hai dhondete WO tujhe
Hum the dhondte Jise WO kami ban gaye
Tu mere ishq ki Sara zameen ban gaye

Han hasi ban gaye
Han kami ban Gaye
Tum mere asmaan
meri zameen ban Gaye


Aa dir re ra



So guyz this it if you want me to continue this ts then do comments and hit like else I will leave this ts here and I will not update or post chapters

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Your ts is wonderful.. please continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey savira dis was really amazing...wanna read the whole story plz Plzzz do continue...
And I just loved Chakors and Surajs character here and hey teju and KN are also good here ...amazing story ...looking forward to your next chapter...hope you would update soon..

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