Sukor os

A sukor os

The story takes a leap of six months. Kamal Narayan is in jail and Ragini who realized her past mistakes is reformed and a positive character (I hope this really happens). Ranjana too is behind the bars and Tejaswini is a positive character. Now coming back to the story.

The court had given Chakor and Suraj six months time to confirm their decision on divorce. Chakor being an intelligent girl has sorted out her feelings for her so called husband. She had moved on from the memories of Vivaan and agreed to herself that it was just an infatuation. She has gradually fallen in love with Suraj but cannot express it. Suraj on the other hand is oblivious to Chakor's feelings and his own budding feelings, thinking that he still loves Imli (What a fool!!).

Only a month was left in proceedings of the divorce and Chakor still hadn't proposed Suraj. She might be a born winner but was a complete idiot in the subject of love. After a lot of self consultation she finally decided to take the help of Imli, Vivaan and Ragini.

Chakor(c)- Imli humein tumse kuch kehna hain. Please sunke chillana mat.

Imli(I)- Are didi hum bacchi thodi na hain...tu bat bolke toh dekh.

C- Woh Imlu humein na Suraj se...

I-Pyaar Hain!

C(shocked)- Tujhe kaise..???

I- Are Hume kya pure gaon ko pata hain...Humesha Tom and Jerry jaise ladte ho...par ekdusre par ach tak nahi aane dete. Hum andhe nahi hain dikhta hain sabko tu kaise unko dekhti rehti hain chupchupke.

C-Sa..sa..sabko? Mai bapu?

I- Mai ne hi toh Hume bataya (giggles)

Aur ye baat hum sabko pata hain

Chakor is shocked to see Vivaan Ragini and Aditya coming in

Tum...tum sab...mujhe Jana hain haato!!!

Chakor blushes and tries to run away.

Adi catches her. Areee Azadganj ki Rani ko sharmana bhi aata hain...Mere liye sharma deti toh tumhe kab ka I love u bol diya hota. Chakor's eyes widen in shock.

Mazak hain re pagli...Suraj zinda chaba jaayega mujhe!

Par main toh uske liye sirf ek dost hu. Mujhe uske feelings Ke bare mein toh...

Areee pyaar karta hain woh tumhe. Vivaan spoke all of a sudden. Tumhe aur Adi ko saath dekh Ke jalan Ke mare glass Tod Diya tha.

Par woh toh slip...

Didi is mamlo mein tera dimaag ghas chadne jata hain. Chakor glares at Imli

Chakor bhabi Bhaiyya ko propose Karna hain ki nahi?

Par...

Par war kuch nahi...kal bhaiyya ka bday hain isiliye Aaj raat 12 baje propose Karna hain samjhe?

Hum toh bhul hi gaaye the!!!

Aab yaad agaya hain toh ajhi kardo. Shadi Ke baad ka pehla bday..surprise dekhke pagal ho jaayega khushi Ke mare. Adi teased.

Chup Karo tum sab...Didi Aaj tu main aur Ragini Lucknow jaayenge shopping... Raat tak wapas ayenge aur phir taiyariya bhi karni hain.

Ye Sab kuch jaldi nahi ho raha? Humara matlab hain ki...

Are chakoriya divorce ek mahine main hain abhi nahi toh kabhi nahi.

Hearing the name of divorce Chakor starts getting an uneasy feeling. She knows that this is the dead end.

Thik hain hum karenge Suraj Ke liye sab kuch.

Ye hui na baat. Everyone cheers.

The girls leave for Lucknow to do the shopping. Here the guys keep teasing Suraj.

Adi- Yaar Vivaan Hume pyaar ho gaya hain

V- kisse?

Areee Teri hone wali bhabi se aur kisse.

Par hain kaun who khushnasib?

Guess kar

Accha uske naam mein A aata hain?

Haanji

R?

Yes

Aur C?

Areee woh bhi...

Suraj over hears their convo and thinks Adi likes Chakor. He dashes inside the room and holds Adi's collar.

Dost hain dost reh. Had se age na nikal. Accha nahi hoga. Chakor tujhe aapna sabse accha dost kehti hain aur tu?

Are par maine Chakor Ke bare mein kya kaha? Mujhe toh Ragini se pyaar...

Vivaan looks shocked.

Woh humari behen hain Adi..

Toh?

Suraj leaves his collar and says with a warning...Humari behen kya dhyaan nahi rakkha na toh jaane le lunga.

Vivaan is shocked.

Tumnaise kaise use allow kar rahe ho...Chakor ka naam sunne pe toh nahi kiya tha.

Suraj himself is surprised. Humne aisa kyun react kiya? Ho kya gaya Hume?

Suraaajjj...

Haan woh woh Adi ladka accha hain Ragini Ke liye par Chakor abhibhi biwi hain humari.

Vivaan and Adi smirk.

Acchhaaa...

Woh..woh Hume kam hain..faltu bakne na time nahi hain

Suraj leaves. Adi and Vivaan hi-fi.

Tujhe sachme Ragini se...

Now it's Adi's time to blush.

By evening the ladies arrive. They take Chakor to her room while the boys keep Suraj away from Chakor. It is dinner time and Chakor is not in the hall with everyone else.

Suraj asks Chakor kaha hain?

Woh didi ki tabiyat thodi kharab hain. Toh woh nehi ayengi.

Kya? Hum dekh kar aate hain use. Pura din uchal kud...us mahanaatma ko dhyaan kaha rehta hain aapna.

Everyone one the table is amused with Suraj's concern.

Are bhai bhabi ko akele rehna hain..hum Gaye the unke pas unhone bhej diya wapas. Girja mausi hain na unka khana leke jayengi woh.. Aap fikar maat Karo.

Are aise kaise...

Par war kuch nahi Suraj tum khana khao hum Chakor ka khana bhejte hain. Tejaswini says.

Suraj obeys. Even after the dinner no one let's him go to his room. Suraj is tensed for Chakor and irritated at the irresponsible behaviour of people of the house. It is almost midnight when Suraj announces that he will retire to his room and no one stops him this time. Everyone too go to their rooms after an eventful day eagerly waiting for the good news.

Here Chakor is impatiently waiting for Suraj. She remembers all those moments spend with him. Their fights, marriage , his love confession for Imli. How he broke her first karwachauth fast. The crisis they had been through and how despite all things he remained her support system. From sworn enemies to husband and wife to friends and now to lovers from her part. Their journey was full of hardships yet incredible. A crimson blush slowly rose her cheeks.

Her reverie was broken by the sudden opening of the room's door.

Suraj entered the room only to be shocked beyond wits. The room was dolled up in fairy lights and in the middle of the room stood a real fairy. Dressed up in a light blue saree Chakor looked no less than a princess herself. Hairs left open, a slight brush of make up and the silver earring he had gifted her on her bday. Chakor looked like a goddess. Her simplicity lighted up the whole room with a warm glow.

Happy Birthday Suraj. Her sweet voice brought him out of his trance.

Hume toh yaad bhi nahi tha...tumne mere liye ye Sab...

Ssshh chup! Dost hu main hak banta hain. Tum toh treat bhi nahi dete. Chakor smiled playfully. Suraj frowned.

Chalo mombatti pighal jayegi...cake kato jaldi bhuk lagi hain.

Suraj was overwhelmed. He cut the cake, made a wish while Chakor sang Happy Birthday. He fed her a piece and she did the same. Pata hain Chakor 10 saalo mein pehli bar mera bday aise khushi se mana raha hu main. Suraj looked on with sad eyes. To lighten up his mood Chakor took some icing and playfully put some on Suraj's nose.

Mr. Rajvansi kabhi has bhi liya kijiye. Chakor's giggles.

Chakor ye galat hain...rukooo

Are pehle pakadke toh dikhao..hum champion hain samjhe.

Achhaaa...they both laughed as they ran about the room goofing with each other.

Suddenly Suraj caught Chakor's hand and pulled her. They both stumbled and fell on the sofa. Their heavy breaths mingled with each other. Suraj looked deep into Chakor's eyes and Chakor stared back. Their close proximity made Chakor feel nervous. Suraj felt a weird tug at his heart but failed to name it. Still staring at Chakor he asked in a husky voice. Mera gift?

Hmm.

Mera gift Chakor?

Woh.. Chakor was not sure what to say.

They suddenly became conscious of their current position. Suraj quickly mumbled a sorry and helped Chakor up. They both looked flustered. Chakor decided to break the awkwardness.

Suraj Aankhe band Karo

Kya???

Are surprise gift.

Oh! Without protesting he closed his eyes an forwarded his palm.He heard Chakor shuffle about the room.

Aur Kitni dair biwiji? Suraj teased.

All of a sudden he felt a light peck on his lips. He opened his eyes with a jolt only to find those brown orbs of Chakor's staring back at him with an unknown emotion.

I love you Suraj. Hume pyaar hogaya hain tumse. She whispered in his ears. Suraj's eyes widened with shock. Some unknown sensations crawled up his body. Bewildered he looked at Chakor with an unreadable expession.

Tu..tum kuch bologe nahi? Chakor's voice quivered.

For the first time Mr. Suraj Rajvansi had no answer.

Suraj. Kya hua? Chakor put a hand on his shoulder.

Humne socha tha ki him dost hain Chakor par Aaj...

Chakor's eyes pooled up with tears.

Hum dost hain Suraj bas tumhare is dost ko pyaar ho gaya hain tumse. Aaj izhaar kiya hain..return gift nahi milega?

Tumne aisa soch bhi kaise liya haan??? Tumhe pata hain hum Aaj bhi sirf Imli ko chahteh hain aur humesha chahte rehenge. Aur tumhe toh Vivaan se pyaar tha na? Mind change bas 6 mahino me? Wah!

Vivaan humara kal that Suraj aur woh ab Imli ka hain. Hum use pasand karte the bohot zyaada par tumse hum pyaar karte hain. Hume pata tha ki tum nahi karte pyaar humse. Par Bas jawab de do.

Suraj could see Chakor trying to hold back her tears. She was trying her best not to break down. He felt gulity . Chakor was his only true friend but love? He did not love her or did he? At that moment he just wanted to comfort her. He liked her but he knew that he was not meant for love. He was a monster. A criminal and he could not let Chakor waste her life on him. He was a confused soul but he had to do what he thought would be the best for both of them.

Hume nahi Dena jawaab. Main pyaar aur woh bhi tumse? Bas humdardi hain tumse Chakor. Thodi si humdardi ko pyaar samajh ne ki galti bus ek bewakoof hi kar Sakta hain...waise manna parega choice achi hain Tumhari...pehle Vivvan phir Aditya aur ab main.

Bas. Bas Karo Suraj tum hume nahi chahte woh hum man lenge par mere pyaar ko aise kaise... Hum tumhe kya lagte hain Suraj koi s**t? Gold digger? Bolo. Hume lagta tha ki tum badal gaaye par...

Chakor broke down on the floor. She could not believe what she just heard. The man whom she loved. Her own husband pointed at her character.

Suraj realized the blunder his words had cost. He cursed himself looking at the broken soul. But he knew that she would hate him now and that was the best. He was not her's not anyone's.

Suraj quietly left the room. He took his car and drove around Azadganj. His mind replaying all the memories of Chakor. He shook his head to get rid of them. Only alcohol could help him now. He went to a nearby shop, bought a bottle and drove to the village lake.

Sitting near the lake he opened the bottle but was unable to take a sip. He remembered the time when Chakor had forbidden the whole village to give him alcohol. His mind drifted away to some other land which only had her memories. He remembered their fights, their marriage, how he had broken her dreams, how she had broken her thumb to save their lives, saved his mother. How bravely she dealt with the revival of his cruel father. How their plans worked successfully. How she had saved his life a numerous times. How he had broken her karwachauth fast without his knowledge. How their enmity gradually turned into friendship and their daily fights

into playful banters. How he loved her smile her attitude..the Way she had worn a light blue saree..his favourite colour.

Wait love? Suraj's eyes widened with shock.

Pyaar? Nahi hum pyaar nahi karte us aafat ki puriya se. Hum toh Imli...

Kitna jhooth bolega pagal.. His heart accused. Chal ankhe band kar aapni aur soch ki tu pyaar kisse karta hain.

Suraj obeyed his heart. He closed his eyes only to see Chakor's smiling face. He shivered as he remembered the light Peck on his lips. Suraj opened his eyes. He felt his cheeks heat up.

Par yeh Sab kaise? Hum aur Chakor? Nahi hum ek criminal hain. Hum uski life kharab nahi karenge. Hum use deserve nahi karte.

Par Suraj woh khusiya toh deserve karti hain na? Aur uski khushi tujhme hain. Ekbaar Vivaan ka pyaar kho chuki hain woh...aur Aaj tune bhi dil toda uska. Kitna dard jhele gi woh? Insaan hain woh Suraj maar jayegi Suraj's heart explained.

Suraj's mind played the image of the broken down soul. His heart grew cold on the thoughts of her dying.

Aise kaise Maregi? Hum bolenge use ki hum use chahte hain...duffer hain hum yeah baat toh use pata hain. Man jayegi dekh le na Suraj challenged his heart.

He rushed to his jeep and paced fast towards the mansion. His heart hammering loudly reflecting his new found feelings.

It was almost 4 in the morning when Suraj reached the mansion. He rushed upstairs to his room and pushed the door wide open.

Chakor hum e maaf kardo. Tumhe pata hain na ki hum dimag se paidal hain bas...

His eyes urgently scanned the whole room. Chakor was not there.

Chakor...

He looked for her everywhere. She was not even in the bathroom. Suddenly a piece of paper on the bed caught his attention. It was securedly tied to a red rose. Suraj picked up the rose. He opened the letter.. It said..

Suraj,

Hum pagal the Jo hume laga ki tum bhi...hume pata hain ki hum ek aafat hain..par kya kare dil nahi mana. Koshis ki thi Maine par tum nahi mane. Hume pata hain ki tumhari khushi hum mein nahi..isiliye divorce confirmation paper par sign kar Diya hain...ab azad ho tum. Meri chinta mat Karna. Hum thik sambhal lenge khudko. Bas Imli se keh dena ki uski didi se ab aur nahi hota..Thak chuki hain. Khayal rakhna apna aur sharab mat pina..itna toh karoge na apni dost Ke liye?

Tumahri Bandhua biwi.

Suraj could not believe what he just read. How could she leave him?

Aisa nahi kar sakti tum Chakor...tumahre bina hum pagal ho jaayenge. Mar jayenge. Tumhe koi haq nahi Ke mere eklaute dost ko mujhse cheen lo. Dhundke layenge tumhe aur phir batayenge ki pyaar kya hota hain. Bandh Ke rakhenge jaane nahi denge kahi. Gussa karenge tumpe. Bas wapas ajao tum. Suraj blabbered to himself as tears rolled down his cheeks.

He ran downstairs and called everyone. Vivaan Imli Ragini Adi and Tejaswini ki came running hearing him shouting.

Maa Vivaan kaha ho aapni Sab.

Kya huya Suraj chilla kyu rahe ho. Adi rubbed his droopy eyes.

Lagta hain confession sun Ke baukhla gaya hain Vivaan teased.

Maa Imli Chakor kahi chali gayi hain!

Kya? Par Aaj toh...

Suraj tensedly explained the situation. Tejaswini slapped him hard.

Us ladki ne humare liye itna kiya aur tumne? Chi

Maar Lena jitna chahe baad mein par Imli Vivaan Adi please dhundo use. Agar use kuch ho gaya toh kya karenge hum. Hum nahi jee payenge. Please please tum log toh dost ho uske. Imli behen ho tum..batao na kaha jayegi woh.. Itni raat ko..akele.. Suraj broke down on the floor crying.

Everyone was shocked to see this side of Suraj even his own mother. The girl had truly changed him.

Suraj yeah waqt done ka nahi hain...phone Karo use.

Kiya that humne par switched off hain.

Hum sim trace karte hain uska adi replied.

Par pehele police station chalo

They all reached the police station and asked them to track her phone.

Being the most influential family the police did not object.

Sir. Ye number toh town medical hall main hain.

Kya?? Medical? Nursing home mein Chakor? Kahi use kuch?

Suraj ran out of the police station and drove to the town medical hall without waiting for anyone. His heart hammered in his chest.

Bas use kuch na huya ho. Ekbar tum wapas ao Chakor tumhe hum kabhi nahi chodenge. Maar Lena daat Lena bas wapas ajao.

Tears clouded up his eyes.

The jeep stopped near the medical hall.

Suraj ran down to the reception.

Chakor Suryavanshi. Humari patni. Unka number yaha pe track huya hain.

Haan ek anjaan aurat ai toh hain. Road accident hain unka. Truck ne maar Diya bas 15 min pehle. Local log leke ai hain.

Kya ye hain woh? Suraj showed Chakor's picture from his phone.

Haan yehi wali. Woh pink aur black ka har tha gale mein. Emergency mein padi hui hain. Hum doc ko bulate hain aap rukiye.

Suraj's world turned into a turmoil. Emergency main Chakor. Sab such meri bewakoofi ke karan.

Soon the doctor arrived.

Excuse me Mr...m

Doctor meri wife Chakor Rajvansi.

Ji Mr. Rajvansi bohot lucky hain woh. Aise accidents main bachne ke chances almost zero hote hain. Par she is a fighter. Sar par gehri chot hain aur left leg and hand both are fractured. But operations ki zarurat nahi thi isiliye humne stitches kar diye. Unka saman like phone and hangbag ki halat bohut buri thi isiliye aaplogo se contact nahi kar paye. She is not out of danger but hopefully will recover.

Suraj stood there like a statue hearing Chakor's condition.

Hum mil sakte hain kya use?

Ji haan par jabtak unhe hos nahi aata unke coma mein jane ka dar rahega.

The world Slipped beneath Suraj's feet. Coma! Never in his wildest dreams had he imagined Chakor to get in coma.

He dragged his body towards her room. What he saw made his heart sink. On the bed lay Chakor wrapped up in bandages. Her once glowing face had turned white. She looked lifeless like a corspe. The thought made Suraj shudder.

He quietly sat beside Chakor and held her fragile hand. The IV inserted made his heart wince. His love was in pain. Tears rolled down his already red eyes.

Hume maaf kardo Chakor. Maaf karo hume. Hum bure hain. Dekha humne tumhare saath kya kia? Hasi cheenli tumhari pyaar bhi cheenliya. Par tumne toh nayi zindagi di hain hume. Ek janwar se insaan banaya tumne.Aur mujhe dekho. Aaj bhi main wahi gadha hu. Samajh nahi paya ki pyaar kya hota hain. Maa ke alawa kisi se saccha pyaar toh kiya hi nahi tha. Imli se pyaar tha Chakor par tum toh zindagi ban gayi. Hawa ke jhonke ki tarha aake sab kuch badal dia. Gussa humesha naak pe par dil ekdum saaf. Azadganj ki rani. Pata hain jalan hoti thi tumse. Kuch nahi tha tumhare pas phirbi sab kuch tha. Dost pyaar parivar. Aur main? Daulat thi par life ke asli daulat tumne diye. Bhai dost pyaar parivar tumne lakar de diye. Ab sab kuch hain bas tumhari kami hain. Tumhare bina sab adhoora hain. Hasna bhul jayenge hum agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh. Zinda laash bankar reh jayenge. Kyuki dil toh tumne chori kar liya. Pagal hain hum samajh nahi paye ki mera dil aj sirf dhadakta hain toh tumahre liye. Jab tumbe propose kiya ghabra gaya main. Tumhe kya kuch nahi sunaya. Main dar gaya tha. Par uske liye daato mujhe saza do maar o bhi. Do thappad nahi mari sakti thi? Ghutne mein hain dimaag humara par tum toh chalak ho na phir? Uth jao na Chakor. Hume bhi tumse pyaar hain bas jatana nahi ata...Aaj mera bday hain. Aj mujhse meri khusiya mat cheeno. Tum Jo saza dogi sab manzoor hain bas tum wapas aao. I love u Chakor bas meri zindagi lotado.Nehi toh mar jayenge...

Suraj ducked his face in her hands and cried. Suddenly the machines beeped. Suraj got up with a jolt and tried to run and call the doctor. But could not move as his hand was stuck. He looked back to see Chakor weakly holding his hand and staring back at him.

Chakor tum...

Chakor left his hand and signalled him to open her oxygen mask. Suraj refused and ran to call the doctor. Outside he saw all his family members standing anxiously.

Doctor chakor ko hosh aa gaya hain.

The doctor rushed in to check the patient and meanwhile Vivaan hugged Suraj. Imli looked on happily with tears in her eyes. Adi came over and said..

Chakor meri behen jaisi hain Suraj agar agli baar use rulaya toh jaane le lunga tumhari.

Aur hum bhi ayenge tumhare saath Adi Imli added glaring at Suraj.

Suraj could just give a coy smile.

He doctor came out of the cabin.

Mrs Rajvansi is out of danger. Aap log mil lijiye unse.

Suraj stared back at the other people.

Haan haan chakor Ke Chaand...jao tum hum baad me jayenge. Everybody laughed. Suraj blushed and ran inside the room

Humare bhai ko sharmana aata hain? Ragini looked astonished.

Are Ragini Biwi Ke atyachaar se bohut kuch Sikhe ga yeh majnu. Vivaan teased and Imli glared at him.

Suraj entered the room and slowly sat beside Chakor.

Chakor...

Hume tumse baat nahi karni...bure ho tum.

Agar agli baar aise ghar she bhaag kar aapni jaan Ke saath kabbadi kheli na toh hum dikhayenge tumhe bura kise kehte hain. Suraj glared.

Pata hain kitna darr Gaye the hum. Hum e laga ki humne kho diya tumhe. Mar jate hum. Itni chalak ho aur meri bewakoofi Ke jhanse me aa gayi? Do thappad mar deti dimaag thikane aajata mera.

Par tum hum se pyaar toh nahi karte bas humdardi hain...chakor looked away not wanting to cry.

Are pagal hu main. Ek number ka idiot. Aur tum meri baato mein Aa geyi.Ji nahi pata agar tumhe kuch hojata toh...maar dal tah khudko.

It was Chakor's turn to be shocked.

Aisa kabhi maat kehna samjhe?

Aur tum ye saare stunts kabhi maath dikhana samjhi?

Kya fark padta hain tumhe?

Fark padta hain kyu ki zindagi ho tum meri. Har subha har sham har din tumse pyaaar kiya hain bas samajh nahi paya. Buddhu tha mein ki bol nahi paya ki tumse pyaar karta hu. I love u Chakor.

Pata hain mujhe.

Kaise? Suraj asked surprised.

Are woh haath pakad Ke ro rahe the tab suna Maine.

Tu..tumhe hosh agaya tha!???

Ji haan. Chakor giggled like a school girl. Par tumhare muh se ILU sunne main bohut accha lagta hain .

Suraj suddenly remembered something. He smirked at Chakor.

Tu..tum aise kyu dekh rahe ho hume.

Areee woh mera bday gift toh addha reh gaya..

Kya mat...

Before Chakor could complete Suraj bent down and fused their lips. He sucked her lips softly pouring out all the love he had for her.

Hum anadar ajaye kya? Adi's teasing voice at door made them break their First kiss.

Ahem Ahem Adi faked a cough

Maine nahi dekha kuch aankhe band hain. He laughed

Chakor turned red in embarrassment and glared at Suraj. Suraj in turn glared at Adi muttering curses under his breath.

it was just awesome😳

perfect for a lazy sunday!! 😊

thank you so much for this OS

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