Will You Return ? SuKor SS

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So its my own imaginary story on Sukor not related to d serial n here Suraj is a positive character.

CHAKOR RAJPUT :A Simple girl who studies in a college .She as interest in Sports especially football.

SURAJ RAJVANSHI:A GUY WHO hates his family stays apart and is a loner never shares his feelings .Is a Coach at chakor's college.

I'm writing it as a OS not sure if I can update more but will try.

"Chakor wat are u doing here we have to go the Principl office remember?" Suhani called chakor as she hurried with her .


In the office


Welcome Mr.Suraj U will hv a lot of responsibility here so All d best...


Chakor hurried into d office and d door opened at once n she was abt to collide with someone but she balanced herself.


Suraj looked up n saw her n hurried away .


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Come on girls we hv to practice a lot more...Run run...Shouted Suraj as he was busy coaching the girl football players.


Chakor hurried n Saw him.


"oh so he's our new coach..."
I'm already late ...she got nervous.



"Sorry Sir..."

"20 rounds now...Ms.Latecomer shouted suraj.


Chakor had no option so she ran .


Days passed by...Chakor was d best player n suraj admired her trait...but for him she was just a student.

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"Don't u dare to talk to me like dat shouted suraj on d phone n Drove his bike at speed.
Chakor who was at d gate sensed some thing wrong so she followed him in her scooty n Suddenly she saw Surajs bike fallen. n he laid on d road fainted



"Suraj Sir...she shouted.



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The next thing he remembered was that he was in a house and lying on abed with bandaged forehead .

He tried to get up but Chakor stopped him


Suraj...s..sir u had fainted...


so I ...

"Thanks he said "now I want to go...


Chakor's eyes reflected the pain she saw In his eyes...was he going..was there something he hid..
She kept looking at him.


DO TELL HOWS IT!
THANKS
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting! There is definitely something which he's hiding! Update soon ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2
One day Chakor didn't reach football practice n Suraj was worried on enquiry he found dat She was ill.
Concerned Suraj cud not stop him from
going to her house n seeing how she was.


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At the house:

Chakor was sleeping n a servant asked him to sit.

He went to her room n saw she had fever .
On getting up chakor saw Suraj sitting .

"Sir...Aap?

She was confused n happy

"how r u now?"
Suraj asked


"Fever...but I'll b fine she spoke.
aap yahan?


"Wo actually... u didn't come for practice so I thot of And Also I wanted to thank u for dat day Chakor ...u saved my life...Surajs tone had turned serious



"Sir Is there anything u want to share ?U can tell me...Chakor spoke n den regretted.


"Na nothing "Suraj nodded n stood up

"Okay sir I'm sorry "

"Na don't be sorry Chakor ...N take care... come for practice soon.


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AT THE FOOTBALL GROUND:

Chakor fell while running as she was still weak from fever...

"Chakor r u fine?Suraj ran towards her..

She had been becoming d only person he cared for in life.


He took her to a bench n bandaged her Arm.

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Suraj saw her waiting for an auto outside college.



He drove his bike tiwar her.
"I'll drop u...sit "



"Suraj...sir...I'll manage"
Chakor smiled.

"Its taxi strike so U won't get an auto...Suraj scratched his head.
And a friend in need is a friend indeed.


She looked shocked.
Friends?So they were friends??She looked at him shocked

"Wat happened?? Can't we be friends? Suraj Smiled

"Ofcourse ...Suraj ..I mean Sir..Smiled chakor.

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Chakor was sitting on a bench with an ice cream stick in hand while Suraj ooked happily at the sky.

"U know wat ...ur d only person I ...Suraj spoke

"Suraj u have so much pain I can read ur eyes so tell me ..plz..
Chakor interrupted.

"Well My father remarried wen I lost my mother n since then I stayed away in hostel n now I left d house
I hate him...He sobbed like a kid

Chakor had nothing to say but She hugged him.

"Chakor u won't leave me no?he asked

"Nope Never!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love it😳 pleaseee update soon😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very Interesting please continue soon
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Interesting continue soon 😛 😉 😆

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