Sukor OS - MAIN HOON HERO TERA

It was 6 months since the marriage swap happened and Vivaan got married to Imli whereas Chakor got married to Suraj.
In these 6 months, Chakor saw many shades of Suraj.
He tortured her, he got angry on her, he spoiled her, he even got possessive for her. But what she never missed in his eyes was care for her in his eyes.
She still remembered that day when her pre marriage rituals were about to take place and Suraj did the rituals and even told Chakor that he will never let anyone harm her , that night she saw Suraj's jeep around her house.
It was very strange of him.
In these six months, Vivaan and Imli shared a good bond with each other. They were in love. Both have moved away.
Imli's secret was exposed. She faked her pregnancy to get married to Suraj. When her parents came to knew about Imli,they were devastated but Chakor and Vivaan managed to convince them.

She still remembered, that night when Suraj asked her to spent a night with him as Suhaagraat in order to save Imli but as soon he saw her red eyes his face changed and he backed away soon. From that day he never tried to touch her or make her feel absurd about anything. He would freak out at her if she will go out without letting him know. She realised that Suraj was very much different from he showed himself.

Maybe he was nourished as a rogue as a rebel since the time he was a child.
Maybe he didn't knew what he was doing. He was blindly following KAMAL NARAYAN RAJVANSHI until one day he stood against him.
She didn't knew if Suraj did feel something for her but she was sure about herself.
She was in love, she was in love with that person with whom she had taken seven vows of marriage, who had put the vermillion on her forehead, who had put mangalsutra on her.
She was in love with her MR. RIGHT. She was in love with Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi.

But he , Chakor scoffed thinking about him. He will never convey his feelings to her. He will never tell what place she holds in his heart, his mind and in his life.

"Stupid Mr. Rajvanshi, you will never tell me anything, even if you wanted to , you will never", said Chakor scoffing not even realising Suraj was behind her.

"What I won't tell, Mrs. Rajvanshi", Suraj asked .

Chakor's eyes widened but she didn't said anything. Her head lowered down and she went out of the room.
Suraj's eyebrows scrunched in confusion. He came outside the room and saw Chakor walking in the corridor.
"Was my Junglee Billi shy?" Suraj asked to nobody.
"Ladki 2 reasons ke wajah se sharmati hai", aditya said and kept his hand on Suraj's right shoulder.
"Pehla jab use pyaar ho gaya ho , dusra jab use pyaar hi ho gaya ho", Vivaan said and kept his hands on Suraj's left shoulder.
"Kya bakwaas hai yeh, aisa kuch nahi hai", Suraj said.
"Agar kuch nahi hai toh Chakor palat kar tujhe nahi dekhegi", Aditya said looking at Chakor and Vivaan nodded.
"Palat", adi said.
"Are Palat na", Vivaan said.
Chakor was walking slowly but still she didn't turned around.
Suraj was also anxious to know about Chakor's reaction.
Suddenly, both Aditya and Vivaan shouted, "Palat", Chakor immediately turned and eyed Suraj. Suraj looked around him but founded no one. Both Vivaan & Adi rushed behind the pillar.
Suraj then again looked at Chakor and nodded his head in no telling everything was alright. Chakor glared at him and turned but her blush and smile didn't went unnoticed by Suraj.
As Chakor went out of sight, Adi and Vivaan came back to Suraj.
"Dekha, sajni ko sajna se kya hai?" Adi asked while Vivaan said,"pyaaarr hai are pyaar hai".
"Pehla pehla pyaar hai, pehli pehli baar hai", Both Vivaan and Adi sang but Suraj shut them off.
"Vivaan bhai aur Aditya Jeejaji, just shut up otherwise I will expose your bromance to Imli and Ragini", Suraj said and went off.
"Saale Sahab", Adi said to Vivaan.
"Haa Jeejaji boliye", Vivaan said.
"Suraj ko samjhana bahut muskil hai", aditya said while Vivaan nodded.

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I just wrote this os with a random thought. Hope you all will like it.
Thank you.

It's too cute dear...every where happiness. ..kash serial mein bhi eaisa yi hota tho kitna achcha hota...humari saradard BP sab gayab ho jaathi. ..

Ohh it was so damn cute, I am grinning like a maniac! Plsss continue this I request you!

sweet cute lovely adorable os. love the way you show suraj's every change and chakor's realization of her feeling. love it very much.

Uff..full of happiness and cuteness .awesome work dear.

P.S It was kind of wierd that vivaan was telling that ...though i was laughing

Wow wonderful scrpit .jeenisha.love the way u write suraj's attitude and chakor's realization keeping update 👍🏼

Superb as usual Jeenisha. Loved it ❤️

here comes the final part of my os.


"Dono Chakor aur Suraj takkar ke hai, itna pyaar karte hai 1 dusre se phir bhi convey nahi karenge", Aditya said and Vivaan nodded.
"Sahi kaha, aise hai toh itne smart, phir bhi itni aasan si baat samajh nahi aati", Vivaan said.
"Toh kya, Chakor bhi na, pyaar toh karti hai par ikraar se darti hai", aditya said but soon, he got a punch on his shoulder. He turned his head and saw Ragini with Imli.
"Duffer Adi, girls always wants ke boys unhe aa ke propose kare", Ragini said.
"Sahi hai, maana ke didi lady bheem hai, kisi se kam nahi par dil unke paas bhi toh hai na, ladki toh voh bhi hai na", Imli said agreeing to Ragini's point.
"So first let's meet Chakor", said adi and the trio agreed.
Adi, Ragini, imli & Vivaan went to meet Chakor in the garden where Chakor was pacing to and fro.
"Chakor", adi said and chakor turned at them.
"I want to say something", said Chakor but at the same time, all four said," we want to ask you something".
Chakor said,"okay let's say it together", while other four nodded.
"1...2...3... go", Vivaan said.
"I love Suraj."
"Do you love Suraj? "
Everyone was shocked. No one said nothing for about 5 minutes then both Ragini and Imli squealed and hugged Chakor followed by Adi and Vivaan.
"Okay, toh half work is done, chakor loves Suraj but what about Suraj", Vivaan said and others nodded.
Suddenly Chakor started crying.
"Ek no ka buddhu hai Suraj. Pyaar karta hai toh haa kyu nahi kar deta hai, iss bhari jawaani mein mera kya hoga", Chakor said crying while Ragini and Imli consoled her.
"Adi you have to do something", Ragini said to Adi.
"Haa Vivaan, aapko kuch toh karna padega, didi ko hum aise nahi dekh sakte", Imli said to Vivaan.
"Guys, kyu na hum saalo se chala aa raha hit formula apnaaye", Vivaan said.
"Kaun sa hit formula", asked Adi.
Vivaan smirked and said, " jalan ki bhawna aka Jealousy".
"Jealousy", asked Imli.
"Haa meri jaan, jealousy se toh ache ache log haar gaye toh Suraj kya cheez hai", Vivaan said.
"So what's the plan?" Asked Ragini and Vivaan told the plan to everyone.
The next morning, a guy was struggling to get inside the Rajwanshi Mansion. The guards were not allowing him to go inside, Suraj saw that person and asked the guards to let him come inside. The guy came and Suraj was shocked to see him. He was wearing a red shirt and yellow trousers, oiled hairs and he wore a cheap quality goggles.
"Oye nautanki , kisse milna hai?"asked Suraj.
"Hume hamari Chandni se milna hai", said that guy.
"Oye joker, yaha koi Chandni nahi hai. Chal nikal yaha se", said Suraj.
"Balma..."a voice came and Suraj turned. His mouth were wide open as he saw Chakor in a lemon yellow suit and she was looking extremely gorgeous.
"Balma mere Balma", said Chakor and ran over to that guy completely ignoring Suraj.
"Arrey ye sab kya hai?"asked Suraj annoyingly .
"Suraj, yahi hai mere mann ka meet, mera preet, meri zindagi, mera armaan, mera sapna, mera balma" , Chakor said dreamingly.
"Kya bakwaas hai yeh", Suraj said with a poker face.
"Yeh ek sach hai, kal raat pub mein hum mile, ye dance kar rahe the balma song mein aur maine pehni thi Chandni wali saree, ek nazar dekha aur pyaar ho gaya", said Chakor to Suraj but looking at that guy.
"Pagla gayi ho kya, kuch bhi bol rahi ho", said Suraj out of frustration.
"Ye sach hai bhai, hum bacche bahi bana rahe hai", Ragini said with a blank face.
"What the hell is this", said Suraj.
"She means to say we are not kidding", adi said.
"Aah, Sahi pakde hai", Imli said smiling.
"Shutup , just shutup. tum sab ye tv se dur raho " , said Suraj , "aur tum nautanki company waale , niklo yaha se".
"Suraj balma ko aise na kaho", said Chakor getting emotional.
"Chalo jaaneman, hum chale rose garden jaha phool khile gulshan gulshan", that guy said and took Chakor with her.
Suraj saw them going out and he shouted," shikhu, bring my car keys".

<<fast forward > >
After 1 hour of driving, Chakor and that guy reached the rose garden. It was a very beautiful garden with roses all around. That guy was continously bickering and Chakor was cursing Suraj to come fast. They both sat on a bench. Then that guy put his hand on Chakor's shoulder and turned her towards him.
He moved in front of her and she was trying to move away.
"Suraj , if you will not come here any moment, I am sure I will castrate you", said Chakor in her mind .

that guy was about to kiss Chakor but before that, he earned a punch. Chakor turned her head and saw Suraj. She was so happy at that time.
"Stay away from my wife you joker", Suraj said dangerously and Chakor's mind was doing bhangra while her heart was singing-' MERE SAIYAAN SUPERSTA, MERE SAIYAAN SUPERSTAR, MAIN TOH FAN HUI INKI, MERE SAIYAAN SUPERSTAR'.
Chakor was so happy that she didn't realised that guy had ran away to save his life and Suraj has lifted her up.
"Suraj , Suraj", she called him but no response.
Suraj made her sit inside the car and started driving.
During the whole car ride, Chakor pleaded Suraj to talk to him but of no use. They both reached Rajvanshi Mansion and Suraj picked Chakor and took her inside their room. He then put her down on their bed and kept roaming inside the room to and fro.
"How dare he? Moron, pig, how dare he", he mumbled.
Then he looked dangerously at Chakor, " and how could you, how could you allow him to touch you, that douche I won't leave him?"
"Why does it matter to you?"

Colour drained from Suraj's face.
"Vo...vo...main tumhe. ..", he started stammering.
"Don't stammer, say something", Chakor said sternly.
"Fine", Suraj said and sat on the bed.
"Nahi dekh sakta tumhe kisi aur ke saath, aisa lagta hai ke koi meri jaan leke jaa raha ho. Pata nahi kyu ek ajeeb sa dard hota hai tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekh ke. Jab tum saath hoti ho toh saari duniya haseen lagti hai, sab kuch perfect hota hai aur jab tum dur jaati ho toh ek khaalipan gher leta hai mujhe. Pehle tumhara hona na hona ek sa tha par ab tum meri aadat ban chuki ho. Tumne mujhe ek jaanwar se insaan bana diya mujhe ehsaas karaya ke family kitni important hoti hai life mein", said Suraj looking directly inside Chakor's eyes.
"Itna sab bol diya ab vo 3 magical words bhi bol do", said Chakor smiling .
"I love you "
"Ek baar phir"
"I love you"
"Haaye, ye sunne ke liye mere kaan taras gaye they", Chakor said.
Suraj's eyebrows crooked and he smiled cunningly at Chakor. Then he pulled Chakor so that she landed on his lap.
"Wha...What are you doing", said Chakor stammering.
"Arrey waah! Abhi tak itna bol rahi thi ab kya hua. Tumne hi kaha na ye sunne ke liye mere kaan taras gaye toh isliye. .." said Suraj.
"I LOVE YOU MRS. CHAKOR SURAJ RAJVANSHI" , said Suraj huskily and then kissed Chakor's earlobe.
Chakor embarrassingly, hid her head on Suraj's chest.
"Haaye, main marjawa bubbly kha ke, meri junglee billi sharmati bhi hai", said Suraj.
"Bubbly but idiom to gud kha ke hai na", said Chakor.
"Haa hai toh par gud kaun khaata hai ab, dairy milk bubbly toh abhi jyaada chalta hai", said Suraj and Chakor smiled.
"Thank you Chakor for coming in my life, ab kabhi mujhe chod ke na jaana. Sab chale jaate hai aur main akela ho jaata hu, papa bhi..." Suraj couldn't say anything as Chakor put her finger on his lips.
"Papa will be happy seeing you like this", Chakor assured Suraj while thinking about Kamal Narayan.
After 2 months of their marriage, the news of Kamal Narayan came. He was alive but was in critical state. He didn't said anything to Suraj as he realised his mistake but he took a promise from Chakor to change Suraj.
And Chakor did fulfilled her promise.
"Suraj hum hamesa aise hi rahenge na", Chakor asked Suraj and Suraj said, "haa biwi hum hamesa aise hi rahenge, EKSAATH".
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So the story ends here. I wish this could happen in the show too.
Thanks a lot guys for support. I will soon write more
Thank you.

Was , it only me or this os was full of emotions ...excitement , shocked , curiosity , hillarious , suspense, romance, and last awesome ending.
But it happened so quickly ,did nt get enough time so that i can enjoy every moment.
Chakor was too girly here , i never watched the show but i always imagined her as a tomboy.
The jealousy part - where that chandni and balma part was in focus , dont know why i felt it similiar to an episode of 'bahu hamari rajnikanth' (though us episode me jealousy jaisa kuch ni tha

Such a cute fic Jeeni 😊 Loved it!