Chatya OS- Hai dil ko teri aarzoo

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It was raining heavily. This night was something different. Chakor was very happy. For the first time she felt something in her has changed. She was on cloud nine. It has been a memorable day for her. She lost in Vivaan's thoughts. The boat ride with Vivaan was amazing. Then the fun they had in the village fair was out of the world. The way Vivaan was crying after eating spicy phulkas, he was looking so cute.

And finally on their way back Vivaan took Chakor in her arms and kissed her. She just could not resist the kiss. This was sudden but very sweet. She wanted to stop the time then and there itself. She wished to get lost in Vivaan's arms. She was smiling remembering all of these. And was so lost in her thoughts that the heavy rains were also not affecting her.

She badly wanted to share this with someone. She thought she can't tell this to Mai because she doesn't know how Mai is going to react to this. She wanted to share this with Imli but Imlu has changed completely. She no longer talks with Chakor the way she used to do in childhood. The last person who came to her mind was her Bijli ka dabba Aditya. So she ran towards adi's home to tell him all of that.

At Aditya's house

The doorbell rang. Aditya went to open the door and he saw a completely drenched Chakor. As soon as he could react or ask anything to Chakor. Chakor hugged him tightly.

Aditya: Chodo ye kya rahi hi. Khud to bheegi hui thi hume bi bhiga diya

Chakor parting away said to kya hui gava. Itne bi naahi bhige ho tum.

Aditya: Itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahi hi vo bi aise bheeg ke.

Chakor: Adi adi hum aaj bahut khus hai aur aihiliye hum tumre paas aa gaye.

U aaj humka vivaan ne and then she stooped. She thought how is she going to tell this to adi. After all he is a guy and she is a girl. How is Adi is going to react to this. No she can't tell this to Aditya.

Aditya: Kya hua bologi. Kya kiya Vivaan ne?

Chakor: Amm hmm vo vo.

Aditya: Accha chodo ye sab pahle chal ke kapde badal lo. Bheeg gayi ho puri tarah.

Chakor: Naahi hum theek hai.

Aditya took her hand and dragged her to his room. He gave a towel to Chakor and took out a bright pink colour dress from the cupboard. Snatching the dress from Aditya's hand Chakor shouted

Are waah ei to bahute acchi dress hai. Par ei tumre paas ka kar rahi hai. Aabha mausi ki bahu mil gayi ka.

Aditya: Aisa kuch nahi hai. Ye to hum tumahre liye hi laaye the.

Chkor: Accha hamare liye laaye the to diye kaahe nahi?

Aditya: Tumne hi kaha na bahut acchi dress hai ye. Chakor gave him a querying look.

Chakor: Matbal?

Aditya: Matlab ye ki ye dress bahut acchi hai aur tum pahen leti to kharab ho jati. Isliye tumhe nahi diya. And he started laughing.

Chakor hit him with her hand. Aditya kept laughing.

Chakor: Jao hum ka naahi chahi ei dress.

Aditya: Accha baba sorry. Maaf kar do. Actually hum tumhe dena hi bhool gaye the. Tum jaldi se kapde change karo. Hum garama garma chai bana kar laate hai. Phir tumahari adhoori baat puri karenge.

Chakor agreed. Aditya knew that Chakor and Vivaan loves each other. But somewhere whenever he thought about it he used to get a little upset. That was also one of the reasons why he never gave that dress to Chakor.

Chakor came down and was looking beautiful in that pink dress. Aditya wanted to compliment her but instead he started making fun of her.

Aditya: Kaha tha na humne tum ye dress kharab kar dogi. Itni acchi dress thi ab puri barbaad.

Chakor gave him an angry look and said.

Tum kabho naahi sudhroge. Hum jante hai hum bahut acche lag rahe hai. Vivaan hota na to vo hume dekh ke bahute khush ho jata aur bahut taarif bi karta.

Aditya: Ha kyunki Vivaan aankhein kharab ho gayi hai. Kal hi doctor ke paas le jana padega.

Chakor: Adi chup. Varna hum ja rahe hai.

Aditya: Accha accha ab bataogi kya baat karne aayi thi.

Chakor:- O adi kahte hue kuch ajeeb to lag raha hai par ka kare tum hi hamare eklote dost ho eha. To tumse nahi kahe to kisse kahe.

Aditya was listening carefully.

Chakor continued and described the whole day's activities to Aditya. And then she told him about the kiss. Aditya was shocked to hear about the kiss. He did not know that Vivaan and Chakor has come so close. He felt an acute pain in his heart. He wanted to stop chakor and run away from that place. He was not able to understand why is he feeling so bad. But like a true friend he listened to whatever Chakor said. After completing her story Chakor asked Aditya

Adi ka hua tum kachu bologe naahi?

Aditya: Hum kya bole Chakor.

Chakor: Kuch bhi.

Aditya: Hum tumahere liye bahut khush hai Chakor. Vivaan bahut accha hai aur vo tumhe hamesh khush rakhega. Tum aur vivaan sirf ek dusre ke liye bane ho.

Aditya was all teary eyed. Chakor was blushing listening to all of these. She hugged Aditya and said Adi tum jante ho tum hamare sabse acche dost ho. Sabse acche.

Aditya was fighting with his tears. He did not know why he wanted the moment to stop. He wanted Chakor to stay there forever.


Bg; Hai dil ko teri aarzoo, par main tuje naa paa sakun.

Hai dil ko teri justajoo, par main tuje naa aa sakun.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am bad at writing romantic stuffs. So please tell me how was it. Criticism is always welcomed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeh kya hain sneha..I was all happy reading that 1st part,romantic stuff of vikor..by really felt very very bad for adi.. that's why I'm against these love triangles,especially between my favourite characters,as I can't enjoy wholeheartedly..
phew mera emotional drama katham.. your too good in writing,so please continue..warnna tumhae aksharaki kasam😆
Edited by abhiya_12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Yeh kya hain sneha..I was all happy reading that 1st part,romantic stuff of vikor..by really felt very very bad for adi.. that's why I'm against these love triangles,especially between my favourite characters,as I can't enjoy wholeheartedly..
phew mera emotional drama katham.. your too good in writing,so please continue..warnna tumhae aksharaki kasam😆

Nahiii ye tumne mujse kya maang liya. Akshra meri akshra ki kasam de di. 😭
Ab to likhna hi padega. Kyun rev kyun kiya tumne mere sath aisa.😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kyun kii main jaanthi hoon sirf aksharaki pyaar hii tumsae yeh punya kaam karwaa sakthi hain...ur love towards akshara is so pure ❤️ 🤣
Edited by abhiya_12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice post sneha ... reading for u only
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was beautiful, Sneha! You write so well! The ViKor stuff in the beginning was adorable. I honestly felt so bad for Adi. And the last part... you could almost viscerally feel his pain through the fic. Waiting for more stuff from you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Kyun kii main jaanthi hoon sirf aksharaki pyaar hii tumsae yeh punya kaam karwaa sakthi hain...ur love towards akshara is so pure ❤️ 🤣

Rev mera aur akshara ka pyaar janmo ka h.
Janam janam janam sath chalna yuhi. My fav akshara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: blossom_loving

nice post sneha ... reading for u only

Aww thank u so much my darling. Was missing u so much. Whr av u been?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Snehu ..
. ⭐️
Its totaaallly beautifulll os
u have written it so beautifully
My heart beated for chatya ...these.two
specially aditya ...its a pain of unknown love...one cant even think to loose his bestest friend from him...after all adi first bestest friend was chakor only and that connection unknown love made me cry ...
On one hand chakor madly truly in love with vivaan and on other hand adi madly in love with chakor but he cant even express it all ever to chakor
Love triangles always make the story complicated
But i really love true love stories like this
Adi is sacrificing his love for chakor happiness .
...thats true love
Just love my chatya...
Snehu ...i know this is os but pls continue it ...
Chatya nokjhok was really amazing ...
U made my all memories of chatya refresh by this os
Thanks to core for it
By the way ...who is akshara? ? ❤️

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