UDANN FANFICTION SHORTS - by Doomandgloom

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello there!
My undying love for this show and its characters has translated into full on fangirling and writing fanfiction for it. So here's a series of random one-shots, featuring interactions between all the characters - Chakor, Imli, Aditya, Vivaan, Suraj, KN, Tejaswini, Ranjana, Kasturi, Bhuwan. But most of them might focus a bit more on Chakor, Imli, Aditya and Vivaan. Everything from friendship to family to romance to violence and conspiracy.
Romantic pairing will only be Vikor, but worry not, because I adore Chakor's friendship with other's as well, especially Aditya, which is why my first installment is Adi-Chakor. Here you go -


Chapter title - Deal (Feat. Aditya and Chakor)

Chakor stood under the tree outside the village that had become their regular meeting point. Somewhere in the back of her mind she knew that this was a terribly reckless thing to do - calling him here, so soon after he had painstakingly escaped Maalik - no, Kamal Narayan's captivity (She had learned to mentally berate herself everytime she called that monster Maalik. He was no one's maalik, and she was no one's slave. Not anymore.) But this was the last time, she comforted herself with that thought. This was the last time she would put his life in danger.

Aditya arrived on his bike with a broad smile on his face. As if he didn't have a care in the world. As if he hadn't been through a horrible ordeal less than a month ago. As if he wasn't aware that Kamal Narayan and Suraj were still after his life.

"Aur batao Chakor, any news? What are your next plans? We've waited around for too long now! Thank god you finally called me this morning! I could hardly believe that the Chakor I know would waste so much time without doing anything- " He spoke quickly and brightly like the bijli-ka-dabba he was.

Chakor cut him off mid-sentence, "Arey ruk to jao, humra bijli ka dabba, give me a chance to speak, will you? You needed time to recover from your wounds." Which was true, Aditya had been pretty beat-up back then thanks to Suraj and his men. Her fists curled up at the thought and the surge of anger she had felt towards Kamal Narayan and his bas***d son was coming back in waves. She willed herself to cool down and forced to keep the smile on her face.

"That was hardly anything, Chakor. Just a broken arm and some bruises. That too a hairline fracture. Now I've had more than enough time to recover, both physically and mentally. So let's get back to work, shall we?"

Chakor's smile faltered a little and she looked almost hesitant to say what was coming next "That's what I wanted to talk to you about. I think you need to stop."
"Stop? Stop what?" Aditya was clearly confused.

"You need to stop helping me. Leave Azaadganj. Go back to Lucknow."

Aditya looked gobsmacked. "What? Are you insane? Chakor, I'm fine. Nothing's happened to me, stop worrying."

"I'm not saying this because I'm worried, Adi. I'm saying this because I've made a decision. I cannot and will not accept your help anymore. Not after I almost got you killed." Chakor was absolute in her belief that this was all he fault.

Aditya rested his hands on her shoulders and determinately said "You had nothing to do with that. It was Suraj and Kamal Narayan who orchestrated that."

Chakor's features hardened and she spoke angrily with defiance "Yes but it was MY father who helped him! It's MY sister who's in league with them. And most of all, they wanted you dead because of ME. Adi, your Ishwar mausa died because of all he did for me. It would be disservice to him if I let his son die because of me."

Aditya countered "No, it would be disservice to him if you did not let me help you. It was his dream to free this village. He would be proud even if I died trying to fulfil this cause."

"Yes, but I won't. I won't be proud. I will think it's a waste. You're what, 22? You have your whole life ahead of you and if you stay here any longer that monster will just kill you like it's nothing. Your media friends will obsess over it for a while and eventually it will all tamp down and you'll be nothing but a memory. And he will win, again. I've seen it happen before and I cannot let it happen again." Chakor's eyes had taken a haunted look, probably replaying the memory of his father dying in front of her. The expression on her face was so different from her usual enthusiastic and optimistic self that Aditya was beginning to feel really worried for her.

"But... Chakor. The media... is all you have. You know that. It's your sword and your shield, without it you'll be powerless against Kamal Narayan." Aditya tried to make her understand how important it was for her to have the media's support.

"He won't kill me just yet. I'm too popular right now, and I still have that national marathon happening in Delhi. I know for a fact that I am safe till until after that. But he's especially fixated on you, and if you get back here so soon he will not hesitate to have you killed."

As much as he wanted to disagree with her, Aditya had to admit that Chakor had a point. The whole incident with his abduction was all too fresh in Kamal Narayan's mind, as was all the tricks they had pulled on him when they forced him into constructing wells and opening the hospital in Azaadganj. But he couldn't leave Chakor alone for very long, either. So he decided on a plan of action that would suit both their interests.

"Alright, then. Let's make a deal. I'll leave you alone for the next three months. A month until the marathon and a month after that. After three months, though I'm coming back to Azaadganj, whether you like it or not. I think three months is more than enough for the whole fiasco to be forgotten. Also, I assume that Kamal Narayan will also start taking it easy and put his guard down."

Chakor knew there was no arguing with Aditya about this, they were both equally stubborn, sometimes it was a wonder they were best friends considering how often they butted heads.

"I... alright. Fine. Three months. But three months you stay out of this village, do not dare to come back here."

"Okay madam ji. Jaisa aap kahe." And just like that they both smiled and got back to their cheerful and cheeky selves, which served to lift the mood from the uncharacteristically serious conversation they had been having.

"But I will only agree to do this if you promise me some things." Aditya said.

"What promises?"

"First, you will call me everyday. If for some reason you cannot reach my phone you'll call my mother or Arjun Sir or Bhagya Didi. I need to know that someone has heard from you on a regular basis. If I do not hear from you for more than two days I'm coming back here. You have all of our numbers right?

"Yes, yes Sirji I do. Wait, maybe not your mother's."

"Alright, write it down."

She pulled out her phone and saved the number that he dictated.

"There, now you stick to your end of the bargain and I'll stick to mine." Aditya commented as he proceeded to sit on his motorbike and tie his helmet.

"You are a mean negotiator."Chakor teased him.

"What can I say, I've learnt from the best." He winked at her and she stuck her tongue out at him in turn.

"Remember, every day." Aditya said before starting his bike.

"Noted, baba, noted. Now go quickly." Chakor scolded him affectionately.

"Take care of yourself, alright?" Aditya said before speeding off.

"I will." Chakor said to herself after he had left. And she would, not only herself but also of others who needed her - Her family, Imli and... her heart skipped a beat when she thought of him - Vivaan.
She had been ecstatic to hear that Vivaan had helped Adi escape. She was not wrong in thinking that the old Vivaan - her Vivaan was still there. She just had to help him be that person again. She would fix him. And he would be a whole person again. She would also repair her relationship with Imli. There. Now she knew how she would use these three months. She looked up at the night sky, with the moon shining brightly overhead in all its glory. As if Chandu ji himself was blessing her in her endeavours. With that happy thought Chakor smiled and walked back to her house with a skip in her step.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful start 😳
Waiting for next part..
Continue soon..
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Originally posted by: -mrityunjay-

Beautiful start 😳

Waiting for next part..
Continue soon..


Thankyou!! 😃 😳 There'll be more very soon!
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beautiful update...👏
chatya nokjhok ...i just love it and the care as friends...😳😊
aditya and chakor speaking like superfast train ...lol...that i love the most 😆⭐️
as i am missing chatya childhood fun masti fights to core...but u refresh it all😊⭐️ ...so thanks alot...waiting for ur next update ...
chakor vivaan meeting...
chakor mission
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Originally posted by: creationschhavi

beautiful update...👏

chatya nokjhok ...i just love it and the care as friends...😳😊
aditya and chakor speaking like superfast train ...lol...that i love the most 😆⭐️
as i am missing chatya childhood fun masti fights to core...but u refresh it all😊⭐️ ...so thanks alot...waiting for ur next update ...
chakor vivaan meeting...
chakor mission


Aww thankyou so much for such a detailed review!🤗 I'm so glad you enjoyed it, the next part will be up soon!
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Originally posted by: Doomandgloom


Aww thankyou so much for such a detailed review!🤗 I'm so glad you enjoyed it, the next part will be up soon!

mention not dear⭐️
and yup i enjoyed it to core...
will wait for ur next update😊
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wow its a good strt
lyked adi-chakorz care fr eachother
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Very nice ff ..keep updating ...
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Well, I initially thought that these would be a collection of random one-shots but the reviews have inspired to me write this as a continuous story. So here you are, part 2

Chapter Title - Revival (Feat. Chakor and Vivaan)

That's it... Just, just run till that tree over there.

5...4...3...2...

"Hah." Chakor came to an abrupt halt and lied down with her back on the ground. She took deep heaving breaths and felt a throbbing pain in her legs.

"Haye Daak baba, I feel as if my legs are going to disintegrate from my body."
Despite the hard training she was used to subjecting herself to everyday, Chakor felt as if she had especially run herself ragged that morning. She couldn't help it. There were so many things on her mind, so many questions, so many worries. She was used to letting out her stress in rigorous exercise. That or talking it out with someone. But the latter wasn't exactly an option at the moment - Her Maai had enough troubles of her own, her Baapu wouldn't understand, she had sent Adi away, and Imli... well, her sister seemed to have drifted so far away from her that she was beginning to lose hope of ever regaining the bond they used to have when they were children.


"I feel so... tired." And she was, physically, mentally and emotionally exhausted. There were so many things to do, so many people to fix, she was determined, but she didn't know where to start, or how.

"Well, if you plan on lying like that under the blaring sun all day then of course you're going to get tired."

Chakor opened her eyes and squinted under the blinding light of the sun. She struggled to make out the figure overhead and when she did she was greeted with an adorably cheeky smile and raised eyebrows that could only belong to one person.

"Vivaan?" She grinned "What... when did you get here?"

"A few minutes ago, I saw you lying here and muttering to yourself , something about problems and Imli and being very tired."

"Arey maiyaa ri! I didn't realize I had said all that out loud." Chakor giggled and playfully slapped her own forehead. "Anyway, did you come all this way to meet me?"

Vivaan's smile died down and he suddenly looked unsure... as if he had just realized that he had committed some grave mistake. He made to turn around.

"Vivaan, Vivaan wait." Chakor ran after him and grabbed his forearm. "Vivaan please, please don't run from me."

"I...I shouldn't have come here, I don't know what possessed me to do this. Maa, maa will be angry. She will disapprove. I shouldn't..."

"Vivaan please, turn around. Look at me. Please." Chakor said desperately.

He hesitantly turned around and Chakor could see the faraway look in his eyes, as if he was contemplating the consequences of talking to her.

"Vivaan, if you... came all this way, there must have been a reason. Try to remember wh you came here, what compelled you to see me. Is it because you wanted to? Did you want to talk to me, because if that is the case then you're most welcome to. We are friends, after all. Aren't we?"

"I... I don't know. I don't understand anything anymore. On one hand I... I trust you. I don't know why, but I do. I feel like I want to be friends with you but...on the other... she won't like it! She won't give me that milk and I need it. I need the milk."

This was probably the umpteenth time she heard the milk mentioned from his mouth. What was his fixation with milk about?

"Vivaan... why... why do you need that milk?" Chakor asked cautiously, as if he was a wild animal ready to spring forth.

"What do you mean why do I need it?! I need it because I always have! It's been the only thing that kept me going for so many years! It has my maa's love! How dare you ask me why?!!" Vivaan reacted as badly as she had expected, so she tried to explain herself as best as she could.

"I didn't... mean it that way, I just...needed to know what happens to you if you don't get that milk. I just want to understand it's importance, is all"

Vivaan visibly relaxed at that and his demeanor turned very frightened and haunted, as if he was replaying a horrific memory in his mind over and over again " I cannot function without it. Without it I feel sick... feverish and clammy. I... I see things...things that disappear with the blink of an eye. I throat feels dry and I ... feel awful about myself. I'm reminded of how alone I am. How I have no one in the world except for my maa. And if I keep defying her then she'll leave me too."

Chakor felt unbearably sad as her friend regaled her with effects of his milk deprivation. She couldn't believed that Vivaan had been living like this for 10 whole years. At this point she was convinced that the milk Tejaswini had been giving him was drugged in some way. Suddenly Chakor was struck with a realization like a bullet to her brain.

He's been having this milk since he was a child.

She's been drugging him since he was a child.

She's been brainwashing him, isolating him and has sucked out all aspects of his personality which made him into the person he was.


Chakor wasn't a particularly angry person. She had absolutely no interest in holding grudges, keeping scores and plotting revenge. She tried to stay clear of negative feelings as much as she could, embracing only the positive, because a person like her had to stay optimistic in life.

But at that moment Chakor felt anger like she rarely ever had. In fact, only once in her life did she remember feeling this much hatred toward a person - when Ishwar mausa was killed by Kamal Narayan. If Tejaswini had been in her vicinity in that moment she would have strangled the woman with her bare hands.

She took Vivaan's hands in hers and interlaced their fingers tightly.

"Vivaan, you are not alone. You... you have friends. I am your friend"

"I told you that I don't remember you!" He panicked and snapped at her but didn't pull out his hands from hers.

Chakor looked at their interlocked hands and congratulated herself on the small victory.

"And you don't have to. We can be new friends. I can be your new friend, can't I? We have helped each other more than once now, have talked to each other. You like talking to me, don't you?"

Several moments seemed to pass as they looked deep into each other's eyes while Chakor waited for Vivaan's answer. When he did answer his voice was loud and clear, not at all unsure like she had expected it to be.

"I do."

Chakor smiled widely "Then there's that."

"But maa-" Vivaan started

"Doesn't have have to know." Chakor interrupted him. "We'll be discreet. I'll make sure that you're not found out. And if somehow you are, and you don't get this milk that you speak of, just come to me. I'll try to make the bad feeling go away, alright? You just said that for some reason, you trust me. Then trust me on this. Promise me you'll come to me whenever you want to."

Vivaan nodded

"Okay. I...I promise." He smiled a little as well.

"Good, you know where my house is?" Chakor asked him happily.

"Is it beside the sealed well where I gave you the letter?"

"Oh, you remember ? That's great. It's not quite there, but it's in the same area. Just come till the well and ask for me, I'll meet you there, okay?"

Chakor was on cloud nine with the way the whole conversation was going.
"Okay. But now I have to go, maa must be worried about me."

Oh, I'm sure she is. Extremely worried. Chakor thought sarcastically.

"Right, okay. Remember your promise, Vivaan."

He nodded before he took off, leaving a smiling and hopeful Chakor leaning against the tree.







Edited by Doomandgloom - 9 years ago
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We get an insight into Vivaan's pandemonium of a mind, and Chakor finally obtains a sample of the milk.

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