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Posted: 20 years ago
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So this is what happens...IN MY FUNKY STORY

Normal day in Disha and DK's house. Sumitra is asleep...Gargi and Ved are nowhere to be found. DK is sitting there drinking as usual. Disha is in the kitchen cooking (by the way, BLUEFISH you really helped me out here) with her sari's palu tied around her waist (guys, I dont wear saris so I dont even know what I'm going on about). Anyways DK realizes that no one else is in the house or awake for that matter and he thinks that its the perfect opportunity to get close to the wifey. So what he does is he goes into the kitchen and scopes Disha out. Basically he looks at her and is totally taken away by her. SO what he does is he slowly creeps his way into the kitchen and touches her gently on her back. She gasps. Then he takes his index finger and runs it down her bare back (she's wearing a skimpy blouse). He grabs her hands and has her facing him...there they are - together and she looks at him lovingly. He whispers into her ear...

DK- No one is at home and I WANT YOU. Mein tumhe bahout pyaar karta hoon...thumhare bin jee nahi sakta. Mein tumhare paas ana chata hoon. Tumhe choona chata hoon. Tumhe paana chata hoon - dil se, dimage se, aatma se, aur sharir se.

He then removes the palu from her waist and lets it flow freely. He puts his hands on her face.

Disha- Not now DK I'm cooking. Why are you touching me? Have you been drinking? Someone might come.

DK - Disha I dont care about anyone else. It's just you and me. No Vedant , no Inder...you and me. Sirf mein aur tum.

Disha - DK, stop. I have to make food.

DK - Disha mein apne pyaar ka ishaar kar raha hoon aur tumhe khana banana hai?

Disha - Tum apna paagalpan apne paas rakho. Mere paas time nahi hain.

DK - Mein tumhe batata hoon ke paagalpan kise kete hain.

So then he picks her up (his crutch has misteriously disappeared) and she's like totally freaking out. He takes her to her bed and says...

DK - Disha why dont you understand my love?

Disha - DK I do. But I have to make food.

Then DK gets all mad and starts to yell and say...

DK - You will never understand me, Disha.

He gets up to leave and she says...

Disha - I love you DK. Now let me go make food.

He stops her there, and blocks her way. He says to her...

OK GUYS SO THAT WAS MY STUPID LITTLE STORY STAY TUNED THOUGH...ALTHOUGH I THINK THAT BLUEFISH'S STORIES ARE A HECK OF ALOT BETTER!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow nice start just keep on writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
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You seem to switch back and forth from serious romance to ridiculous hilarity! I do not know if that was intentional, but I do love it to pieces!!!! So funny how Disha is completely fixed on cooking, despite being literally swept off her feet!! LOL!!! I'm really looking forward to the next part, and hope you continue along the same lines. Its just too good!! 😆

Kinda reminds me of the epic of chets and nav over on Bollyteens- what say, bomby? Man, I miss that story...

-DKaddict

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏👏LOL...good work...ok i have to go now...i have to make food!!!😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi,

Looks like the whole bollyteen janta is here and that's why there is a big hole in the BT forums!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉

Anyways, guys love u all. Lets all have fun here.

mink😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey sabjsc

man u are making me laugh sooooooooooooo much that i cant stop👏

still i am laughing😆

continue please

Love KP😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 i agree with keshp15, just can't stop laughing, my mom things i have done nuts she don't know what a funny and lovely story i just read. keep it up write more story soon.😆

my stomach hurts now😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi

This is funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnny😆LOL

Waiting for next update

samy

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey nice and a very romance focussed story..... waiting for the next part... things are getting hot and i looooooooove it.

post the next paar SOOOOOOOOOOOOOn

Kavanika

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Posted: 20 years ago
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WOOWWW - dk takes disha too hiss roomm wooww loll😉😆

Cn't wait for the next bit love Asian Princess/ DK ki deewani 😉

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