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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys I am a silent reader here on forum I used to write os on peeran sukor and now currently I fall in love with kalma may be many of forum people know me for writing stories so here a little teaser of my os kalma jelaousy here it goes



Malhar comes to Kalyani 's college to pick her he was searching her when the secne Infront of him boil his blood Kalyani was in the arms of his classmate Karan who was staring her with so much intensity he goes near them to listen their talks he hides his self to listen


Karan: Kalyani tum theek to ho na ??

Kalyani:yeh ma bilkul theek hon all thanks to you tum Na mujhe slip hone sa bacha liya how sweet you are

Karan: bus bus itni bhi tareef mat karo

Kalyani: sach ma Karan tum Na presentation ma aur exams ma meri kitni help ki sach ma you are so nice


Karan: ok bus Baba age itna hi Acha hon ma to kal coffee pa chalo mere sath Kahi dono ise bahne time spend Kar Len ge agr tum free ho


Kalyani: why not ?? Pillu bhi soya Hoga ma chalo hi na kal Shaam ma tumhare sath tum Na meri itni help ki tume na kase bol skti hon thank you so much


Karan:tum Na suna nhi dosti ma no sorry no thank you hum dost hai na to phir thanks mat bolo lets shake hand

Both Karan and Kalyani shakes hand Karan was staring Kalyani and Kalyani was smiling at him .malhar who was hiding his self from both of them feels anger

Malhar : iske to ma dant toodh donga iski itni himmat ka Kalyani ko choa kase bara Aya dosti ma no sorry no thanks bolne wala aur yeh Kalyani sirf mere sath to Kabhi aise baat nhi karti na smile pass karti hai aur is bande ka samne dekho dant andr hi nhi ja rhe hain Ghar ane do yeh hi wo fasad ki jar jiski waja sa madam mujhe pa tawja nhi deti ajkal


So mlhar decided to take panga with Karan




So this is it sorry for the mistakes if you want me to post full os then do comment on it and also hit the button of like if good response will come I will definitely post it till then take care



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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
This really awesome
Loved it
Jealous malhar is what I wanna see on show
Please do update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#3
Good start... Pls update fast
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Jealous malhar😳
Looking forward for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#5
That was awesome!
Update sooner
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Posted: 6 years ago
#6
Jealous Malhar!!!! super awesome
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Posted: 6 years ago
#7
Please do continue.. very good. My morning has been good after reading beautiful things written by you guys..it would be fun to see what jealous Malhar would do.. A roller coaster ride for KalMa ..🤣. keep up the good work..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Jealous Malhar
Continue ya
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Posted: 6 years ago
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loved the os
Jealous Malhar treat to watch
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Arre...thanku yr morning ko aur bhi happy banane ke liye...it was awesome...please update soon please please

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