KalMa SS - Destiny... Part 1 on Pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai aacha laga ki nhi... kitna aacha likha hai please continue yr can't wait


Thank u dear. .😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Gaurirane366

Good teaser...

Eagerly waiting for next update


Thank u. .😊

Will. Update soon... Baandh kaam chal raha hai story ka.. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks ya..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Plz update soon,,,don't take time to update,,,the story seems interesting,,,wanna read it - 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys for liking it... Will update the next part by tonight...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
interesting one
do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey sorry it got me so late to update.. Here we go...

Part 1

it was a bright day and a very special day for kalyani.. As it was her sister sampada wedding, she was too excited Bcoz her to be jiju was not only acp but also their childhood friend to whim her sister was getting married...

Sarthak was way too busy in seeing the arrangement of the marriage..who was interrupted by kalyani...

"baba, yeah kya aapne chai aise hi bina piye chod di.. "

"beta bhool gaya, we arrangements dekh raha hoon na... "

"baba woh sab dekhne ke liye hi Humane event organizers rakhe hai..agar aap unka bhi kaam karenge to kaise hoga.."

"kya karu bacha beti ki shaadi hai to koi kami na ho, our sampu Kyushu se vida ho, isiliye... "

"aap excuses dena Band karo aur yeh lo juice piyo...mein aai ko dekhe aati hoon...woh bhi aise hi kuch kar rahi hogi..."

Saying that kalyani went to check on her mother anupriya...she was also no less like her baba..ignored her food and was busy I chores... She went and scolded her and made her eat...

"lagta hai tum dono mere bache ho na ki mein tumhari.. .Pata tum dono kaise rahoge agar mein nahin hongi tho..."

"kalyani... Kitni baar bola hai ki aisi baatien mat Karo jiske sach hone se dar lage..kabhi kabhi saraswati ji zubaan pe hoti hai aur hum jo bolte hai woh sach ho jaata hai.."

"acha thik hai nahi bolungi..ab yeh khalo..."

"kalyani.. Kalyani... Kalyani... "

"yeh lo...tai chilla rahi hai.. Aati tum yeh finish Karo... "

"kya hua tai...kyun chilla rahi ho..mein aai ke saath thi..."

"mein yaha tension me hoon air tu idhar udhar ghoon rahi hai..."

"kyun jiju ne kuch kiya kya.. "

"chup kuch bhi bolti hai.. Mujhe yeh shaadi ke jode ke saath kounsi jewellery pehnu.."

"jiju se poochna unhe kounsa acha lagega utarne me..u know sr me.. "

"chup Katie batategi... "

"acha yeh lo... Wear this... "

"waise tu kabse malhar ko jiju bolne lagi tu to malhar ji bolti hai.. Though he is childhood friend ."

"arey tumhare pati ko jiju hi bolungi na...acha chalo I ll make u ready..."

After sometime. .

The bride came for Jaymala, Malhar was desperately waiting for his sampu to see her like a bride.. And there she arrives.. With long ghoonghat. He was surprised to see that as they don't have such ritual and questioned anu about it to which any said that sarthak family has it so they want to follow to which malhar agreed like a decent person...

The marriage was done properly with following each and every ritual... Jaymala,phere, sunspot dawn, and malhar was putting mangalsutra just then the ghoonghat of the bride got unpinned and it fell after which malhar was shocked after seeing the person he got married...it was none other than kalyani. ..and he just screamed... Kalyani...

After composing himself he questioned deshmukhs...

"kyun kiya yeh...itna bada dhoka... Kalyani yum to dost thi na... Socha bhi nahi ki mujhpe kya guzaregi iske baad..."

She was silent.. Not uttering a single word like a statue...

"kalyani kuch bolo..."

Then he went to anu and said...

"mein yaha sanpada se shaadi karne aaya tha...aapne yeh kardiya Mai aapne..kalyani se meri shaadi karadi.."

"mujhe maaf kardo malhar...woh"

"Apne ghar ki izzat bachane ke liye aapne meri zondagi barbaad kardi...itna bada dhoka Mai...aur kaka aapne bhi nahi roka Inge.. Agar sanpada bhaag gayi thi to sach bolte...mein samajhta lekin aap logo ko sach Boone se zyaada dhoka Dena thik samjha..."

Kalyani composed herself and was about to tell y they did this

"jiju.. Mmalhar Ji...woh.. ."

"chup ek dam chup...tum to kuch nahi bolo...itna bada dhoka diya hai tumne...tum meri achi dost thi lekin is dhokE me sab
Barbaad kar diya..mein aisi dhokebaaz ladki ko kabhi apni patni nahi manta... Baba chaliye..."

Kalyani recalled what happened before 2 hrs before...

Sampada had ran away from the marriage with her boy friend atharva.. Who was unknown to everyone... Leaving everyone in a shock... Everybody were tensed how to disclose it to Malhar and family..and then this all was heard by malhar father.. And he came and said to make kalyani sit as bride in place of sampada. To which sarthak denied but was forced byvmalhar father as this will effect his reputation...but both anu and sarthak cannot put kalyani life at stake for their so called reputation..but to those surprise kalyani agree for this bcoz she knows her parents will take any shit but won't agree to this...and she was made to sit in the mandap...both anu and sarthak were not happy...

She was strolled back by malhar voice. .

"Ruko malhar...agar hum jayenge to sirf tab agar kalyani bhi aaye"

"par baba.. ."

"kuch bhi hua ho ab kalyani tumhari patni hai...aur woh humare saath chalegi...bas. . "

Malhar was upset that his father was not supporting him.. But he don't know that this all was done bcoz of him...and he don't even say that this surprised kalyani that why malhar father is not saying the truth. Even after seeing how malhar was mu her and her family...later even after the refusal kalyani's vidayi was done with all the rituals...there were surprises waiting for kalyani in her sasural...

That's it guys hope u all like it... Do share ur views... Sorry for typo error...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: the_fangirl

Please continue... 😊


Updated...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
First chapter was awesome!
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

First chapter was awesome!

Update soon


Thanks dear. . 😊

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