KanUm SS : The Beginning : Part 2 Updated (Page 3) - Page 3

Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Loved it..🤗

Just wish itna lamba romantic scene serial mn bhi ml jaye

Originally posted by: poojdc87

Just read both parts! I'm missing happy Kanak and Uma so much on the show. Glad to see your portrayal of them here, both side moving closer together. Hope to read more from you soon!

Originally posted by: varsha79

Thank you Vividdiamond.. Loved every line of it😃

Please update soon

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Thanks vividdiamond!! It was awesome ,I love each and every line you wrote, kanak and uma of your ss are really romantic, I wish I get to see this scene in the show.

Thanks and plz continue writing...you are really good.

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Thanks vividiamnond! So sweet!

Originally posted by: Calypso05

Hi vivdiamond😊,

Super fanfiction👏, you wrote well⭐️
You describe so graceful Kanum's feelings❤️.
" Uma's intense gaze that pierced through her heart" i love this line, so poetic.

"She lowered her eyes not ready to face his. Nothing happened for like 5 minutes and when Uma was done with the Kanak Admiration Quota for the whole of the next day, he again reached for her ear and this time spoke softly, "Kanak, this was a fool proof plan, but upon your insisting I agree to reveal it to you. The only reason for my existence is you, and for lightening your mood, you see, I could also act being hurt." Beautiful love declaration❤️!
These are my favorite passage❤️. Thank you👍🏼
Keep writing !