LETTER & FIRST KISS.(Kanum SS)--Part2(END) Updated page3

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lovelycolour

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Hi I am a silent reader of forum just I don't have exact words or there are so many talented writer around don't know what to speak but today after reading your SS I have to say you are a brilliant writer and I can't believe this is your first attempt you are very correct with your words as well . Too Good👏👏

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hi,

Thanks dear for your wonderful update ,love each and every line you wrote , I had tears .

Plz update next part.

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Calypso05
Forgiveness letter, good idea👍🏼. Nowadays no one thinks to write a letter everthing is done by sms. It's a pity😒 !
It's the disadvantage of technology, nothing is worth than a good handwritten letter which stays engraved on paper and in the heart. So thank you Kanum👏. If Uma writes a letter like that Kanak will forgive him❤️.

Yes nowadays we are missing some good pleasures due to technology addiction..we only wants uma to strongly repent for his mistake,but in kanak view,she believes that his husband is good enough,pure by heart,,he have this rude behaviour only due to wrong guidance..so all she want is uma's pure love only ,not even a sigle forgiveness or repent ..she will get that love soon..

Thanks for reading and comment dear..

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: lovelycolour
Hi I am a silent reader of forum just I don't have exact words or there are so many talented writer around don't know what to speak but today after reading your SS I have to say you are a brilliant writer and I can't believe this is your first attempt you are very correct with your words as well . Too Good👏👏

Hii lovely colour..i feel very very happy after reading your post.encouraged me a lot.As its my first attempt i made it so carefully, while writing i used to read it again and again changed the words and mistakes..Tooo glad that you all liked it..Thank u so much.😊

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Hi,
Thanks dear for your wonderful update ,love each and every line you wrote , I had tears .
Plz update next part.

Thanks a lot dear..Its happy that you liked it...I will surely update next part soon👍🏼..thanks again😊

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VividDiamond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Hi Kanum !! 😊

You've made a very good attempt at it and I loved reading the 1st part...do update part 2 soon 😃

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: VividDiamond
Hi Kanum !! 😊
You've made a very good attempt at it and I loved reading the 1st part...do update part 2 soon 😃

Thanks a lot vivid 😊..i will update continuation part soon👍🏼

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Friends,read (PART-1) in 1st page & come to this part 2 ,as this part-2(END) is the continuation scene of part1.

PART-2

Uma enters into room with slow footsteps seeing kanak with the letter he wrote. kanak puts the letter in bed comes near him sees her husband's state which she never saw before, her tear filled eyes sees him with so many thoughts..one long tear falls and runs in her chin saying that her loved one is near.

Uma raises his hand wipes her tear and says "" kanak,I don't have to see any more tear from your eyes in this life.You have already crossed many hurdles in life from childhood , even after you got bhabho's love, my misunderstandings hurted you lot..saying this uma cried out like a baby in front of her..Everything finished kanak , from now onwards i won't make you sad even for a single second..I am sorry kanak "".

Kanak :: uma!! its a wonderful day for me ,that you realized everything.. please don't ask sorry anymore.

Uma(with reddened eye full of tears) :: kanak i love you so much..tears rolling down from uma's eye..

Kanak (while wiping his tears) :: i love you too uma,i don't like this crying uma ..please smile my dear pathidev,then only i will speak to you.

saying this kanak turned her face to side with cute expression..

kanak heard a big laugh from uma , she turned and sees uma's childlike face while he laughing..

Uma :: is it enough kanak??

Kanak :: Hmm good ,i like this smiling uma very much..

saying this kanak hugs him,

uma wraps his hand around her and tells "" no one can separate us "" in his choked voice full of love.kanak feels the love from his heart hearing this.

They tries to move away from the hug , that time kanak's mangalsutra gets stuck with uma's kurta button..while uma trying to free that, he hears kanak's fast beating heartbeats.After separating mangalsutra from the button, he places his face softly near kanak's heart and asks""why kanak your heart beats so fast""..

Kanak :: "" Maybe due to over dump of two hearts in one place, i won't let the other one go out forever uma""..saying this kanak smiled.

Uma freezed with love by kanak's answer, he pulls her towards him, moves his lips towards kanak's forehead and kissed there. His eyes next turns to her lips, kanak felt shy she makes herself free from his grip and ran towards the curtain, hides her behind it .

uma walks towards curtain and goes inside it..curtain covers them like love shield.kanak moves her body close to the wall.Both of them are very near as like their breath can be feel by each other,

uma placed his left hand in wall above kanak's head and his right hand touched her waist and he moves his hand in her waist from centre to right side , even her kamarband feels the hot of his touch.kanak's body shivers, she closed her eyes.He sees her cute lips and gives a soft kiss on her warm lips, kanak holds his kurta tightly.

kanak opens her eyes and says softly "" uma i have to go..kitchen work is there.i'm going to prepare your favorite sugar roti today.leave me uma ""..

uma not at all make his sight out of kanak,By looking deep into her eyes and says "" kanak you are looking so beautiful ""

kanak's face reddened with shy and says "" more than that smiling uma ,I like this romantic uma "" saying this she winked her one eye.

uma stunned hearing this and gave a naughty smile in back.

They came out of curtain ,kanak walks out near the room door she turns and sees him again, smiles and went out of the room..her anklets sound faded little by little while she moves out ,but her chandan smell still prevails there..

uma feels the Chandan smell still near, which reminds kanak is always near with him and says "" you are my soul kanak "" smiled himself.

Their love life started beautifully...

...END...

All comments (both positive and negative ones)are welcome!!😊

Edited by Kanum1 - 7 years ago

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Bhaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Wow...how romantic❤️

I read part 1&2 together...superb kanum...its short and sweet

I too don't like crying uma...waiting to see smiling uma back in show.

Please continue to write dear.

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Reshma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Super KanUm👏 short n sweet. Loved the smiling Uma n the romantic Uma. The way you described the closeness ufff, I'm in Dreamland! Too good first kiss awesome😉. Continue writing dear!

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