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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey there all the lovely people!!
It's Sunday... and what happens on Sunday I bring you an OS 😆 it's not that big, but an itsy bitsy one. Do give it a read and lemme know how it went. It think it's pretty cheesy.


OS : Rain


Standing at the window, she watched the rain taking in her surroundings, she sipped her tea quietly. She loved watching the rain, but more than that the smell of earth when it rained. Rain brought all the memories with it, how she danced in it when she was a kid, when Ved bhaiya made pakoras for her the first time, Vansh once slipped in the rain and twisted his ankle and it was hilarious as Kanak and Ved made fun of him, the way she drenched Uma when he was meditating, pretending it was the rain, when she danced for him as rambha, all that was a long time ago... things were different now.
"Tm kahan chale Gaye ho Uma" she said to herself with a sigh, and stood there, watching every drop falling to the ground.

He watched her for a while silently from the door, she didn't realize he was there, she was lost, at some other place, he went and stood behind her, snaking his arms towards her front, hugging her from behind pulling her backward to himself. He kept his chin on her shoulder. Kanak closed her eyes and placed her hand on his hand, snuggling more into him. Inhaling him as the sense of loneliness crept away, and Uma taking his rightful place. "Today, tea without me", he asked and taking her hand that held the cup and brought it to his lips and sipped. "You are technically late, you were supposed to be home hours ago", Kanak retorted lightly. "And you thought you would drink the whole cup of tea by yourself, greedy lady" Uma teased her, taking another sip and relishing the hot liquid with his entire world in his arms. It was a few months back that Uma brought tea home for the first time, they both made a rule that none would consume it to the extent of addiction but will drink it whenever one liked. Kanak added to the rule that they would always share one cup, and Uma had to have his share in it, days had flown by, time even faster as Kanak was again lost in memories, she was unable to hold on to him, she was overjoyed, she was happy but still there was this uncertainty that her bubble would break, she was content but Uma was always a step ahead for her.
Uma inhaled her fragrance of chandan, nuzzling his nose into her ear and neck, breaking her out of the reverie, "what do you have in mind" he inquired biting lightly at her ear. She blushed red and smiled and said "nothing of thaat sort", she turned in his arms and hid her face in his chest, hugging him. After a few minutes Uma said "let's go". Kanak looked upto him, annoyed to be moved from her place, her favorite place off lately. He held her hand and brought her out in the courtyard in the rain, he placed her hand on his shoulder and his on her waist, Kanak looked up at him sharply, as he started moving and she followed the lead. She twirled and he lifted her up and brought her back, she was dazed and red. They danced in the rain together, drenched to the core yet they couldn't take their eyes off each other, as if it's the first time they saw each other, lost in the eyes. he cupped her face in his hands, and felt the tears that had melted in with the rain, he bent down to kiss them, he drank them all and kissed her.



Rocks and chappals are always welcome 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just wow...please please CVs .. we want this scene in serial plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's amazing and the time couldn't have been better cause it's raining here in my place . The perfect drizzle for romance and I could visualise the OS so beautifully. CVs pls look into blues OSs whenever you pen a romantic scene she has amazing ideas .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: varsha79

Just wow...please please CVs .. we want this scene in serial plz...



Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sahana93

Wow it's amazing and the time couldn't have been better cause it's raining here in my place . The perfect drizzle for romance and I could visualise the OS so beautifully. CVs pls look into blues OSs whenever you pen a romantic scene she has amazing ideas .



Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I am glad you liked it and could even relate to it. It's been cloudy here, and I am longing for rain so the instant idea wave came up.
Thank you for the kind words. Much appreciated 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi blue,
U r awesome...luv each and every word...very well written...cv should add this os ...thank u ⭐️
Plz update big os... I am really greedy...!! 🥱
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Hi blue,

U r awesome...luv each and every word...very well written...cv should add this os ...thank u⭐️
Plz update big os... I am really greedy...!!🥱
...



Hey there Mansi
Thank you so much dear.
I am glad you liked/loved every word. Thank you.

P.s - will write another one soon. Don't get too geeedy 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow so sweet!
When she said kahan chale gaye ho Uma, I thought they've separated but no :)
Then when he sipped tea I was like What?!? But it was so sweet, he broke his rule for her happiness and she made him have tea haha.
And the rain dance, wow, naughty romantic couple❤️
Great OS!

-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Wow so sweet!

When she said kahan chale gaye ho Uma, I thought they've separated but no :)
Then when he sipped tea I was like What?!? But it was so sweet, he broke his rule for her happiness and she made him have tea haha.
And the rain dance, wow, naughty romantic couple❤️
Great OS!

-Sanu



Hey there dear
Thank you for reading and commenting.
I am glad that you liked it.
Well technically Uma hasn't broken his rules regarding tea, it's still labeled addictive, but he has amended his rules a bit, one can have tea on n off... not a zombie one normally becomes 😳
Well it's time they started making rules together 😉

Thank you.

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