~Bedtime FF: ~HeartBeat~ *complete pg1* - Page 29

It ENDED!😲...😆

Awwwwww.....What a sweeeeeet end to such an awesome ff!!! I loved it sooooo much!!! Really it was brilliant...Very,very adorable and romantic...I'm kinda sad that it's over but am looking fwd. to many,many more of your awesome ffs...Loved it di!! 👏

Kat di
that was awesome awesome and really really fantastic👏

i luv this fic to the core....❤️

really a master piece.................every emotion was so cool to feel it the way you wrote😳

so, maya get big girl...............yooooooooooo😉

Amar was really sweet pie...............and the bet part was really the best........armaan is cho chweet😛😛😛

i luv the ending and twino part👏

come soon with another happening fic dii

luv ya and waiting

lolz
ana😛




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awwwhhhhhhhhhhhhh....why did it have to end???????

Awww cheers guys no more ff's im just updating what i have

veryy sweet n cute ending kat..

hey kat...oki think i did reserve before to comment but i wont go back to find that now...been super delayed to read this n comment..bt here i go, dont think u were gona be spared my never quite the brief comment/cum lecture message!!!great part....not news i know....oh man i love this armaan...teme one thin g he isnt prefect with...women, kitchen, babies, love, wit n humor, care, sarcasm, hes just...out of the world even if thats a cliched term, it fits him like none other....ridzi had to go back to him of course...n maya...n JAI!! haha...he was jealous of superman!!!o man the end was just mindblowing...cute, passionate, n perfect!!!sad to have this ending...but um really really really hoping we wil get better dreams with ur bedtimes ...more of which um hoping will be up as soon as i blink....or faster!!!

GOOSSSHHHH KAT!!!! when I read your FFs I feel like in lala land 😆

Sri for not commenting continuously, wht can I can say, August seem to be the busiest month for me, hehe

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

GOOSSSHHHH KAT!!!! when I read your FFs I feel like in lala land 😆

Sri for not commenting continuously, wht can I can say, August seem to be the busiest month for me, hehe

Mann Another happy endin, all i just can do is MUAH!!! hehe

he picked up the cheque and put his hand in his pocket and placed all the money he hand on the table and said' 5o thousand dollar and 25 dollars and 75cent'. Give me Riddhima!

Whoa, Armaan got guts man, I just love how you portray Armaan in ur FF!!, Hai!! hehe

*SLAP * feeling a burning sensation on his cheek he looked at Riddhima looking at him in such anger

This part just moved me, it just left me speechless, how do you do that woman!?

She loves you Superman more then me. So marry her for me she needs you so much and has never loved anyone but you, I don't get it you love her right and she you so what the problem?, Maya looked at him getting into bed as she looked at the blank expression on his face, as he tucked her into bed.

This scene was too cute, man you really portrayed Maya as the child in Kuch Kuch Hota Hai

'Dame right I am scared'what you see is what you get'and I am not acceptable to you're kind..' Muskhan walked away to find his hand take hold of his wrist'

Wow man, I guess I could understand what Muskan would be feeling, moving in to a high standard life, from a middle, makes it a whole lot complicated

......him saying peaches and when she looked at him he said the why her skin was soft like them and her kiss as sweet and juice.....

Gosh, Kat how do you seem to come with heart-warming comparison.....I just TOTALLY loved this line >.<, plus that was a really passionate part !!

Man I get a cheating child and a woman who cant cook!? he sulked looked at the screen.

Hehe, this scene was too cute!!!

I guess all boys are the apple of there mothers eyes and girls are there fathers apples'

SOO TRUE!!!!

Must say Kat the End was sooo dreamy, I totally love the ending of Ridz pregnancy stage, never read soo much love, like wowwers!!

Sri for braggin such a LONG comment, couldn't help it!!

he picked up the cheque and put his hand in his pocket and placed all the money he hand on the table and said' 5o thousand dollar and 25 dollars and 75cent'. Give me Riddhima!

Whoa, Armaan got guts man, I just love how you portray Armaan in ur FF!!, Hai!! hehe

*SLAP * feeling a burning sensation on his cheek he looked at Riddhima looking at him in such anger

This part just moved me, it just left me speechless, how do you do that woman!?

She loves you Superman more then me. So marry her for me she needs you so much and has never loved anyone but you, I don't get it you love her right and she you so what the problem?, Maya looked at him getting into bed as she looked at the blank expression on his face, as he tucked her into bed.

This scene was too cute, man you really portrayed Maya as the child in Kuch Kuch Hota Hai

'Dame right I am scared'what you see is what you get'and I am not acceptable to you're kind..' Muskhan walked away to find his hand take hold of his wrist'

Wow man, I guess I could understand what Muskan would be feeling, moving in to a high standard life, from a middle, makes it a whole lot complicated

......him saying peaches and when she looked at him he said the why her skin was soft like them and her kiss as sweet and juice.....

Gosh, Kat how do you seem to come with heart-warming comparison.....I just TOTALLY loved this line >.<, plus that was a really passionate part !!

Man I get a cheating child and a woman who cant cook!? he sulked looked at the screen.

Hehe, this scene was too cute!!!

I guess all boys are the apple of there mothers eyes and girls are there fathers apples'

SOO TRUE!!!!

Must say Kat the End was sooo dreamy, I totally love the ending of Ridz pregnancy stage, never read soo much love, like wowwers!!

Sri for braggin such a LONG comment, couldn't help it!!

Natasha!!

hey kat di 😊
aww that was wonderful😳
loved this end
it was sooo cute
maya's part as well as AR's part was awesome 😳
i like their bets😆
will miss this ff
cant say updarte soon😭😆
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