*alright people make way for Jaz's blackmailer 🤣*
Hello Ji! 🤗 you know i actually feel very bad that i made u feel harressed but since it worked than i am happy😛 but still sorry i wont try to make u feel that way in future as i myself dunt like it very much😆.. i am thinking of reminding u like dis every month so be prepared and dunt mind.. i mean i cant let go of this fic that easily as i love it too much so ya i hope u would understand 😆
coming to the update... I really dont think that i have to repeat all the words i use all the time as you already know how much fond i am of your work😆 But cant help myself from saying that the update was surprising and very shocking😆 but it was extremely well written and i loved it ( i always do nothing new in that no?😆) The way Heer confided in her family and they finally understood why Prem was like this and they actually felt sorry for him was really touching to read.. the thing i really liked was Preet's genuine concern for Prem and it showed that his heart was pure and he didnt resent Prem 😳 although i didnt like the cuddlin part on the sofa *wrinkles her nose* but thats acceptable too as they are engaged and heck why wont they do that? 😆 so yes i didnt mind it that much in the end as it made sense...
coming to the fathers day.... the enitre event was extremely sweet yar 😳 the casual conversations, funny jokes.. they all looked like one big happy family and Aarav's innocence! *pinches aarav's cheeks* can the little guy get any cuter? i love him so much! here's a 🤗 to you for writing Aarav in such a beautiful and endearing way...⭐️ 😃 i loved the innocent gifts that he made for his family and i couldnt blame Prem for getting a little irked abt aarav calling Preet Daddy P because Prem is fiercely possessive abt Heer and Aarav ..and why wouldnt he be because they are the only two people who love him and he them.. he finally had sumbody to love.. finally he had a purpose in his aimless casanova life and a person who is blessed with such things after a life of torture and hurt at the very least deserves this much.. Prem is a man with faults and rather then blaming him for what he has done with Heer .. i quite surprisingly understand him.. i can understand his fierce love for Heer.. which he cant help at all..he tries to stop himself.. tells himself to let her go but he just cant.. and the credit of my understanding his character goes to u jaz.. the way you explained him sometimes in very large paragraphs or even in the smallest of details.. things which can go unnoticed by a regular reader.. i noticed them coz u made me to and i thank you for that... ⭐️👏
coming to the part of Prem,Heer and Preet when i first read that Prem punched him.. i was like there we go agn.. Prem really loves to prove himself as a jerk at times doesnt he? 😆 he just has to go up and destroy the moment by doing sumthing that displeases Heer alot and i wish that that bhondu learns this sooner coz he would be in great trouble if he didnt😆 but then as the part progressed .. i was all smiles 😆 Heer loves Prem moree!! dont stare at me as if i have grown two heads for not knowing that before because even though i did believe that Heer could never love Preet like she did Prem but then all the romantic things used to make a little apprehensive🤔 but i totally loved the confession that i finally got! *dances around the room*😆 and then the slap and yes he deserved it 😆 Prem *thwacks him on the head* he needs common sense.. big time! 🤓 stupid .. bhudoo kahi ka! *thwacks Prem agn* what was he thinking! i shld rephrase that "why wasnt he thinking?"😆
Khair i lvoed the damage that it did 😈🤣 i think i am the most ebil with absolutely no heart reader of yours 🤣 i was so happy ! 😆
now coming to the end! whaoo lady! that was biggg! i was still blinking my eyes for some good 10 seconds after reading what had just happened😆 kudos to u for havin that effect on me 😆 at first i thought that Preet is dead and Heer would blame Prem as it was his fault... and that he must have done the accident in order to take Preet out of his way.. but then i read ur note and i read the part agn.. and considered it too and finally i came to this:
Preet was the one who caused the accident.. probably because he was angry and hurt that after all these years despite of loving her and giving his 100% to the relationship , he still didnt have Heer and after four years he still couldnt make Heer his to claim because her heart still belonged to Prem and i can think how much humialted and failed he must have felt for lossing her to Prem so i guess that must have irked him alot and he must have done that in anger.. because the officer said that Prems car had been in to the side impact collsion so that means Prem was the one who was hurt and if it had been Preet then the call must have been made from his cell as the officers usually call from the victims cell and not from that of the perpetrator ... so i think Prem was hurt badly and Heer came to know that it was Preet who had done the accident and was shattered as her bestfrnd was dead to her 😃 i hope i am right coz i really dont want to feel like an utter fool when the next update is up 😆 its either this or Preet really is dead anyway in both ways Prem is back for sure in her life so i am happy 😆 Also you know.. Prem was rejected na and he walked out with *slumped shoulders* so he's supposed to be driving his car slowly and in despair.. and Preet is supposed to be driving in anger and with speed so what i said makes sense to me.. hope i am right😛
Thanks alot for such a wonderful update Jaz! and update soon okay? i know you take a month to update so would remind u just in case after a month😆 Take care and thanks once again! 🤗
Love
Hiba
p.s: whao.. thats long! *blinks* wel i know u'll love it and i know it would make u happy 😳
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