Awwwwwww Shoba I am sorry for being late with my comments
Wonderful part 😃 .....loved the poem a lot 👏 👏 ....so aptly penned for this part 👏 👏 👏 ......JB's banter on the phone was touching......could feel how both of them were going through 😭 .....hope Jai is going to fulfill his Kasamh to Bani 😉 😛 .....but as you said I can feel something bad is definitely going to happen 😕 ....poor Nattu....glad that Jai took Nattu's responsibility and how he was trying to make him feel good 😊 .....descriptions of Amarnath caves were fabulous 👏 👏 .....thanks for the info....as always enjoyed reading your writing 👏
A poem for JB😛
A flower grows from beneath a blanket
Of fine and purest white
It reaches toward the sun for warmth,
For heat and for the light
My love for you grows stronger still,
Despite the surrounding cold
My heart is yours, bartered gone
For yours has it been sold
Its petals shine from morning dew
Its stem grows stiff and strong
It stands strong through the freezing cold
It stands the winter long
I long for you, for your soft touch
I miss the way you smile
The longer that we stay apart
The longer every mile
The flower stretches through the snow
It reaches toward the sun
And now without you the color is gone
The flower's petals, dun
But as we talk, and as we learn
The flower comes back to life
The snow now melts and goes away
As you take away my strife
Spring is here and growth abounds
As you and I are one
We are together, we are in love
The snow for now is done
I see the future, in dreams I have
Of our life, long and true
I see the times where all I need
Are comforting words from you😛
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