ASOR- sam cooks food for abhi - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
this update has been posted by tanya (akshayshenoy ) on my behalf as she wished to write it .... but the next part will be posted by me ......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
it is very good 👏 👏 👏
cont fast...............

akshayshenoy i didnt knew that u write also
it was very good
my opinion u should write some fanfics 4 us 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
😛 😛 Wow your asor rocks plz do continue kkz am really enjoyin it.................. 😛 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
please continue soon


Mohabbat k saray rang
Rangon k saray phool
Phoolon ki sarii khushboo
Khushboo k saray lamhe
Lamhon ki sarii chahat
Chahat ki sarii khushiyaan
aap k liye…
Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
please continue soon itz gr8888888888 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Hiii I am back .. I hope that u liked tanya's version of asor ……. So here is the next part ……

Part 6- so now abhi starts coughing a lot on hearing his amma …. Seeing his reaction amma says

Amma- are itne chaukne ki kya baat hai …… tere patni ne hein banaya hai kise padosi ne nahin ……..

Everyone starts laughing on this ……

Abhi – amma who mujhe yakin nahin hua ……..is liye .

Seeing abhi cough sameera says

Sam – kya hua abhi pasand nahin aaya kya ?? paani pe lo

Abhi – nahin sameera mujhe bahut pasand aaya … bahut delicious hai

Sam as usual starts blushing …….
Then tanvi says
Tanvi – sam aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kit um abhi ki liye kuch pyaar se banao aur use pasand na aye …..

Esha – vaise agar tum abhi ko aapne haath se khilaogi toh use aur bhi acha lage ga

Then sam asks her friends to stop teasing her and to have food

So everyone is enjoying the lunch especially abhi all the while he is eating keeps on looking at his pretty wife … who in turn keeps looking at him …..sam is faving some difficulty in eating as her hand is burnt but still she hides it from abhi and veena as she does not want to worry them …. So now both abhi and sam are enjoying there eye locking session …..

Soon everyone finishes except our abhi sam who are still lost in each others eyes …..
Seeing them tanvi says

Tanvi – hmmmmmmm.. agar tum dono luv birds ka khaana khatam ho gaya ho toh hum sab uthe
Abhi sam both smile at this and get up …

Part 7 – now everyone goes and sits in the drawing room …..veena says –

Veeena - itne ache khan eke baad mujhe toh bahut neend aa rahi hai isliye main ja rahin hoon sone

Isha and tanvi also say that now they both also have to leave …. Sam asks them to stop and stay for some time …. But abhi gives sam a no- no kind of look ……
Seeing this tanvi says
Tanvi – nahin sam ab humein chalna chahiye …. Aakhir ab tum aur abhi akele mein mein bhi kuch time spend karo .

Then they both leave …….

After they leave sam again goes to the kitchen to clear off the dishes …….. abhi also follows her … which she doesn't know
As she is working . abhi comes from behind and places his hand on her waist and hugs her …..

Then sam says –

Sam – ( blushing) abhi chodon na koi dekh le ga

Abhi – ( naughtily ) koi nahin dekha ga ab main aur tum akele hain kyonki amma sone gayen hain aur isha tanvi bhi chale gayen hain

Sam – tumhe to bas romance karne ka baahna chaiye …… aur aaj toh tum kuch zyada hi romantic ho rahe ho

Abhi – ab tumhare saath romance nahin karoonga to phir kiske saath karronga …. And he ttightens his grasp around her waist ……

He puts all her hair in the front and then starts tickling her back ……. And sam starts blushing as much as she has never done before ..
Then abhi says

Abhi – bas tumne bahut kaam kar liya ab bas karo …..

Sam – bas thoda sa hi baki hai
Abhi – nahin main kuch nahin sunon ga …… and then abhi picks up sam in his arms, much to her surprise and carries her in his arms to there bed room ….

Will continue soon ….. I hope u all liked and enjoyed this part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
awesome
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
really a nice one thanks for the update please continue soon



Dosti kya hoti hai humne tumhe dekh ke jana,
Dosti kya hoti hai humne tumhe dekh ke jana,
Tum sayad hume bhul jao,
Par hamare liye muskil hai tumhe bhul pana
Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
it is very good
pls cont................. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Waah! Stutiji aap to romancing ki queen nikli!!!!!
Waise please jaldi post karo!!!!!!!1 👏