Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 - Page 80

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Posted: 16 years ago
okie komal.....cya in d evening
ankita 😭 😭 di abhi nahi hai....pata nahi kab aayengi....par jab bhi aayegi humein maar dalegi 😆 😆 😆 humne iss ff ko chat rom bana diya hai 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey hey

Mai yahi hoo

bas thoda sa hi  update type kar payi mai

Wohi post kar deti hoo ab ke liye

Phir gahr jaake continue karoongi ok?

thanks for all the songs

I will read them in detail when I get home

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hehehe di...dekho main kitni achi bachi hoon...maine in sab ko shaant karwaya...now chamnge my title chalo 😭 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
😆 😆 😆 komal tu nahi sudhregi 😆

yay hina di update de rahi hai 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 19:

After effects of the proposal:

Keerti is overwhelmed  to see Shubhankar propose

and her eyes well up

She looks at him sweetly and says

I will!

They had built up an audience including Shash and Paddy as the whole proposing scene progressed

So now the spectators stand up to give them a standing ovation

They clap for Shubhankar for being so classy with his proposing style

and Keerti to have accepted the proposal so sweetly like a lady

But now,

All have a shocked look

Why?

thats coz

Shubh jumps and goes

Yahoooooo!

and lifts Keerti up in excitement

and goes round and round in cirlces

Everyone thinks

What they say is true

Love makes the world go round

and they leave the two to enjoy their euphoria in Junglee style!

Keerti gets embarrased and asks him to put her down

He refuses

Keerti  gets more embarrased with his madness and goes

Shubhankar !

Sab dekh rahe hai!

Shubh goes

Keerti!

Tum bhi na!

and drops her down

and says

Arey!!!!!!!!

Ye sab thodi jaantey hai ki

'Mai Senior doctor hoon'!

And he hears a voice from behind saying

Mujhe pata hai aap senior doctor hai!

Keerti looks at Shashank and Padma

and goes

Gob smacked!

Shubh goes

Yaha kon jaanta hai ?

and turns

And just wets his pants to see Shash and Paddy

Shashank goes

So!

Congratulations!

Hamari Sanjeevani me aap interns banke aye they

aur dekhiye na

Kaafi progress ki hai aapne

Pehle senior doctors baney aur ab

Life partners?

Keerti shys away and looks down

Paddy goes

Arey isme sharmaney wali konsi baat hai?

Doctors bhi pyaar kar saktey hai!

Shubhankar even in this tensed situation goes

Nurses bhi karte hongey na pyaar?

Kyu sister Padma?

Paddy goes all red 

and Shashank does too

He goes

Well!

Hum to Anjali ke plan ke shikaar hai

Usne hamey yaha trick karke sath bhej diya

Keerti goes

Acha?

Dr.Anjali ne bheja aapko saath?

Shubh goes

Oh ha!

Dr.Anjali to nani ki agent hai na

and bites his tongue,when Keerti presses his hand to shut up

Shashank goes

Agent?

Shubh says

Kuch nahi sir !

Wo to bas mai aise hi!

You ,enjoy your dinner sir!

Padma knows exactly what he was talking about and smiles

She then says

Ok,phir

Enjoy your moment !

and they get back to finish their dinner

Shubh goes

Keerti!

Yaha se chaltey hai

Aur in dono ko akela chod detey hai

Keerti goes

Ha hamari to baat ban gayi

Ab inki baari hai!

and they prepare to leave

with a blessed and content look on both their faces


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At the beach :
( bina mooch ka John and super sexy Bips getting naughty!)


Anjali says

I love you!

again to confirm its all real

Atul goes

Me too!

with all seriousness

They then break out of long hug and sit  down on the sand slowly

and just gaze at each other passionately

Then Anjali streches to lie down

Atul does the same and lies down next to her

He then offers his arm to Anjali

Anjali comes close and rests her head on it like a pillow

They just watch the beautiful night that bought them together and look at the stars that witnesses their love

Atul then pulls his arm out from unher head head and

turns to his side to admire his girl

Anjali blushes 

Naughty thoughts opo into Atul's head

Anjali senses his naughtiness and rolls away 

She stands 
 up and

Atul wonders why

She then offers him a hand and pulls his up

He grabs her hand

She takes him for a walk across the beach

The wind blows wild and the waves roar high

and 

the cool breeze fills the air with mischief 

And Anajli sings

Chalo!

Tum ko lekar chalein

Hum un fizaao me!

Jahaa meeta nasha 

Hai taaro ki chao me!

and they walk towards the water

To get drenched with emotions

Passion

and love

They get intensely intimate as the song progresses

Atul transforms into a sexy hunk and menaces his lady love in every possible way 

They enact the seductive lyrics to the song

and end it with an ecstatic kiss

Anjali draws herself out of the naughty water

and runs out to the shore

Atul runs after her

They mess around in the chase game

and finally stop at a point

and cuddle up

They now start walking to the car and spot an icecream vendor

Atul gets one icecream cone in between the two

Anjali smiles and thinks

What got into him?

He knows she's wondering to see this side of him

and goes

Icecream!!!!

And they dig their faces into it

And gain

They hear a voice say

Ye dono yaha bhi?

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At the movies:

The movie ends and the cinema hall is empty

The cleaner comes to clean

He sees two people snuggled up and fast asleep

He shouts

Ey,Kon hai waha?

The two open their eyes to see a big bouncer kinda guy right in their face

Muskaan goes

Rahul!

Tu itna mota kab se ho gaya?

Aur aisi daaku jaisi kyu shakal banayi hai tuney?

Aur tujhe moochey kab se aa gayi?

Rahul sighs and goes

Abey chup!

Mai to kabse jawaan ho gaya

Meri moochey nikle hue kareeb 7-8 saal ho gaye

Muskaan looks to her side to see a normal Rahul sitting next to her

and both look in the front to see the cleaner guy boiling with anger

Both scream

AAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaa!

Muskaan goes

Abey tu itna jawaan ,hatta khatta hai to dar kyu raha hai?

He goes

Tu kyu cheekhi?

Baat karti hai!

The cleaner goes

Ab chalo yaha se niklo

Pata nahi kaha kaha se chale atey hai A/C ki hawa khaane

Muskaan goes

Abey jaldi se nikalle yaha se

Warna ye dara singh hamari chutney bana dega

and they leg it out.

They reach the parking lot and

Rahul goes

Chal tujhe taxi dila deta hoo

Muskaan goes

Kyu?

Taxi kyu?

Teri gaadi nahi hai kya?

Ya tu coffee peene se darta hai?

Acha is baar doodh nahi jalaoongi thik hai?

Rahul smiles and goes

Nahi!

Coffee se to nahi darta mai

lekin coffee ke side effects se thoda ghabrata hoo!

She smiles and goes

To phir chalo na!

and looks for his car

Rahul goes

Muskaan!

Mai asal me gadi leke nahi aya

Mai apni bike laya hoo and shows his bike keys

Muskaan goes

Phir to aur bhi acha hai

Mujhe kab se tere sath bike pe baithna tha!

Rahul gets happy to sense her excitement and goes

Kyu?

Tujhe mere sath bike par kyu baithna hai?

Mere kareeb ana hai tujhe?

Muskaan blushes

and goes

Haaa! in a shy way

Rahul grins and goes

Awwrite!

Lets fly!

and both get on the bike and stream away!

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Arey,utho!

Tum dono ka koi ghar nahi hai kya?

Ajeeb log hai,

Chalo utho

Agli show ka time ho raha hai!

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Hey all

Hope this cheers u up
I have added RM part now
And next part will have all the couples getting back home

and of course the jhatka on AR is still due

Please comment on this update

I know all of you are upset,me too!

But as they say The show must go on

and so will this FF as long as u want it

Love u all
Take care
Hina
Sorry for the mistakes
I'm in a hurry
Hope u enjoy this unexpected mischief


Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hehehehe loved it loved it loved it....esp the shashank paaddy n KS part hehehehe anjie singing chalo tumko lekar chalein wow wow wo...u gettin tooo tooo tooo romantc di....loved it loved it. loved it 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

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edited

awwww hina di thnx 4 sucha lovely part👏

😆😆😆omg shubh is actually sumthing.....dng d yahoo dance 😉

bt he shud control his tongue.....pehle apne proposal ki baat keerti ko bata di nd nw nani nd anjie plan 2 SP 😆

bina mooch ka john nd his super sexy bips ka scene ws hott nd romantic 😳😳

continue soon!!! i know i know abhi hi update kiya tha bt hw can i stop saying this😉

 

Edited by mehma24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Too good di, will comment more later....thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH!!!!!!!!
kyaa baat hai !!!
pleeeeeeeease continue soon.. as v luv ur FF di...
pleeeeeeeease dont stop writing this FF coz i saw tht loadsa ppl are quitting..
so pleasae u dont.....
thnks
tajju
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Posted: 16 years ago
mehma...di isnt here yet....koi gaana pesh kiya jaaye...jaldi 😆 😆 😆