FF:PH ~*Ishq~*part7pg 13;april6 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

85

Views

17973

Users

33

Likes

5

Frequent Posters

Super.woman thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#31
woow.tht was great.plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa
swathzie thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: me_coolgul69

woow.tht was great.plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

thanx

swathzie thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#33

~Part 3~

"Nivi!!!..tum"

"baba aap sapna nahi dekh rahe hai"

lalit was too happy to see Nivi..infact the whole family was happy to see Nivi..Nivi wasLalit's late friend MR Rajveer Singh's daughter..her parents had died in a plane crash and she lived with her maasi..he maasi is a lawyer and a widow with no children..Her maasi was Mumbai's famous  lawyer Snigdha Rathod..nivi was close to juneja's and maan's specially lalit b'coz he was next to her father for her...a father like figure.singh's juneja's and maan's all three lived at ambala before coming to mumbai..she is of same age as preet

 

she touched his feet

"chalo main tumse koi baat nahi karta"

"baba..main jaanti hoon ki aap mujse naraaz hai..after all mujhe gaye 8 saal ho gaye..main apni education ke liye gayi thi na"

"haan par tum chuttiyon main bhi nahi aayi"

"sorry..waise aap ke liye ek khushkabri hai..main ab yahi rahungi india mein"

"kam se kam ek acchi kabhar to sunai"

"waise  baba main kuch din yahin rahungi agar aap ko pareshani nahi hai toh..woh maasi ko kuch kaam se london jaana haina isisliye"

"tum india kab aayi..aaj subah aur ohir mein maasi ko surprise dene gayi and then i cam to know abt er tri soo i came here"

"jaao jaake sab se mlo ..sab betaab ho rahe hai"

"gayatri aunty..aap kaisi ho..teji aunty...bebe...balraaj uncle"

"hum sab toh theek hai..lekin tu dubli patli ho gayeehai"

"i know wahan kitna dry kana milta hai"

"ab tu yahaan aa gai hai toh tujhe parathe khilaakar hatta khatta kar denge.."

everyone laughed..

"heer..meri sab se acchi dost..kais hai.."

"main theek hoon"

"waise tne prem se baat ki"she murmered

"tu aate hi shuru ho gayi"

"mmeher..u r lookinh nice"

"thanx nivi"

"premji..aap kaise hai"

"tum kabse itni formality karne lagi"

they hugged..

"hi harman..abhi bhi paison ke baare mein socha karte"

"of course dear hum nahi badale"

she came that side without talking to preet

"yeh ladki bahut nakchadi hai"

then she distributed gifts to everyone and lastly gave a gift to preet..without looking at him..they didn't get along very well

he opened the gift and.

.

.

.***

prem was waiting for heer at the coffee shop..

she came there in a li'l while dressed in a beautiful salwaar..he wwas mesmerised by her beauty..

"prem..kya dekh rahe ho"

"woh tum aaj bahut khoobsorat lag rahi ho"

"huh tumne kuch kaha"

"nahi kuch nahi"

"to tumhe kluch zaroori baat karni thi"

she knew wat it was but wanted to hear from his mouth

"woh..hamara college khatam hua..ab ham aage ki padaayi karenge

"haan to"

"toh mein tumse kena chahta tha ki i...lll...tum aage kya karne waali ho?"

"duffer keh nahi sakta.."she thought

"tum jaante ho na law seekhne waali ho.."

"prem bacche ab to tumhe kahna hi hoga "he thought

"heer woh"

"kya"

"umm...

           ....

              ...."

they looked into each other's eyes

baatein kuchh ankahee si, kuchh ansuni si hone lagi
kaabu dil pe raha na, hasti hamaari khone lagi
wo wo o o o o o........
shaayad yahi hai pyaar

baatein kuchh ankahee si, kuchh ansuni si hone lagi
kaabu dil pe raha na, hasti hamaari khone lagi
wo wo o o o o o........
shaayad yahi hai pyaar - 2

keh de mujhse dil mein kya hai, aisa bhi kya guroor
tujhko bhi toh ho raha hai thoda asar jaroor
yeh khaamoshi jine na de, koi toh baat ho
wo wo o o o o o........
shaayad yahi hai pyaar - 2

tu hi meri roshani hai, tu hi chiraag hai
dheere dheere mit jaayega, halka sa daag hai
yeh zeher bhi yuun piya hai, jaise sharaab ho
wo wo o o o o o........
shaayad yahi hai pyaar - 2
baatein kuchh ankahee si, kuchh ansuni si hone lagi
kaabu dil pe raha na, hasti hamaari khone lagi
wo wo o o o o o........
shaayad yahi hai pyaar - 3

" .i...

              .....

.

.

.

.Llll...

..

.oooo

.

..

.

.

.

kuch nahi kabhi aur keh doonga"

***

precap:

"kul di ki shaadi hai"

"woh bahut mazaa karenge"

"is baar toh heer se kehlwaana hoga ki..she loves prem"

"toh meher done.."

"yup"

k-ekta fan thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#34
ma'am luvely part....

yaah baat hai prem is so nerves 2 tell dat he luv her...

ise better toh hum hai na liya

in front of all v say dat v luv preet. n i luv both 😆

but gr8 part dear.

keep it up...

i luv prem so much in ur character bechara..
Super.woman thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#35
woowww.....tht was so cute...plz continue soon.....wat was preets gift?.........
luv ur ff
ishiqa
miss_neha thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Awesome part... prem is soooo sweet, hes sooo nervous while confessing dat he loves her!!!
-Goldy- thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Just caught up with the updates....very nice. keep it up!!! 👏 👏 👏
::Prem$_Priya:: thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#38
^^me 2!! It was awesome!! 😃...aww how sweet of Prem..he was nervous 😆...great job...can't wait for more niti!! 😳
*lucky_karen* thumbnail
Anniversary 19 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#39
wow niti..and no need to say thanx for the comments u deserve them 😛 ..i loved this part esp between prem n heer..its soo like him to be nervous 😳 ..love it 👏
swathzie thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Part 4

Nivi and all the junejas were having fits of laughter seeing preet like that

nivi had given him a box and he opened it and lo a punch on his face

"tumhe mein nahi chodunga"

"tumne mmujhe pakda kaha hai'

'tumne yeh kyon diya"

"tum shayad bhul gaye ki tumne bachpan mein meri sabse favourite doll tod di thi"

"lekin..'

"shutup...tumne woh box thik se nahi dekha"

"oo toh aur kuch hai"

preet smiled

"yeh kya trophies...ab yeh kyun"

"tumhe yaad hai tumne yeh kaha tha ki gals can't play soccer or rugby...yeh meri trophies hai...woh kya hai ki mein coll capt aur champ thi na'

preet was getting angry

"okok  tumhara asli gift yeh hai.."

"wow latest mob"

"haan i know u r tech savy"

***

there heer and prem din know wat to talk...

"toh ab hum chalte hai"

"theek hai prem"

"bye"

"bye"

***

prem called preet 

"PB aapne bataya ya nahi"

"nahi"

"aap jab use propose karenge tab tak use koi aur udake le jaayega"

"tu itni asani se kaise kisiko bhi i love u kehta hai"

"bro i'm preet not maryadhapurushottam prem'

"preet"

"don worry bro..mrin kuch aur sochta hoon"

***

nivi and meher were chatting

"meher tujhe kya lagta hai"

"kis bare mein'

"prem aur heer ke bare mein..kya heer aaj bhi prem se pyaar karti hai"

"ofcourse..but dono idiots hai ek shbd bhi nahi kehte"

"don tell me that prem don propose"

"nahi kiya"

"meine socha sirf preet idiot hai..par prem"

"are yaar dono sharmeele hai'

"kuch karna padega"

"hmm"

"waise meine suna ki kulraj di ki shaadi hai"

"haan..hum sab ludhiyana jaa rahe hai..waise bhi chuttiyan hai..tu bhi toh chalegi na"

"ofcourse...mujhe lagta hai hume wahi kuch karna padega"

"rite...so done"

***

"preet beta ab tumhe hi kuch karna padega"

"kya hua bro"

"veera...i need ur help tum kuch idea do pb kaise propose kar sakte hai heer ko"

"umm...mein soch ke bataungi..waise muhe lagta hai nivi aur meh bhi wahi soch rahe hai"

'lets get 2getther then"

"yaa bro...aaj raat 12 baje at terrace.mein unhe bata dungi"

"gr8"

***
Precap

"mujhe lata hai hume sangget function mein kuch karna padega"-nivi suggested

"yeh accha rahega..di se gana gavayenge"

"aur aise mein bhaiyya se hum aat bulwaenge"veera told

"toh done..LUDIANA here we cum"

***

love niti

hope u liked it..

plszz comment whether its gud or not..and silent readers plzz comment tooooo