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Part-5....Sohan reveals that his wedding is engaged
                          with
                                                      the girl whom he luves.she is vidhi.he comes
                                                      there.kumud was excited 2 see
                          her,bcoz she is kumud's
                                                      good friend in the
                          college.they share a lot of things.
                                                      V:4get everything.don't
                          spoil ur life. K:how
                                                      can i? bcoz luv is like
                          that.that u don't no? vidhi
                                                      becomes upset.sohan hears
                          their conversation.later he
                                                      asks harshini the matter.she
                          tells him everything.he
                                                      becomes upset. he:vidhi,u
                          don't no how much kshitij
                                                      luves her.kumud shud not live
                          like a widow.she shud be
                                                      happy with kshitij. V:even i
                          wish 4 that.but
                                                      sohan,kumud is
                          determined.she has her own decisions.no 1
                                                      can change it.i no her very
                          well.so if kshitij keeps on
                                                      luving her,it will giv him
                          only worries & u no that the
                                                      pain given by luv will never
                          go.so kshitij shud 4get
                                                      kumud. sohan becomes sad 4 kshitij.kshitij sees kripa in
                                                      a dull mood. he:kumud,whats
                          the problem?
                                                      K:nothing,its just a home
                          sickness. 2 make her
                                                      smile,kshitij sings &
                          dances:Pretty woman...{KHNH}.kumud
                                                      laughs:o kshitij,u r so funny.
                          he becomes happy.sohan tells nakul about kshitij's luv 4
                          kumud.nakul becomes thrilled:gr8
                                                      news.her parents will be happy
                          4 that.kshitij is such a
                                                      nice guy that he'll make kumud
                          happy 4ever & kshi -
                                                      kumud rock. S:but there is 1
                          problem. he tells the
                                                      truth 2 nakul.he becomes sad. kshitij tells them that he is
                                                      going 2 propose kumud. N:r u
                          mad 2 marry her?she is
                                                      just opposite 2 u.very
                          aggressive.she is not a gud match
                                                      4 a soft & carm man like u.
                          S:yes,what nakul telling is
                                                      rite. k:sohan,even u r
                          discouraging me?u used 2 e
                                                      the biggest support.r u ppl
                          teasing me? N:no kshitij,we
                                                      r serious.its not the rite
                          time 2 make a marriage
                                                      proposal. K:i'm sorry
                          friends,i can't 4get
                                                      kumud. i'll propose. S:u r
                          neglecting our words?
                                                      kshitij becomes
                          emotional:no...don't feel bad.i'm going 2
                                                      open my heart b4 her,bcoz i
                          can't liv without kumud.
                                                      J:ur luv is that serious?
                          K:yes,i'm serious
                                                      nakul.luv can't never be 4 fun.
                          they get upset. kshitij
                                                      goes 2 kripa.kumud was jolly.
                          kshitij starts
                                                      ttalking:kumud,do i make a gud
                          friend ? she:ofcourse,no
                                                      doubt.kshitij,now i feel that u
                          r the most wonderful guy
                                                      in this world. angad becomes
                          happy. she:u r gr8 friend.
                                                      he:u r also a gud friend.
                          she:a friend shud not hide
                                                      anything.but i hid the biggest
                          secret of my life.
                                                      k:what ssecret? she:i did'nt
                          tell u anything about
                                                      prithvi. he:who is he? kumud
                          becomes emotional:the gr8est
                                                      ppleasure in this life.supposed
                          2 be my biggest life.
                                                      but ffate is so cruel...kumud
                          weeps:kshitij,i can't liv garv.he is an
                          essential part of my life. kshitij
                                                      was shocked.his heart broke
                          into diff pieces.
                                                         

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sorry...i typed prithvi instead of garv
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too good   👏
Continue ssooon
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Part-6.....kumud tells her story 2 kshitij.kumud joins a
                          new college.saakshi was her teacher.every1 tells that she
                          is a gr8 teacher.kumud also likes her at the 1st
                          sight.bcoz she had a calm look.sakkshi was shocked 2 see
                          kumud:who r u?whats ur name? k:i'm kumud,new 2
                          this college. kumud feels that saakshi has a strange
                          expression when she looks at kumud.once saakshi tells her
                          the reason 4 that.saakshi's sis & her hubby dead yrs
                          ago.she brings up their son Garv.garv falls in luv with kripa who looks like
                          kumud.their luv was very deep.but in an accident kripa
                          died.garv became abnormal after that incident. saakshi
                          was wondered seeing kumud who looks like kripa. S:i
                          feel that kripa is back.. kumud goes 2 see garv.she
                          feels pity.her presense brings garv back 2 his normal
                          life. later kumud feels luv 4 him. garv avoids
                          her:kumud,i always luved kripa.if i had become romantic
                          2 u when i was not conscious,i beg pardon. kumud cries
                          & runs away.vidhi consoles her. bindhya goes & shouts
                          at garv:garv,u r so cruel 2 kumud.but 1thing u shud
                          not 4get.ur life is a mercy shown by kumud.if she had
                          not come into ur life u wud've remained as a sick person
                          giving ur aunt worries.saakshi ma'am is so grateful to
                          her.but the person who is supposed to be grateful is
                          neglecting her luv.u r foolish. vidhi leaves the
                          place. garv feels sad:but i'm not able 2 4get
                          kripa.what can i do? but later garv understands that kripa has been replaced by kumud in his heart. he sees kumud sitting under a tree with a sad face. he goes
                          near her:kumud,i luv u. kumud cud'nt believe that she
                          was so happy. she jumps with joy:garv,i'm the most
                          luckiest person in this world. he smiles. later garv
                          reveals 2 kumud that saakshi has a hubby who is very
                          cruel 2 her. saakshi's hubby tries 2 kill her 4 wealth.2
                          save her,garv kills him. he gets arrested. kumud cries
                          :kshitij,they r going 2 kill my garv.it'll be on the day
                          after 2morrow.vishi advised me 2 4get him.but is it
                          easy 2 4get our luv kshitij? he:no,we can't. she:yes,we
                          can't.thats why i was upset that day.i'll liv with
                          garv's memories.don't want 2 marry any1 else. kshitij's
                          eyes got filled up with tears. kumud:b4 they hang my
                          garv i want 2 see him .kshitij,can u come with me 2 the
                          jail? he:sure. she:o kshitij,u r my true friend.i've
                          written about u in the letters 4 garv.
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Part-7.....nakul&kali pamper the dog.N:whenever i see
                          this dog,i remember about u. K:r u kidding?
                          he:no,serious. she:what,u r comparing me with a silly
                          dog? he:kali,this dog is not silly 4 me.bcoz its given
                          by u.its our luv's symbol. kali smiles:i'm sorry nakul.
                          she plays with the dog. kshi-kumud go 2 the
                          jail.kshitij sees garv.he was very much tired.kumud
                          becomes sad. she:garv,this is kshitij. G:i guessed
                          so.kshitij,kumud had written about u in her letters.
                          kumud,choti ma {saakshi}had come.she cried,she fainted &
                          she is taken 2 the VC hospital. kumud:saakshima'am is ok
                          no? G:ya...its not her physical problem,mental
                          tension. kumud becomes sad. garv looks at kshitij who
                          was keeping silent. "kumud,can u move to a side.i want
                          2 talk 2 kshitij". kumud goes. G:i had a clear
                          picture about u in my mind after reading about in
                          kumud's letters.kshitij,can u me an answer 2 my
                          question? kshitij stares at him. G:du u luv kumud?
                          kshitij was shocked,he never expected this question from
                          garv. G:i no that u can't tell anything to me
                          now.but i can read ur mind.u luv her. kshitij felt
                          embarassed. G:if i die kumud will be depressed,she
                          will cry & finishes off her life.that shud not happen.4
                          that will u help me kshitij? he:sure. G:u hav 2 giv
                          her luv.so that she will 4get me & will start a new
                          life.otherwise kumud...garv weeps:tell kshitij,will u
                          be there with her always.tell..tell kshitij.
                          K:yes.tears come out of his mind. G:enuff,i'm
                          satisfied with ur promise. kumud comes.she takes out
                          the sindoor tin from her bag:garv,this is my only wish
                          in my life.put this sindoor on my 4head.let me become ur
                          wife.i want 2 die as ur widow. she cries. G: r u
                          mad?i can't put this.bcoz i don't luv u. KU:what?u
                          don't luv me? he:no,i luved only ur face,bcoz it
                          reminded me of kripa's face. Ku:u r lying....
                          he:no...the real trith.a person who is going 2 die won't
                          liein the last moment. kumud cries & runs out. kshitij
                          looks at garv.he was crying:i can't lie anymore.   
                          kshitij becomes sad.he goes out.he saw kumud with an
                          angry face while they were in the car.
                          KShi:kumud,don't get angry with garv. kshitij tells
                          her the truth. kumud cries. kshi-ku go 2
                          hospital 2 see saakshi.
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Part-8...Saakshi & kumud cry sharing their worries.
                                                      S:u no what garv's last
                          wish is?he told me 2
                                                      advise u.u shud marry another
                          person.kshitij is the best
                                                      person. kumud cries. S:i no u
                          pain.but kumud,my
                                                      garv's decisions r always
                          right.he always wishes the
                                                      best 4 u. kumud keeps crying.
                          S:u don't want
                                                      garv's last wish 2 be
                          fulfilled? kumud cries. they
                                                      reach back.kshitij tells
                          everything 2 sohan& nakul.kumud's
                                                      & sohan's parents come there.
                          garv was taken 2 be hung.
                                                      he remembers everything about
                          kumud.kumud was
                                                      shivering at home knowing that garv is going 2 be
                                                      killed in that paticular
                          moment.she thinks about him.she
                                                      thinks how she left the jail.
                          Song with their flashback
                                                     
                          scenes:chalte....chalte....Garv:g ud bye kumud....he
                                                      was killed.kumud screams at
                          home:garv...my
                                                      garv....kumud's parents &
                          sisters got confused. bcoz
                                                      they don't no whats happening
                          in kumud's life.sohan,nakul
                                                      & vidhi tells them
                          everything .they were shocked. they
                                                      regret that tho she is
                          considered as the dearest they
                                                      did'nt read her mind. after
                          some days kumud becomes
                                                      normal.but she was not happy.
                          her parents advise her 2
                                                      marry kshitij:kshitij is a nice
                          guy.maybe the guy who is
                                                      made 4 u is kshitij,that may be
                          the reason why all these
                                                      things happened. kumud did'nt
                          respond.she closes her
                                                      eyes. Inder goes & discusses
                          about their marriage with
                                                      kshitij:we'll giv u kumud,bcoz
                          we no that she'll be
                                                      always happy in ur hands.i'm
                          sure that kumud will agree
                                                      4 the wedding. Kshi:don't force
                          her 2 marry me
                                                      uncle.let her heart tell her 2
                          marry me.then i'll marry
                                                      her.other it will be equal 2
                          snatching her. sohan-nakul
                                                      tell kshitij that now they also
                          have a feeling that kshitij
                                                      will finally reach kumud's
                          heart. it gives a small hope
                                                      2 kshitij.but scares 2 be happy
                          bout it. he dreams about
                                                      his sweet moments with
                                                     
                          kumud.song:saasom...hum....hum.....t um.....
                          
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Gr8 job! Keep going. 👏 👏 👏
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PART-9...kumud goes 2 kshitij:kshitij,we'll go soon.
                                                      Kshi:where? she:2 our house.b4
                          that i wud like 2 thank
                                                      u 4 ur beautiful frienship.
                          she turns back & starts
                                                      walking. angad cud'nt
                          bare:kumud,plz don't go. he
                                                      cries.he kneels down:i beg u
                          kumud,plz don't
                                                      go..kumud's eyes rose up.she
                          goes.kshitij cries as if he
                                                      lost everything.sohan & nakul
                          see it & scolds kumud: saw
                                                      his pain?he was begging u.but
                          u did'nt mind at all.u r
                                                      not ashamed of ur cruel
                          activity? kumud did'nt speak
                                                      anything.she remembers
                          vidhi talking like this 2 garv
                                                      4 her.    when kshitij knows
                          that they scolded kumud,he
                                                      gets irritated:how dare u
                          scold her?r'nt u all ashamed
                                                      of what u 2 did? N:u've gone
                          crazy due 2 luv.
                                                      S:yes.he is crazy. K :u ca
                          call me a mad
                                                      person.but don't talk ill of
                          kumud.she did'nt do
                                                      anything wrong.we can't luv
                          any1.luv shud come from our
                                                      heart.its not very easy.we
                          can't giv luv 2 anyone if
                                                      they ask.a person can giv luv
                          only if they feel so.we
                                                      can't compel any1 2 giv
                          luv.otherwise we prove ourself 2
                                                      be foolish. kumud who was
                          standing at the door was
                                                      hearing everything .instead of
                          getting
                                                      inside she goes.she remembers
                          others' advise 2 marry
                                                      kshitij. the day when they were
                          planning 2 go back come.
                                                      kumud goes 2 see kshitij to bid
                          gud-bye.but he was not
                                                      there. S:he went out.
                          kumud goes searching 4
                                                      kshitij. she gets tired.finally
                          she sees angad standing
                                                      at the border of a hill.she
                          gets shocked:that means
                                                      kshitij is going to suicide,bcoz
                          of me?oh god! she runs
                                                      to him& pulls him
                          back:kshitij,bcoz of me u were going 2
                                                      suicide? kshi:what r u talking
                          kumud?how cud u think
                                                      that i'll do such a stupid
                          thing?kumud,do u think i'll
                                                      suicide leaving u
                          alone?never,i'll be always with u.i
                                                      can't leev u alone. kumud was
                          surprised. she holds his
                                                      arms & weeps...:u luv me that
                          much? he:u can't even
                                                      imagine my luv 4 u.   she
                          smiles: i luv u kshitij. kshitij
                                                      was surprised.he cud'nt beleev
                          it:really?r u telling the
                                                      truth? Ku:how can i lie 2 u
                          about luv?really i luv u
                                                      kshitij. u proved that u can alo
                          make me happy with luv.
                                                      they hug each other. every1
                          was watching it from
                                                      behind.they laugh.kshitij-kumud
                          get embarassed. The
                                                      Engagement party of
                          kshitij-kumud & nakul-kali take
                                                      place.kumud come in a
                          glittering pink choli.kshitij was
                                                      carried away by her beauty.
                          seeing kshitij looking at her
                                                      deeply,kumud becomes shy. they
                          all dance 2 music in the
                                                      grand party:mahive...{KHNH}   
                          THE END
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PART-9...kumud goes 2 kshitij:kshitij,we'll go soon.
                                                      Kshi:where? she:2 our house.b4
                          that i wud like 2 thank
                                                      u 4 ur beautiful frienship.
                          she turns back & starts
                                                      walking. kshitij cud'nt
                          bare:kumud,plz don't go. he
                                                      cries.he kneels down:i beg u
                          kumud,plz don't
                                                      go..kumud's eyes rose up.she
                          goes.kshitij cries as if he
                                                      lost everything.sohan & nakul
                          see it & scolds kumud: saw
                                                      his pain?he was begging u.but
                          u did'nt mind at all.u r
                                                      not ashamed of ur cruel
                          activity? kumud did'nt speak
                                                      anything.she remembers
                          vidhi talking like this 2 garv
                                                      4 her.    when kshitij knows
                          that they scolded kumud,he
                                                      gets irritated:how dare u
                          scold her?r'nt u all ashamed
                                                      of what u 2 did? N:u've gone
                          crazy due 2 luv.
                                                      S:yes.he is crazy. K :u ca
                          call me a mad
                                                      person.but don't talk ill of
                          kumud.she did'nt do
                                                      anything wrong.we can't luv
                          any1.luv shud come from our
                                                      heart.its not very easy.we
                          can't giv luv 2 anyone if
                                                      they ask.a person can giv luv
                          only if they feel so.we
                                                      can't compel any1 2 giv
                          luv.otherwise we prove ourself 2
                                                      be foolish. kumud who was
                          standing at the door was
                                                      hearing everything .instead of
                          getting
                                                      inside she goes.she remembers
                          others' advise 2 marry
                                                      kshitij. the day when they were
                          planning 2 go back come.
                                                      kumud goes 2 see kshitij to bid
                          gud-bye.but he was not
                                                      there. S:he went out.
                          kumud goes searching 4
                                                      kshitij. she gets tired.finally
                          she sees angad standing
                                                      at the border of a hill.she
                          gets shocked:that means
                                                      kshitij is going to suicide,bcoz
                          of me?oh god! she runs
                                                      to him& pulls him
                          back:kshitij,bcoz of me u were going 2
                                                      suicide? kshi:what r u talking
                          kumud?how cud u think
                                                      that i'll do such a stupid
                          thing?kumud,do u think i'll
                                                      suicide leaving u
                          alone?never,i'll be always with u.i
                                                      can't leev u alone. kumud was
                          surprised. she holds his
                                                      arms & weeps...:u luv me that
                          much? he:u can't even
                                                      imagine my luv 4 u.   she
                          smiles: i luv u kshitij. kshitij
                                                      was surprised.he cud'nt beleev
                          it:really?r u telling the
                                                      truth? Ku:how can i lie 2 u
                          about luv?really i luv u
                                                      kshitij. u proved that u can alo
                          make me happy with luv.
                                                      they hug each other. every1
                          was watching it from
                                                      behind.they laugh.kshitij-kumud
                          get embarassed. The
                                                      Engagement party of
                          kshitij-kumud & nakul-kali take
                                                      place.kumud come in a
                          glittering pink choli.kshitij was
                                                      carried away by her beauty.
                          seeing kshitij looking at her
                                                      deeply,kumud becomes shy. they
                          all dance 2 music in the
                                                      grand party:mahive...{KHNH}   
                          THE END
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That is fantastic and marvellous story!!!! 👏   I really loved it. 😊 Plzz write more fan-fic for kumud_kshtij and pllz contiune ur other kumud-kshtij dfan-fic. This was brilliant fan-fic.