Summer romance-fanfic 4 ur fav jodies

Posted: 18 years ago
I had sent this story 2 other forums too.   PART-1...   Nakul is unemployed,his business failed.so he goes to
                          another place.he sees a man lying on the road after an
                          accident.blood was bleeding.nakul takes him 2 the
                          hospital,gives him blood.he gets saved.that person was
                          very happy 2 see nakul who saved him.he:i don't no how to
                          thank u.its bcoz of u,i'm alive now.can i no ur name?
                          N:its ok.I'm nakul. tht person tells:i'm kshitij. they
                          become friends within a short period.they share
                          everything.nakul tells him his problems.kshitij tells that
                          he is an orphan who was adopted by a rich man named
                          aryaman.he died & all his wealth is in kshitij's name.he is
                          the owner of the oberoi estate.he tells nakul 2 stay with
                          him & help him in all the estate matters. nakul does
                          that.but he he writes to his parents that he is
                          succesful here,he is the owner of the oberoi estate.kshitij
                          does'nt mind that. 1 day nakul gets a pomaranian dog as
                          well as cassette by post.there was a letter tied to the
                          dog's leg.he reads it:i luv u nakul.but i can't reveal my
                          name now.but i'm 1 among the daughters of Mr.Indar. nakul
                          puts on the tape recorder with the cassette inside.a
                          luvely romantic ong sung by that girl comes. Mr.inder is
                          nakul's dad's best friend.he is very close 2 him.they r
                          like 1 family.he has 3 daughters.nakul thinks that if he
                          marries inder's daughter he'll get her wealth & can
                          become rich.he tells kshitij about this.later a letter
                          comes that nakul's grandparents r coming there with
                          inder's daughters during the summer vacation.yug was
                          shocked fearing that his drama will be broken.but kshitij
                          told him that he'll act as his assistant b4 them & yug
                          can act as the real owner of the estate.nakul hugs
                          him:kshitij,u r my real friend.
                          
                            

                           
Posted: 18 years ago
THIS IS THE SAME AS THE ONE AS KYPH N DAT IZ A LOT BETTER THAN THIS SORRY TO SAY I DONT LIKE IT WOT I DONT LIKE IZ DAT SHTISH N NUKUL R IN THIS ONE I HATE BOTH OF THEM 😡 😡
Posted: 18 years ago
hey i luv it!its a gr8 story!i luv kshitij!
plz continue
Posted: 18 years ago
plz continue ur kumud and kshitij one what happened 2 dat?
Posted: 18 years ago
Thay is good...Plz continue it. I'll definately read it. 😛
Posted: 18 years ago
Part-2....nakul's grandparents & the 2 daughters of inder
                          come.nakul continues his drama there.inder's
                          daughters-tASHU the youngest is very fashionable.the 2nd
                          one kali is very studious,wears glasses.nakul decides to
                          test if any1 among them is the girl who luves him.4 that
                          kshitij gives him an idea 2 send the dog there.the 1 who
                          pampers the dog most will be that person.nakul sends the
                          dog.but both the girls equally pampers it.he gets
                          confused.N:inder uncle's eldest daughter kumud has to
                          come no.she is the most mischievous one.very naughty.but
                          she is the cutest pet of every1.she is supposed 2 the
                          luck of their family. kali& tashu discuss about
                          kumud.tashu:why she is not interested 2 come here?
                          kali:thats what i'm also doubting.she is a person who
                          luves fun.but then also...T:within a short period
                          she has changed a lot.K:thats true. a ph call comes
                          4 tashu.after the call she jumpes with joy:kali
                          didi,kumud didi is coming..K:really?so nice..this
                          summer will be superb.nakul& kshitij go 2 the railway
                          station 2 pick up kumud.kumud was very dull.not at all
                          cheerful.nakul was shocked.kshitij in his mind:what did nakul
                          tell about kumud ?she is so reserved.yug is mistaken.
                          yug tells kumud:kumud,u r going 2 hav fun here. she:i
                          don;t think so.i was not interested 2 come here.but my
                          parents r not giving me peace of mind.they compelled me
                          2 come here. nakul was shocked.he:u r so serious?how did u
                          change? she:a person cannot be the same always. they
                          reach the house.kumud goes inside. kshi:nakul,kumudis
                          not a person like u told. N:kshitij,i can't believe her
                          change.every1 was thrilled 2 recieve kumud.but she was
                          not interested.tasu:kumud didi,we r planning a party 2
                          welcome u. kumud:nonsense.useless.i hate parties.
                          tashu:what?u used 2 make the parties really funny.
                          kumud did'nt mind her.she goes 2 her room & weeps.tashu
                          & kali come.they get irritated seeing her behavuor.they
                          ask why she is giving them pain.suddenly kumud laughs:u
                          fools!2day is fool's day.i wanted to make this day
                          grand.i started preparing 4 that at our home.thats why i
                          was behaving like this. kali & tashu:u naughty girl!they
                          all laugh.they dance in the room 4 joy.
                          


Posted: 18 years ago
PART-3..Kumud goes on with her mischievous
                          activities.Kshitij
                                                      advises her.kumud becomes
                          angry:who r u to advise me?u
                                                      don't no even who ur parents
                          r. kshitij's heart was torn
                                                      by her words.a musical contest
                          takes
                                                      place.kumud,kali, tashu&
                          all take place.but kshitij won
                                                      the 1st prize.kumud becomes
                          angry & jealous 4 that.she
                                                      tells her sisters:he might've
                          given the judges money 4
                                                      the prize. kali:i don't
                          think so,he is the better
                                                      singer.tashu:ya,he rocked.
                          kumud becomes irritated. A
                                                      glamorous girl named
                          kamolika{KZK} comes 2 see
                                                      kshitij.she has studied with
                          kshitij.she is after
                                                      him.Kshi:i told u no that i
                          can't see u in a diff
                                                      way.plz leave me alone.
                          she:no,kshitij,i can't. she hugs
                                                      him tightly. he:leave me,plz
                          stop it. hearing the
                                                      footsteps of kumud,kamolika
                          pretends 2 be innocent &
                                                      cries:leave me alone
                          angad.don't try 2 exploit me.i'm
                                                      from a nice family.i can't do
                          a sin. kumud was shocked.
                                                      kshi:kumud,i did'nt do
                          anything.its she
                                                      who....ku:stop it.i knew that
                          u r cheap.but u r so
                                                      dirty than i expected. nakul
                          comes:what's the matter?
                                                      kumud tells him everything.
                          kshitij weeps:nakul,i did'nt
                                                      do anything like that. N:i
                          no,i trust u
                                                      kshitij.ku:nakul,he is fooling
                          u.don't bileev ur
                                                      assistant. nakul
                          shouts:kumud,hold ur tongue.u can't tell
                                                      rubbish about kshitij.what do u
                          no bout him?actually we
                                                      were playin a drama.kshitij is
                          the real owner of this
                                                      estate.i'm only his assistant.
                          kumud cud'nt believe
                                                      it.nakul shouts at kamolika &
                          slaps her:tell the
                                                      truth,otherwise i'll tear ur
                          mask b4 every1 in this
                                                      world. kamolika cries:i'm
                          sorry nakul.plz don't do
                                                      that.kshitij is innocent.i was
                          the 1 who did the wrong
                                                      thing. N:did u hear kumud?
                          kumud bent her head. her
                                                      eyes rose :i'm sorry kshitij.
                          kshitij smiles:its ok
                                                      kumud. he extends his arm:can
                          u become my friend?
                                                      she smiles.she holds his
                          arm:sure. kshitij's friend
                                                      Sohan comes from abroad.
                          there was a party. full of dance
                                                      & music.sohan-nakul were
                          dancing with tashu-
                                                      kali.kumud was sitting
                          alone.kshitij comes near
                                                      her:why,u r not dancing?
                          ku:no,kshitij.i'm not
                                                      interested. he:a smart girl
                          like u don't like
                                                      it?unbelievable.i no why u r
                          not dancing.u don't hav a
                                                      partner 2 dance with.thats
                          why,right? she smiles.
                                                      kshi:kumud,can u dance with me?
                          she:ok. they dance
                                                      2gether.kshitij was having a
                          special feeling.he
                                                      understands that he has
                          started luving her.
                          
Posted: 18 years ago
keep this good work.👏 Post next part soon.
Posted: 18 years ago
Part-4. kumud goes to khsitij's house.she calls 4
                          kshitij.but he & nakul had gone 4 jogging.kumud gets
                          bored.so she puts on the tape recorder.she listens to
                          the beautiful song.it was the cassette sent by nakul's
                          unveiled girl.Kshitij dreams:kshi-kumud romancing in
                          the rain.sohan comes & wakes him up from the dream.he:i
                          no kshitij,u were dreaming about kumud no? kshitij
                          smiles.S:u shud reveal ur luv 2 kumud.i'm sure that
                          she also luves u.kshitij smiles. he proposes:kumud,i luv
                          u. kumud becomes shy:i luv u too.suddenly he wakes up
                          from the bed.he:oh,it was a dream? nakul decides 2 find
                          out that girl.4 that he arranges his b'day party.it was
                          a nice celebration.kshitij makes an announcement:4 my
                          friend,i'm giving a special b'day gift.nakul,u luv music
                          right? its 4 u. suddenly Abhijeet Sawant & Amit Sana
                          come 2 sing:ye dosthi...nakul becomes emotional & hugs
                          him.kumud becomes touched by their frienship. nakul makes
                          an announcement:2day as the part of this party,there wud
                          be some fun. tashu:sure,we'll dance. N:no no.only
                          music. T:i'll sing abhijeet's sweet romantic song.
                          N:no.i'll sing a few lines of a song.u hav to sing the
                          rest. nakul whispers to kshitij:the girl who sings the rest
                          will be the one who luves me.nakul starts singing.kumud
                          sings the rest.nakul becomes happy 2 find out his girl
                          .kshitij becomes really upset.his eyes rose up.sohan
                          notices it.he consoles him. nakul goes 2 kumud:so atlast
                          i found out. K:what? N:u were the 1 who was
                          fooling me. he tells her from the beginning.
                          K:nonsense.u r mistaken.i'm not that person.
                          he:kumud,i no that u r naughty,but plz don't fool me
                          again,after all u r playing with luv. she:i no what luv
                          is.u don't hav 2 teach me that.but believe me,i'm not
                          that person. N:then how cud u sing the whole song?
                          she:i've heard this song from ur tape recorder.it
                          attracted me.it reached my heart directly.thats
                          it.nakul,don't get upset.i'll ask kali&tashu. nakul:no
                          need.i'll find out her.4 that i've 2 play a
                          drama.kumud,plz bare with me. nakul goes to kshitij.he
                          hides his sadness from him. N:kshitij,i think i was
                          mistaken.kumud is not that person. kshitij:what? nakul
                          tells him about their meeting. yug goes.kshitij becomes
                          happy. sohan joins him:i told u no,kumud luves u. kshitij
                          smiles. nakul tells every1 how he was playing the drama
                          ..pretending 2 be the owner.every1 was shocked. later he
                          tells:there was girl who used 2 send me gifts writing
                          that she luves me.but actually she was fooling me.bcoz
                          she did'nt come 2 me at all.so i decided 2 marry another
                          girl.i'm thinking 2 marry kumud. suddenly kali
                          screams:i'm not fooling u.i really luv u.plz don't leave
                          me & marry sumbody else. kali cries.nakul laughs.akumud
                          smiles. kali becomes upset.yug tells softly:i will not
                          leave u alone kali.i want u.i played this drama 2 bring
                          u to my life. kali smiles,she was embarassed. kumud :u
                          ppl always tease me that i'm the most mischievous
                          one.but see,kali beat me & attained my position.everyl
                          laughs.
                          
Posted: 18 years ago
Marvellous keep going. 👏 👏

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