`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 3

thank god nothing happened to kripa
the over protective and caring brother prithvi juss got worried when he couldn't reach her in des moines! and he sent the sheriff to look for her! soo sweet! i wish i had a brother!!
and kripa thinking about angad like that! she has the hots for him doesn't she 😉 😛 😆
and angad hugged her! too cute!
and i sense something is wrong by the way prithvi was acting with nervousness and pushing or rather shoving kripa instead the house!
great part!
can't wait for more of the mystery to unfold! 😃

u r doing a great job with the fan fic! keep it up! 👏

thanx....i knw kripa iz a brave girl...as usual the over protective and caring prithvi...i wish i had a bro like him too LOL 😉 yep cuz kripa iz da only family he haz so he feelz responsible!!! well since she had never saw him even in pic becuz they never sended her a pic she wuz shocked to see a sexy stranger in her house...she's getting der..wait n see wht happens....yeep you guessed it right..
der's a twist in the story....itz not like da usual romance or family drama....itz much more....keep waiting 😉

Great part, loved how you described everything, esp. when Kripa saw Angad for the first time. I like Kripa and Prithvi's relationship. Can't wait to see what happens next. Continue soon 😃

Hi just finish 2 parts awesome fear prithvi so cute 👏 👏 👏

hey guyz thanx 4 doz wonderful commentz....

jdsean---their relationship iz kind of unique...welll datz just da beginning of their meeting so there more yet 2 be seen... 😉

monikaseth---thanx yea prithvi is relly loving and caring bro...def cute LOL 😉

proud_2_b_mysel---cuz angad haz seen her in the pic so often that he feelz an attachment towards her and to top it of she's hiz best friends sis so how can he be formal??? at first he thinks of her as brotherly cuz he doesn't wanna be dead by hiz bf 😆 😆 😆
...LOL but he will change hiz attitude towards her later on.... 😉 😉 and abut pushin her in...welll datz a secret i can't tell yu da story yet but yu'll found out soon in my next promo...

hey guyz keep commenting on my work...you guyz r really helpful and i loved reading what you guyz write....since i dont want to go at a fast pace i will be slowing down a little....cuz der will be a twist comming up..and the secrets will be revealed...like i said diz iz diff

❤️ ❤️ BHUM ❤️ ❤️.... love ya!!!!

"I've waited long enough, Prithvi. I want to know why you're acting so strange. I've never seen you this nervous."

"I have something to tell you," he began. "It's kind of difficult to know where to start."

"Maybe you should just let her read the letter."

"I don't want her to read it just yet. It'll be too much of a shock."

"Which letter?" "What's in the letter?" she waited for him to answer.

"This man said...he's planning.....he wants...."

"Yes?"

"He's going to kill you."

just finished reading the fan-fic...omg it's fantastic
i love the way yu have charaterized Angad...
scared of flying..yet he's in FBI 😉 gr8...
kripa's ad prithvi's relationship is so beautiful...
i can't wait for the next part...
it sure is different than he rest!!!
the promo looks catchy..
cont soon!!!!! 😛 😛

::in shock:: someone wants to kill kripa??
but why??
but angad is gonna protect her right? 😉
can't wait for the actual part! 😃

ur way of writing s quite different and unique.
luved it by far.

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

what, who wants to kill her what man, i want to know, nice promo

Thanx.....LOL well if yu find out now who wantz 2 kill her whtz da point of the suspense....LOL take it easy & just go w/ da flow