Poetry by Kajal - Passing Times..New pg 1

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Poetry By Kajal! This is my collection of poems I write during my spare times..all inspired by DMG..the best serial eva! Hope you all enjoy them..this is something new I decided to try. I usually write stories and have to FFs pending on DMG Forum. So this is a new style and hope you enjoy. Leave comments...good or bad and I will try my best to improve. Here goes nothing:

You!

Your eyes are as deep as the ocean,
Your lips are as sweet as sugar,
Your nose is as round as mine is sharp,
Your hair is as black as charcoal,
You are all mine,
So stay away from that Raool,
And I will get rid of Muskaan!

This is a poem dedicated to Ridhima from Armaan. It supposed to be whatever, not offensive to any one! Just a piece of whatever...by me! as in Kajal!

Hope you like it!

*Sniff*

*Sniff..*
I cant see you like this..
*Sniff..*
Why do you do this?
*Sniff..*
Come into my arms..
*Sniff..*
Let the tears flow into my eyes..
*Sniff..*
I'm with you always...
*Sniff..*
Even if your not..
*Sniff..*
I love you...
*Sniff..*
Even if you hate me...
*Sniff..*
You reside in my heart..
*Sniff..*
Even if I reside at your feet...
*Sniff..*
You mean the world to me...
*Sniff...*
Even if i mean nothing to you...
*Sniff...*
Don't cry...

This is a poem based on Armidz love when Ridhima was sad and crying during the confession. Also on other sad moments between the couple. Also it is another one from Armaan's point of view!! Sorry for the constent sniffing..couldnt think of a better name or title! lol! hope you all like it..i had nothing better to do!

Love...

Rosy red cheeks,
stained with salty tears,
wiped by him,
making her smile,
gazing into his deep eyes,
him in her hazel ones,
closer and closer,
reading into the depth of their souls,
arms wrapped around one another,
cheeks turning crimson,
glancing into one another's hearts,
through the bare eyes,
is what a true,
eye-locked session is,
holding meaning beyond words.

Another bakwaas piece presented by Kajal. Lol..hope you like it..

Dream Girl..

Curly, Bushy hair,
Enough to hide a secret lair,

Big, round eyes,
That tell no lies,

Her tall length,
That shows Punjabi strength,

Wide, shining smile,
That makes my heart skip a mile,

She is the one,
That has won,

My heart,
So let this be a new start!

Hope you guys like this one! lol..different styl..from Rahul to Muskaan..do comment!

Hey everyone..back with another poem! Hope you guys like it! Its not my best but I just had to share this one with you guys...it is called Tell Me. It can be for any couple..but it shares a sense of pain..and curiousity. It is form a guy's point of view and hope you like it. I would love to know if you could tell me who you thought of when you read this poem.

Tell Me...

Tell me...
What I mean to you?
Tell me...
Why the sky is blue?

Tell me...
Why your mad?
Tell me...
Or I'll be sad...

Tell me...
What life is with me?
Tell me...
Why you shout in glee?

Tell me...
What is your desire?
Tell me...
Why my heart is on fire?

Tell me...
What love is?
Tell me...
Your not his...

Tell me...
Just tell me...

So how was it? Do comment!! I love reading them!!

The Feeling Called Love..

The gentle breeze,
The comfy ease,

The tranquil air,
The long hair

The lengthy talks,
The spring walks,

The sweet care,
The fierce bear,

The feeling called love,
The white bird called dove...

The feeling called love...

Just some love poem..inspired by DMG!! Hope you like it!


Childhood...

A child at heart,
thats where it starts

The collection of teddies,
along with the childhood studies,

The stacks of comics,
with the boring economics,

Everyone's a child at heart,
after all thats where it starts...

This is for Armaan and Ridhima..because of the teddy bears Ridhima owns and the comics Armaan has stashed in his locker! Lol..hope you like them!

Sleepless Night

I blame you for the restless night..
Because your beauty comes to sight..

You are the reason I have no sleep..
You steal my heart and have it in a keep..

Its hard to find a girl with such strength,
But you are the one that keeps me in length..

Your meant to be my mate..
Its what we had in fate..

I have been working on this piece for a couple of days to get to this..not my best just one from Atul to Anjali..seeing how he is always praising her especially today! Hope you like it! It is something new..

Come Back My Love...

I want to see you staring at me...
I want you to tell me if red is my color or blue...
I want to hear your laughter of glee...
I want to hear you tell me "I love you"...

I want to hold you in my arms...
I want to know someone loves me, just me...
I want to give you some new charms...
I want you to be my wife-to-be...

I want to hear the winds carry your voice...
I want to watch a film and hold your hand in the cinema...
But this is not my choice...
To have a lonely world with no Armaan's Ridhima...

Come back to me...
Come back to your Armaan...
Ridhima you hold my heart's key...
You always said 'Tu hi hai mere dil ka armaan...'

Without you I will wilt like a flower...
You are the will for me to live...
Come back and be my power...
Let me see your ocean of love and dive...

I am waiting for you always...
Tumhare,
Armaan...

What did you all think? A special one..just came up with the idea when watching Gagan's video on lonliness..it was so sweet it inspired me to write a poem..obviously from Armaan to Ridhima. I think this could relate to either the past or the upcoming future..maybe even the present..this poem could probably be defining a fear Armaan may have of loosing Ridhimain words..do you agree?
Well Do comment..hope you all like it..this is one of my longest poems..and truest poems ever with a hint of Hindi..

Her..

Her eyes like the ocean..
Her body always in motion..

Her smile always visible from afar..
She twinkles like a star..


Her hair is swaying all the time..
As her eyes talk in mime...


Her worst fear is violence..
Her strongest strength is silence..


Her words echo in my ears..
As I wish to stay with all her all my years..

This is a poem dedicated from any guy to his girl..like Shuby to Kirti 😉..do enjoy and post honest comments like usual!! 😃

Passing Time..

When the sun has set,
And the moon has met,
The black inky sky,
Its time to stop the cry,
Of our baseless fears,
In salty tears,
And let on a smile,
That can go a mile,
And say,
That in may,
The sun has set and moon has rose,
And stand on our toes,
And breath the fresh air,
Thats flows in our hair...

This poem describes the passing of time..and that no matter what you shouldn't cry..but be happy! Forget the fears..and just smile! Sort of like Armaan Ridhima's current situation..start afresh..but you dont have to wait till morning..the night is also good! Start as soon as possible..in other words..to erase the distance.

Kajal 😛



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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwww ht waz realli sweet especially da part where it said "You are all mine,
So stay away from that Raool"i cud jus imagine armaan sayin tht....

gud job.. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: huma_0999

awwwww ht waz realli sweet especially da part where it said "You are all mine,
So stay away from that Raool"i cud jus imagine armaan sayin tht....

gud job.. 👏 👏 👏

Aww thanks for liking it! i just made it up on the spot because of boredom...its pretty simple..lol! and i wrote it while writing thinking bout Armaan and it floated into my mind! hehe

Kajal 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww this is so kool kajal.
Right now I am on my mobile, will come home and check again.

Muniza
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: muniza75

Awww this is so kool kajal.
Right now I am on my mobile, will come home and check again.

Muniza

lol..thanks muniza!! glad u liked it!..

Kajal 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: enary

cute...n u tried tat counts

glad u thought it was cute..and thanks for the commenting!

Kajal 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Armaan*

glad u thought it was cute..and thanks for the commenting!

Kajal 😛

i could just imiaging armaan saying the lines "you r mine so stay away from rahOOl and i will take care of muskaan"...lovely...u r defintly a writer unlike moi

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Originally posted by: enary

i could just imiaging armaan saying the lines "you r mine so stay away from rahOOl and i will take care of muskaan"...lovely...u r defintly a writer unlike moi

but u r a keen observer..lol..i like to write and paint pictures in my mind..and glad u liked it..am trying to think of a poem that is ridhima's reply..but it all just got harder! lol

Kajal 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Armaan*

but u r a keen observer..lol..i like to write and paint pictures in my mind..and glad u liked it..am trying to think of a poem that is ridhima's reply..but it all just got harder! lol

Kajal 😛

just think abt wat ridz always replies to armaan abt rahool n how she does things 4 armaan lyk the western outfit

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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^ thanks! but i am trying to make it short and simple...in words..hmm will take a while! but thanks for reading! hehe
..this is harder then updating my FF..!!

Kajal 😛

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