FF:BHULBHULAYA:PART 32 PG-146 12/05

Hiiiiiiiii every1……………here's a new ff by me.i'm just writing the concept & introduction.let me knw if u like it only then I will continue…………..

CONCEPT:

                  I'm trying 2 write a new different ff with a new concept.my story will be horror based.i'm thinking of showing ghostly story in my ff.hw out of fear every1 realises their luv.its going 2 be totally horror based.i'll be showing the luv track & the fear track simultaneously.there will be surprises,strange incidents,shocks,suspense,ghost & even deaths.i knw most of them dnt believe in ghosts nor do I but I thought of trying something new in my first ever ff.

INTRODUCTION:

               All the characters are almost same.armaan-ridhima still keep fighting & haven't realized their luv.atul-anji are the same.muskaan-rahul are also the same but here rahul-armaan are coll frendz & not enemies.keerti-shubhankar have feelings but not confessed.sapna has just married amit.

             Let me knw if I must continue & if any1's interested in such a story.only then will I write the 1^st part.

 

 

PART-1: PG 2

PART-2: PG 3

PART-3: PG 3

PART-4: PG 4

PART-5: PG 5

PART-6: PG 7

PART-7: PG 8

PART-8: PG 11

PART-9: PG 13

PART-10: PG 15

PART-11: PG 17

PART-12: PG 20

PART-13: PG 22

PART-14: PG 25

PART-15: PG 30

PART-16: PG 36

PART-17: PG 41

PART-18: PG 45

PART-19: PG 51

PART-20: PG 58

PART-21: PG 62

PART-22: PG 71

PART-23: PG 81

PART-24: PG 89

PART-25: PG-96

PART-26: PG-102

PART-27: PG-109

PART-28: PG-117

PART-29: PG-123

PART-30: PG-131

PART-31: PG-139

PART-32: PG-146

Edited by pinky_5 - 16 years ago

story will be great yaar and will be quite different with so many twists, do post soon.

swati

ya.............we are interested.............its different and i like horror movies so much

hey wud luv to read ur ff...pliz continue soon!!! 😃

its cool yaaar u should continu like now

sounds very nce
defo sumin diferent

thanx 4 posting such good comments.i'll post the 1st part soon............

It sounds pretty interesting. Plz continue soon.

Thank you veryyyyyyyyyyyyy muchhhhhhhhh 4 ur comments.
PART-1:
It's a normal day.ridz gets up & gets ready 2 go for jogging & thinking hw will she trouble armaan 2day.even armaan is thinking wat will he do 2 irritate ridz 2day.but he thinks even ridz will be thinking the same so he'll not go 4 jogging 2day & this will drive ridz mad as her usual day will start with no armaan 2 irritate her.lets see hw mad she gets abt not seeing armaan because now AR are so used 2 irritate & trouble each other that they've not realized hw much they miss looking at each other angrily or 2 be more precise their day has bad start if they dnt see or fight 2 each other but they dnt realize wen their this anger turned 2 something special in their lives.
                Ridz goes 4 jogging only 2 find that small boys are playing basket ball but no armaan is there.she feels as if she misses something.she goes 2 the boys & asks them y r they playing alone 2 which they say armaan didn't cum 2day.Ridz is in his thoughts as 2 y he didn't cum.she goes home wondering wats wrong with armaan.then her brain asks y is she thinking so much abt him & since wen did she care so much abt him.her heart is however telling her wat if he's not well.she shuld call him & ask him if he's ok.she finally calls on his cell.armaan picks up the call:
A:hello
R doesn't say anything.
A smiles 2 himself & says Ridhima bolo.
R:tumhe kaise pata ki mein hu?
A:tumhe mein bagair dekhe bhi pehchaan sakta hu.tumhari khamoshi ka matlab mein bhi jaanta hu.
At this ridz feels a bit shy.
A continues:aur waisey bhi tum jaisi BHOOTNI ki awaz kaun sun na chahta hai.
R is totally angry now & A smiling……
R:achha toh mein bhootni hu is liye tumhe pata chala ki mein hu?
A:nahi idiot tumne mere cell par kiya aur bhootni ka naam aaya is liye mujhe pata chala.
R:tum toh phone par bhi baat karne laayak nahi ho.
A:accha toh kyu kar rahi ho.waise bhi tumne phone kiya.bolo kya kaam hai??????
R was out of words.she didn't knw wat to say.she wanted 2 ask if he was alright but didn't want 2 show she cared 4 him.
R:woh.....main……..
A:tum yahi jaan na chahti ho na mein aaj jogging ke liye kyu nahi aaya.
R:nahi….woh……mein…….
A:woh isliye kyunki mein late uutha.par tum he kabse mere fikar hone lagi??????
R:mujhe tumhari koi fikar nahi hai.woh to tumahare nanhe dost tumhe miss kar rahe the……
A:nanhe dost ya tum???????
R is again shy now & says haan mein bhi.
A:kya?????
R realizes wat she told & says:mera matlab hain aaj subah se tumse jhagda nahi kiya is liye meine socha phone karke jhagda kar lo.jhagda ho gaya is liye ab mein phone rakhti hu.bye.
A:bye.then says maine bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya & says oh god mein kya soch raha hu.
AT SANJEEVANI:
All the interns cum.rahul-muski as usual fighting.atul praising anji & giving her compliments while anji is just boared.ridz was reading a file wen armaan enters & sees her.he tells hi 2 every1 & every1 replies except ridz as she's busy reading.anjie says only 5mins are left 2 10 so lets leave.she calls ridz who says di u all leave I'll just finish & cum.they all leave except A as he had 2 take his lab coat.he sees R busy reading file.he goes 2 her & asks:
A:mujhe aaj miss kiya????
R just notices A.
R:haan.
A:kyu??????
R:kaha thana koi jhagda karne nahi mila isliye.
A:sach mein yahi baat hai ya kuch aur???????
R:kuch aur?????
They just stare for few seconds & cum back to real world& start fighting.they didn't realize it was already 10 & Dr.keerti was waiting 4 them.their pager rang & they realized they were late.they ran 2 find angry keerti staring at them.
K:toh aapko fursat mil gayi aane ki?????
AR sorry Dr.keerti.
R:mein report padh rahi thi aur pata hi nahi chala kab time ho gaya.
K:aur dr.armaan aap????
A:jee woh mein…….
R is laughing at A's condition & A is giving angry looks.
A:jee woh actually mein Dr.ridhima ki help kar raha tha.unhe kuch problem thi isliye mein unhe case ke bare mein samjha raha tha.woh maan ti hai mein unse behtar Dr. hu is case ke liye.at this R's mouth is wide open & she's staring at A with anger & A is smiling at her look.
K:theek hai toh aap ab is case mein Dr.ridhima ke saath kaam karenge.maine aap sab ko ek khaas kaam ke liye bulaya hai.kal shaam hum sab log mussorie ke paas champaran naam ka ek chota gaav hai waha jaa rahe hai.waha ke logo ki tabiyat theek nahi rehti isliye hum wahan unke iilaaj ke liye jaayenge.Dr.shub humare saath chalenge.Dr.sapna apne honeymoon par gayi hai is liye woh sanjeevani humare lautne ke baad aayegi.aap sab saari tayaari kar dena.back 2 work………
Keerti leaves & anji says oh my god ab hum ek gaav mein jaakar rahenge.she makes face & goes & atul follows her.
Muskaan 2 rahul:
M:tu toh mujhse wahan door hi rehna warna tujhe jungle mein phekkar aa jaogi.
R:oye tu bhi mujhse mat uulajhna warna uthakar nadi mein feink duunga phir tadapti rehna machhli ki tarah pani mein.
With that fight even they leave.R is very angry with A.
R imitates A:Dr.keerti woh maanti hai mein usse behtar Dr hu.my foot.tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko.tumne itna bada jhooth bola.
A:jhooth tumne bhi toh bola.now A imitates R.
A:Dr.keerti woh mein file study kar rahi thi.
R: toh isme jhooth kya tha??????
A:tum file study nahi kar rahi thi mujhse ladh rahi thi isliye hum late ho gaye.
R:mein ladh rahi thi ya tum ladh rahe the?????na tum mujhe aakae tang karte na hum late hote ye sab tumhari galti hai.
A:ab bhi dekho tum lad rahi ho.ab khatam hua toh hum jaakar patients ko dekhe??????
With that they leave.
Sorry guys i knw the part was boaring & nothing new but the real story begins in next part after they leave 4 the village.next part will also be normal but its important so i'll start with the trip in 3rd part where actual fun begins.......
PRECAP:zoya sehgal is about to leave 4m sanjeevani but she's tensed & scared.wats wrong with her.to find read 2nd part.
               Plzzzzzzzz let me knw where do i need 2 improve & leave comments.once again thanks 4 reading my ff........
              Plzzzzzzzz help me give a name 2 my ff.since its a horror sort of i cant give any sweet name....................
Edited by pinky_5 - 16 years ago

hey its really good cont soon.....