FF Bin Tere Jeena Nahin Parts 1- 23 (1) - Page 81

Awesome! That was long and FULL of excitement! 😃 Pia is married to Bhoot...How sweet! 😆 Bhoot is so nice here it feels weird... 😆 Man, she still doesn't love him but dheere dheere it will surely come... 😉

I'm glad sweet Bani forgave Mrs. Bhoot but only because of HER sweet going-to-be-hubby... 😳 Awww...Thande dimaag se sochna chahiye... 😃 Yep yep...Bani forgot her own lines for a few minutes...But then what can one do when her sister turns up like this? Chi, the situation of Pia's and Bhoot's marriage was ewww.... 🤢 Gosh, she's so ewww... The REAL Pia type... 😉

Good good...Rano Ranveer's marriage thingy's topic has started...Adi and Dadi are happy... 😃 But Jigyasa as usual is so stupid! 😡 What is with her and middle class girls? Ufff... Wait till she founds out who her Bhabi is... 😉 That will be worthwhile...Cos Jai is OVERprotective of Bani... 😳 So anything against her and he'll give some dishooms to Jigs...Hehe!! 😉

Sahil is bonkers! 😕 He better get over this childish thing and let his brother live in peace... 😊 So now Sahil and Mummy are on one team while the rest are on the other...Sounds good! 😆

Awww...Bani and Rano are just too sweet...Trying their best to cover up for all they've missed in Pia's wedding etc... 😊 They did a Haldi ka Rasam and a Mehndi ceremony as well...Very nice... 😊

Life is finally taking a turn for the three sisters for sure...One is already halfway out her house and into her real home...Soon the other two will be married and gone as well...I'm getting emotional... 😭

Wonder how Bani will react when she finds out about Rano liking someone already and that someone is her hubby's nephew! Wahoo! A smell a big twist coming up... 😉 😆

Excellent part Taz... 😃 Enjoyed it! 😛
Now for part 18... 😃 Quick quick! 😉
😛

first of all casper 😆 that had me in hysterics...and for once pia did the rite thing after doing so many worng things...and jai seems to be rushing this RR marriage im liking that...looks like KW AW andGW will be cuming soon!!! 😆 😆 😆 lol bhoot and chudail still cnt stop laughinG! 😆 😆 😆 mrs pia deb perfect!!!! 😆 😆 😆 loved the way jaio explained everything to bani and she forgave the bhoot and his bhootni for him!!hmm the wedding reception now that shuld be interesting the walia family coming and bani rani being there as well!!! 😃 😃 😃 i alwysa knw sahil was completly jiggs child stubborn and selfish!! 😃 he needs to get over himself and let his brother be happy im sure he will find someone nice like meera to spend his life with the perfect bahu for jiggs!!! 😃 pweaseeeeeeeeee continue soon!thankooooooooooo

Hi Taz that is one super duper update with lady in action and lots of emotional drama...but neither the less love it as usually...tusi kmaal kar dita....you remove the first (na first nahi second, first ta Roshni the cobra si) thorn from JB's love life....Pia and AD married awesome....bhoot and bhootni makes the perfect couple and with little casper on the way kya khena👏 👏 👏...I feeling like doing some bhangra on this wonderful occasion. and more over Bani ka maa durga roop was fantastic....agar Jai na hota to kay hota Pia ka.....by reading this I got the feeling you are trying to remove all the troubles from Bani's life which can turn into fisco later on...like Pia attraction towards JW...her obession and then not to forget Anu and the whole pregnacy drama which Bani takes it upon herself and oh yes last but not the lease Roshni the cobra and whole "park road".....looks like all will be take care of before JB gets married.
but yaar i have one complaint....why didn't Jigs got a heart attack after listening to Sahil's rubbish....I mean come on that old couch can't be that strong and take it all in that her both sons love the same middle class girl Rano and top of all that she still hadn't recovered from Anu's middle class marriage.... are yaar yeh Ranveer to bada hi senti nikla...Sahil said all that rubbish of loving Rano and wanting her....and he was ready to back too....uff yeh bhi na lagta hai Bani ki kuch traits ismeh shift hogaya hai....but thank god Jai was there to handle everything and put some sense in his brain...nahi to pata nahi kya hota.
plz cont. soon

when's the next update taz?....i need a break from studying for finals... 😃

Originally posted by: johnslove

when's the next update taz?....i need a break from studying for finals... 😃

Hmmm...dunno🤔...if i see more comments...(One from u would be nice) May post 😉😆

I do plan to post over the weekend however...but if i see few more comments Then maybe i'll post sooner. Me being greedy😆 . I have the next part ready too Haha!😈 So want it...comment karo..especially those who haven't!😛😛

Originally posted by: Vedo

Mine! 😆 Whoooo after ages I am first in any ff! Tazoo can you see me doing my happy dance?? yes i see u. 😆 Very rare for u to be first on my thread🤗

Hahaha Bani gave it to Pia good! 😆😆
I know this may sound mean but I just love it whenever she gets slapped! 😳 Me too...i know she is nice in this ff but still...😆

Awww Bani ne sirf Jai ki baat maan li! 😳 😳 aur kisiki nahin itne pyaar se joh samjha raha tha😳
Song for JB:
tu mile dil khile
aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
na ho tu udaas
tere paas paas
main rahoonga zindagi bhar
saare sansaar ka pyaar
maine tujhi mein paaya... Lovely song..perfect for Munna Munni.

I love Adbhoot's "A" dialogues!! 😆😆 Don't ask me to write any more...that one dialogue was difficult and i was in a fit of giggles after writing it!🤣
Atleast your Pia has some brain...and she rectified her galti! 😉 Very differnt from KS wali Pia
Casper!! Lol!! 😆😆😆 Nanha sa bhoot ko casper hi kahenge na!
Loved Pia on her knees part! 👏👏 Best part right!
AD is the right person for Pia! 😉 He sure is!
My God, what a tamasha Jiggy and Saahil make of themselves!! 😡 😡 🤢 Well dekhte aur kitna tamsha karte hai dono.
Glad Jai spoke to Ranveer and made him understand nothing good is gonna come from him sacrificing his love! Jai knows that RR love each other...everything is clear na. Saahil's love is one sided.
I can't wait for JB's trip down the runway! 😳
It's really sad when parents have dreams for their children's wedding with all the rasams n everything and the kids break that dream! 😭
Awww Bani and Rano gave her haldi & mehendi rasam! How sweet! 😃Yeah thats why i added the haldi mehndhi rasam at the last minute. To give bani the chance to do all that she wanted.Reading about the three of them like this makes me wish I had a sister! 😍 U know i felt like that when i wrote that part😍

Lovely part Tazo!
👏 Thanx.
I know it's difficult to write with all the cr*p that has been going on in KS ever since 🤢 but you have to continue for us! A big 🤗 for you. Do continue soon. I am continuing but only just...heart is not with this ff anymore.

V...

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Tazoooooooo my KM🤗🤗🤗........wonderful part though full with that P** and Bhoot bhaiya.......grrrrrrr..........Meri CK 🤗🤗 Kaisi ho!!!! Pia aur Bhoot bhaiya ka atoot badhan ban gaya! Mithai baanton!😆 Or Kulfi!!😆 loved how JW was handling the whole sittuation.........good job👍🏼Pyaar se samjhaya toh maan gayi Bani varna Pia ke toh khair nahin thi. .......wish Bani would have slapped P** some more as she deserved it😕.I felt two was enough...she's not a bad character in my ff. .😆....so chhota si casper in making right......good for that cheapko P**Yes nanha sa bhoot hai👏.......Saahil.....arrrrrggggggghhhhhh........like mother like son😡..hope there would be no obstacle between Ran-Ran's relationship........aur na..teri toh😡😆....let everything go smoothly so our hero can bring his heroine home soon......problems may appear...dekhte hai...😕. loved sisterly interactions between two Dixits and one Dev😛.......arre bhai P** toh shaadi ke baad Dev hogayai na......Yes u got that right..no more a Dixit... .now update.......do whenever you can cos you are not going to listen to me right.....so no zabardasti😆😆.kya yaar sunti toh hoon. hehe ........great job sweetie👏👏Thanx darling.

Too lazy to find another song toh abhi issise cahala le na😳

Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu Satrangi Re
Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu Manrangi Re...

Dil Ka Saaya Humsaaya Satrangi Re, Manrangi Re
Koi Noor Hai Tu Kyun Door Hai Tu
Jab Paas Hai Tu Ehsaas Hai Tu
Koi Khwab Hai Ya Parchhaai Hai Satrangi Re, Manrangi Re
Is Baar Bata Moonhzor Hawa Thehregi Kahan
Ishq Par Zor Nahin Hai Yeh Voh Aatish Ghalib
Jo Lagaye Na Lage Aur Bujhaye Na Bane
Ishq Par Zor Nahin Hai Yeh Voh Aatish Ghalib

Aankhon Ne Kuch Aise Chhua, Halka Halka Uns Hua
Halka Halka Uns Hua Dil Ko Mehsoos Hua
Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu, Jeene Ki Saari Khushboo
Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu, Aarzoo Aarzoo
Teri Jism Ki Aanch Ko Chhoote Hi
Mere Saans Sulagne Lagte Hain
Mujhe Ishq Dilaase Deta Hai
Mere Dard Bilakhne Lagte Hain

Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu, Jeene Ki Saari Khushboo
Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu, Aarzoo Aarzoo
Chhooti Hai Mujhe Sargoshi Se
Aankhon Mein Ghuli Khamoshi Se
Maein Farsh Pe Sajde Karta Hoon
Kuch Hosh Mein Kuch Behoshi Se
Dil Ka Saaya Humsaaya...

Teri Raahon Mein Uljha Uljha Hoon
Teri Baahon Mein Uljha Uljha
Suljhane De Hosh Mujhe Teri Chaahon Mein Uljha Hoon
Mera Jeena Junoon Mera Marna Junoon
Ab Iske Siva Nahin Koi Sukoon
Mera Jeena Junoon Mera Marna Junoon
Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu Satrangi Re
Tu Hi Tu, Tu Hi Tu Manrangi Re
Ishq Par Zor Nahin ...

Mujhe Maut Ki God Mein Sone De
Teri Rooh Mein Jism Dubone De
Satrangi Re, Manrangi Re... This song..when i first heard it gave me goosebumps😆😳...love the lyrics!!👏

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

amaazing update as usall!!!!!!!! Thanx dear.

this part was just wonderful!!! i love ur pia's character!!! i am glad she's going to stay committed to her husband and will try to make everythin work!! hats off to her!!! 👏 👏 👏 Yes this Pia is different from KS...she's actually likable. She will stay with AD like a good wife😃

eeewww!! whts w/sahil and jigs??? i really hope they dont creat any problems in rano and ranveer's marriage!!! They might be a problem.jai was sooo right when he said that as a mother she has to see where and how her children are happy and not about the status!!! Jai tried explaining to her magar samajti hi nahin!😕

loved the interaction of three sisters!!!! the scenes with them and the whole haldi and mehandi scenes were soo speciall and sweet!!! i wish i had sisters!!! U too? Even Vedo and me were thinking the same.i also wish she didnt slap pia.......but its good she's regretting it!!! Slap just happened spur of the moment...she regretted it later though and went and kissed Pia on the forehead when she was sleeping.

jai.............wht can i say abt him!!! he's wonderful as usual!!!! Thats how he should have been in KS strong and correct!

great mindblowing update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! trully touching and wonderful to see the characters and their relationships!!! Nice to know ur liking the characters and their relationships🤗

hats off to u!!! 👏Awww..thanx!

Originally posted by: divan

Great update Taz...the Adbhootni has had the deed with Adbhoot. Nice pair they make...match made in heaven...urr...hell?🤔😆

Poor Bani, having her dreams crushed, but don't worry Rano will make up for it. And their jiju is a very level headed bloke(unlike KS), likes to listen and then make decisions. Lucky saalis.😉Jai is very level headed..soch kar poora action leta hai...KS wala Jai toh brain dead hai kabse😕

So Saahil has been hitting the batli, loves Rano and goes and gets drunk instead of coming home and facing Ranveer.😕Bhai ke pyaar ka dushman ban gaya hai.


Ok Jai saab make sure Ranveer doesn't back out...we don't want immature Saahil for Rano. Send him away to US...find an NRI girl for him to party with.Not sure if i am gonna introduce a girl for Saahil yet...maybe maybe not.

How is Jai going to explain to masi, Bani and Rano are Kiran's girls? He is going to get into trouble for lying.😃
Jooth bole masi kaate...apni maasi se dariyo!😆

Can't wait to see what hungama Saahil causes when he is sober and of course Pia's reception. Pata nahin kab sober hoga yeh!😕

Originally posted by: phool527

😆 😆 .. hey tazoo.. great part hun.. omg.. lmao.. ur too much.. tumne pia ko tho thapar mar diya magar jigz or sahil ko nahin mara.. i htink they deserve a beating more.. lol.. great part though.. cant wait for the next part.. update soon..yeah i know jigs and saahil deserved a couple of thappars..padenge jaldi dont u worry!😆

Originally posted by: ruma

tazu that was amazing.... pia married aparajit 😃 poor bani was so upset with pia, but finally accepted the truth 😃 and the funniest thing was ranveer and sahil 😆 fighting for rano.... ab jaldi jaldi rano aur ranveer ki shaadi karoon 😆 so that our jai and bani can get married soon...
continue soon 😃bhai bhai ladne lage over our Rano...but Ranveer is the samjdaar one and he lucky to have jais support...so RR it will be all the way whether saahil likes it or not! Once there shaadi is fixed then JB's😳

Originally posted by: preeti73

Excellent........
Really love reading your updates...... Thanx preeti...nice to know ur enjoying this ff.😃
Nice to see Pia in a positive light!!! 😉 Makes a change na!😆

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

haila AD n pia gt married....koi nai...ki farak phenda hai sanu jab tak jb r wd eachothr...jigz nd sahil r total gonecase...koi nai ese sample har ghr mein hote hai...luvd d way jai ws wd bani whn she needs hm d most...awesum update plz cont soon pia aur AD ke jodi acchi toh haina...imagine if this happened in KS. Jigs and Saahil will cause a bit of problems unfortunetly

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

SLAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

Pia was holding her cheek.

SLAPPPP!!!

nagaaada nagaaadaa nagaaadaaa bajaaaathappar ki goonj kaafi nahin thi ke nagada bhi baj gaya?😆

awww poor Rano. dont know what to do

Bani 😭

yap Mr Walia go and console ur Mrs 😊Both sisters were quite distraught...but Jai saved the day.😳 Pyaar se samjhaya Bani ko samaj gayi

Bani (mind filled with questions..continued): Pata nahin kis wajahse se shaadi ki? Pyaar ke liye ki…ya paison ke liye? Aparajit Deb kaisa insaan hoga? Pata nahin khush reh payegi ya nahin? 😕

🤣🤣 sorry cant control 🤣

🤔 can this bhoot realy keep Pia happy?he is nice believe me!😆

Bani grilled Pia outside hehehehe

(humme toh yehi umeed thi!😉) ow yahehe....

AD: Pia actually u came on to me!!! (u tell her!😆) Ajeeb o gareeb harkate kar rahi thi 😳…iss Adbhoot Anjaane se Aparajit Deb ko Ajab si Anokhi duniya dikha di! Anand hi anand ayaa!😍

🤣 Peeeeeeeeeeeeeerfeeeeeeeeeeeeect!!!!!!!!!!! 200 out of 100 u liked that bit did u? U know when i wrote that couldn't stop laughing myself.

😆😆 so 'casper' is there haan? good! 😛yep its in there alright...few weeks time...khabar ajayegi😉

(Pia went to her knees…touched Bani's feet) (wanted to see her do this for some time😉)

*cleaning my glasses again* am i seeing this?!! Pia is def on her knees

Bani (teary): Really missed u.😭
Rano (joining the hug): Mee too!!!🤗

I: i didn't 😳no one did i guess.

*cough* bhood should not "aana jaana laga rahega" 😳 Its bad to hv evil hovering around a home 🤓He's not evil though...Bhoot pyaar se bulate hai usse!😆

aww poor Jai. parathe 😆Poor Jai and ur laughing!

kya yaar. Nihita is just an infant and she is also fida over Jai? 😆Guess she just likes that lethal smile of his!!!

Sahil!!!!😡

oye Ranveer!! zyada dadagiri mat dikha!!bhaiyon mein problem hai..lets hope things are resolved soon.

(I hope so)

what do u mean by that *suspicious*welllll.....🤔

the last part was very lovely

loved it

greeeeeaaaaaat part 👏

plz cont soonThanx Tropa..i am glad u enjoyed the update

Originally posted by: *Guli*

Hey jaani! Chameli is here!!!😳😳hey chameli...kaisi ho 🤗
what an update! so much happened!!!! pia is married!!!.... next is rano!!!😆😆 man sahil.... uff!!!! yup its ran ran forever!!!😳😳😳Rano will be hitched in no time..with Ranveer.
jai now understands everything and i know he will do anything thats right!! cuz he's waiting for bani!!😆😆 and until the coast isnt clear.... sorry!!!!😆Yeah he is playing his cards right...everything going his way.


lovely update jaan!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz jaan next update more jb!!😳Try my best with more JB...not easy though😕


me luvin it!!!!!! plz cont soon!!


luv u!!😛Love u too!

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

Tazooo updated! 😲 Nagada baj raha hai?😆

Jaani..i told you like Sunday or something to update it! N you updated today, Thursday! kitna late kardiya!😔 Yaar sorry...bahut buri hoon i know😆

Yeh Pia aur Bhoot kahaan se aagaya!! I thought it was "M" 😉 😆 U would have loved PM angle...just imgaine those two together!😆😆🤣

Saahil was waay too drunk to say that! How can you seperate RanRan jodi yaar??!! 😡 Aur Jigs ki to tum baat hi mat karo! Shes as bad as Saahil! 😡Maa Beta bas ek hi jaise hai! Ziddi.

Loved Bani, Pia, Rano moment, brought tears to my eye jaani 😭 ...Jai is so understandable 😳 Aww..thanx for liking that part many of u liked that scene. Jai is a darling in my ff😳

Continue SOON!! Hamara bhi khayal rakhna 😳 Koshish karti hoon...finding it hard to write these days though

Originally posted by: Hkaurk22

Yay Tazo! Loved the update. Thanx dear. Good that JW is there to console his pyaari Bani.. but whats this about Jigs.. yahaanbhi shuru?Jigs ko toh mauka chaiye shuru hone ka! Bring RR together so that JB can be too! Working on that...fingers crossed.

Loving the JBness of this! :) Thanx...not easy to write all this JB stuff now😕

You must must must continue soon!

Originally posted by: davia389

😭tazo i am gussa😡with u...

javoo ... tuje apta hain i was waihng phir socha shayd u will udapte on sunday and left 😭ek baat kehthi to rukjathi...

par tum to aajkal mujse baat tak nahi kartii😭

baar baar rulathi hoo😭
pata nahin davs...why u r always gussa with me when i don't do anything wrong😕 connection is not great on my end latel...can't chat properly. KS is not great so don't spend to much time in IF as before..as for posting my update...post when i am good and ready..sometimes rush it and post.

updates wa great mr bhoot marries mrs bhootni chota function aacha hain. jb chemistry always hit kash ye ekta samjthi .. par woo kyun samjegi ziddi jo hain kher EK doesn't like happy angles in her serials negativity is her fave thing.

well i dont want ranoa d ranveer as they loook not good but sahil rano are all the ebst.. par muje lagraha hain ki sahil will take soem steps whihc wil ruin rano' life due to depression and rano will be forced to marry sahil i think may be jiggy planning😆 i think sahil will kidnap and marry rano.... phir hogi jb ki shaadi ..ya phir donon ke ebech jagada....lekin munna uske samne gypsy dance akrke manalega😆 I know RS was a good couple in the early days of KS..i liked that too...but in KDKP i got them married in here i thought RS angle would be good. I don't think Saahil will kidnap Rano here though..not sure what he will do yet.

pls continue sooon kyunki aaj keliye itna hii

naraaz hoon Sorry!

dav

Originally posted by: pooks

Tazo, kya update tha 👏 👏 Thanx pooks. Poor Bani seeing her sister all married out without informing wither her or Rano was bound to get such a reaction out of her..and voila...what thappad's she gave her GFN sister 👏 👏 👏Thappar kam pare toh koi baat nahin na! I thought two was adequate as she is not that bad a character in my ff. Am glad Jai was there to handle the situation in a sensible manner. He took Bani aside and explained the situation in a level headed manner and am glad that Bani listened to him 😊 the talk that Bani and Pia had was necessary and through that things got cleared out. 👏 Jai made her understand well...had he not been there she may well have thrown her out and gone into depression. Jai is a great support to her. At least Pia admits that the AdBHOOT Jeet loves her a lot and am sure she'll fall in love with him as well dheere...dheere 😳 😳 😳 she'll fall for him eventually.now as the saying goes, all good things must come to an end..so did JB's evening. But yeh kya...after Jai got home another tamasha took place by Jigayasa the horrid cow 🤢 😡 😡 cause she doesn't want Ranveer marrying Rano. uppar sey that loser Sahil had to make an entry and how dare he and hios GFN mother insinuate that Rano has played with his and Ranveer's feelings due to money 😡 😡 Maa beta ne kaafi hungama create kardiya haina? But Jai will surely handles these two in the right way. uska toh main sar phor dalungi...the dumbass...am glad Jai, Adi and Dadi have all taken a stand and main dekhti hun how Ranveer and Rano are kept apart 😡 Yeah he was a little mean towards his brither so what if he was drunk! Thanx for ur comment pooks always a please to read.😊

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Billiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii# Mioew darling!!

My aagayi... Swagat hai tumhara!😆

How are you buddy? I am late, but durust.. Aa toh gayi!!!😳

So much happening in this update, all great stuff. 😃 😃 😃 Thanx dear...always cram a great deal in one update.

AD and Pia finally got married, and thank you for the slaps...LOL! Pia can't escape that easily, haan? Jab tak Pia ko chaanta nahin parta mazaa nahin aata haina!😆
Bhoot seems to be nice. He is. Acchasa Abhoot Aparajit Hai Yeh!😆

But Rano ki saath kya drama ho raha hai?? Yeah bit of drama happening two bhai want to be with her...but she has eyes only for Ranveer.

igyaasa: Mujhe yeh rishta manzoor nahin hai! (koi aur dialogue nahin mila!) Jiggu aunty is at her best...but beware of JW dear! Warna, some slaps will be delivered here too! She hasn't been slapped yet in my ff...can't wait for that day!😆

Sahil ke baccha...bahut badmash nikla...teri aisi ki taisi...(Yaar, some hyderabadi words...LOL) I like the word aisi ki taisi!! didn't knwo they were hyderabadi though.😆

So now that Pia and AD are a jodi and Ranveer and Rano are on the verge of getting married, is the line clear for our favorite Jodi??Yes line is almost clear. Will try and get things moving from next part. This ff has around another 8-10 parts so almost over with.

Tazo, Absolutely wonderful update! Loved it a lot and for you, I can even create a hundred IDs and comment over and over again!! 😳 Awww...ur so sweet pyaari billi. 😳

You are that good! 👏 Arre me not that good...believe me...writing ke maamle u rock.👍🏼 Thanx for ur comments

Originally posted by: nadia.s

hey tazo!
loved the update 👏 Thanx dear.
it was very sweet as bani and rano did a small haldi and mehndi rasam for pia 😳 I liked that part too...added it at the last minute actually.
aparajit had me laughing like crazy with his A vocab words 😆 😆 i hope he keeps pia happy so that she doesnt have to come back crying to her bani di 😆 AD is a nice fellow in this ff..will keep Pia happy. Thanx for ur comment Nadia
continue soon


nadia 😛

Originally posted by: popeye

It was an awesome update... I love how JB's relationship is progressing.. i love the way Jai knows how to handle her. Please do update soon.. im waiting to know what happens next Glad ur liking JB's relationship so far...Jai understands her completely and supports her in more than one.

Originally posted by: sanam84

😭Tazo acha tha👏👏bahut acha tha...magar mere intrest ka khyal nahi rakha...kyon...coz so less of the one i am interested in😉abhi dekho jhariyon ke peeche(beat around the bush) se baat karne ki aadat nahin hai...(i just believe in kissing behind the bush as per Sang n mamta😆) so saaf saaf bol diya...tere interest ka khyaal nahin rakha oss baar...chalo sorry...agli baar rakhloongi.😆

Pia aa gayi...casper ko le kar...magar abhi andar hai...use andar hi rehne do😆duniya ka 9va ajooba...Woh andar hi rahega ya rahegi kuch mahine tak...kuch keh nahin sakhte Pia ki pregnancy ko lekar...Veer lasted in her womb for almost 18 months😆 Sach mein duniya ka 9va ajooba!

AD acha aadmi😲ye kab hua...ye koi aur AD hoga...magar humain kya...koi bhi ho......mera intrest to kahin aur hai😆U and ur interest... abhi iss update ke liye AD se kaam chala lo!😆

Sahil needs a kick in the...well where he deserves...Bani ne ek mara...abhi Jai needs to do it...but on the rear...aare family jewels ka khayal kar rahi hoon😆😆Family jewels!🤣🤣

Nihita was again cute...jai ke paas aa ke so gayi...well bachi hai😉...Bani ka dekehngen kya hota hai😆 Bani bhi sau jayegi aur kya!😉

k i sud stop...aaj joote padegen...weird mood😉😆arn't u always in a weird mood?😆 Thanx for commenting🤗

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
plzzzzzzz cont soon Thanx for commenting.😊

Originally posted by: sadsunzarsum

awwwwww Which part was aww?😆

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

subah se shaam ho hua hai.. lekin char page bad gaya 😛 😛 i needed to search for it... 😆 anyways... right now sleepy... gonna hit the bed and comment in the morning 😆The day never ends in my ff!😆Sorry!

hi Tazu... good morning,, 😃

okay... i wonder what bani would have done in the case of pia if jai dint console her and make her understand I think she would have thrown her out of the house... bechari bani... ek din mein itna kuch ho gaya 😲

agar ranveer-rano ki shaadi ho jaati hai... i mean... hogi zaroor... but jaldo ho jayegi toh jai ka route ekdum saaf ho jaayega... he is trying a lot for that 😉wasn't intentional...but now he has found out about RR he does wanna get them both in his house.
i wonder what he is gonna tell bani about this alliance.. 😛Will have to wait to see what Bani's reaction is about RR aur pata nahin ranveer kab mama ka pot kholnewala hai 😆Ranveer will keep quiet..accha baccha hai

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey taz
gr8 part
cont.sooonThanx for commenting.😊

Originally posted by: ofcourse

meeooowwwwww...billiiiii...ek dum chahachak update tha 😃
Wah..kya thappad tha 😆 ..yaar tumhe thappad ka marathon rakhna tha..sirf do thappad.. 😕 ....chalo, abhi issise kaam chala lethey hain 😉 I know only two thappars..but for this Pia...kaafi hai...she aint too bad..stupid yes...but not bad.😆

Bechari Bani ko bahuth bhura laga hoga..lekin acha hee hua ki Pia ne Bhooth se shaadi karli, nahi tho humarey premiyon ka milan bahuth keencha chala jaath..abhi tho sirf ek hee wicket baaki hai 😉 😆 yes one wicket is down..now just for the other one! Will be down soon enough😆

Thank God, Jai was there to handle the situation..a very level-headed guy 😛 ..but yaar lagtha hai ki before he gets married, he will be dealing with all these sorts of family probs.. 😆 😆 Problems toh hongi but as u said Jai is level headed will find solutions to them quickly.

The talk between the sisters was very well penned..Good to see all the matters cleared out and thereception taking place the next day.. Yes everything was cleared between them all....now they can party😆

Bhoot seems to be a nice chap..so much in love with Pia..a pair made in heaven? 😉 Everyone seems surprised that AD is a nice guy here.😆 Har waqt bhoot ban ta haina...yahaan ek alag roop dekhne ko mila hai

Was Jiggy aunty not enough, ki yeh khambhakat Sahil bhi aagaya?? How dare he emotionally blackmails Ranveer? Oh..just chuck that guy out.. 😡 haven't decided what to do about Saahil yet. 😕 And as far as Jiggy is concerned, I would want Jai to know that she was also involved with Roshini during Bani's accident (tho, she dint give any ideas or dint know abt Roshini's plan, but she too wanted Bani out right?)and to put her in jail...In fact it will be good if Jai gives her back saying that the wealth n status she is harping about has come to her because of him n if he throws her out, she will not even be able to look into the eyes of Bani n family.. 😡 Rama...Jai will have a major argument with Jigs soon enough...its building up to that. Jigs is gonna get very worried, edgy so may prove to be the major thorn in JB's life sorry to say.

So what is going to happen with Sahil now? I dont want Ranveer to go on a guilt trip..Jsut pack the mom-son duo to Timbakthu!! 😆 Timbaktu is that far enough? How about mars instead?😆

Great part billi...me just love the way u write with all the masaledar comments.. aaj kal comments kam hogaye hai..mood nahin raha iss ff mein.😕
Ciao...next part mein milthey hain..tab tak ke liye...
meoowwwwwwwwww..
Rama Mieow to u too. Thanx for ur comment🤗

PS: hey mere pichley waley comment mein "lambha update" ke baarey mein jo kaha tha, it meant ki those particular parts were more longer..I felt like that..otherwise I know that u r a darling...and always do a long update..Since I read two parts together, might be muje laga ki bahuth lambha tha 😃 hehe...u know one reason i do update once a week...give people plently of time of to catch up with the long updates!😆

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

Hey Tazzie Wazzie,Nirru Wirru!🤗

sorrie about the late comment, but really busy.. so no long comments today.. lolzz sorrie.. i think last time it was long enough hehe..Its ok dear...last time was short comment the long comment was before that!😉😆

aww what is this.. there was not that much jai at all.. not cool at all..how can i drool?? when he is not there hehe lolzz.. but than again.. i can drool at him anytime hehe lolzz..had to write a bit about the others too na.

hehe pia got married bani slapped her twice hehe lolzz that is funny.. and u know what was funnier.. when pia found out that she was with AD.. and when she woke up.. and she said u have to marry me now.. and i wont let someone else.. touch me.. i thought that was really funny.. hehe lolzzreally can't imagine KS wali pia to be like this can u..here she does have some brains in sorting her life out,

jai is a cutie.. pie.. he told bani too calm down hehe so cute..pyaar se samjhaya samaj gayi!

what is this sahil's problem tazzie wazzie, as it is there is enough problems for jai as jigs doesnt want this wedding to take place than, bani hehe poor baby.. Shaadi rukh ti hai ya nahin dekhna padega!

hehe lolzz

continue soon please

PS: btw did i say i love nihita.. she is soo cute.. she didnt go to sleep untill jai came home.. aww so cute.. i wish i was her hehe lolzz...whenever u read Nihita just put ur name there instead...Jai Nanu ko cuddle karlena!😆🤣

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Hey Tazzzzzz!!!Hi Ranjana.
Kisko intni zor se pari. that too 2 times. One from Bani and second from all of us na?😉Yep...well spotted.😆
Adbhoot ajoobe ko uski ajoobi mil gayi😆 Jai is like always too cute! Baniiiiiiiiii itna mat rona!! Ajooba will keep his ajoobi and casper happy, warna Walia hai na. Usko ekaad thappar maar kar aayega. JW is happy. onre down, one to go. adbhoot ajooba is nice...will keep his bhoonti happy😆 Pia won't be a problem for JB in anyway.
Haila Ranveer blushing. and Jai too. Hai mai marjaawa!😳Sab ke sab blushing.
Ab yeh Jigs aur Sahil. Kabab me haddi nahin, poora ka poora hadda hai! Jigs I can understand a bit and I wont comment on Sahil😡😡😡. Cos you know how much I like🤢 him,Saahil is a loser...only brainless character in my ff Taz. I will get banned if I will write my dil ki baat about him😉😆😆nevermind..mein samaj gayi!😆

Nihita!!! Lots of kisses for her. SSOoooooooooooo cute.Darling isn't she. I thought so too..i miss those kinds of scene in KS.
Tazo, the last part where Bani watches her sisters is really touching. 😭😭. beautifully penned.KS was really something in the early days.

Bye
RanjanaThanx for commenting ranjana

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Helooo sellooo ji,here am i doing my multi-task,phela reading your bhoootiful 😉 update,putting lotion on and drinking milkey. 😛 phirse multitasking?😆 Drinking milkey...so cute!!😆

phela breaking news is that I LOVED THE UPDATE,as always. 👏 Bravo Tazo Rani,bravo!! Thank you shank u ji!😳 balle balle shava shava, AD uncle is back and he has aunty with him,humari pyaari pia aunty 🤢 🤢 🤢 AD uncle and Pyaari Pia aunty!!!!🤣🤣 Love that!!😆 this what you call a made for one another. 😆 😆 😆 Absolutely. Jodi kamaal ki hai. I think it ould have worked in KS.Bani Rani is in Jansi ki Rani roop,wow someone got a double prize,bery bery nice.Someone was really mad, i don't blame Bani for her outburst. Awww humara Munna as always does a very smart and sweet talkie with his rani and makes her understand,kitna pyaara hai naa.Munna toh pyaara hi rahega in my ff! 😳 SO I was wondering if I have the security guard job, Tazo Rani all these girls on the forum are goign to get him, bechara seriously needs some protection. 😉 😉 Kya hua..waitress ki job chali gayi? Did u get sacked for drooling constantly on ur diners?😆Chalo Bani and Pia Aunty made up,very sweet and sisterly momento.another party sarty, I need to buy another suit,yaar afterall AD uncle's reception. 😆 😆 but dont u worry I will still be doing my protection duties toward munna undercover 😉 😉 do jode kapde le aana tab!!! 😆Seems like it is the shaadi season in Mumbai, I will have to get another suit for Rano and Ranveer now as well,yaar I only work Part time, I dont have any money trees. 😕Well u could always ask KK tailoring to sort u out. Kanta and Khushboo!😆 Free mein karnege kuch intezaam. Sahil bechara Majnu bana gaya hai,haha Jigs is surely goin to die of shock her dono pyaara beta love middle class ladki 😆 😆 aww sister moments were very sweet the mehendi and haldi rasam.cute,cute.me soo excited abt the party and also the fashion show.will be eagerly waitin. 👏 Many of u liked the small haldi mehndi scene. It was kinda touching. Fashion show..have a few ideas for that ...wonder how that part shapes up.


preet 😳

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey ..............

awesome part....................

update soon Thanx for commenting. Glad u liked the update😊

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

Poor Pia, being slapped two times 😕 😕
But she deserve it. She get married without telling her sisters. Do thappar kam lage sab ko?😆 But she not a bad character to theek hai.
It's good for her Jai was there or else Bani will not listen to her. Bani was very mad and upset with Pia.
Alalalala Jai, he's so perfect. As always! Saahil ki baccha 😡 , he really don't know what love is.
I wanted slapped him so hard 😆 like Bani has done to Pia 😉 😉 😉 Thappar se yeh bach gye abhi he may get one in the coming parts...who knows...i don't😆

Jigyasa, what does she think.
nobody took her side 😉 hope she will think again. jigyaasa and think? never.😕
So, we can talk about Jai and Bani wedding soon, cause Rano and Ranveer is on the way 😉 Yeah yeah hogi shaadi soon...abhi thoda time hai...not long though😉
very long part, so i won't complain if you not updated soon 😉 I am seriously shortening it from now on...in fact the last update was shorter

Originally posted by: Twinkle20

Awesome! That was long and FULL of excitement! 😃 Pia is married to Bhoot...How sweet! 😆 Bhoot is so nice here it feels weird... 😆 Man, she still doesn't love him but dheere dheere it will surely come... 😉Was long...but slightly shorter than usual!😉 AD is nice believe me...not an evil side to him at all. Pia will fall for him eventually.

I'm glad sweet Bani forgave Mrs. Bhoot but only because of HER sweet going-to-be-hubby... 😳 Awww...Thande dimaag se sochna chahiye... 😃 Yep yep...Bani forgot her own lines for a few minutes...But then what can one do when her sister turns up like this? Chi, the situation of Pia's and Bhoot's marriage was ewww.... 🤢 Gosh, she's so ewww... The REAL Pia type... 😉 Pia did get in quite a tricky situation with AD...Bani was bound to be mad after all that...but Jai saved the day as usual.

Good good...Rano Ranveer's marriage thingy's topic has started...Adi and Dadi are happy... 😃 But Jigyasa as usual is so stupid! 😡 What is with her and middle class girls? Ufff... Wait till she founds out who her Bhabi is... 😉 That will be worthwhile...Cos Jai is OVERprotective of Bani... 😳 So anything against her and he'll give some dishooms to Jigs...Hehe!! 😉 Jigs already knows about Bani...not fond of her.

Sahil is bonkers! 😕 He better get over this childish thing and let his brother live in peace... 😊 So now Sahil and Mummy are on one team while the rest are on the other...Sounds good! 😆 I hope he gets over it soon too..bhai ke pyaar ka dushman na ban baithe.

Awww...Bani and Rano are just too sweet...Trying their best to cover up for all they've missed in Pia's wedding etc... 😊 They did a Haldi ka Rasam and a Mehndi ceremony as well...Very nice... 😊 Most of u liked that part...and i wrote that part at the last minute...jaldi jaldi mein😆

Life is finally taking a turn for the three sisters for sure...One is already halfway out her house and into her real home...Soon the other two will be married and gone as well...I'm getting emotional... 😭 Why are u crying? Abhi bidai mein time hai!😆

Wonder how Bani will react when she finds out about Rano liking someone already and that someone is her hubby's nephew! Wahoo! A smell a big twist coming up... 😉 😆 Yeah still need to think about when Jai will tell her but it should happen after the wedding reception i suspect.

Excellent part Taz... 😃 Enjoyed it! 😛
Now for part 18... 😃 Quick quick! 😉
😛 Thanx for ur comments my twinkie twinks!😆

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

first of all casper 😆 that had me in hysterics...sheenu ne naam diya tha actually!😆 and for once pia did the rite thing after doing so many worng things...and jai seems to be rushing this RR marriage im liking that...looks like KW AW andGW will be cuming soon!!! 😆 😆 😆 He's rushing but intentions are naik...really. lol bhoot and chudail still cnt stop laughinG! 😆 😆 😆 mrs pia deb perfect!!!! 😆 😆 😆 Pia Deb...short and sweet name! loved the way jaio explained everything to bani and she forgave the bhoot and his bhootni for him!! Jai thande dimaag se sochta haina har waqt thats why he;s good. hmm the wedding reception now that shuld be interesting the walia family coming and bani rani being there as well!!! 😃 😃 😃Yes will be quite an affair! i alwysa knw sahil was completly jiggs child stubborn and selfish!! 😃 he needs to get over himself and let his brother be happy im sure he will find someone nice like meera to spend his life with the perfect bahu for jiggs!!! 😃 OMG Saahil and Meera...what a fab jodi that would be!🤣 Mind u i am not gonna introduce M in this ff...can't stand her.😡 pweaseeeeeeeeee continue soon!thankooooooooooo

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Hi Taz that is one super duper update with lady in action and lots of emotional drama...but neither the less love it as usually...tusi kmaal kar dita....you remove the first (na first nahi second, first ta Roshni the cobra si) thorn from JB's love life Yes Ridhi..a lot happened in this update Doxot house mein hungama then one at WM. JB ka raasta dhere dheere saaf ho raha hai😆Pia and AD married awesome....bhoot and bhootni makes the perfect coupleMatch made in hell! .... and with little casper on the way kya khena👏 👏 👏Yep he's there already! Shhhh😆 ...I feeling like doing some bhangra on this wonderful occasion. Karlo bhangra!!! Badi achi khabar hai!😆and more over Bani ka maa durga roop was fantastic....agar Jai na hota to kay hota Pia ka.....by reading this I got the feeling you are trying to remove all the troubles from Bani's life which can turn into fisco later on...like Pia attraction towards JW...her obession and then not to forget Anu and the whole pregnacy drama which Bani takes it upon herself and oh yes last but not the lease Roshni the cobra and whole "park road".....looks like all will be take care of before JB gets married.yes u have spotted that correctly. Everything needs to be right and sorted befor Munna and Munni come together. But there may be problems further down.😕
but yaar i have one complaint....why didn't Jigs got a heart attack after listening to Sahil's rubbish....I mean come on that old couch can't be that strong and take it all in that her both sons love the same middle class girl Rano and top of all that she still hadn't recovered from Anu's middle class marriage i should have thought of that..Jigyaasa heart attack se mar jaati toh problem hi nahin hogi!😆 Mind u if she died...JB marraige would have got postponed na...don't want that happening now do we?😉.... are yaar yeh Ranveer to bada hi senti nikla...Sahil said all that rubbish of loving Rano and wanting her....and he was ready to back too....uff yeh bhi na lagta hai Bani ki kuch traits ismeh shift hogaya hai mahaanta ki moorat!!!😆but thank god Jai was there to handle everything and put some sense in his brain...nahi to pata nahi kya hota. Jai hai toh sab kuch theek hota hai us ghar mein! thanx for commenting.
plz cont. soon

Originally posted by: snsali_pooja

Hey Tazo!

First of all, a BIG SORRY for not commenting on the last update! It completely slipped my mind, but I did read, just forgot to comment I've been doing that alot lately, and I should stop warna I prob won't comment at all cause I'll keep forgeting Sorry again yaar 🤗Its ok..maaf kiya just don't do it again!😆😆 Forget that is! Arre mein koi bhool ne cheez hoon!

Anyways, back to your updates! 😆

Part 16.

Yaar you won't beleive this, but I was actually missing your flowers from the updates 😆 they are finally back 😆yep...a little rose made its way to Bani😳

Hai ram, JB romancing infront of Rano 😆😆 they should get a room or Rano should just leave and go to Ranveer or something 😆😉 Lekin Rano is too cool to leave out 😆 Jai and Rano have a great relationship! Love their chemistry!Rano was in a teasing mood...having been fixed for life with Ranveer. Jai knew why she was happy too😉

Bani wanted to live in her room cause of the dress she was wearing 😆😆 she must have looked grogeous, but it's Bani we're talking about, not Pia 😆😆 How sweet of Jai to bring payals for Bani 😳😳 I swear these two are too cute 😳😳he bought just the one anklet...so it would look rather se*y with her black gown

Who knew that Jai could dance 😲😳 Yaar I'm addicted to that song! I've been listening to it for like a month now and I still love it! It's a great song! Bani must have had a blast dancing with the world's best dancer, and the cutest dancer 😳kaash humme bhi Jai ke saath dance karne ka mauka milta...sighhh😍

Jai is pull of surprises! First dinner, then dance (which was on the schedule but still 😆) and now a little picnic 😳😳 I wish that Jai's dream came true, lekin peon beech mein agyae 🤣That peon should get sacked for that!😆

So Miss Pia is finally back and who knows what or who she brought along 😆😆AD uncle!😆

Part 17.

Man i never expected Pia to get married, and that too without Bani 😲 😡 She deserved a slap for doing that, but the circumstances were not too good anyways I feel so sorry for Bani! She was really upset 😭😭😭 But she had Jai there for her support 😳 There is a bright side to all of this! Now Pia won't be hovering around Jai like a crazy person anymore 🥳😆 Atleast AD is good guy and will keep Pia happy (I hope) 😃Pia rani went and married that bhoot..got a major thappr from Bani...Jai saved the day by talking to Bani otherwise she would have kicked her put for sure. AD is a nice guy so no worries from his side.

Jigs seriously needs to get a life! So what if Rano and Bani aren't rich? Atleast they're is a great girls unlike herself 😡 If I was Jai, I would have slapped Jigs and through her out of the house! Many of u wanted jigs to get slapped there...maybe i should have included that...oh well..next time round i will make sure she gets one.😆She doesn't even like Rohit and he's a pretty good guy! Sahil needs to also grow up a bit here! Both mother and son are stupid and acting childish! 😡😡😡 I hope Ranveer doesn't leave Rano cause of Jigs and esspecially Sahil 😭Jai is with Ranveer so ranveer won't back out now.

All in all, I loved both the updates very much apart form Jigs and Sahil 😡😆 It takes me like an hour to read the whole thing, so i always say I'll comment after, but after is like 2 weeks later and by that time, yuo already updated 😆😆 So I'm sorry again 🤗Thant why i give people a whole week before i update...enough time to comment.

Can't wait for your next update 😉Posted now.

From Shireen 😳 Thanx for commenting

tazu wheres the update.... i am getting really bored... please post it soon

Originally posted by: ruma

tazu wheres the update.... i am getting really bored... please post it soon

Hmm i second that!

haha you're teasing too now....come on give us a break...its been a tough week with KS...ur updates make us feel good

pweeeasee may we have an update??? 😃 as it is im on my way to hevaen thanks to thte pics sammy sent me and now u will speed up the process if you update pweaseeeeeeee thankoooooooooooooooo