[ChupkeSePyarKiya]IMPORTANT - Pg28

This is my first fanific!
the characters and armaan[AM], anjali[A], riddhima[RG], rahul[R], muskaan, atul, sapna [those are the main!]

DING DING!!
RG: UGHH
DING DING
RG: UGHH!! DI!! TIME KYA HAI? DI!!
A: RIDZ mujhe disturb mat karo
[snore snore snore]
ridz gets up and checks the time
RG: AAAHHH DI TIME DEKHO HUM LATE HAI!!
[ridz gets up and goes for a shower while anjali is still asleep in bed]
RG: di uto!
A: 5 mins ridz
RG: tik hai main jog karne ja rahi hu

[ridz goes downstairs to find Dr Shashank and nani laughing on the kitchen table]
RG: kya hua? aap dono kyu haas rahe hai?
[DrSH] kuch nahi hum dono ko tumhari aur anjali ki kuch din yaad aya
RG: ok papa main jog karne ja rahi hu
N: breakfast to kake jow!
RG: Time nahi hai nani! bye!

[ridz runs through the streets past shops and busy streets]

RG: mera lace!
[ridzies shoelace was untied she was near a basketball court and sat on the bench to tie her lace]
RG: OUCH!
[ridz turns around to find armaan playing basketball with some kids]
AM: bullseye!
RG: Armaan!
[ridz walks up to armaan]
RG: bohoot din sai mai basketball nahi play kiya
[she bounces the ball a few times and scores a basket from where she was standing]
RG: match hojaye?
AM: nahi, main tumhe harake fed up hogaya hu [angrily]
RG: KYA? mujhe? tum? harougi? puhlease!
AM: aur phir bhi tum tu mujhe ek gire huwi aadmi samajti hu, main to tumhari kelte waqt faida ut toungi

[and ridz jogs of looking guilty]

[ridz runs home and jumps onto the bed, she remembers all the good times she had with armaan,
how could she accuse armaan of being so sick minded? she had to aplogise]
[she runs to the phone and rings armaan]
AM: hello
[ridz doesnt speak she just listens to armaans voice she loved it!]
AM: Hello??
[in the backround ridz hears a voice saying kaun hai?]
AM: pata nahi papa main rakdeti hu
RG: nahi!
AM: huh?
RG: armaan
AM: riddhima, kya hai?
RG: armaan, i am sooooo sorry, mujhe pata nahi kyun main us din woh sub kaha
jo dimagh main aya main woh kaha, mujhe maaf kardo, tum aisa aadmi ho hi nahi sakte!
AM: riddhima
RG: i'm soo sorry mujhe maaf kardo
AM: tik hai riddhima
RG: PLEASE PLEASE armaan maine galat kaha mujhe maaf kardo
AM: TIK HAI!! maine maaf kardiya!
RG: friends?
AM: sirf friends?
RG: armaan![smiling!]
[and she cuts the phone]

AM: mujhe pata tha, mairi riddhima mujko pyar karti hai

This is part one! if you like it tell me 2 carry on! coz i sure will!


      

Edited by nishat_1995 - 16 years ago

my hindi is really bad but plz cope with me!

i lyked it nce start! willbe w8in to read prt 2 contd soon! 😛

it was a nice part...continue soon 😉

yeah it was awesome .. i really luvd d fact dat now a and r will be together .. lol .. neways , plz cont. soon ..

Originally posted by: lrl_fan14

yeah it was awesome .. i really luvd d fact dat now a and r will be together .. lol .. neways , plz cont. soon ..

plzz continue..

hey
that was amazing i loved it 👏
plz contiue
😊 swansea 😊

S0ME0NE HELP ME!!
WHAT SH0ULD i CALL THiS FANFiC??
HELP!
PLEASE!

OMG...ur ff is toooo gud!!cont. soon
umm...a name...cant tink of any... 😆 will tell u if i do bt u keep up da gud work!! 👏 👏

kuch kuch hota hai

pyaar toh hona hi tha

chupke se pyaar kiya

pyaar ki daasta

dil tumme marta hai

yeh dil mil rahe hai

true love found

love will find a way

armaan n his basket

ok ihv put sum of da nmes u can che 1of dem if u lyke! i hpe it helps 😛