Mini Fan Fic: Realization of Love

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I know, I know, You're the one is still pending but I'll be honest, my entire creativiyty in that as has died down and plus I shouldn't start fan fics if I am not gonna complete them, but I'll complete it in the summer cause winter break, I'll be in India.😊 This is a mini fan fic, currently dealing with the episode from today on wards. I guess you could say it's mere concepts that have been ranging in my head. and I thought I write to remove them out of my head..😳

Characters - Armaan, Ridz, Angie, Atul, Saps, Rahul , Keerti, Muskaan, Subh, Shaks, Paddy , Miniee, Nana.

This is a fan fic with just mere thoughts of how I feel the story of DMG should go.😳

It's quite Mini and I'll post updates until Sunday. Then I shall continue it at College.😃 This is a gonna different then what DMG might be showing or will show.😛

Chapter Index:
1. Jealousy? - Pg 1



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wohooooooooooooooooooo! go for it gurl! 👏 😳 ...trust me u r the "future dmg creative" 😉 ..hehe 😆 ..
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Today was a special day indeed for all the interns, after all the interns of the month will get chosen. Each candidate had their expections on who will become the intern of the month and there was enough a face off losing. Angie had bet that Ridz will win, and Atul had a bet that only Armaan would win. Angie told Atul that if Ridz wins, He will have to be her serveant for 2 days and Atul told that if Armaan wins, she would have to go out on date with him. Angie agreeded.

In the morning, Angie woke up before everyone else. She stared at herself in the mirror. Armaan cannot win, otherwise me on a date with Atul? I mean, Where am I? and Where is Atul? Oh well stop it Anjali, Ridz is bound to win. In the other side of town, Atul jumped with glee. Today was his day for sure after all Armaan was going to win and then there would be party. Unlike Angie, he didn't want Armaan for a date with Angie but he wanted Armaan to win because he deserved it. He also realized that something was amiss between Armaan-Ridz and he wondered if he was partially responsible for it though Armaan denied and said it's good think he asked Armaan to kiss Ridz because the real truth had come out. He noticed Armaan looking all dejected and wish he could help him. Snapping out of his thoughts, he grabbed his coat and went to Sanjivani.

In the locker room, Ridz was starting at the locker next to her. She was suprised not to see him so early. She had been denying her feelings for him, but what she say yesterday made her realize her feelings for Armaan. She wanted to apologize, she wanted to tell him but he was nowehere in sight. She thought to herself, Muskaan is not here either? Just then the locker room door opened and in walked in Rahul and Atul.
Ra: Hello Ridhimaa, How are you?
R: Ahh just fine.
A: Hey Ridz!
R: Hey!

In walked in Angie who smiled at Atul who didn't respond much with any smile. Angie stared at him. " He is so confusing, what is his problem today?" She started to get her stuff out when she was greeted by Saps. Ridz stared at her watch while Rahul stared at her. Shuffling between it, Atul grabbed a phone.
A: Hey Dude, Where are you?
Ar: Yeah, we are here.
A: We? Ahh I see.

Ra: Is Armana here yet?
A: Yeah, He's coming with Muskaan.

Ridz looked up and her face changed colors. She was shocked and angry at the same time. Just then the locker room opened. Muskaan fell just to be rescued by the hero.
M: Thanks Armaan, You're always there for me.
Ar: What are frends for?

They both got up and greeted everyone. When Muskaan went to greet Ridz, she walked off in a huff.
M: What's her problem?
Ar: Nothing, that's how she is. Come let's go.

All the interns continued working in their departments, Ridz concentration was only on Armaan and Muskaan and she didn't realize when she ended up stabbing Rahul.
R: Ouch.
Ra: Oh, I am so sorry.
R: It's okay but where is your concentration?
Ra: Nothing, I am fine.

The telecom rang and all the interns were asked to report to the confrenence room. All the interns reported in style.

K: Okay Interns, I know you all are waiting for this, and it was a tough decision but the Intern of the Month goes to.....
Angie , Saps and Rahul were cheering Ridz while Atul and Muskaan cheered on Armaan....
K: Dr. Armaan Malik.
There was celebrations everywhere. Angie was shocked beyond words. Atul smirked at this. All congratulated Armaan. Muskaan gave him a big hug. Ridz couldn;t take it anymore. She just stared at them while Armaan stared at her with a smirk on his face.

Ridz left from there and went down to stairs. She cried and cried her eyes out when she heard footsteps. She turned around to see Armaan standing there with a tissue.
Ar: Here wipe this off.
She held his hands and stared at him with teary eyes. Just then a hand approached her. She turned around to see Anjali standing there. She turned around and saw no one.

An: Ridzi, Are you okay?
Ri: Yeah Di, I am fine, let's go..

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They went inside the canteen where Armaan was buying coffee for everyone. Angie approached Atul.
An: Atul, tell me when and where.
At: Sorry Anjali. I am not interested in going out with you. I am going to dinner and night out with Armaan and the gang.
An: But...
At: Just remember Anjali, Love cannot be forced upon someone else, it just happens.

Atul walked away from there leaving Anjali remembering the past..

Ridz was sitting at the table with the coffee there in front of her, tears fell down her eyes. She noticed Angie sitting there dejected, Saps laughing with Rahul and Atul and ... Where was he? She didn't see him , and she wanted to talk to him. She noticed him standing there without a cup. She grabbed a cup of coffee and aprroached him just then..

M: Here you Armaan, Your coffee.
Ar: Thanks Team Mate!

They chatted for a while not realizing the Ridz was standing right behind them. Ridz had tears down her eyes and left.. This was all being watched by someone...

Hope u all like it..😃 Let me know if I should continue or not.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yup u gotto continue for sureeee dudette..its too good... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi jenny 😛

This is the first fanfic I'm reading and you write very well 😊
Pls continue 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jenny1000


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They went inside the canteen where Armaan was buying coffee for everyone. Angie approached Atul.
An: Atul, tell me when and where.
At: Sorry Anjali. I am not interested in going out with you. I am going to dinner and night out with Armaan and the gang.
An: But...
At: Just remember Anjali, Love cannot be forced upon someone else, it just happens.

Atul walked away from there leaving Anjali remembering the past..

LOVED it, Jens! 👏 👏 👏 The way you've continued with the AA1 story is fab, and this is exactly how I want Atul to behave. Really liked the way you dealt with his character, keeping in mind his self-respect. As for Anjali, I'm pretty sure she doesn't like to be rejected! 😉

Continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I LOVED IT UPDATE SOON 👏 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi jenny dats gd! contd soon! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww jens! 😳 ..its awesome! 👏 ...loved it all 😉 ..nice to see Atul in a hatke andaaz 😉 ...love love love it..u have to carry on! 😛 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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brilliant jens...its great..especially after 2days eppy...its just wonderful
Keep going plllzzzz
Ash.

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