My fanfic..after the confession...pg 1..

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hi friends,

i am posting all my parts of my fanfic here,so that its easy for all of u to read it:

Part 1:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/778203/dream-fanfic-by-me

Part 1(contd..):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/778832/dream-fanfic-contd

Part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/785670/dream-fanfic-contd

Part 2(contd..):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/787079/dream-fanfic-chapter2-contd

Part 3:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/787287/dream-fanfic-chapter-3

Part 3(contd..):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/797835/dream-fanfic-chapter-3-contd

plzzzzz the people who have not read it,do read it and post ur comments!!!!!!!!!!!😊

New part:

One more turn in my story,urmi knew that sandeep started liking her.She noticed the changes in his behaviour.Sandeep knew urmi liked him,but sandeep didnt know urmi knew abt his feelings!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 4

Later that day,we see urmi returning to her house and climbing the steps of her house.As she climbs someone calls her from behind,Urmi...She turned and saw zoya very happy and running towards her.πŸ˜›

Z-Urmi,aaj main bahut bahut bahut khush hoon(she made urmi move round and round)πŸ˜›

U-are are,zoya!!!!!kya kar rahi hain,mujhe chakkar aa rahe hain,kya hua???(smiling)tu itni khush kyun hain?😊

Zoya was breathing very heavily.πŸ˜ƒ

U-ruk,pehle saans to le le.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Z-main itni khush ho aaj ki ye khushkhabri sunate sunate meri jaan chali jaaye to koi gham nahin hain.😊

U-kya bakwaas kar rahi hain,aisa koi kehta hain.ek thapad marogi keech ke.She was very angry at zoya😑.

Z-ok sorry baba,aage se aisa nahin kahogi.acha sun to kya hua.

U-tu batayegi to sunogi naπŸ˜†!!!!!!!kya baat hain??

Z-are main abhi college se aayi ho aur mujhe ye khabar mili hain ki tujhe Best Student of the Year ka award mil raha hain.πŸ‘πŸ‘

Urmi was shocked and she thought she had heard something which was impossible to occur.She was abt to faint.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

U-kya keh rahi hain,zoya.tu mazak to nahin kar rahi,na!!!!!!πŸ˜•

Z-nahin yaar.main sach keh rahi ho.mujhe principal ne bataya aur tab tak to college se nikal chuki thi warna woh tujhe hi batate.😊

U-mujhe to yakeen nahin ho raha,zoya.i am so happy.mummy aur papa kitne khush honge sunkar.She hugged zoya.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Z-ha,aur koi bhi hoga jo is khabar ko sunkar khush honge!!!!!!!(she mad a very cute face to tease urmi)πŸ˜‰

Urmi knew whom did she refer to,but acted as if she didnt.

U(innocently)-acha kaun hain woh zoya??main unhe jaante hoon??😳

Zoya looked at her as if she was going to kill her,which made urmi smile.

Z-ha ha bikul tu unhe bahut ache tarah se jaanti hain.akhir tumhe college jo choda tha subah.πŸ˜‰

U(surprised)-tujhe kaise pata?😊

Z-maine apne ghar se dekha tha ki kitne pyaar se sandeep bhaijaan ne ha kaha tha tujhe college chodne ke liye.πŸ˜‰

Urmi smiledπŸ˜›.

Z-acha unhe bhi batana,i am sure unhe bahut khushi hogi.

U-theek hain.

Zoya's mother calls zoya from her house,Zoya.......

Z-ji ammi,aayi.main chalti hoon,congratz once again urmi.😊

U-thanks zoya.πŸ˜›

Zoya was abt to leave when she said:

Z-urmi,meri baat bulna nahin,sandeep bhaijaan ko ye batana zaroor.

U-theek hain,batadongi.They both smiled and left for their house.😳

Urmi went to her house and was thinking wat will sandeep react when he comes to know abt it.πŸ˜‰

She entered the house and ran towards her mother and hugged her.

U-mummy!!!!!!!!!!😊

Sujata-are kya hua??itni khush kyun hain aaj?

Urmi told her everything and her father was also there.Hearing this he was very happy and hugged urmi.😊

Raskilal-shabaash beta,bahut achaπŸ‘.kab hain award ceremony?

U-kal hain papa.aap sabko aana hoga.

Raskilal-are hum nahin aa sakte,humhe to kal sujata ki mummy se milne jaana hain.

U-kya papa,jaayie main aapse baat nahin karogi.😭

Raskilal-are beta, sujata samjhao ise.

Sujata-ha,urmi tu zoya ko lekar jaana na.

U-mummy,koi ghar ka insaan to hona chahiye na waha par😭.

Sandeep entered urmi's house at that time.

R-are sandeep aaja beta.

Urmi turned and they looked at each other😳.

S-kya baat hain uncle?

Raskilal told him everything.

R-are ek idea hain,sandeep tu kyun nahin chala jaata urmi ke saath.

Urmi and sandeep both were shocked.Urmi liked the idea and smiled.😳

S-are nahin uncle main kaha jaonga.πŸ˜‰

R-main kuch nahin sunoga,chale jaao na plzz.

Sandeep didnt know what to do.Urmi was looking at him hopefully.😳

S-acha theek hain uncle.

Urmi was delighted that he agreed.πŸ˜›

R -acha hum sabko bata kar aate hain.Urmi sandeep ko chai-vai ke liye pochna,hum abhi aate hain.chalo sujata.

They left.Urmi and sandeep looked at each other😳.Sandeep went closer to her😳 and said:

S-umm...congratulations urmi.main bahut khush ho tumhare liye😳.

U-thank u,sandeep babu.mera lucky charm mere saath tha na to ye to hona hi tha.😳

S-lucky charm??πŸ˜•

U-ha,aap!!!!!!!!!!😳

S-kya?πŸ˜ƒ

U-ha,woh aap jab bhi mere saath hote hain sab kuch acha hota hain.He looked at her in a very fliratous way.She lowered her eyes.😳😳

S-acha main chalta hoon,kal ceremony kitne baje hain?

U-9:00 baje subah.

S-theek hain to main tumhe lene 8:30 baje aa jaonga!!!πŸ˜›

U-theek hain.sandeep babu....aapse ek baat kehni thi.

S-kaho??

U-wo....main...umm.......main...

S-kya baat hain urmi??😊

U-wo...actually..😊

S-bolo urmi,kya hua??

U-mujhe aapko kuch dena tha.πŸ˜‰

S-mujhe??kya?πŸ˜‰

U-pehle waada kijiye aap bura nahin manege.

S-ha,theek hain.par kis liye?πŸ˜•

U-wo..aap ne meri madad ki na isliye!!!!πŸ˜ƒ

S-kaisi madad??πŸ˜•

U-mujhe college chodne ki.😊

S-urmi tum bhi na!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ

U(with a innocent face)-plzzz sandeep babu,aap inkaar nahin karege.😊

S-acha theek hain,kya dena hain tumhe?

U-wo...pehle aankhein band kijiye.😳

Sandeep was surprised but still he agreed.πŸ˜›

Urmi went close to him and kissed him on his cheeks(for thanking him) and ran out from the house.😳

Sandeep opened his eyes and was shocked what just happened.He touched the spot where she had kissed him.He smiled and blushed and got a shock of his life😳.Urmi ran to a rose garden out of colonel gunj(where she use to go regularly).As soon as she reached there she stopped and her breath was very heavy and she opened her arms to let the wind go into her breath😳😳.She just realised what had she done and was really shocked at her act.She just put her hands in front of her face and blushed like anything.....😳

thats it for this part.hope u all liked it!!!!!!plzzzzzzz post ur comments and suggestion!!!!!!!!😊

Next part-(sorry for being late)

Chapter 4...contd...

Next day,in CG the normal routine started of everyone.As usual jugle,hari and mushtaq were playing pittoo.πŸ˜›

J-yaar hari suna hain ki urmi ko koi prize hrize mila hain.πŸ˜ƒ

H-ha,wo mummy bata rahi thi ki use woh kya kehte hain kuch best student of the month,aisa hi kuch mila tha.πŸ˜†

M-abbe best student of the month nahin best student of the year.

H-tujhe kaise pata?

M-wo,ummm...zoya bata rahi thi.😳

H-acha

J-yaar tum logo ko nahin lagta ki humhe use woh kya kehte hain angrezi main congrpulations kehna chahiyeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

H-abbe jugle jab angrezi nahin aati to bolta kyun hain,congrpulations nahin congratulations!!πŸ˜ƒ
J-ha ek hi baat hain.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

H-waise mushtaq baat to jugle theek keh raha hain

M-hmm...to chale

J-abhi jaayege?πŸ˜†

H-nahi agle saal jaayege!!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

M-chalo yaar,kahin urmi college ke liye nikal na jaaye.

Here in urmi's house,sujata was giving urmi aarti and she said:

Su-meri beti ko kisi ki nazar na lage,bahut achi lag rahi hain😊

U-thank u mummy.Urmi touched her parents feet😳 and was abt to leave when sujata said:

Su-are to kaha ja rahi hain,pehle sandeep ko to aane de.

Hearing sandeep's name urmi got very scared.After what happened yesterday,she was not ready to even face him.😳😳

U-theek hain mummy,main yaha intezaar karti hoon.

Su-to hum chale tumhari nani ke ghar.

U-ha,umm...theek hain.She was shivering while saying this.πŸ˜‰

Su-kya baat hain urmi,teri tabiyat to theek hain

U-ha,ha mummy.main theek ho.aap jao.

They left,leaving urmi tensed.She was thinking...sandeep babu ko bura to nahin laga hoga,main unse nazare kaise milaongi.She was pacing up and down looking constantly at the doorπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›.Just when she was abt to go inside to get some water for herself,the doorbell rang.

She was shivering,she slowly moved forward and opened the door.Sandeep was standing and they looked each other remembering the moment what happened last night.Urmi could no longer bear the silence.😳

U-are sa...nnndeeep babu aap aa gaye.....main abhi aati hoon,phir chalte hain.

She turned and went inside to take her books.She said to herself.......bhagwaan ab aap hi mujhe bacha sakte hain.

U-chaliye sandeep babu.

Sandeep just looked at her smiling and was enjoying the fact that urmi was trying to get things to normal.πŸ˜›

She saw sandeep was smiling at her,and she asked:

U(innocently)-kya hua sandeep babu,aap muskura kyun rahe hain?πŸ˜‰

Sandeep came closer to urmi which made urmi get more and more tensed,he came very close to her so that they could hear each other's breath😳.Sandeep again smiling and asked urmi:

S-urmi,tumhari saansein itni taiiz kyun hain.😳😳😳

Urmi looked up and got lost in his eyes.She didnt have any answer so lowered her eyes again.πŸ˜›

S-tumne jawaab nahin diya(coming more closer to her)😳

Urmi was melting,but gather to change the topic:

U-sa...aa...ndeepji mujhe da...aaa....irr hoo rahi hain.chale.😳😳

Sandeep didnt move and went closer...closer,urmi closed her eyes.He went near her ears,and told her very softly,which made urmi shiver:😳

S-thank u for the gift.Saying this sandeep left to start his bike,leaving urmi astonished with closed eyes.πŸ˜‰

When she opened her eyes,sandeep was not there.Urmi couldnt believe what just happened😳😳.With a lot of courage she just left to join sandeep...

aage kya hua,next part ke liye intezaar karna hoga!!!!!!!!!just thought of keeping a surprise.i know fazila is going to kill me for this,but as they say...sabar ka phal meetha hota hain!!!!!!!!!!Hope u liked this part!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzz post ur comments!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Next part

Chapter 4....contd...new part..

Urmi went down her house steps constantly looking at sandeep. She was going very slow as she couldnt understand how would she go with him.Sandeep was checking his bike and saw urmi coming down.Urmi couldnt look into eyes and looked the other way.Sandeep smiled and he was enjoying every moment of urmi being tensedπŸ˜ƒ.Urmi came slowly towards him and sandeep said,acting as if nothing happenedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


S-ha urmi tum aa gayi,chale.He smiled.
U-ha,wo....ha chaliye.
Urmi with great difficulty sat behind his bike, and sandeep started the bike,when someone called him...sandeep bhaijaan...
Zoya was running towards them and urmi and sandeep both looked at her.
S-kya hua zoya?tum bhaag kyun rahi ho?😊
Z-bhaijaan main aapko hi dhoond rahi thi
Sandeep-urmi looked at each other.
S-mujhe dhoond rahi thi,kyun??
Z-wo..bhaijaan...main...main
Urmi got off the bike and asked her:
U-zoya kya baat hain??tum theek to ho na??πŸ˜•
Z-ha,urmi mujhe kya hua hain.main to sandeep bhaijaan ko kuch kehne aayi thi
S-ha,to kaho na zoya.
Z-bhaijaan wo....urmi ka khayal rakhiye ga.
Urmi and sandeep both looked at her with a confused look.πŸ˜•
U-zoya,tu ye kya keh rahi hain??tabiyat to theek hain na teri!!!!
Z-are urmi...tu meri dost hain,mujhe pata hain ki tu jab award lene jaayegi to rone lagegi...isliye main bhaijaan se keh rahi ho ki tera khayal rakhe.Zoya had a small giggle.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Z-ab waha urmi ke mummy-papa to nahin honge use sambhalne ke liye,to bhaijaan aapko hi urmi ko sambhalna hogaπŸ˜‰
Urmi had a look as if she is going to kill her.Sandeep saw the look on urmi's face and started laughing.πŸ˜†
U(angry)-isme hasne waali kya baat hain sandeep babu.😑
S-kuch nahi,kuch bhi to nahi
U-thank u soo much zoya...tujhe meri kitni fikr hain.....ab main jao.waise bhi sandeep babu ki wajah se pehle se hi late ho gaye hoon
Z-kyun,bhaijaan ne kya kiya??
U-wo....She stopped and looked at sandeep.She remebered what happened in the morning.😳
S-ha,urmi maine kya kiya??He looked at her in a very flirtous way which made urmi smile.😳
Z-ha urmi,kya hua??
U-umm....kuch nahi,kuch khaas nahi.sandeepji chale.
Sandeep smiled....ha chalo.πŸ˜‰
U-bye zoya....aakar milti ho.
Z-ok,bye urmi...all the best.They smiled and urmi-sandeep left.


Durning the journey,urmi asked sandeep;
U-aap hase kyun the?
S-main ....kab?
U-jab zoya ne wo baat kahi?
S-acha tab!!!!!!!!wo to aise hi
U-aise hi??kya matlab?
S-are urmi,tumhare bachpane par has raha tha.πŸ˜ƒ
U(angry)-bachpane??kya matlab??😑
S-kuch nahi.waise ek baat batao tumne zoya ko bataya kyun nahi??
U-kya?
S-ki tumhe meri wajah se late kyun hua??😳
Urmi was shocked.She didnt reply.Sandeep looked back and smiled.😳
U-main..wo...college aa gaya.
They got down and urmi said;
U-chale.
S-pehle mere sawal ka jawab do!!!!tumne zoya ko kyun nahin bataya.
Urmi couldnt understand why was sandeep making her feel so uncomfortable to answer any questions,or to even look at him.😳
She said looking down......kya batati.She smiled and sandeep smiled too.😳
S-yehi ki.........They looked at each other.Urmi was blushing.😳
S-yehi ki....main late aaya tha.πŸ˜‰
U-ji??
S-ha,maine tumhe kal kaha tha ki main 8:30 baje aaonga,lekin main 8:40 ko aaya na.πŸ˜‰
Urmi was relieved at the same time confused.Sandeep smiled and said,chale..He went inside the college and urmi smiled at sandeep's mischief.😳


They went inside and urmi got the award.The jury asked her,;
J-miss urmi mehta,ye aapke saath kaun hain??
Urmi looked at sandeep (who was standing beside her)and didnt know what answer to give.
U-ye mere.........mere dost hain.mere bachpan ke saathi hain.inhone mera har kadam pe saath diya hain.mera hi nahin,mere poore mohalle ka.ye ek bade hi ache insaan hain.inka mann ganga nadi ki tarah pavitr hain.aaj maine agar is award ko paya hain to bhagwan,mere mummy-papa aur inke wajah se paya hain.😳😳😳


Then with a very low tone,so that no on except sandeep can listen she said.....ye meri duniya hai😳.Sandeep looked at her astonished and they stared at each other.Everyone clapped and urmi-sandeep came back to senses.Urmi looked at the audience and sandeep was looking at her.The jury asked urmi,


J-lagta hain ye aapke bahut hi karebi dost hain?
Urmi looked at sandeep and nodded in a yes.πŸ˜›
J-well,aapse milke bahut khushi hui Mr..
S-sandeep shukla,sir!!!
They shook hands and smiled.
J-well,aap bahut lucky hain Mr.shukla ki aapko urmi mehta jaisi dost mili.
Sandeep looked at her,and said..ji.😳
They left the auditorium with the award and rode back to CG.During the whole journey,sandeep-urmi didnt speak a word to each other.
Sandeep thinking abt what urmi told in the college.....and he said to himself....urmi,tum mujhse itna pyaar karti ho....main kisike liye itni ahemiyat rakhta hoon...😳😳
Urmi thinking........aap ko apni ahemiyat hi nahin pata sandeep babu....kabhi mujhse pochiye to main aapko batao ki aapki meri zindagi mein kya ahemiyat hainπŸ˜›
They reached CG and urmi got off the bike and started to go towards her house when sandeep said;


S-urmi!!!
She turned.
U-ji,sandeepji??
S-main tumse kuch kehna chahta tha!!!!!!πŸ˜‰
Urmi was happy and she thought maybe today is the day when sandeep would tell her abt his feelings.😳
U-ji,kahiye??
S-urmi...main...wo..Suddenly,someone screamed from behind......urmi.
Urmi turned and saw the whole of colonel gunj coming towards her.
Sandeep-urmi looked each other.
Everyone congratulated urmi and took her inside.Pammi said:
P-are isi khushi ke mauke par aaj raat kuch hungama-shangama ho jaaye.πŸ˜›
Everyone agreed that tonight they r going to celebrate urmi's success in the mohalla.Sujata came and gave urmi a big hug.
Urmi smiled and behind sujata was sandeep looking at her.Urmi looked at him happily.They had a eye-lock scene and urmi lowered her eyes.😳😳
She looked up and saw sandeep still staring at her..
Sandeep eyes were speaking.........aaj ke is jashn mein,main tumhe apni dil ki baat kehke rahoga urmi.
Urmi responed back........main us izhaar ka intezaar karogi sandeepji............😳

hope u liked it!!!!!!!!plzzzzzz post ur comments and suggestions😊

chapter 4 contd new part(II)

preparations were being made for a grand party to celebrate the success of the "shaan of CG",our dearest urmi.The whole of CG was decorated as though there was a festival coming up.All the people were very happy for urmi's success.The camera shifts to urmi's house.Here we see a drastic arguement cooking up....urmi's dress.Urmi tried over 10 sarees but couldnt find the suitable one.

Z-urmi,ye pink waali pehen le,tujhpe achi lagegi

U-maine keh diya na zoya mujhe ye pink waali bilkul pasand nahin hain.main to ye blue waali hio pehenogi

Z-tu ye blue waali nahin pehengi.

U-pehenogi

Z-nahin

U-ha

Z-nahin

U-ha.....they continue their arguement.Just then sujata entered urmi's room.

Su-tum dono kar kya rahe ho!!!!!!!party shuro hone main kuch hi time bacha hain aur yahan tum dono lad rahe ho.

Z-aunty,urmi ko samjhayi na ki ye pink saree pehen le.

U-nahin mummy mujhe ye saree bilkul nahin achi lagti hain.main to ye blue waali hi pehenogi

Z-nahin

U-ha

Z-nahin

U-ha

Su-chup raho tum dono!!!!!!bahar sab log humhara wait kar rahe hain aur yahan ye sab ho raha hain.

Sandeep entered the site that time.

S-aunty wo...He looked at urmi and remebered all the incidents what happened in the morning.They looked at each other and went into their dreamland while sujata was trying to explain to zoya.They came back to earth when sujata said:

Su-ha,sandeep kya baat hain?

S-aunty wo bahar phool waale aaye hain.

Su-are ha.dekha urmi teri chinta mein,main apna kaam bhool hi gayi.

S-kya hua aunty??

Su-sandeep,party shuro hone main aadha ghanta hi hain aur urmi ko samjh nahin aa raha ki woh kya pehne.

Sandeep looked at her and smiled.

S-acha aunty,main chalta hoon

Su-are sandeep ek minute,tu urmi ki help kar dena

Sandeep,urmi and zoya were shocked.Zoya started to laugh

S-aunty main?

Su-ha waise bhi teri choice kafi achi hoti hain.

U-mummy main khud kar longi(though she wanted him to stay)Sandeep had a satisfied look that for one time urmi didnt say a "yes"

Su-sandeep plzz urmi ki help kar dena..mujhe bahut kaam hain

She left.

U-mummy ek min..

Z-urmi main bhi chalti hoon..ammi mujhe bula rahi thi...mujhe bhi to dair ho rahi hain..She also left

U-zoya sun to..

Sandeep came closer to her and said:

S(pointing towards the bed)-to ye sari sareeyan hain?

U-ji

S-to problem kya hain?

U-wo zoya chahti thi ki main pink waali pehno lekin mujhe wo bilkul pasand nahin hain

S-to tumhe kaun si pasand hain?

U-ye pink waali

Sandeep felt really uncomfortable.Urmi saw the look on sandeeps face and understood everything

U-main ye pink waali pehen long..aap chinta mat kijiye..main change karke aati hoon

She was abt to leave the room when sandeep said:

S-urmi......

She turned and was waiting for sandeep to say something.She went towards him

U-ji sandeep babu?

S-main ek baat kaho tum bura to nahin manogi?

U-main aapki koi bhi baat ka bura kabhi nahi maan sakti..kahiye

Sandeep smiled.

S-umm..tum ye orange saree kyun nahin pehen leti

Urmi was shocked that for once sandeep was telling his choice for her to wear.

U-ji?

S-ha,wo..tum isme achi lagti ho

Urmi smiled.

U-theek hain main ye hi pehenogi

She left happily when suddenly she went back to sandeep and said:

U-sandeep babu,ab main aap se ek baat kaho?

S-ha kaho

U-aap jab apni dil ki baat aise kehte hain na to acha lagta hain.is aadat ko chodiyega nahin.She left

Sandeep smiled and started thinking.....main use kaise kaho ki main use pyaar karte hoon..main abhi kaho ki baad main...mujhe lagta hain ki abhi batana theek hoga kyunki sab log bahar hain.....he was pacing up and down..and urmi was coming inside.Sandeep looked at her and couldnt take his eyes off her.Urmi didnt realise that sandeep was still in the room as she was adjusting her pallu.Sandeep was standing like a statue not even blinking.

Urmi also came in the room and dashed with him.Sandeep came back to earth.

U-are sandeep babu aap abhi tak yahi haoin

S-urmi tum...

U-main?

S-tum bahut achi lag rahi ho.

Urmi blushed

U-thank u.

She went to the mirror and started wearing her earrings.Sandeep stood behind her and looked at her through thr mirror.Urmi felt a bit shy as sandeep was looking at her.

She thought....aaj sandeep babu ko kya ho gaya hain..bade ajeeb tarah se behave kar rahe hain

She took her necklace but it was not tieing properly.

U-uff..ye necklace ko kya ho gaya hain

Sandeep came to her and touched her hand and helped her out.The moment he touched her hand urmi closed her eyes.

S-ho gaya.urmi opened her eyes and turned.She coulndt face him and ran from their when:

S-urmi..

She stopped.Her heartbeat racing very fast.She was scared to even turn back as she didnt know what would happen now.

Sandeep came to her and said:

S-urmi..main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon

She looked up and into his eyes.

U-kahiye sandeepji.

S-urmi main tumse...

U-kahiye..main sun rahi ho.She was very excited as she knew what he was going to say

Sandeep took her hand which made her heartbeat even more fast

S-urmi main tumse ye kehna chahta tha ki main tumse..tumse

U-tumse kya?

S-tumse...

"urmi".Zoya called her and came running to the room.Urmi felt like killing her that moment.

Z-urmi wo..She looked at urmi's expression and knew that she entered the wrong moment.

Z-wo sujata aunty tujhe.Sujata entered the room.

Su-are urmi tu..Sandeep let go her hand...kitni achi lag rahi hain.jaldi kar party shuro ho gayi hain..sandeep tu bhi chal na

Urmi and sandeep smiled and nodded

They left looking at each other...............

thats it for now guyz...will definitely continue...plzzzzz post ur comments and suggestions.sorry posted very fast..

New part begins-

Chapter 4 contd-new part(III)

Sandeep and urmi joined the party and everyone applauded for urmi.Urmi smiled at them and was very happy that the whole of CG were celebrating her success in a grand way.Everyone were enjoying the party.Urmi was talking with zoya and sandeep was chatting with sukhaji.They were busy talking but in between use to steal glances at each other.Zoya saw that urmi was looking at sandeep and just to tease her said:

Z-are wah,urmi..tu to aaj bahut achi lag rahi hain.

Urmi smiled.

Z-waise kiski pasand hain ye?

U-sandeep babu ki

Z(innocently)-acha!!!!!!!bhai wah kya pasand hain sandeep bhaijaan ki..manna padega.She started laughing.

U-zoya!!!!They both smiled.

Z-acha waise urmi ek baat bata sandeep bhaijaan tujhse kya baate kar rahe the jab main tujhe bulane aayi?

U-are zoya wo mujhse kuch kehna chahte the aur tu beech mein aa gayi.

Z(angry at herself)-are yaar maine to saare kire karai pe paani pher diya...sorry urmi.

U(smiling)are zoya koi baat nahin..waise bhi mujhe lagta hain(looking at sandeep)aaj main sun hi longi wo baat jise sunne ke liye mere kaan taras gaye hain

Z-insha-allah..

Here sukhaji though sandeep was talking to him yet his eyes were on urmi.

Suk-waise aaj urmi bahut hi soni lag rahi hain...hain na sandeep!!!

S(looking at urmi and didnt know what he was saying)-ha..bahut achi lag rahi hain..Sukhaji smiled

S-ji...kya kaha apne??

Suk-kuch nahin

Zoya and sukhaji understood that urmi and sandeep wanted to talk to each other.So they made an excuse..

Suk-are urmi ,zoya..ek minute zara idhaar aana.

U and Z-ji

Suk-urmi tujhe party ka decoration kaisa laga??

U(smiled)-bahut acha hain uncle.......lekin iski kya zarorat thi...aap logon ne khamakha takleef uthayi..

Suk-lo ji..isme takleef ki kya baat thi..jisne decoration ki hain uska to ye farz banta hain..

U-jisne??matlab ye sab ek hi insaan ne kiya hain

Suk-ha

Z-aur urmi to jaana nahin chahegi wo insaan kaun hain?

U-ha zaroor..main to use thanks kehna chahogi...kaun hain wo zoya..bata na??

Z-sandeep bhaijaan...

Urmi was shocked and looked at sandeep.They looked at each other.Just to leave them alone,sukhaji said:

Suk-umm..zoya puttar zara mere naal chal...dekhte hain pammi abhi tak taiyaar kyun nahin hui.They left

U-sandeepji aapne ye sab mere liye kiya??

S-urmi ye kaisa sawaal hua...aur kiske liye

Urmi smiled and said....thank u so much..bahut sundar hain...thank u

S-isme thanks kehne waali kya baat hain...tumne suna nahin sukha bhaisahab ne kya kaha..ye to mera farz tha

Urmi looked at him..

Sandeep thinking........are sandeep urmi se keh de.....phir mauka nahin milega...keh na

S-urmi main..

U-ji..

"urmi zara sun to"sujata called her

U(upset)-ji mummy..ayi...She left looking at sandeep.

Sukhaji and sujata were standing next to each other..

Su-urmi zoya tujhe bula rahi thi...

U-kaha?

Su-apne ghar..

U-acha mummy..main jaati hoon..

Suk-sandeep zara mehmano ke liye kuch peene waaste le aa....urmi puttar ke ghar pe hoga

S-ji abhi laya..

After urmi and sandeep left..zoya came to sukhaji and they shook hands..It was their plan so that urmi and sandeep could meet each other in soliltude

Urmi went inside first and called zoya...zoya.That moment itself the lights went off.Sandeep entered the room and saw someone lighting the candle.

S-kaun hain?

Urmi looked up and with the candle went towards sandeep

U-are sandeep babu..aap yahan kya kar rahe hain?

S-wo sukha bhaisahab ne mujhe mehmano ke liye kuch drinks laane ko kaha tha.

U-drinks??yaha kaha hain wo to unhi ke ghar par hain

Sandeep was shocked and didnt understand then why did sukhaji send him here.

S-waise tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

U-mummy ne kaha ki zoya ne mujhe yaha bulaya hain..lekin wo to yahan nahin hain

S-zoya to party enjoy kar rahi hain..maine abhi use waha dekha hain

After a few mins they understood that sukhaji and zoya had made up all this.They looked at each other and smiled.

Sandeep thought this is the rite opportunity to tell urmi abt his feelings..He went towards the door and closed it.Urmi got tensed as to why was he closing the door.

U-sandeepji..aap...ne...darwaza band kyun...kiya

Sandeep went near her..With each step what sandeep took towards her she took a step back.Urmi was very very nervous and sandeep was smiling looking at her face.

U-sandeepji..aap.....he didnt say anything..

Urmi's back hit the wall and sandeep came close to her..

S-urmi main tumhe thanks kehna chahta tha..

Urmi was surprised..

U-thanks kis liye?

S-isliye kyunki tumne meri pasand ki saree pehni

U-ji?

Sandeep went closer to her.

U-sandeepji..ye..kya..kar..rahe hain aap?

S-main tumhe waise hi thanks kehna chahta hoon jaise tumne kaha tha

Urmi remembered the moment when she had kissed him on his cheeks.

Urmi went red and her heartbeat was beating very fast.

U-sandeepji..main..aap..

Sandeep went close to her.Urmi closed her eyes.

He kissed her gently on her cheeks.The moment he kissed her the lights went on.

Urmi had her eyes closed.

She opened them slowly and saw sandeep staring at her.She blushed and wanted to go from there..but sandeep caught her hand.

S-meri baat abhi puri nahin hui hain,urmi

U-sandeepji...mujhe..plzz...jaane..dijiye...sab..log..humhe. .dhoond..rahe..honge.Urmi felt strange..all her life she wanted sandeep to tell her abt his feelings and now when he was she wanted to go away.

S-tumne to saari zindagi is pal ka intezaar kiya hain na urmi jab main tumhe apni dil ki baat bataonga..to aaj dur kyun bhaag rahi hoon?

U-mujhe...kya..pata..tha..ki...aap..is..tarah..kahege...mujh e...ched...ke.She felt very shy and wanted to run from there.She tried to remove her wrist from sandeep's hand but sandeep didnt let go.......

kya sandeep kahega apni dil ki baat?????/wait for the next part...........hope u liked this one..plzz post ur comments and suggestion........

The Confession:

Chapter 4 contd(III..contd)...a suggestion imagine each and every scene of this part:

Urmi tried very hard to free herself but our hero is strong...he didnt let her go.Finally,she turned and said:

U(nervous)-kahiye...kya kehna hai aapko?

Sandeep smiled.

S-abhi kaho ya baad mein...

U-sandeepji..aap...mujhe kyun itna sata rahe hain.

Sandeep left her hand and in a serious tone said:

S-aisa kyun hain urmi ki jab tum mujhe satati ho...to theek hain...Urmi didnt let him complete

U-maine aapko kab sataya...aap hi humesha mujhe satate rehte hain...

Now both urmi-sandeep were serious and sandeep went close to her:

S-tumne mujhe kab sataya nahin hain??

U-maine kya kiya?

S-tumne...meri zindagi badal di...mujhe ek aadmi se insaan bana diya...meri zindagi mein jo andhera tha..tumne usme roshni laa di....meri zindagi ke veeraan maidaan ko phoolon se bhar diya...meri zindagi mein pyaar ki fiza la di..

Urmi looked up in his eyes...first time his eyes were saying more than his words..

S-mere jaise insaan ko jise pyaar pe vishwaas nahin tha..use pyaar ke mayne sikha diye...use ye sikha diya ki pyaar is duniya ka sabse khoobsurat ehsaas hain

Urmi had tears in her eyes..

S-mujhse pyaar karke tumne is aanat par bahut bada ahesaan...Urmi put her hand on his lips.

They looked in each other eyes and urmi's eyes were having more and more tears..

U-khabar daar sandeepji..agar aapne apne aap ko aanat kaha...aur maine aape koi ahesaan nahin kiya hain...(looking down)pyaar mein ahesaan nahin hote..

Sandeep smiled and wiped her tears with his hands.

S-aur tum kehti ho tumne kya kiya..

Urmi smiled hearing this..

U-aapne bhi mujhe sataya hain?

S-acha??kab?

U(shying)-bahut baar..aur itni dair se mujhse apni dil ki baat kahi wo kya kam sataya aapne..smiled

Sandeep smiled and came closer to her.Urmi was looking down and her heartbeat was again fast.He placed his hand on her chin and made her look up to him.Then came more closer to her...placed his hands on her cheeks.The moment he did so..urmi got shivers down her spine and she immediately closed her eyes and then opened them again..(i hope u understood the scene..just imagine varun and suhasi in it..it looks beautiful)

S-urmi main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon.

Urmi went red again and smiled.They had a eye-lock scene again for few minutes..with the background score of the u-s in the show.

Urmi came back to senses and blushed...she turned to go when sandeep said:

S-urmi..tumhe mujhse nahi kehna..

U-kya??

S-jo maine kaha..

Urmi smiled..

U-maine to aapse bahut baar kaha hain..Sandeep came to her...

S-lekin theek se to nahin kaha na

U-sandeepji plzz..main..

S(flirtaous way)-tum mere dil ka haal jaan logi..aur apne dil ki baatein bataongi bhi nahin,...ye to galat hain na,urmi

Sandeep again made her look up and she said:

U-sandeepji..sab humhara intezaar kar rahe honge...

S-main tumhe jaane nahin donga..tab tak to nahin jab tak tum mujhse kehti nahin...

U-main aapse...

S-ha..

U-main aapse...pyaar karti hoon

As soon as she said,,she ran away from there..She opened the door and turned back.Sandeep was standing their smiling which made urmi blush.She ran from there...........

Here u go the confession.....hope all of u liked it especially fazila.....plzzzzzz post ur comments and suggestions!!!!!!!

Next part after the confession-Commencement of Love story:

Next day,everything was new for sandeep and urmi.Sandeep came to his balcony and smiled.He remebered what happened last night and was feeling the breeze blowing into his soul.There urmi was sitting on the swing in her balcony and they didnt notice each other.She was in her dreams...and the wind sending shivers down her spine.Everything was perfect for both of them...they had got their love.The weather was very pleasant and the wind blew harder as if the nature was also happy for their love.The breeze blew so hard that urmi's duppatta flew away and landed on sandeep's baclony's railing.Both of them came back to senses and noticed each other's presence.They looked at each other for a long time remebering all that happened yesterday.Both of them were shy and smiled.Then urmi suddenly realised that her duppatta was on the railing....sandeep also noticed it.He looked at urmi...and urmi smiled.Sandeep also smiled looking at her.

U-sandeepji mera duppatta.

S-ha,wo...yaha kaise aa gaya.

U-pata nahin mujhe nahin pata chala

S(surprised)-urmi,tumhara duppatta hain aur tumhe nahin pata chala kab wo tumse alag hoke mere ghar mein aa gaya.

Urmi looked at him and was shy.Sandeep smiled.

U-main..wo...mera dhyaan kahi aur tha...(looking down)

S(he understood that she was thinking what he was thinking)- acha!!!aisi kaun si baat mein tum khoyi thi ki tumhe pata bhi nahin chala tumhare duppatta kab......He looked at her with a naughty expression!!!!!!

Urmi looked down and said:wo...main....kuch nahin...She smiled.

U-mera duppatta!!!!!!!

S-ohh ha....to main tumhare paas aao tumhe dene ke liye ya tum aaongi.....

Urmi didnt know what to reply.

U-main...baad...mein...aake le longi.She looked at him and smiled and went inside her house.Sandeep smiled.

Sujata and rasiklal noticed a change in urmi's behaviour these days.She use to be very happy.

Su-pata nahin aaj kal urmi ko kya ho gaya...bahut khush rehne lagi hain

R-tum bhi na sujata...ajeeb ho...beti khush hain aur tumhe chinta ho rahi hain.

Su-phir bhi.......koi to baat hain

R-chodo bhi...hogi koi baat...agar koi serious baat hogi to waqt rehte wo humhe bata deti

Su-ha,wo to hain...

Next scene,we see urmi turning zoya and jumping up and down.......

Z-are urmi hua kya..itni khush kyun hain tu....

U-soch !!!!mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mil gayi hain

Z-kya.........matlab sandeep bhaijaan ne.......sandeep bhaijaan ne...

Urmi nodded.

Zoya screamed........yipeeeeeeeeeeeee.

U-dheere zoya.......hum tere ghar mein hain...

Z-bol na kaise hua ye sab......jaldi bata....

Urmi told her everything......and zoya was very happy for her friend.

She hugged urmi and was thinking.......Allah....aapka laakh laakh shukar hain aapne meri dua ko khobol karke meri dost ko sabse badi khushi de di....

Z-waise sandeep bhaijaan ko maan gaye kya andaaz tha izhaar ka.....akele mein chori chori...wahh

Urmi smiled and was a bit shy.

U-are shukar hain zoya unhone kaha to..kabse ye pal ka intezaar kar rahi thi...

Sandeep was walking towards her motorcycle to go somewhere when bashir chacha tells him..

B-are sandeep...ek minute!!!!!

S-ji chacha....sandeep went to him.

B-mera ek kaam kar denga sandeep...

S-ji kahiye na...

B-zaara zoya ki ammi se pochna ki wo Mrs.kapoor ka suit kaha hain...

S-umm...ji chacha...main bas sukhaji se milke jaata ho unse pochne..He left.

Here,zoya and urmi were talking abt sandeep...

Z-mujhe to yakeen nahin ho raha ki sandeep bhaijaan itne romantic ho sakte hain.Urmi smiled and blushed.

U-mujhe bhi pata nahin tha.

Zoya looked at urmi...

U-hoye hoye...zaara apna chehra to dekh...laal hue jaa raha hain..

U-zoya...She smiled.

Z-aur ab kab khila rahi hain mujhe shaadi ki mithiyaan

U-abhi kaha...abhi to humhara pyaar shuro hua hain...shaadi to baad mein....

Z-hoye hoye...

Urmi smiled.....

Z-waise sandeep bhaijaan ko zyaada mat satana ab...

U-acha tu kab se unki side leni lagi....

Zoya smiled....

Z-main bahut khush ho tere liye,meri jaan....

U-fikar mat kar tere zindagi mein bhi koi aisa aayega.

Z-kya urmi.....main to...She looked at the door and was shocked.

U-zoya kya hua....She turned and saw sandeep standing there...She was shocked....Sandeep heard everything and was smiling at urmi.Urmi really wanted to run away from there.....Zoya looked at urmi's face...and smiled......

I would continue later guyz......sorry for the delay....plzz post ur comments and suggestions!!!!

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oh perfect... thanks surbhi now ill past this url in the fan club :)))))))))))))
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yeah that would be great fazila!!!!!!!! 😊
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i aready did........go n check :)))))

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=801776&TPN=1 #13492710
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yeah i checked it,brillant post in the fanclub section.its beautiful!!!!!!! πŸ‘
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thanks.if u need to add or del anything.plz feel free :))))))))))
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sure fazila,i will definitely do some adding some time later!!!!!!!! 😊
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surbhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........awwwwwwww!!!!! !!!!!!!11 that was awwesome.......... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ .....why did she run???? let her stay there.......she always runs away.... πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ 😳 ..wahan rahti tu acha hota......nahi hehehe......very nice.. waiting for the next one......jaldiiiii likhnaaaaaaa..........the mrning the go for the award........... πŸ˜ƒ
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maine kaha tha na fazila,mere fanfic ki urmi thodi zyaada sharmili hain,and i dont think so ki even the urmi of the show would have stayed there.............hehehehehe 😳 😳 😳
i really felt that u all wouldnt like it(the end part),but i am happy that u liked it!!!!!!!i will definitely post the next part after 12th. 😊
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i know she always runs away.......thats y i didnt wanted her to run......i liked it.. waiting for the next one :))))))))))))

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