FF Dil Ki Baat - IMP Note Pg 148 - Page 60

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: if.addict

lubi lubi lubi - that's what my friends call me 😆😆😆

Tumne meri jaan leli ,
jab main read kar rahi thi na ,mujhe kuch kuch ho raha tha . 😆
i wud say best part til now . thank you, thank you very much (elvis voice)
the way he backed off himself ,and the way she cared to not make him feel guilty .
The way she hided the fact of knowing the beach.
everything was so wonderful.
and i was enjoying the cool night breeze and sounds at the shore , the waves .

everything was so perfect .
and then inthe morning she snuging him up.
awwww.. was so beautiful.

and krishna such a sweetheart i she,

hats off to you sweety
*kehan stands up wiping her tears to give lubi a big hug* 🤗 back at you

i cant say more hunn , u got me trapped with emotions, that im left with no words.
but my heart is so wanting to pour everything in words ,but troubling findingthe words.

i feel like writing the comment and it never ends. - awww you wrote a sher, thank you so much

"hasin is qadar yeh tanhai hai
paani ki har boond mein
meri pyaar ki gehrayi hai , wah wah wah wah
kaash yeh pal yunhi tham jayen aise
aur zindagi beet jaayen teri baahon mein kash aise hota
har subah yunhi kirne mere hothon se batiyayen
aur tu yunhi mujhe seene se lgaaye
kaash kabhi is pal ke naseeb mein kal na ho "
I love the sher

This is what i wanted to say for the lovely part lubi .

abhi bhi mera mann nahi bhara tareef karne se . 😆 there's more...

You have brought life to the characters through ur words , through the emotions that they depict .
absolutely stunninggggg.

A big Muaaahhhhhhhhhh for u for keeping the decency portraying the most beautiful moments and emotions in a human's life.

let me put a period to my words and feel the shore .

loved it lubi

luv
-kehan

Aww thank you so much for such lovely comments, abh meri akh bar ayi, 🤗 luv you to Lubna 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Hey Lubna gr8 part i loved it it was soooooo romantic i could just imagine everything wow...i want to give u an award for that lol i hope sumthing like that would happen in Dmg you should c if the writers could use ur ideas i loved it i dunno wat to say but please continue soon........


ur buddy
Sonia

Just for you Sonia, I'm going to write to the DMG writers today and tell them to end Armaan Ridz problems and start some romantic parts... 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti1408

Hey...it was really gr8...it was so cute..luved AR scenes....plz plz cont soon 👏

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: Robin_M

awww that was sooooo romantic! what a perfect date! they are just too cute! beautiful part lubna, i just loved it! awsome work, and continue soon!

Thanks

Originally posted by: jia..

awwwwwwwwwwww lubna
this part was soooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic. i loved it like soooooooooooo much.u really write sooooooooooo amazingly. 👏
*sigh* ARMAAN is such a gentleman and a cute one too 😳 .the scene in which he actually starts crying is like chooooooooo chweet.
soooooo now AR wont meet each other till krishna wedding.chooooo sad. but really sweet of krishna for being sooooo caring towards AR
plssssssssssss continue sooooooooooon.
Jia

Armaan is so perfect, if only he were real (sigh). Yeah neither will meet each other till Krishna's wedding, inn phal kaise guzrega, pata nahi

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Posted: 17 years ago
mouth open.....gapin.....eyes nt winkin one sec......i read te update!!wat else do i hve to say abt te update!!my actions spoke enuf!!

hehe bu i wanna say more lubna sweety....yeh kya tha.....haaaaaai something is happening with in me....omg the update was THE BEST, bole toh jakkas

romance was in the air....on second thoughts romance was within them....i want my desert hmmmm naughty armi hehe....i loved armi lie par ab usko dard hoga naa....even krishna is cho chweet

HATS OFF 2 U 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

awwwwwwwwwww lubna.....
this part was so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
i adored every part of it......jst luved it...
from 'vo wala dessert' to d 'breezing wind' to d 'morning'.....
this one was ultra romantic.... 😳
cont sooooooooooooooooooooon..........

😳 I was blushing writing half of the parts

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Natalienaz

Lubna di 🤗

such a romantic part haii 😍

i had butterflies

and it was just so romantic i cant describe anymore u r too good

Love u loadzzz
Natasha

😳 Thank you so much Naty, tried to keep it as decent as possible for all to read, especially my lil sis

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ashvez

Hey Lubna,
Brilliant part..enjoyed the romance , the ched chad of ridzi...equally enjoyed Arman's reaction.
waah!!! Armaan Khana bhi banata hai....lovely ... 😆 😆 😆

Enjoyed...thoroughly.

ash.

Armaan ki hatho ki khana kya kehna, finger licking good 😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Lubnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa diiiiiiiiiiii...im bak......wid more donuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

ok...da part was A.W.E.S.O.M.E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUS LOVED IT....I HV ALREADY READ IT 4 TYMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
👏
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lv u loadz n ur ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Marisha!!

P.S.: mi mom jus made gajjar ka halwa!! 😳 😃

hehehehehe 😆😆😆 did you tell mum to make it sugar free... I think your still on a sugar high from yesterday's donuts 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: revna

this part was awsume!!! 😳

no words to descibe it!!!

pls continue!!

Hey Revna, welcome to my FF, i think this is the first time you have commented... thank you so much for taking time out to read the FF.

Lubna 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: me_coolgul69

hey lubna tht was greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttt..no......REALLLYYYYYYY GREAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT........fantastic....no..FANTABULOU S.....lol..really great part..plz conitnue soon.
luv ur ff
ishiqa

lolzzzzz 😆😆😆

Really happy you liked this part, 'Fantabulous'... like it, one of your own inventions? 😆😆😆

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