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Posted: 18 years ago
wow, it was awesome. thanx. luved it
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great
she found it out
they finally together
huh.. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
GR8 part... loved every word of your fan fiction... please continue... wish Kripa could come back from the dead...
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Posted: 18 years ago
THE PARTY ENDS…EVERYONE IS A BIT HAPPY NOW. PARI GES TO HER ROOM AND CLOSES HER DOOR. SHE TAKES KRIPA'S PHOTOS AND TELLS HER THE TRUTH

PARI : MOM I WISH AAPKO SAACH JALDI MALUM PADTHA…DAD BAHUT ACHE HAI MOM. AAPSE BAHUT PYAR KARTHEY HAI

SHE HOLD THE PICTURE AND GOES TO SLEEP

NEXT DAY MORNING ANAGAD COMES TO DADI'S HOUSE

DADI : GOOD MORNING BETA

ANAGAD : GOOD MORNING DADI…SAB KAHA HAI..

DADI : YOU MEAN HIMHARI BETO AUR USKA..GANG

ANAGAD SMILES AND NODS

DADI : WHO SO RAHI HOGI….CHALO MAIN UTATHI HU

ANAGAD AND DADI GO TO PARI'S ROOM

ANAGAD SEES THAT SHE HOLD KRIPA'S PHOTOS AND SLEEP

DADI : PARI UTO

PARI : KYA DADI SONE DO NA….PLZ…MERA SAPNA TOOT RAHA HAI

DADI : GOD YEH LADKI KITHNEY SAPNE DEKHTI HAI

ANAGAD IS LAUGHING

DADI : PARI UTOOOO

PARI : KYA DADI…MERE SAPNE MEIN BRAD AAYA THA

DADI : PHIR SE…

PARI : JABI MEIN USKE PASS JATHI HU AAP MUJE UTA DETHI HAI

ANAGAD IS CONFUSED

PARI : GOOD MORNING DAD

ANAGAD : YEH BRAD KAUN HAI

DADI : WHO ATHA HAI TV PE….NAAM KYA HAI BRAD PIT YA PUT

PARI : BRAD PITT DADI

DADI : HA WOOO..YEH USKE SAPNE DEKHTI HAI

PARI : NAHI DADI WOO MERA SAPNE DEKHTHA HAI

ANAGAD IS LAUGHING AND ENJOYS THE WHOLE CONVERSATION

PARI : SO AD AAP YAHA KAISE….

ANAGAD : AISE HI APNE BETI SE MILNE AAYA THA…

PARI HUGS ANAGAD

PARI : DADI SAB KAHA HAI

DADI : WHO BHI TUMHARE TARAH SAPNE DEKH RAHE HONGE

PARI : OK MEIN UTATHO HU

PARI GOES AND WAKE UP EVERYONE AND THEY ALL END UP IN RAHUL AND ROHIT'S ROOM

RAHUL : PARI TUM BAHUT KUSH LAG RAHI HO

ROHIT : AB THO USKE DAD MIL GAYE….HUM YAAD BHI NAHI RAHENGE….GUYS HIM US CHALLE GATHEY HAI

PARI : SHUT UP GUYS….I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH

THEY ALL JUMP ON BED FOR A GROUP HUG…JUST THEN ANAGAD COMES IN

EVERYONE : GOOD MORNING UNCLE

ANAGAD : YOU GUYS ARE NOT READY YET….GO GET READY I AM GOING TO TAKE YOU ALL YOU GOA TODAY

PARI : WOW …..I WILL BE READY IN 10 MINS DAD

THEY ALL GET READY…

ANAGAD DRIVES ALL THE KIDS IN HIS SUV

PARI SIT IN THE FRONT WITH ANAGAD AND WHENEVER ANAGAD LOOKS AT HER SHE REMINDS HIM OF KRIPA

PARI : DAD AAPKE PAAS APKA ALBUMS NAHI HAI??

ANAGAD IS SURPRISED.

ANAGAD : CAR MEIN NAHI….MEIN WHO GANNE SUNTHA NAHI HU…TUMHE KAISE PATHA

PARI : MAMMA NE BATHAYA

ANAGAD IS SCHOCKED NOW

ANAGAD: MAMMA NE???

PARI : MAMMA MERE LIYE LETTERS CHOD KE GAYI AUR US MEIN APKI SAB BAATEIN BATHAYI HAI

ANAGAD IS SURPRISED AND SHOCKED. HE HAS NO IDEA HOW TO REACT

NEHA : PARI…WOW THIS PLAVE IS COOL YAAR

PARI : YEA I KNOW….AGAR BRAD HOTA THO MERI LIFE BAN JATHI

SIMI AND NEHA : CAN WE SHARE YAAR??

PARI : SURE….IF YOU CAN PAY

ANAGAD IS LAUGHING AT THIS CONVERSATION

ROHIT : UNCLE UEH LADKIYA PAGAL HAI….WOH BRAD MILEGA BHI NAHI

PARI IN FLIMY STYLE : AGAR PYAR SACHA HO THO MILGE…AUR USNE APNI WIFE KO BHI CHOD DIYA MERE TIYE

RAHUL : CORRECTION HONEY….USNE NAHI…USKE WIFE NE USSE CHOD DIYE

PARI : SAME THING

ANAGAD : AB HO GAYI AAPKI IMPORTANT CONVERSATION…LETS GO AND EAT

THEY STOP AT A DHABA

ANAGAD ORDER FOOD FOR EVERYONE

PARI EATS ONE BITE AND LOOKS AT ANAGAD WITH TEARS IN HER EYES

ANAGAD GET SCARED : KYA HUA

SIMI : UNCLE….WOH SPICY FOOD NAHI KHATHI

PARI STARTS SHOUTING

ANAGAD : OH GOD WAIT DRINK WATER AND HE MAKES HER DRINK WATER….

PARI : DAD…..YEH THO

ANAGAD : SORRY BETA WANT ICE CREAM

PARI NODS HER HEAD

THEY FIND A CHINESE PLACE ON THE WAY AND PARI EATS THERE

THEY GO TO A RESORT IN GOA

PARI SIMI NEHA IN ONE ROOM, RAUL ROHIT IN ONE AND ANAGAD IN ANOTHER

PARI GOES TO ANAGAD AT NIGHT

ANAGAD : KYA HUA??

PARI : DAD NEEDH NAHI AA RAHI

ANAGAD : COME HERE AND HE MOVES OVER ON HIS BED

PARI GOES AND SITS NEXT TO HIM

PARI : DAD I WANNA TALK TO DADI

SHE CALLS DADI

DADI : PARI KAISI HO??? TUM KHANA KAYA??

PARI : HA DADI..MAINE CHINESE KAYA….DADI NEED NAHI AARAHI

DADI : SHOWER LEKE SO JAO…AA JAYEGI

PARI : OK DADI LOVE YOU BYE

DADI : BYE BACHA

ANAGAD : HO GAYI DADI SE BAATEIN

PARI : HA DAD…DAD DID YOU EVER MISS ME OR THINK ABOUT ME??

ANAGAD : BETA I SEARCHED FOR YOU FOR MANY YEARS. DADI AND PRITHVI DIDN'T LET ME SEE YOU

PARI : BECAUSE THEY WANTED TO PROTECT ME DAD

ANAGAD : I UNDERSTAND BETA

PARI : DAD KAL HUM BEACH PE CHALLE….I LOVE BEACH

ANAGAD REMEMERS HIS BEACH DAYS WITH KRIPA

PARI : DAD KAHA KHO GAYE AAP

ANAGAD : KAHI NAHI BETA….

PARI : OK DAD MAIN JA RAHI HU….BRAD MERA INTEZAR KAR RAHA HO GA

ANAGAD : BRAD KO HEY KEHNA

PARI : SMILES ….SURE DAD


NEXT DAY EVERYONE GETTING READY FOR BEACH

PARI SIMI AND NEHA ARE IN TWO PIECE BATHING SUITS

ANAGAD SHOCKED

ANAGAD : TUM THEENO KI KAPDEY KAHA HAI??

PARI : DAD ESSE BAITHING SUIT KEHTHEY HAI

ANAGAD : MUJHE PATA HAI….MAIN UTHNA OLD NAHI HU…PAR TUM THEENO KYU PEHNE HO

PARI : KYUKI HUM BEACH PE HAI DAD

ANAGAD : BETA YEH AMERICA NAHI HAI….YEH INDIA HAI….

ROHIT : UNCLE YEH THO BAHUT SARA CLOTHING HAI…IN LOGON KI BATHING SUITS DEKHE NAHI AI APP

ANAGAD : INSE BHI KAM KAPDEY….CHALO NO ONE IS GOING OUT LOOKING LIKE THAT GO CHANGE INTO ONCE PIECE BATHING SUIT

THREE OF THEM ARE IRRITATED

PARI : HOW MUCH THESE GUYS CAN COME IN THEIR UNDER WEARS

ANAGAD : PARI…..PLZ BETA….CHANGE KARO

PARI : GOD DAD….YOU ARE SO OLD FASHION

ANAGAD WAS SURPRISED TO HEAR THIS. NONONE EVER TOLD THIS TO HIM.

PARI AND THE OTHER COME BACK WITH A ONE PIECE BATHING SUIT

PARI : NOW CAN WE GO

ANAGAD : MUCH BETTER

THEY HAVE FUN ON THE BEACH. THEY PLAY BEACH VOLLEYBALL


NEXT DAY THEY ALL RETURN TO MUMBAI. ANAGAD DROPS THE KDIS AT DADI'S

DADI : KAISA THA TUMHARA TRIP

PARI : WOW DADI…LEKIN DAD NE HUME TWO PIECE BATHING SUIT PEHANNE NAHI DIYA

DADI : SMILES…..ARRE ANAGAD BETA…TUM SU DAR GAYE

ANAGAD : DADIIIIIII

DADI SMILES

ANAGAD : OK DADI…MAIN CHALTHA HU…KAL MILUMGA…HEY GUYS DO YOU WANNA COME AND SEE THE STUDIO TOMORROW. I WIL SEND THE CAR FOR YOU

EVERYONE : YEAAAAA

ANAGAD SAYS BYE AND LEAVES


PARI'S ROOM

ROHIT : HEY MAINE INTERNET PE EK AWESOME PUB AND DISCO DEKHA HAI MUMBAI MAIN…IT OPEN AT 9 PM.

SIMI : ARE YOU GONE CRAZY….DADI WILL NEVER LET US GO

ROHIT : TUMHE KYA LAGTHA HAI…HUM DADI KO LETTER LIKHKEY JAYENGE…DUMBO

PARI : WOW GUYS I AM UP FOR IT LETS GO

NEHA : ITS RISKY GUYS

RAHUL : WHAT RISKY MAN….DADI SLEEPS BY 8 PM…..WE CAN LEAVE AT 8.30…ROHIT CAN DRIVE….

PARI : OK GUYS SO WE WILL GO TOMORROW NIGHT


NEXT DAY THEY GO TO THE STUDIO

ANAGAD : HEY GUYS….HAVING FUN??

PARI : YEA DAD

ANAGAD IS REALLY HAPPY TO SEE PARI

ROHIT : UNCLE DO YOU KNOW…PARI SINGS REALLY WELL

ANAGAD : REALLY??...HOW ABOUT YOU SING SOMEHTING FOR US….GO INTO THE RECORDING ROOM

PARI GOES IN AND SINGS : ANDEKHI ANJANI KYA YEH MOHABAT HAI…….

ANAGAD IS SURPRISED, SHOCKED AND REMEMEBRS ALL HIS SINGING DAYS

PARI : KAISA THA PAPA??

ANAGAD : TUMHE YEH GANA??

PARI : MOM NE…

ANAGAD REMEMBERS THE LETTERS…

THEY HAVE FUN THE WHOLE DAY AND IN THE EVENING THEY GO HOME TO DADI'S.


ITS 8.30……DISCO TIME…

ROIHT GOES AND CHECKS IF DADI IS ASLEEP.

ROHIT : ALL CLEAR GUYS LEST GO…

THEY ALL DRIVE AND GO TO THE DISCO …..THEY DANCE AND HAVE FUN

IN THE MEANTIME DADI GETS UP AND SEES THAT NO ONE IN THERE IN THE ROOM. SHE GETS WORRIED AND WAITS FOR THEM.

THEY ALL RETURN AROUND 2 AM

DADI IS WAITING FOR THEM IN THE LIVING ROOM

DADI SI FURIOUS

PARI : DADI WOOO…

DADI : ITS LATE GO TO SLEEP WE WILL TALK TOMORROW

EVERYONE GOES UPSTARIS

PARI : TALK??? OH MY GOD…WHEN EVER DADI SAYS SHE NEEDS TO TALK THAT MEANS ITS SERIOUS GUYS…WE ARE DEAD TOMORROW…I THINK ALL OF US WILL BE SHIPPED TO NEW YORK IN THE NEXT FLIGHT

SIMI : YEH SAB ROHIT KA IDEA THA

ROHIT : I DIDN'T BEG YOU TO COME

NEHA : SHUT UP GUYS…THINK WHAT WE WILL SAY TOMORROW…

RAHUL : DADI KNOWS WE WENT TO THE DISCO..

PARI : LETS SEE TOMORROW GUYS


NEXT DAY MORNING

ANAGAD COMES

DADI IS ANGRY

ANAGAD : GOOD MORNING DADI….

DADI : GOOD MORNING

ANAGAD : KYA HUA…APP TENSION MEIN HO

DADI : MAIN IS LADKI KA KYA KARO

ANAGAD : KYU KYA HUA

DADI TELLS ANAGAD ABOUT LAST NIGHT

ANAGAD IS A BIT MAD BUT HE UDERSTANDS BECAUSE HE WAS LIKE THAT WHEN HE WAS YOUNG.

PARI AND EVERYONE COME DOWNSTAIRS

PARI SMILES AT ANAGAD

THEY ALL STAND IN A STRIGHT LINE FACING DADI

DADI : TUM SAB SAMAJTHEY KYA HO…THODA…FREDOM DIYA ISKA YEH MATLAB NAHI KI…RAAT DO BAJE TAK…BAHAR..

PARI : SORRY ………

DADI : TUM BAAT BHI MAT KARNA….

EVERYONE HAS THEIR HEADS DOWN WITH SAD FACES….

ANAGAD : DADI COME ON…GALTHI HO GAYI PHIR KABHI NAHI KARENGE

DADI : ANAGD LET ME DEAL WITH THIS PLZ

ANAGAD KEEPS QUITE

DADI : YOU ALL ARE GROUNDED…FOR ONE WEEK…NO TV NO GOING OUT…AND I AM GONNA TAKE OUT THE MAIDS FOR THIS WEEK. YOU ALL WILL HELP OUT AT HOME

PARI : ONE WEEK NO TV???

DADI : THANKS GOD THAT I DIDN'T MAKE IT ONE MONTH

EVERYONE NOD THEIR HEADS AND QUITELY SIT AT THE BREAKFAST TABLE

ANAGAD SEES ALL THIS AND QUITLY SIT TOO

DADI GOES UPSTARIS

PARI : OH GOD…..ONE WEEK NO TV…I AM GONNA DIE…ROHIT YEH SAB TUMHARI GALTHI HAI

ROHIT : COME ON YAAR IDEA MERA THA PAR YOU ALL CAME WITH ME

SIMI : THAT'S TRUE…HUMKO NAHI JANA THA YAAR

RAHUL : AND WHATS THIS CLEANING YAAR

NEHA : BE HAPPY THAT'S IT NOT FOR 1 MONTH GUYS

PARI : DAD AAP HELP KYU NAHI KAR RAHE THEY

ANAGAD : ETA WHO MERI BHI DADI HAI

PARI : YEA TRUE……GOD ONE WEEK

ANAGAD SMILES AND LEAVES


FOR NEXT ONE WEEK….THEY HELP OUT WITH THE HOUSE COOKING CLEANING EVERYTHING

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 too gud yaar i 'm luvin it 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow..............just awesome...........

~sweta~
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome. I loved it. Continue soon. 
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was awsome...plzz continue!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really good
😆 😆
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wowowooowowowowoowoowowowowowoowoowowoowowwowoowowowow i just love it i read the whole story today and i love it it rocks i have no words to discrib plzzzzzz continue plzzzzzzz