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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys .. Thankss For The Lovely Comments!

Recap:All the interns go to a restaurant and are eating food that Ridz doesn't exactly like.

Armaan noticed that Ridz was playing abt with the lil food that she ahd in her plate.
Armaan in his head:Basket kuch kha ri kyun nahi hai..Pata karna hoga...
He looks at Anjali and thinks..
Yehi batayegi mujhay .. and gives a cheeky smile.
Armaan:Err Anjiiii
Anjali:Yh Armaan..
Armaan:Waisay mujhay lag raha hai ke meray aur tumharey elava yeh khana koi enjoy hi nahi karaha..hai na
Atul:Main karaha hoon na
Anjali looks at Atul as if he's a looser.
Anjali:Haan Armaan..tum teekh kehrahey ho..waisey bhi Ridz never eats all this food..your lucky shes quiet.
Armaan turns to Ridz,Ridz looks at Anjali in shock and Anjali carries on eating and so do Sapna and Atul.
Armaan in his head:Oh tho basket..tumhey meri pasand ka khana nahi acha lagta..hmmm koi baat nahi..tumhey main tho pasand hoon na.
Armaan smiles when another idea comes to his mind.
He sees that Ridz is playin about eith her food..so he deliberately sneezes so loud and kindov on her so she jumps a lil bit and she accidently threw her food on her.

Sorry guys ill continue later ... Im sooooo sorrryyy .. I havtu go to someones house and im not even ready .... sorrrrrrrryyyyy
Edited by dhruvnved 4eva - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
short part but it;s ok. continue soon wth teh next part as fast as u can plzzzzzzz.

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice Amnah. You know when I read the first part I was thinking ke tumne jo likha hai wohi hone waala hai Monday ko. Hamesha aisa hi karte hain. They won't let Ridz find out the truth so easily and woh bhi so soon. Agar usse pata chal gaya hota toh we wouldn't ave seen such an awsome promo. We'd see something like Ridz sitting and crying her eyes out and Armaan comforting her or something. But instead we saw Armaan keeping Karva Chauth ka vrath for Ridz so obviously usse abhi pata nahi chala. Lekin tumne kuch lines jo likhi hain woh same hongi shayad. lol. Even the scene between Atul, Sapna, Anjali, Armaan, and Ridz. The outside the nursing home waala. Nice job. Tum characters ko kaafi hadh tak follow kar rahi ho! Continue soon!

Komz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Nice Amnah. You know when I read the first part I was thinking ke tumne jo likha hai wohi hone waala hai Monday ko. Hamesha aisa hi karte hain. They won't let Ridz find out the truth so easily and woh bhi so soon. Agar usse pata chal gaya hota toh we wouldn't ave seen such an awsome promo. We'd see something like Ridz sitting and crying her eyes out and Armaan comforting her or something. But instead we saw Armaan keeping Karva Chauth ka vrath for Ridz so obviously usse abhi pata nahi chala. Lekin tumne kuch lines jo likhi hain woh same hongi shayad. lol. Even the scene between Atul, Sapna, Anjali, Armaan, and Ridz. The outside the nursing home waala. Nice job. Tum characters ko kaafi hadh tak follow kar rahi ho! Continue soon!

Komz



Exactly .. Thats what I thought when I was writing it!
Hope you like it even more 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heya dhrunavdvedforeva (well , it took me quite sum to understand wat u meant by dat promo - the breaking up of the words was quite tough 😆 😆 )
ur ff rocks .. do continue soon !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys .. Thankyou for all your comments..please tell me if I should improve anything and lrl_fan14 I understand looll!

Part 4

Recap:Ridz doesn't like the food..Armaan spills water over himself and also gets Ridzi's clothes dirty.

Armaan:I'm so sorry basket..sorry
ridz:It's okay Armaan..main washroom se aati hoon..ek second.
Armaan smiling to himself starts to think of something else..aab main kaisey aaon tumharey paas basket...hmm
He then see's Atul and gives a goofy smile.
Armaan leans over and pretends he's getting something..but then he gets Atul's hand and drops water all over him..
Armaan:CHAMPPPP..DEKH NAHI SAKTEY..MERI NAI SHIRT KHARAB KARDI TUMNEY.. say Armaan slightly over acting.
Atul:Chill Armaan..pani tha..dry hojaye ga..
Anjali:yh Armaan..
Armaan:Anji tum bhi inki side pey..
Anjali:No Armaan..but
Armaan:wteva
Sapna:Armaan stop being a drama queen..pani tha..sook jaye ga..
Armaan:HUHHH..main washroom jahraha hoon..
Armaan gets up and smiles and starts walking to the washroom..he turns to see if the interns are looking when Ridz is coming from the other side..
They both are walking but havent notcied each other at all..They carry on walking and then they bump into each other..Armaan is hardly moved by Ridz but Ridz falls back after hitting Armaans strong, firm chest.
But our hero Armaan holds Ridz before she falls.
He just gets lost in her eyes..this time..even Ridz is feeling something she has never felt before..she felt this feeling of being safe in Armaans arms.
Ridz then suddenly clicks out and walks over to the table..Armaan just looks at her go lovingly..and decides to walk back at the table..

When Armaan sits down..he actually notices that he threw alot of water on his shirt and is feeling uncomfortable..but ignores it..
So everyone is done eating but everyones just chatting about how hectic the day was..Then suddenly Anjali and Atul get a page .. saying they are on night duty today.
Anjali:Ridz Tum aaj ghar chali jaana I have night duty to do..
Atul:Really..same here..chalo saath chaltey hai..
Anjali:Erghh
Anjali and Atul walk off..Anjali trying her best to avoid Atul.
Sapna:Riddhima..tum aaj meray saath aajana..main tumhey ghar chor dongi..Okay.
Ridz:Ermm..Okay if you dont mind.
Sapna:Okay then
Armaan in his head:Noo pleaseeeeeeeee..let her go with me..aaj pehley se jo socha tha woh nahi hus..mera plan ulta hogaya..it was a sweet turn but phir bhi...Armaan had a puppy face on and..
Sapna:kya hua Armaan? tumhari chakal aisi kyun ban gayi hai?
Armaan:Ermm kuch nahi waisey hi..erm Riddhima ko main chor dehta hoon..mera ghar basket ke ghar se thora sa hi aagey hai..tum waisey hi taqleef karo gi..Ill leave her dont worry..thats okay with both of you?..
Ridz:er..
Armaan:Okay thats fine..done..
Ridz:lekin Armaan..
Armaan:Chaloooo na

They go outside and Sapna's auto wala comes..she says bye and gets in and goes home..
Armaan and Ridz walk towards his car..both feeling good but awkward..

Guys im going to leave it here..hope it wasnt too boring..ill try and make tumoros update better..please tell me if yu guys need more detail..longer updates..anything else..feel free..and hope yu all comment=] and please forgive mistakes!
Edited by dhruvnved 4eva - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice part....write more longer update next time hope u don't mind as i'm sayin this nyways i ll wait to read more from u soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part👏👏. next time plz make it a bit longer and put in sum romantic scences of AR. anyway this part was gud. keep it up😳

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah .. dis part was rocking ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
cute update but plzzzzzzz n on offence but next time can u plzzzzzzzzz write longer updates 😳

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