RN lovestory in different style: P:8(pg5)

Introduction:

      This is not a Raj-Naina love story nor this one is Raj-Nandini love story but I am adding a new character Nisha sahay and this fanfic will be really different from other ones.

I hope you all will like this.

Scene @ KANCHANJANGHA MILITARY ACADEMY

Voice over: KMA is the one of the best military academy in the India. Nobody can get admission here easily but once they get in, they have to do their best to become soldiers. Six years ago, there was this batch of seven cadets who were mischievous, hard-working and determined to become the best soldiers this country had seen. They had everything but the one thing was lacking from their lives was luck and indeed all of them became best soldiers to serve the country but their lives became hell in order to fulfill their duty.

Captain Navin singh ahaluwalia- The best cadet of year 2001. Two successful mission were on his career but the third one took his life away and so did his prestige and everything he earned in those two years. In 2003, on his mission at his own academy KMA, he was accused of stealing nuclear triggers and selling to enemies for his own profit. He declared as traitor and the case was going on but he was shot when he was being transferred to other jail.

Captain Rajveer singh shekawat- Best friend of Naveen. He never gave up hope about proving navin innocent in last four years and he still is fighting for him. The only thing he wants to know more than anything is that who killed his best friend naveen and why?

Captain Aditya sahani- He is also Raj & Naveen's friend and is determined to help Raj in any way to find culprits who framed Naveen. He is also unhappy about how his life tuned out without his friends and his love.

Captain Abhimanu rauy chauhan: He is prince of badhmair and never cared about being prince. He is competitive by nature but he never ever did that in cost of loosing his friends. He loves his wife Nandini who he fell for in his academy days and they got married but He also misses his friends especially what happened to Naveen killed him inside but for him, there is still hope that he will help his friends to prove Naveen innocent in anyway.

Dr. Captain shalini singhal- She is very cheerful person and she was also one of friends of 2001 group. She believes that one day they will able to find Naveen's innocence and she works at KMA after Naveen's case as doctor in one hope that she somehow will able to help his friends.

Captain Nandini rauy chauhan: she is a lawyer who tried very hard to win Naveen's case but unfortunately it was the first case in her career that she had lost but she still believes that once day she and her husband and her friends give back the honor that Naveen lost.

Captain Nisha sahay: She is one of the ties that bound all these friends in many ways. She was Naveen's best friend since childhood and one of the most mischievous cadets in her batch. She always fights for the truth no matter what.

Other characters include: Brigadier chandok, Major Niar, suriji, lolitaji and more as the story goes along.

Now let's see the batch of cadets. In this story, instead of six there are eight cadets and each is unique in their own ways.

Cadet amardeep huda: There are only two missions in his life: One is to fulfill his bet with his mother and the other one is to flirt but he is the person who can do anything for his friends. The only four girls who he doesn't flirt with are Naina, Pooja, Riya & Alya. 

Cadet Aalekh sharma: He is a very quiet but wise person. He has his own tapori style language. His parents are rich but he never likes to spend their money although they sent him to the academy in hope that he will change his attitude once he knows about how tough the life of military is. He can do anything for his friends and his seven friends are his life.

Cadet Ali Beigh: He is here to become soldier only but he never bends his principals which is his strong point, but just like aalekh and huda he can do anything for his friends even if it is about bending his own principals. 

Cadet Kunal Kapoor: He is here on one purpose only and it is about to prove something that all his friends once started. To him, his love and his friends are everything.

Cadet riya sinha: She is here because of her friends and to become something that her rich parents think she never can be.

Cadet pooja ghai: She is very cheerful and full of life person and always share problems of her friends to comfort them in anyway possible.

Cadet alya mehra: She is reserved person for outsiders but her friends know that her heart is made of gold and she always stands up for truth no matter what.

Cadet Naina singh: She has seen so much in her life that she forgot to be the person who she was once. She is Naveen's sister and after his death, she broke down a lot. Her father died because of cancer and her mother was only support she had left. She lost her courage but then she decided to come to KMA to bring back the honor of her family because of her friends.  

All eight cadets were friends since their school years as they lived in same hostel in goa and went to the same school. They all knew Naina's brother Naveen as he was elder brother for all of them just like Naina. After Naveen's death, they all swore that they proved him innocent and decided to become good soldiers as once Naveen wanted them to be. That were only two reasons they step inside KMA even though they hated that place very much.

Edited by nisha1984 - 16 years ago

Is this Raj-Nisha love story? as it says in the title RN

Arre end mein Raj-Naina ka hoga ya nahi.Bol na. Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

sounds interesting pl continue

awesome yaar...plz continue soonnnn cant wait to read more....your ff's are really awesome... 😉

nice intro please continue soon........

PART 1 

 

In Brigadier Chandok's office, Major Niar and Brigadier chandok were discussing about newcomers/first year students.

BC – Major Niar, did every single first year cadet had been arrived?

MC- No sir, as usual there are some latecomers. Eight cadets are not here yet and four of them are girls. 

BC(sternly)- well I know your opinion about girl cadets but to remind you this time, captain Nandini had been appointed to observe the behavior of academy and faculty staff towards girl cadets and also Dr. Mishra had been appointed as psychologist so you better keep your record clean about this because I don't want any complain in ministry about KMA. Is that understood?

MC- Yes, sir. But what about those eight cadets?

BC- They still have time until 6:00 pm today and if they come later than that then they will be punished.

MC- Ok sir, I will tell orderly to keep an eye for them, as we will be not here after 4:00 pm.

BC- you do that.

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On the other hand, there was a faculty gathering in the mess.

Abhi: suna aap logo ne, BC ne order diya hai ki agar naye batch ke cadets late aaye to unhe pehle hi din punish kiya jayega. Pata nahi kab sudhrega?

 

Shalini: You are absolutely right abhi. Hamare BC & MC ko discipline ki dozes lene ki kuch jyada hi aadat hai. bechare first year ke cadet pata nahi kya hoga aage?........

 

Nandini: Tum log na hamesha unki burai karte rehte ho jab ki unki ye dedication ki wajah se hi to hum log aaj is mukam par hai.

 

Aditya:Lekin Nandini, if we are going to be tough for them since beginning then it wouldn't be appropriate as they would never open up to us in the future for any further problem 

Rajveer:  I think adi is right but so does nandini @ some point ki BC ki dedication ki wajah se hi hum itne achche soldiers hai aaj….

Suriji- Aap sab jab cadets the tab se hi dedicated the aur shararati bhi pata hai naveen……………………… kaash aaj yahan pe wo bhi hota hum sab ke beech……

Dr. Ritu Mishra and Lolitajee didn't like his mention at the time while others were sad.

Lolitajee- Suriji, aap kyon beeti baatein soch rahe hai. Waise bhi jo hona tha wo ho gaya…..

Ritu- I know that he was your friend but he was a traitor and he deceived the country.

Nobody liked the comment that ritu made about naveen but there was nothing else they could have said as no one can change other's opinion.

Raj- I think it will be better if we don't talk about this in future ritu.

(Ritu is Raj's fianc, while Abhimanu and Nandini are married and Shalini and Aditya well nobody yet figured out their relationship. We will see some developments along the story go ahead)

Ritu nodded and Raj left from there and so does aditya & abhimanu.

Nandini- Ritu, you shouldn't have said that. It just opened up Raj's wounds.

Ritu- But why doesn't he forget about them, after all he is engaged to me now.

Shalini- You have to give him sometime, ritu. He will forget everything but for Naveen, none of us will ever able to do that as we never believe about those accusations.

Ritu(softly)- I know and I don't either.

Saying that, Ritu left the mess with a sad face but inside her head, she was happy as she once again put some oil into existing fire that had been going on in Raj's heart so she can be successful by going closer to Raj.

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At the ambala bus stop around 4:00 pm, eight young cadets were standing with luggage. They all were staring in the direction of KMA.

Huda- Oy, soch kya rahe ho sab? Jana nahi kya academy main?

Riya- I am ready to go but we have to stand together.

Naina- Ek ajeeb si feeling ho rahi hai….. ye wohi KMA hai jahan pe Naveen bhaiya ke saath …………

Aalekh put his hand on Naina's shoulder.

Aalekh- Ye wahi KMA hai jahan hum mil kar naveen bhaiya ko begunaah saabit karenge.

Kunal- Or ye wahi KMA hai jiski hum band baja denge.

Ali- And we will become the best soldiers like we promised to Naveen bhaiya.

Pooja- Oy bilkul, aisa network banayenge koi hamari dosti main virus dal hi nahi payega.

Alya- Or pehle hi din hum punishment bhi zhelenge.

Huda- Oy kya matlab hai tera?

Riya- Matlab ye ki pehle hi dair ho chuki hai ab to dair se pahunge. 

Huda- oy yaar, to kaunsa pahad toot padega, aisi baatein kar rahe hai jaise wahan hamare swagat ke liye poori army khadi hai aur hum un logo ko intezaar karwa rahe hai.

Pooja- tumhare  swagat ke liye to poori army bhi kaafi nahi hai huda…

Kunal & Naina (both together)- Aise kaise punishment denge? Pakde gaye to na………..

Everyone looked at them and their mischief faces.

No matter how heavy and problematic the situation was, Kunal knew how to lighten the mood and Naina knew how to escape from punishment as she had done those many times to escape from her parents, school teachers and of course from Navin bhaiya's training.

Around 11:00 pm, they all were @ KMA gate which was closed and there were guards around. All hide in near bushes to think how to get in. Aalekh took out academy map to find an alternative way to get in and all of them were trying to find solution to their problem.

 

Riya: are ab ander  kaise jayenge?

HUDA: wo kya hai na ki humare liye mumyji ne naya gate banwane ka order diya tha jab who ban jayega tab andar chale jayege.

Pooja: oy huda, tera signal hamesha galat connection hi kyon pakadta hai, kabhi to sahi number dial kar.

Huda: oy punjaban, teri baatein meri samaj mein bilkul nahi aati.

Ali: inka matlab hai ki aap hamesha galat comment kyon marte ho ye mazak karne ka nahi sochne ka waqt hai.

Huda: oy adi, teri samaj mein badi aati hai cell phone conversation. Kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aalekh: abhi tum log apni bakwaas bandh karo to hum andar ja sake.

Alya: kya raasta mil gaya?

Kunal: haan, academy ke pichle side pe jahan faculty quarters hai wahan par ek choti deewar hai, jahan se kood kar andar jaaya ja sakta hai.

Naina: Let's do it. 

Huda was the first to cross the wall and everyone else followed him and as huda was in bushes, he tried to come out and took help of a hand that was offered to him thinking that it was one of his friends.

Huda(came out of bushes)- Thanks dude……

Person- You are welcome cadet.

Huda looked at him and saw Captain Rajveer, and along with him Captain Aditya and Captain Abhimanu were also standing there with a smile on their faces.

Riya was coming out after Huda and she also didn't realize about captains because of dark.

Riya- Huda, kitne bewacoof hai na KMA walen. Hum yahan se andar bhi aa gaye aur in logo ko pata bhi nahi chalega.

Huda- Shut up Riya….

Pooja(who came just behind Riya)- Oy kya shut up….. Riya ki battery bilkul theek hai, is KMA walon ka pura connection hi gadbad hai.

All three captains were totally confused of what pooja was saying, but captain aditya spoke up to remind them of their presence.

Aditya- KMA walen itne bhi ullu nahi hai jitne aap samajhte hai.

Riya and pooja were both shocked along with Huda, and soon Alya, Ali, & Aalekh were there too. Naina & Kunal were still crossing the wall unaware of anything.

Abhimanu- Aap sirf itne hi hai ya aur bhi koi baki hai.

Nobody answered as they knew Kunal and Naina were coming.

Finally Kunal was in bushes and Naina was behind him.

Kunal- So Naina, ab lagta hai na ki wo sare tracking jiske liye main, bhaiya aur bhabhi tujhe khinch ke le jaya karte the wo kaam aa raha hai.

Naina(smiled)- Yeah it was fun but this is much better waise bhi rules todne ka mazaa hi kuch aur hota hai, hai na?

Rajveer- Or uski sazaa bhi bahut mazaa deti hai cadets.

Kunal & Naina looked at him and saw other two officers and their friends standing in one line.

Rajveer told them to join their friends and asked for introduction.

Everyone gave their introduction one by one, and Naina was last one.

Naina- Cadet Naina singh…

That name gave a memory to Rajveer as he heard this name before a lot from his best friend Naveen. But he dismissed that thought instantly and told every cadet to go and report back at 8:00 a.m. in the ground.

Abhimanu gave cadets some punishment and cadets were running in circles with rifles in their hands on their heads. They had to take at least 200 rounds before 10:00 a.m.

Aditya and Rajveer thought that the punishment was bit too much but they didn't say anything to their friend.

But to their surprise, all eight cadets finished it in just one hour like it was everyday exercise.

All the teachers were impressed with them but all three of them didn't know that it was just a demo of breaking one rule. The gang was here to do much more which they didn't even think of in their dreams.

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Preview: Rajveer, Abhimanu & Aditya will meet their match. Eight cadets start their pranks as usual and create chaos in the academy.

 

awesome yaar....it is much more like your other ff... 😛 😛

PART 2 

 

The gang was exhausted after the punishment given by our teachers (Now only God can save them). BC already met eight cadets and gave them a big lecture about punctuation and discipline in which none of our sweet cadet was interested. MC also gave them a look that they will never able to stay here for much longer. It was lunch time and every first year cadet headed to the mess for lunch and since today was the first day & classes weren't starting until tomorrow, all of the faculty members (minus BC and MC) decided to introduce them during the lunch.

Cadets were excited as they were meeting their teachers as well as other first year cadets.

Rajveer, Aditya, shalini, suriji, abhi, nandini & ritu were in the mess and introduced themselves to as many cadets as possible.

But our eight cadets still weren't there for lunch and all three Rajveer, Aditya and Abhimanu were thinking the same thing that where those cadets are?

Well let's see where our eight cadets were:

They weren't in the academy as nobody was interested in taking tour of KMA or meeting other cadets as they will be doing that for the rest of the semester. And they weren't eager to meet any of the teachers as they already met some of them which weren't exactly any pleasant experiences.

40 KMs from KMA, there was a beautiful Italian restaurant and cadets decided to have their lunch there quietly as they had to eat mess food from now on…………

Every one was sitting in a table and eating their food while chattering about things.

Kunal- Kal se jail jaisa khana khane ko taiyaar ho jana.

Naina- Bhaiya se suna tha ki jab tak suriji mess ke in charge hai, khana khane layak to lagta hai.

Huda- Haan, lekin koi bhi khana mummyji ke haath ke khane ke saath takkar nahi le sakta.

Ali- Sahi kaha aapne, hudabhai. Ghar ka khana ghar ka khana hota hai.

Aalekh- Ab tum log khane ki baat chodo aur socho ki karna kya hai aage.

Riya- Matlab?

Pooja- Aalekh keh raha hai ki, un missed calls ki ghanti kaise bajani hai?

Kunal- Wo bhi aur hum ko badi savadhani se saboot bhi to khojne hai.

Alya- Haan lekin karenge kaise?

Huda- Don't worry jab huda is here.

Naina- Tere paas koi plan hai kya?

Huda- Yeah hai in fact punishment ke waqt hi maine, kunal aur aalekh ne soch liya tha.

Riya- Kaisa plan?

Aalekh looked at them and told the whole plan which was shown in mute. All agreed on the plan but Ali, Naina and Alya were unsure about the whole thing although they gave in to majority of people in the group. They all headed back to the academy before someone else caught them and give them punishments.

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On the other side, lunch was over and there wasn't any sign of eight cadets.

Abhi: Kamal hai, un logo main se ek bhi yahan pe nahi aaya. Punishment ke baad to unka sab se pehla yahan hona zaahir tha. Aakhir itni exercise karne ke baad bhookh bhi nahi lagi hogi? 

Aditya: You are absolutely right abhi. They should have been here. I am surprised that they didn't come. I should say they have a lot of stamina…………….. 

Rajveer: Yes, either that or they decided not to come because……… they might not be here right now.

Aditya and Abhimanu looked at Rajveer and they all got an idea that cadets went outside of the academy on the very second day and broke another rule.

Shalini- What are you guys talking about?

Nandini & Ritu wanted to know the same thing as well as suriji.

Abhi told them briefly about those eight cadets and punishment and the fact that they weren't here for lunch today.

Everyone shook their head in agreement that cadets had been gone out without telling them. They all were amazed at these cadets as they were the first ones who broke two rules of the academy just like that in first two days.

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Lolitajee and Dr. Mishra suggested that they should look for the cadets and if they aren't in the academy then they should take some action but others were in denial as they all thought that cadets had been punished enough for today and once they were cadets too.

But Adi, Raj and Abhi went to look for them as if they hadn't then surely somebody else will inform Major Niar

Adi went to boys' hostel while shalini checked girls' hostel but none of them were there, so Raj and Abhi decided to look around academy once and as they looked in games' room; all eight of them were peacefully playing two carom sets while chattering.

Raj and Abhi both came into the room but none of the cadet noticed them as they were never existed.

Abhi- So cadets, we didn't see you for lunch today?

Every cadet stood up in attention when they heard abhi's voice and abhi told them to be at ease and continue with their games. By that time, aditya was there too.

Aalekh- Kyon sir, apun ka wahan pe aana zaroori tha kya? Koi rule thodi na tha ki zabardasti khana khana padega.

Adi- It's not that cadets. We thought after some exercise you guys surely would be hungry so you will turn up in the mess for lunch.

Huda(muttered)- Exercise ya punishment? Baat to aise kar rahe hai jaise, koi medal de diya ho?

Pooja and Riya laughed quietly at his comments as they were near him.

Kunal- I think we weren't hungry that's why we didn't come. It's as simple as that.

Raj- Is it or there was something else cadets?

Ali- Hum aap ka matlab nahi samjhe sir….

Raj- Well, you guys know what we are talking about. It's just we didn't find out when you were out of KMA but for your own shake, don't try to break any more rules.

Naina finally spoke up- Rules are meant to be broken sir.

That sentence from her gave a sudden memory to all three of them but none of them said anything.

Raj- Well, it's not true in case of military. Anyways have a good day.

They all left from there leaving cadets with their games. Cadets were once again busy in their games or it was something else they were waiting for!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

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Preview: Cadets play their first prank and some memories about faculty members' past. Ritu's another evil plan and Cadets are trying to search for clues of Naveen's innocence. Everything collides and creates big chaos.

 

hey too good

sounds interesting

pl continue soon