ff kajjal n dev after marriage part8 pg8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guyyz this is my third part do comment.
part 3

kajjal and dev both reach thier massouri banglow both come inside kajjal was starring at the banglow but dev was just satrring at kajjal when kajjal looks at him she gets shy and then dev says "kajjal madam hmara honeymoon start ho gia ha aur mujhe pura haaq hai ke main apni princess ko dekh saqqu samjhi aap". kajjal than just runs away.

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kajjal comes in her and dev's bedroom when dev also follows her but kajjal dosen't know that dev has came in.
so kajjal starts putting clothes in almira when dev comes from behind and holds her tight from her waist and says "kajjal tum itni khoobsurat kyun ho" when kajjal frees her self and runs aways but dev was clueless that why these indian girls run away when us boys wants to love them he scrathes his head and goes towards bathroom.

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dev comes out of his bathroom shirtless and at the bottom he had towel around his hips when kajjal comes from outside also with cup of tea when she sees dev shirtless she starts laughing when dev asks her to stop laughing at him he runs towards her when his towels goes down, at this time kajjal laughs loudly when dev gets the towel and runs inside the bathroom.

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In the night dev calls kajjal from his bedroom she comes and asks the matter when dev says today we will have our dinner outside she says ok.dev says "i have bought u this sari" she says "it's beautiful". dev says quikly go and wear it she goes.

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kajjal comes out wearing a bright coloured red sari and says "i'm ready dev".dev remembers his past with kajjal with same sari. he comes closer and holds her and hugs her tight and says "kajjal, tum aaj bhi uttni hi khoobsurat laag rahi hi jitni ke do saal pehle thi". kajjal breakes the hug and says "what do u mean by that" when dev smiles and says "nothing you go i'll come in a sec" she goes with a shock expression on her face. when she leaves dev thinks oh what have i done i shouldn't have said this to kajjal she knows nothing that what heppend before 2 years, as he was thinking his cell rings it was nt he pickes it up and answers nt mom says "dev beta have u reached massouri" when dev says "yes mom" and NT says "dev are u ok" when dev tells her everything that he told kajjal and NT was shocked.

Episode endss...

ok guyyzz nest part will be up soon till than take care with love..

πŸ˜› hiri πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Esha, that's a wonderful FF!!!! Luuuved the way Devu baby (Apu) failed to wake our Kajju (Sur) up, and then wnt into the kitchen, prepared tea and then came back and tied Kajju's blouse doories!!!!!!!!!!!! Haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.............iss scene se to tumne mujhe hilaa diya!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!!!! How chweeeeeeeeetttttt!!!! 😳 Pls continue. It's a pleasure to have such terrific writers like you, Kashish, maala, and Nimmoo in this forum!! 😳 Lovely! Continue soon. 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very goooooooooooooooood hira!!!!!!!]
KEEP UT THE GOOD WORK YARA πŸ‘

well done ...........dear 😳

kitty 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I think you should continue its was really good...I really like it... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great job Hiri keep it up!!! Awwwwww I just loved the way dev standing like a cute little boy i the kitchen after doing a mess!! Love him soooooo cute!!!!

Continue soon!!

πŸ˜‰ komal
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssssssss plllllllllllllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssss continue soon. This is such a lovellllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy FF!!!! I love it!!! Please please continue. πŸ˜› πŸ˜ƒ

Zareen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok gyyz please do comments your last comments gave me the strength ok here it goes.

part 2

So dev and kajjal both reach home and see amisha satnding they ask what happend and she says "nothing i just wanted to ask why are u both going to such a crap town and why both of u go somewhere nice". dev replies "amisha bhabi it's mine and kajjal's honeymoon not yours and we will decicde where we have to go and second don't u ever say that kajjal's town is crap and anyways u haven't seen it so shut your mouth and don't just blabber anything in front of anybody like me".

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amisha and karan are talking about the marriage of dev and kajjal and amisha says "karan i think u havn't got anything else to do exept for drinking" she nearly shouts, she says "karan we have to do something of dev and kajjal otherwise they will have all the property".
on which karan replies "don't think too much amisha just let them come after their honeymoon and than we can think about our steps and anyways the property at the end will be ours so don't worry" and both give eivl smiles at each other.

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kajjal and dev come to their room kajjal put the shopping bags on the bed and dev says "ok i'll go to have bath because it's really hot and tells can u please turn the AC up and goes towards the bath room. kajjal was getting all the things out from shopping bag when dev says "kajjal, can u pass me the towell please", and kajjal like a good wife does it she goes and was about to pass the towel to dev when dev grabs her in the tub and dev closes the door and we hear kajjal saying "devvvv... what r u doing" and dev says "nothing" and than ( u know what heppend the romance was there).

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in the morning kajjal and dev both come downstairs with their bags pack and take panna chahcis and nt mom's blessings and than go infront of ganpati and pray there as well for their well being. and than both of them leave and step out of the door.

episode end....

ok guyys do tell me how u likes the second part and i'm not good as kashish and priya because they are the professional writers if any mistakes i made than do forgive me ok guyyzz next part will be soon it will be dev and kajjal being in massouri till than take care with love...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx mala for appriciating my work thanx thanx alot.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey hiri, loved it!!! If only the makers had shown is all that but no! As usual naughty Dev can never get his towel πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† . Can't wait to see their mussourie HM! And the way Dev shut Ameesha's mouth. hehehehehehe πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
continue soon!!!!!
😳 Komal
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx komal

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