KITNA PYAR KARTI HOON TUMSE->FAN FIC

CHARACTER SKETCH:-

 

The story is not a story of any particular character..Its a story involving many characters....It was published in kannada magazine taranga 5 years back...i am translating it in hindi...i am converting it too( like ekta kapoor)

The story is story of sanjana ,Karan and Dhruv....

Character sketch:-

KAPOOR FAMILY:-(middle class)

1.NITIN KAPOOR:  He is small buisness man.He is sanjana's elder brother and is owner of the family..He is good at heart...But only negative point is his wife..yes he fears of his wife without whose help his buiness could not have established...

2.ARUNDHATI KAPOOR: Nitin's wife and Sanjana's Bhabhi...A bad mouthed bhabhi..(negative character) doesnt like sanjana at all and curses her.

3. LALIT KAPOOR: Nitin's younger brother unmarried and is close to sanjana and is police head.

4.Bhoomi and Saurav: Nitins and sarla's kids 7 and 5 years respectively..they love sanjana a lot..

5.SANAJANA: Sanjana is a intelligent girl who is std-12 topper and is very intelligent..Sanjans lost her parents while she was 10 and her relative always curse sanjana for being bad birthed..sanjana has been deprived of her parents love..but both brother love her lot although elder doesnt speak anything against his wife...sanjana is fond of reading novels stories etc..and is extemely beautiful traitional..

MALHOTRA PARIVAR:

1. Brigbhushan Malhotra:-A rich business tycoon and has great political links..he has earned a lot of money..and he doenst want anything else..

2.KARAN MALHOTRA:Brig's son...A big flirt in college...he doesnt has steady relationship because he doesnt believe in Love..he hates his father too because he belives his father has no time and also thinks him responsible for his mother is way from him..He too is deprived of love..His mother died when he was 13 and father loves only money. He is tall well built and handsome.All girls dream of becoming his GF in college..but he is just for fun....enjoys the money made by his father..

3.RAMOO:-A hose looker and honest worker at Malhotra and  loves karan as equally as his son.

AGARWAL:(MIDDLE CLASS)

1.REEMA:-A 55 year old widow..whos life is only for her son Dhruv..who takes care of her..

2.DHRUV AGARWAL:DHRuv is intelligent..he works daytime and attends evening college..He too never falls in love..he belives in true  love and says that money is neccesary just to pass life.

OTHERS:-

1.AVANTIKA: SHe is karan's girl friend in the sense..only she loves him a  lot..

2.MOHIT,YASH,DEEP,RITU,SHABBIR: Karan's best freinds...in college.

KARAN and DHRUV are child hood friends to such an extent that they alwyas eat in same plate..KARAN finds his mom in reema.Reema loves both dhruv and karan equally..

There are other characetsr too:

i will intoduce them slowly:

           FIRST EPISODE PREVIEW:

 NITIN and sanjana staying in pune call up nitin to say that they are coming to mumbai as LALIT (PLOICE) is transferred to mumbai..

NITIN is happy..and says that he has already brought prospectus for sanjana in MOUNT carmel college ( A TOP COLLEGE) and congragulates SANJANA once gaian..ARUNDHATI is not happy at all...

At the malhotra house karan is taking showers..comes out of the room and his putting deo and is in a rush to visit dhruv's bday

At the AGARWAL house: Dhruv is eating breakfast and MAA reema is giving him blessings for his 22th birthday

character imagination:-

1.KARAN:-

 

2. SANJANA:-

     

3. DHRUV:-

DETAILED EPI TOMMOROW:-

STARTS FROm 13-8-04 EXCLUSIVELY ON INDIA_FORUMS

KITNA PYAR KARTI HOON TUMSE


Concept: -
The story revolves around 3 main characters namely Sanjana, dhruv and karan.
It's a love triangle involving thse main characeters.
What has the destiny in store for them??
To find out read : KPKHT

EPISODE-1


AT THE AGARWAL HOUSE:-
Reema is performing pooja in her pooja room. Its her son dhruv's birthday today She prays to god " hey Bhagwan mere bete ko meri umar dena" Dhruv comes out of his room in his usual formal decent dress. He takes ma's ashirwad and says " Maa ."

Reema: janamdin mubarak ho beta..jeete raho beta…hamesha khush raho…."
Dhruv: thanks …. maa…aap is duniye ke sabse achhi maa ho..

Reema: Nahi beta..Tum is duniya ke sab se ache bete ho…

Dhruv: Achha maa..ab mein chalta hoonn… der ho roahi hai..sham to jaldi atta hoon….
Aur haan….karan araha hain…teri haath ki khana khane….

Reema: aane do puchti hoon use aaj..4 din se kyun nahi aaya..

Dhruv leaves for factory…He works in factory to support his mother and himself and goes to evening college to complete his degree…

As dhruv leaves..Tears roll down reema' eyes…all flash back memeories:-
The day when she was admiited to hopital for delivery and her husband is coming to visit his child..suddenly dies in a car accident…From that day Reema life is only for her only son dhruv….she then leaves to the kitchen..she decides for a special lunch and dinner for dhruv and karan…

AT The Malhotra:-

Karan is still sleeping in his bedroom in his usual night wear…lazily fellow……Sudddenly gets up…" are yaar…aaj dhruv ka bday hai.." jaana hain mama ke paas….dhruv ko wish karna hain….picks up mobile and calls dhruv and wishes him happy bday..
Dhruv: helo
Karan:" are saaale ek aur saal Buddha ho gaya too…kaha peinr hain sale…

Dhruv: factory yaar…
Karan: kya….ek din chutti nahi le sakta tha…
Dhruv: nahin yaar …bahoot kaam yeh yaarr..tu janta hian…chutiyoon ke jkaroorat exam ke time apr hoti he…

Karan: " saaale kabhie nahi badle ga tu"

Dhruv: Tu bhi nahi yaar…waise leta he yaa naha raha he…chal raktta hoon..thikh yeh 5 baje ajana ghar…khana khane…

Karan: 5 baje nahi..abhi jaa raha hoon..maaa ke paas…akele hogi… aur haan…party kahan dega…I mean BEER party..theekh hain …..

Dhruv:" hat saale..kabhie nahi sudarega….Ladki,beer,whiski,dost…ye sab chodkar..kuch he tere paas baat karne ko…
Karan"hain na…
Dhruv: kya
Karan: "khana..yaar aur who bhi mama ki haath ka…ok bye yaar…"

Karan gets up[ lazily and says to himself " I AM THE BEST"
Slowly picks up his towel and goes to bathroom….

Comes out puts deo..as usual wears his blue jeans and white t-shirt and in a hurry goes out…

Ramoo kaka.as usual comes to his room with breakfast" chalo baba aaj bhi nasta nahi kiya"…
Its usual habit of karan …since his childhood days…he spents most of his time either with friends…girls..party pubs…drinks…or else druv's home….which is his second home…

AT THE KAPOOR:-
Arundhati is lazily serving breakfast to her kids and husband NITIN…

"Chalo bachho kha lo…" school jaana hain na…."

Phone Rings…

Arundhati picks up the phone;
" halo"
lalit at the oter end:" Bhabhi mein lalit.."

arundhati" "Bolo..kaisa ho.."

Lalit" Bhabhi….Transfer pakiki ho gayi…parso are rahe hain hum…"

Arundhati ( although not happy):" achha …bahut khushi ki baat hain…chalo finally transfer pakki ho hi gayi"..Nitin hears this and comes to talk to lalit:
" halo lait…khushi hooyi jaankar"
Lalit:" bhaiyya…ham arahe hain bhaiyya…"

NITIN:"bahut khushi haim muje….finally hame ek saat rehne ka mauka mil gaya.."

Lalit:" haann..bhaiyya..sab bhagwan ki marzi…"
NITIN:" achha sanju..kaisi hein wo.."
Lalit:" achhi hai…waha ane ke raah dekh rahi hain.."
Nitin:" janta hoon… maine yaha prospectus leke rakha hain…carmel college ki…"
Lalit: " achha bhaiyya..rakta hoon…"
Nitin:"tekkh hain.. lene pahuch jaaonga station teekh hain..bye…"

Nitin says to himself: he bhagwan tera shukar hain…..arundhati…is not happy at al…
Achhan..to aap bachoo to school chodenge yaaa..sapna dekte rahenge…
Nitin: aata hoon aru..chilaatee kyun hoo??

Karan comes to reema….house

Reema: achha…To aaj yad gayi mama ki…

Karan: nahi mama…
Reema:chup…bolne ki jarorat nahi…slaps him with love ..holds his hears and says……
"purssat nahi milee bachee…ye kya haal hai…dadi kyun chod kar rakha hain..gande..… kahi ke…

karan:" mama,,,,aap bhi na…karan malhotra jo bhi karta hian na…wo hi ek style hain…
because u know I AM THE BEST

reeama: theekh hain theekh haiin..aab bhashan mat dena…..

karan smiles sexily…

IN PUNE:-
SanjAna dreams of her life in Mumbia…"mumbai jaoongi aur mera sapna poora karoongi….achhi tatah se pad looongi…" she also remembers Bhoomi and saurav….(kids).

She is also packing her bags….to leave for Mumbai…
Lalit comes:" sanju…bahut khush ho na.."

Sanjana" haan bhaiyya…bhaiyya mujehe maa ar papa ka pyaar kabhie nahi mila…lekhin….bhagwan se yehi prarthana karoongi ki…muje dono bahiyya ka pyar ek saath mile…"

They both hug each other…with love…

-----end of epi-1


COMING UP:- SANJANA gets down at Mumbai station and smiles……
Karan..is eating kheer from mamas hands…and dhruv comes…
All of them…celebrate…..nitin and lalit hug at the railway station… .
Bhoomi and asuarv enjoy..sanjana's company..

Its really good anju but couldn't Dhruv be Sachin Shroff, and couldnt we have a Vedika?? Heehee...it has my name, I like that! 😛

the story is really gud..keep it up..u cud have sachin shroff as dhruv or sachin sharma as dhruv..anyways dis dhruv is also good..cont soon.. 👏 👏

good job keep it up waiting for the next part👏

that was very good, plz continue soon

It was really good. But i think Vedika should be Sanjana, Suraj should be Karan. Pls Cont..

very very nice
thanks alot
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Originally posted by: stonex

very very nice
thanks alot
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i also agree with stonex good starting of the story please contiune

EPIOSDE –2

RAILWAY STATION:=
Train stops at VT station…Sanjana is the first one to get up…gets up and gets down the train…Lalit too follows her…and sees Nitin waiting for them…at the railway station…

He calls bhaiyya and nitin approaches him.They hug in love.Sanjana smiles and kisses kids bhoomi and saurav..Hugs nitin…all of them move to catch a taxi at home….

While moving in the taxi at home…memory flashes in sanjana' eyes…the days she spent

When she was 10 with her parents and brothers….Bhoomi and saurav…all enjoy traveling….they are hardly taken out of their house…arundhati always likes them studying…Its sanjana who always takes them out whenver she visits mumbai…The kids are very happy that their sanju Bua will be staying with them forever..



AT THE AGARWAL:

karan and reema are waiting for dhruv…but karan is busy eating kheer from reema' s hands…..Reema always treats karan as her small kid…

Dhruv comes at 5:30 " ma…kheer khila rahi ho bachhe ko…"

Karan " main bachha nahi hoon haan…saale bday tera hain aur kheer main kha raho hoon…"

Dhruv sits with them and all of them enjoy kheer….reema hugs both of them….wiuth love….karan always consider reema his mama and always agrees to whatever she says….

KAPOOR HOUSE:-

Bell rings…arundhato opens the door to find sanjana and all at the door…

Sanjana takes bhabhi's ashirwad and bhabhi..just for name sake says " jeeti raho.."

All of them come ….and settle in the home…

Sanjana,lalit,nitin are hapy that their dream of staying together..came finally…

Arundhati is not happy at all….she gives a wicked smile…."haan finally yeh ho gi gaya"

Next day..Nitin takes sanjana..to carmel college to get admitted…..The principal of the college Mr varma is Happy that one of the good students from pune has come….and he says that he too is from pune….."sanjana beti..main bhi pune se hi hoo….kisse cheez ki zarorat ho to bhezhegack mang lo……"

Sanjana says " Nahi sir…yeh mere khush naseeb hain..ki mujhe itni achhi college mein nadmission mil rahi hain.."

Nitin is very happy that sanjana is getting admiited….and says to her.."jitni mehanat ke saath tumne aaj tak padaye ki..usi tatah se padna..sanju".Sanjana says "

" theekh hain bhaiyya.."

They return home….

Lalit says that he has to join his mubai office from tommorow…Arundhati comes from inside and serves coffee to everyone..Bhoomi and saurav….are playing…

Sanjana joins with them…..

MALHOTRA:-

Brigbhushan returns from Delhi and asks to rammoo to bring him tea…ramoo serves him…But never asks abt karan….he talks to karan….only when karan comes to him to take money…



Brig had spent most of his life earning wealth and money and had always neglected his son and his wife…This was the main reason as to karan too doesn't like his dads company and is alone in his home…except for ramooo kaka..who calls him baba since childhood….

AGARWALS:-

Karan whispers in dhruvs ears to go out for a drink…and to give him cpmany…

" chalna yaar bahar chalet hain.."

Dhruv" maan ko kyan bolu.."

Karan.." bolna yahi paas me jaa rahe hain.."

Although dhruv never tasted alchohol..he always gives company to karan whenevr he asks…But most of the time karan enjoys his BEER in the company of his friends..shabbir and others…But now since holidys are going on…Most of them are out of station…..

Few minutes later..karan takes dhruv…making some bahana…

Reema says " jaldi pahuch jaana dhruv beta.."

Karan says :" aap chinta mat karna mama..aap ke bete ko ghar tak chodddoonga.."

Tears almost roll down her eyes and she slaps him slightly " kyun karan…tum mere bete nahi ho.."

Karan.." nahi mama …mazak kar raha tha…."

Karan and dhruv leave house…..to a bar…

IN BAR:-
Karan gets call from shabbir

" saale kais he.."

shabbir :" aar raha hoon parso…." College shooru ho raha hain na.."

karan " ha yaar…is bar aur bhi maaza karenege.."

IN KAPOORs:-

Sanjana is almost ready for collge with her books bag…dress..etc…she is nervous too..as she has to study in one of the biggest college in mumbai.."

She smiles and asys to herself " bhagvan mujhe shakti dena..me achi tarah se pad saku.."meri manjil tak pahooch jaoon…"

EPISODE ENDS:-

Coming up: SANJANaS's first day in college…..she is a junior in college…..
Sanjana's first encounter with karan….
What will happen…?

Stay on…

//sorry for mistakes