my first ff as i dint get much reply i stopped it...
this my next ff thinking i will get good repliess to write...
it will be called tum sirf meri ho..
this ff starts when kasturi agrees for the wedding due to her parent's pressure and was getting ready in her room the marriage was too take place in a grand hotel.she was lost in her thought and sad songs were played in backround and imaginess robbie in the dulha dress and both were getting married and imagines it and sees it in the mirror but then she get rememberss it is only a dream and soon she will be another person's wife.her friends and sisters leave saying abhi ayii and she was all alone and was correcting her earing when suddenly robbie aapear from back... and she says it is only my imagination.. ye sach nahi haii chali javoon yahan se robbie and closes her eyess and robbies says par yahi haqqeeqat hai and she open her eyes and sees him and tears were already falling down .. and when he realizes some one may come when she was about to say he just put a cloth over her mouth and nose and she faintss and he lifts her and goes away carrying her... and without knowing to anyone she climbs down in the back way of hotel and goes to his car and places kasturi in the seat and goes and starts to drive and goes away...
kaise laga???pls comment.. then only i will be able to think to continue or not...
part 1-pg 1
part2-pg2
part3-pg 3
part4-pg6
part5-pg8
part6-pg11
part7-pg13
part8-pg15
part9-pg19
part10-pg22
part11-pg25
part12-pg29
part13-pg30
part14-pg35
part15-pg38
part16-pg41
part17-pg43
part18-pg45
part19-pg47
part20-pg48
davia
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