Second year at KMA(my first fic) - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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RAJ(remembers the old times nd smiles)- Haan ...haan..bilkul tha....wo bechara bohot bhola tha.......wo darasal m.b.a karna chahta tha par uske ma-baap ne use kma bhej diya......sipahi bane.........unka manna tha ki agar tum siphai nahi ban paye, to tum ji hi nahi paye .
Wo bechara ma-baap ki baat mankar aa gaya.....par uska man yaha nahi tha.....wo din raat moti-moti kitabe padtha tha.....aur main aur navin milkar hamesha usse satate the

RAJ-Hum kabhi uske chasme chupate the to kabhi uski kitabe............bechara dundhta rehta tha!!...........Eik baar to humneraat mein uske chasme chupadiye the.....agale din exam tha.......wo har bar top kata thi isiliye hum chahte the ki woh iss bar top na kare....navin top karna chahta tha...............kamse kam eik bar.
Bechara swami raat bhar .............andhe admi ki tarah aapna chasma dhundta raha....aur chasma to humne bc ke office me chupaya tha kyoki swami waha bina permission ke nahi jata tha....aur bc bhi office main nahi tha..............wo puri raat bhar dhund dhund kar thak gaya aur hostel ke bahar kichad me gir gaya..........humme laga ki is bar to navin pakka top karenga......................lekin........nahi.............. ...test kuch national reasons ke wajah se postponed hua................aur is bar swami neextra chasme aur apni kitabe kahi chupakar rak di........to us sal bhi usine top kiya...................par us raat humme usse chasmee dhundte dekh bohot mazza aya..............

[BOTH RAJ ND NAINA BURST OUT LAUGHING AT THIS...............................ND YES.......SWAMI FINNALY BROKE THE ICE!!]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey too good

pl continue soon
would like to know what will happen with RN in this adventure cum picnic
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
NAINA- To sir, kya swami academy chod kar gaya, ya siphayi ban gaya??

RAJ- Cadet Singh, KMA me jo bhi aata hain, siphayi hi bankar jata hain. KMA ne swami ko puri tara se badal diya.............(remembering swami)...wo bahut accha siphayi tha.

NAINA- Tha??

RAJ- Haan Cadet Singh.....swami eik ladayi me shahid ho gaya..........

NAINA- Oh!! I'm srry

RAJ- Its ok Cadet Singh, aapko srry feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain.............swami to yahi chahta tha ki wo ladai me mara jaye...shahid ho jaye..uski akhari ichha puri ho gaye.

NAINA (is away in sm other place.her eyes r hazy)

RAJ- Naina.........??

NAINA (startled)- Haan...??

RAJ- Kaha kho gayi thi...??

NAINA- Patahe sir, bhaiya hamesha kehte the ki we dhushman ke hatoon nahin marenge.............agar kabhi dushmn uske peeche pad jaye....to wo bhagkar apke pas ayenge.....aur aapse maut ki dua mangege..........................
unki to yeh bhi ichha puri na ho paye....maree to bhi dushman ke haato..

RAJ (in deep thinking, suddenly he says)- Puri ho gayi naina!!!

NAINA TURNS TO FACE HIM WITH EYES WIDE WITH HORROR

NAINA- Kya??

RAJ- Haan naina, navin ko maina mara tha (at this stage he is unable to look at naina nd has his face turned away)

[NAINA IS STILL STARING AT HIM. HE SUDDENLY ZIPS OPEN HIS BACKPACK ND HAND HER A RECORDER. NAINA STARES AT IT WITH QUESTIONING EYES..]

RAJ- Le lo naina, ye navin ke taraf se tumhare liye akhari taufa hain.

NAINA TAKES THE RECORDER ND PLAYS IT................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
NAINA HEARS NAVIN'S VOICE.......HE IS PANTING AS THOUGH HE HAD BEEN RUNNING ( actually he had been running nd had stopped near a tree to record this for naina)

Phoolo ka, taroo ka...........
sabka kehna hain
eik hazaroo mein......meri behna hain...
sari umar hamme sang rehna hain...........

Naina......hum hamesha se ladte- jhagadte aye hain par aaj main tumse wo kehna chahta hoon jo shaayad maina kabhi nahi kaha honga....naina me tumse bahut pyar karta hoon........i really love u little sis.........tu soch rahe hongi na ke jo aab tak nahi kaha wo aaj kyo keh ra hoon.......darasal aaj finally mujhe tujse ajadi milengi (forced laughter is heard).............naina sab samajte hain ki main gadar hoon.lekin main janta hoon , meri bahen hamesha mujpar bharosa rakengi.............

SUDDENLY SM NOICES R HEARD IN THE BACKGROUND ND FOOTSTEPS R HEARD (NAVIN IS RUNNING AWAY FRM THE PPL FRM CRIME BRANCH CMING 2 CATCH HIM)

RAJ.................YAHAA.......RAJ
Navin tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..tum bhag kaise aaye...
Wo sab chod raj.tu yaha eik minute ruk...main ata hoon

soono naina, main apni akhri ichha puri kar raha hoon...main raj se kahoonga mujhe mare...main apne dost ko janta hon...mujhe markar wo khud jite ji maar jayenga............par use maaf kar dena naina..........maine tumhara manpasand gana iliye gaya tha taki tum jaan pao ki main hamesh tumhare saath rahoonga..aur ye sab raj ki badaulat....wo hi mujhe mukti de sakta hain........uske bina na me pura jinda rahoonga aur na puri tarah se maar paunga.......please naina mere liy....usse maf karna......aur ma baap ka kya rakhna....

raj.yaha aa......ye le mujhe maar dal.
kya.navin tu pagal ho gaya hain kya.ye kya mazak kar raha hain
raj ye mazak nahi he..me apne sabse achhe dost ke haato se hi marna chahta hoon
kya..main ye nahi karoonga navin
raj.plz...tujhe hamari dosti ki kasam...aur ye recorder naina ko de dena.mera akri taufa.plzz raj

raj.tere haat kyo kap rahe hain..tu to naik kaam kar rahahain meredost.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
a pause is heard

sudenly

BANG!!

THNKS RAJ!!
(navin is dead)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
HELOOOOOOOOO................NO REPLIES?? 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
THE RECORDING ENDS ND NAINA STARTS CRYING ND DROPS DOWN ON THE GROUND

NAINA- Bhaiya….bhaiya……

RAJ RUSHES TOWARD HER ND SITS DOWN ON THE GROUND NEXT 2 HER..

RAJ- Naina ….mujhe maf kardo…I'm ssry naina

HE IS ABOUT 2 TOUCH HER ON RHE SHOULDER BT REFRAINS HIMSELF FRM DOING SO….

RAJ- Naina tum jo sazza dogi, wo mujhe manzoor hain……par plzz naina, kuch to bolo…please naina……kuch bhi…..(he looks at her pleadingly)

NAINA REGAINS HER COMPOSURE, WIPES AWAY HER TEARS ND TURNS 2 FACE RAJ…..

NAINA- Sajha aur mafhi to apradhiyo ko milti hain….apne to bhaiya ki akhri iccha puri ki….apko kis bat ki sajha……apne to bhaiya ke liye wo kiya jo shayad hi koi kissi ke liye karta……thank u sir……….(she gives him a faint yet heartful smile)
Main hamesha se yahi samajti rahi ki bhaiya ke apradhiyo ne unhe mar dala hain..par ab to un apradhiyo ko dhundna aur bhi mushkil ho gaya hain….

RAJ HEAVES A SIGH OF RELIEF ND GIVES A BIG……CHOCOLATE-BOY SMILE…..
RAJ- Naina, tum uski phikar mat karo…..navin ke katil ko ham milkar dhundege aur sazza denge….ye mera apse wada hain.

NAINA GIVES RAJ A GRATEFUL SMILE ……RAJ GETS UP ND GIVES NAINA HIS HAND TO COME UP……BUT SHE REFUSES ND GETS UP ON HER OWN……..(ONE THING NAINA HATES MOST IS TAKING ANY1'S HAND FOR WTEVER REASON…)
THEY CNTINUE WALKING……
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
FOR LACK OF NETHING 2 TALK ABOUT, BOTH NAINA ND RAJ CNTINUE WALKING.......NIGHT IS JUZ ABOUT 2 FALL . NAINA ND RAJ STOP AT A NEARY LAKE (OR POND) TO FILL WATER. ACTUALLY THEY RWALKING ON A HIGHER GROUND THAN THE POND......AND REACHING DOWN 2 THE POND IS RISKY BUSINESS......

RAJ- Naina tum yaha rukho....neche jane me khatra hai.....main paani le ata hoon.

NAINA- Par sir.....

RAJ- Don't worry cadet sing....main apna khya rakh paunga......aap yaha rukhiye...

HE GIVES NAINA HIS BAG...TAKES THE WATER BOTTLES ND GOES DOWN TOWARDS THE LAKE....

NAINA IS STANDING THERE ALONE.....THINKING ABOUT THE COOL ND BEAUTIFUL WEATHER WHEN SUDDENLY SHE HEARS SOME VOICES......THAT SHE HAS HEARD BEFORE BUT CAN'T EXACTLY PLACE IT...............AFTER A SECOND SHE REALIZES WHAT THE NOICES R OF..........ND THAT SENDS CHILLS DOWN HER SPINE...........THESE NOICES WERE OF NONE OTHER THAN........................................................ ............................................................ ........ A WILD DOG!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
NAINA STARTED PANICKING......DOWN BELOW RAJ COULDN'T HEAR THE NOICES ............NAINA STARTED 2 LOOK AROUND HER TO FIND OUT WHERE THE NOICES WERE CMING FRM......SUDDENLY SHE SES IT......A WILD ND FEROCIOUS BROWN HAIRY DOG IS CMING CHARGING TOWARDS HER............

NAINA- RAJ!!!!...RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAJ....................RAJ HELP.........................

RAJ HEARS HER ND NT EVEN BOTHERING 2 KNOW WAAT HAPPENED, HE RUSHES UP TOWARDS NAINA..........................NAINA EYES R WIDE WITH HORROR ND SHE IS PINTING IN SM DIRECTION.........

NAINA (she's scared nd panting) - Raj......raj.......waha kuta.....raj..........waha...............

RAJ TURNS TOWARDS THE DIRECTION NAINA IS POINTING AT ND SEES THE DOG CHARGING TOWARDS THEM..............THE DOG COMES CLOSER 2 THEM ND CHARGES FORWARD FOR NAINA'S LEGS (THAT'S MORE INVITING TO THE DOG THAN RAJ'S LEGS 'COZ NAINA IS WEARING KMA'S UNIFORM......WHICH IS A SKIRT.....SO THE FLESH ON HER LEGS ATTRACTS THE HUNGRY DOGS....)

NAINA IS TRYING 2 SHOO AWAY THE DOG.....BT HE REFUSES 2 GO.....EEVEN RAJ IS DOING HIS BEST TO SHOO AWAY THE DOG..........RAJ THEN PUSHES NAINA ASIDE AND POUNCES ON THE DOGG......WHO IS NOW RELLY ANGRY AT RAJ..ND ABSOLUTELY FORGETS NAINA...............WHAT FOLLOWS IS A MASSVE FIGHT BETWEEN RAJ ND THE DOG....................BOTH FIGHTING FOR THEIR LIVES .........SUDDENLY THE DOG SCRATCHES RAJ'S HAND ND IT STARTS BLEEDING VERY BADLY.........SEEING THIS NAINA GASPS AND SCEAMS OUT....."raj............".........................

RAJ CONTINUES TO FIGHT ND FINALLY MANAGES 2 SCARE OFF THE DOG.......WHO SCAMPERS AWAY BARKING WILDLY..................

RAJ GETS UP BT CAN FEEL THE SEARING PAIN IN HIS ARMS......NAINA RUSHES TO HIM ND SUDDENLY TAKES HIS HAND I HERS...

NAINA- Sir aap ka to bahut khoon bahe raha hain......

RAJ DOESN'T REPLY B'COZ HE IS YET 2 OVERCM THE SHOCK HE GOT WHEN NAIA RUSHED ND CAUGHT HIS HAND......................THE MERE SENSE OF ER TUCHING HIM MAKES HIM JITTERY......HIS SPEECH FALTERS ND HE IS ABSOLUTELY NT AWARE AS 2 WAT 2 SAY
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
RAJ- Um....nahin naina wo kuch nahi.....chote chot hain.....

NAINA LOOKS AT HIM IN ANGER ND CHIDES HM......

NAINA- Choti chot hain?? tum pagal ho kya.....kitna khoon beeh raha hain.....dekho kitni gehri chot hain....

SHE THRUSTS RAJ'S HAND INTO HIS FACE IN ANGER 2 SHOW HIM HOW MUCH HE IS BLEEDING.....RAJ WHO TILL NOW WAS SIMPLY AMUSED BY NAINA'S ANGER WICH NAVIN HAD OFTEN TOLD HIM ABOUT.....SUDDENLY EXPERIENCES PAIN B'COZ NAINA THRUST HIS HAND......

RAJ- Oww.....naina......

NAINA REALISES HER FOLLY.....

NAINA- Oh...sorry....sorry.....

NAINA COMES BACK 2 HER TRUE FORM.......

NAINA- I'm really ssry sir......i'm so ssry sir...

EVEN THOUGH HIS HAND IS NOW HURTING.....RAJ LOOKS UP AT NAINA WITH A SAD EXPRESSION ON HIS FACE.......MYBE NAINA HAD NT REALIZED IT BT RAJ HAD....THE WAY SHE CALLED HIM RAJ ND NT SIR TILL NOW....ND HEARING NAINA SAY "RAJ" WAS SMTHING HE MISSED....HE WOULD DO NETHING 2 HEAR IT AGAIN....EVEN MAKE HIS SECOND HAND BLEED IF NEEDED.........

RAJ- Um...naina....oh!.....cadet singh....aap mujhe raj hi bula sakti hain.......navin bhi raj kehta tha....to mujhe us bahane to navin ke aawaj sunahi dengi (now that is a lie, he actually juz wants 2 hear naina say "raj"....though of course he misses navin saying "raj" bt still........

NAINA SUDDENLY REALISES THAT SHE HAD ACTUALLLY KEPT SAYING "RAJ" ALL THE WHILE.....SHE SUDDENLY GOES DEEP RED.....

NAINA- Um...oh...ok....lekin sir (raj gives her a oh-god-naina look, she sees it nd smiles)....sssry....raj (he now gives her a thats-better-smile)..........ye chot to bahot gehri hain....main kuch lagati hoon....eik minute........lekin haan, agar main apko raj bulau....to apko mujhe naina bulana padenga.....manjoor......??

RAJ (smiles)- Manjoor hain cade.......naina.

NAINA - Thats better......

SHE IS JUZ ABOUT 2 OPEN HER BAKPACK FOR THE FRST AID BOX........WHEN THEY AGAIN HEAR A DOG BARK....WAIT ....NOT ONE......... MANY DOG BARKS!!! ......CMING TOWARDS THEM.............