FF: Thori si bewafai, note on pg 63 - Page 35

Dear Friends,
I normally refrain from making any comments on the thread but I wish to clarify one point...in this FF J&B share a very modern relationship, a very common one in many urban cities. Once you go through the parts, you will realise that Bani & Jai are both content with their respective partners...Rajeev was interested in Bani but Bani did not show any inclination towards him and Jai is not looking around (remember the brown packet 😆 😆 )of course they have their respective goals in life...as far as emotions are concerned, well my friends, that is what the story is about, isn't it 😛 😉 ..love Tin

tin, i think ur JB r sharing the relationship similar to john and bipasha basu

Hi Tiny! 😊
Great part 👏 👏 ......Sonali is still in the pictures........JW is spending time with Sonali......so misunderstanding is cooking up.....Bani is falling for JW and pregnant.....wondering how JW's reaction would be and things would progress right after that.......waiting for tonight's dose 😆 😆

Really enjoying the story, Tiny....I would think it is hard for Bani not to have at least some feelings for J - her first and only partner, and he is not a mean, torturing kind of person, so they share a special relnship already...now J is a different ballgame - a man and a ditched-at-the-altar man...can't wait to see how u develop the story
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Okie, so they sort of made up but why does this Sonali keep coming in to the picture?😡

I'm not doubting Jai, but I do feel that it'll cause some problems!!

Pushky sweetheart, you can do so much more better than Pia!!

I too agree with Ovaltine that their relationship is more sexual one with not much emotional involvement.May be Bnai might be falling for JW that too may be because she doesn't have any family.

Whereas with JW it looks like a physical attraction looking at the way he talks with adi & jigs.

Bani getting pregnant isn't good for their relationship. They might get forced to be with each other without any love or atleast knowledge of it.

Love your writing. This is just how i interprete the story so far.

Would thus like to know JW's POV.

Tintiny,

I love all of your fanfics, and I think you've done a great job showing a modern-day relationship - this is today's reality that most couples are together in every possible way before deciding on their future. Just one thought that I hope you'll keep in mind - when the two are not sure of each other, pregnancy resulting in a forced marriage is almost always going to break. I hope you will not have a pregnant Bani forced (or forcing Jai) into marriage because that type of marriage is already doomed (it happens way to much to be ignored). I'd rather see a more realistic view which is that certainly there is a risk, but not all unprotected s*x results in pregnancy. And honestly, wouldn't a modern woman with this kind of a situation look into contraception herself? Hope I don't offend you with my post.

Hi Tiny,

Great part. what's Jai upto?

I think both Jai and Bani are not just physically attracted to one another but mentally, they just don't realise it.

Can't wait for the next part.

Nikita

Thanks Tiny for a great read and as usual u have depicted their relationship so well.

The growing insecurities in Bani now due to Sonali's arrival is going to fuel the reality bytes further and as Jonaki sad, its a depiction of a modern day relationship.

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Please update soon if possible.

omg...sorry for falling behind...but i just caught uo...wow...what can i say...great job on al updates 👏 ...omg...unprotected s*x...it only takes once to get pregnant...ask ektas couples...most of their babies happen the first time...lol...haila...the date came...so is she or isnt she...we will see huh...yeh sonali yahaa bhi...uff...pia aur rakhi kaam the kya...lol..update soon
JAZ