Dil Kya Kare(AK) Part 43@ Pg-119 - Page 21

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Posted: 18 years ago
can't wait any more longer. and can;t wait till they accept their love to eachother. continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
recap-angad and kripa patch up with eachother.they had a lil conversation on the words of angad which was left incomplete as thier food arrived.the competition was today.thier group has won.


Part-23

Kripa goes backstage to congratulate them.she goes and hugs aaliya,then others.everybody was there except angad.all were so happy that nobody took notice of angad.kripa is standing with her group all are coming to her,making her dance but she is lost.she can't find angad.she looks here and there and see angad surrounded with girls who are kissing him on cheeks and congratulating them.kripa feels anger took over her.she jus wanted ko kill angad at time.angad was himself wanted to get rid of all those girls.he wanted to go meet kripa but those girls were sticking to him like flies stick on honey.

angad notice kripa standing with his group,looking at him with so much anger.kripa excuses herself as she was not able to bear angad with so many girls drooling over him.angad notice kripa leaving and feels happy in a corner of his heart.he liked the fact that kripa can't see him with other girls.he is happy that kripa thinks that she has full right on him.but for now he knows that he has to go and find kripa as he don't want another fight with her.he was almost dead in last 24 hrs when he was not allowed to talk to kripa..he rush towards the direction from where kripa has left.

Angad find kripa in the hotel's restaurant.she is sitting alone with her cup of coffee untouched.angad smiles as he sees kripa's frowning face.he goes ans sit beside kripa.kripa realise angad sitting.she looks at him from corner of her eyes and pretend to drink coffee.This widen angad's smile.he loves the way kripa make him realise that she has first right on him after his family.Angad orders a coffee.all are smiling looking at angad..angad didnot realise that people are laughing at him.kripa notice that .she picks a cleenex and give it to angad

a- congratulations ki jagah cleenex
k- apna face saaf kar lo poora poster lag raha hai
a- matlab
k- voh jo tumhari fans wish kar rahi thi na tumhe ...uski ka result hai...go to rest room and wash ur face

angad goes to restroom and see his face in mirror.he feels so proud on him when he sees marks of lipstick all over his face.he praise himself thinking"i m too hot to resist".angad comes back.both are sitting quietly,angad with a grin and kripa with frown on her face.finally angad decides to break the silence.he pretends to clears his thorat to drag kripa's attention.kripa turns to him and give him an angry look and speak

k-kya hai?
a-(like a kid)we won
k-(supressing her anger) i know...whats the big deal...i know my friends are best...unko to jeetna hi tha.
a-well...mere lucky charm ne sab ko wish kar diya hai lekin mujhe nahin kiya
k- mujhe laga tumhara congratulation ka quota poora ho gaya hai

angad know kripa is talking about the girls.he is trying to supress his smile and thinks how to make her smile.he was now not able to stand her frown

a-lekin vo sab waste hai jab tak meri best friend mujhe wish nahin karti.ye jeet sirf tumhaari hai.tum mere liye bimaar hote huye bhi hamaare saath goa aayi...ab kripa is mein meri kya galti hai ki ladkiyaan mera peecha nahin chodti...kripa dekho main ab ek aur misunderstanding nahin chahta.pichle 24 hrs mere zindagi ke sabse mushkil gaante the.plz speak something...tum jaanti ho ki tumhaari wish ke bina meri jeet adhoori hai

the last line made kripa's frown go to some other lands.she smiles.stands up from her chair.Go and hug angad .congratulate him

k-congrats best friend
a-tumne khana khaya
k-mujhe laga tum thanx kahoge ge
a- well tumhara to pata nahin par mera ek rule hai no thanks and no sorry in dosti..(commanding voice)khana kahya ya nahin
k- ------------------
a-main pooch raha hoon kuch kripa(anger mixed in voice)
k- ------------------
a- i knew it khana nahin kahaya hai to medicines bhi nahin li hongi...(whining)why do u do this kripa doctors ne kya kaha tha ke tumhe medicines time par leni hongi
k-doctors..ha ha.pata nahin log doctors ki poori baat kyun maante hain.are doctorse pass sirf aadha dimaag hota hai...baaki ka aadha moti moti books padh kar khatam ho chuka hota hai aur jis insaan ke paas dimag hi aadha hai uski poori baat to koi bewakoof hi maanega...tumhara to pata nahn par main definately bewakoof nahin hoon
a- if it was a joke then let me tell you it was not at all funny and i m not laughing...main fresh ho kar aata hoon aur tum fresh ho jao ja kar.after thirty minutes we are going to meet at same spot...is that clear
k-yes boss

josh overheard this conversation.he was now more sure that thier next plan was going to be sucessful.there is a big suprise waiting for kripa and angad in mumbai.he feels bad doing this but he knows this is the only way they can make angad realise his love but as dadi said they have to make sure about kripa's feelings and this is what shabbir is here for. he hopes everything go according to thier plan.now this was time to shabbir should talk to kripa and josh and shabbir has done all the preprations

At lunch they all meet at the same restaurant.angad is bossing on kripa's diet.he is like "u can't eat that...thats unhealthy"kripa was not able to control her anger and speaks with a lot of scarsam in her voice

k-angad ...am i allowed to respirate

All laugh at kripa's comment and angad gives them a whatever look.josh speaks

j- kripa angad sahi kehta hai...u r really very lucky,hum lagataar third time ye competition jeete hain.
m- yes we have made hattrick and as after this me and josh have only two months left in collage we have decided that tonight we all going to have a blast...guys lets party
ka-aaj waise bhi hamara goa mein last day hai...lets make it special
an-i have a brilliant idea...instead of going to a disco lets have a bonfire party on the beach,especially for our group
kt-its a briliiant idea
l-brilliant ka toh pata nahin but its a very romantic idea
k-to theek hai party ki responsibility meri aur angad ki ...right angad

kripa turns towards angad.all notice a sad look on his face as if someone has hurt him so badly.he speaks absent mindedly

a-(sad tone and looking for an answer in josh's eyes) tu mujhe chod ke chala jaayega
j-(low tone with lots of concern)angad meri baat to sun

angad nods negatively and leaves.josh looka at kripa nad kripa assures him by closing her eye lids.she tells josh that that she will handle him and he should not worry about him.kripa goes to angad.he is standing in the balcony of his room.kripa goes and put her hand on his shoulder.Angad turns back, kripa see tears in his eyes.

k- angad..

angad just breaks down in front of her.he sits on his knees.kriap also sits to take hold of him.she is holding angad from his shoulders.she makes him face her.there is lot of pain in his eyes as if they are pleading to her

a-(disbelef)kripa mera dost...mera bhai mujhe chod ke chala jaaega...do mahine baad josh collage mein nahin hoga...main ..main ...kya karoonga uske bina
k-(assuring him) angad woh sirf collage se jaa raha hai...hum uss se kabhie bhi mil sakte hain
a- tum nahin samhjogi kripa...tum nahin samjhogi

kripa was not able to understand how to soothe angad.she wanted him to relax but last words of angad had made her speechless.angads condition was stabbing her.by the time josh arrives there.he tells kripa that at this point only he can handle angad.he request her to leave.kripa leaves as she knew that josh was right.only he can handle angad at that particular point of time.josh make angad face him but angad stands and turn

j-to tu chahta hai main fail ho jaaon...
a-tere bina main bilkul akela ho jaaoonga..tu jaanta hai meri zindagi ke sirf chaar kone hain...dadi...meri family...tu aur
j-aur
a-aur kripa
j-(naughtily)hmmm kripa
a-yahan kripa ki baat nahin ho rahi hai..yaahan mere dost...mere bhai ki baat ho rahi hai jis ne har kadam par mera saath diya hai..jo mujhe mujhse ziaada jaanta hai...jise mere dil ki baat mujhse pehle pata lag jaati hai...jo ye achi tarah jaanta hai ki mere liye kya galat hai aur kya sahi... main bilkul akela ho jaaoonga...kaun hoga mere saath sahi aur galat bataane ke liye
j-kripa
angad looks at him with lots of questions on his face
j- haan kripa...tu hamesha kehta hai na ki main tujhe tujhse ziada jaanta hoon...to mer baat maan tu akela nahin hai kripa tujhe kabhie kuch galat nahi karne degi...aur rahi baat meri main sirf collage se jaa raha hoon lekin rahoonga issi sheher mein hum jab chahe mil sakte hain...aur tera peecha to main marte waqt nahin chodoonga

they both hug eachother.angad start crying like a baby.josh seprate him a speaks to tease angad

j- kya bachon ki tarah ro raha hai...angad khanna kab se itna emotional ho gaya...aadmi sirf do hi conditions mein itna badal jaata hai pehla jab vo pagal ho gaya ho ya phir jab usko pyaar ho jata hai...okay now cheer up baaki ka do mahinee baad ke liye bacha kar rakh aur jaa kar kripa ki help kar






i m so sorry for making u all wait.i apologize from bottom of my heart and i know u all are mad at me but plz forgive me.i promise this will not happen next time.well here goes the next part plz reply...at least to yell back at me


Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey no need to yell at u because u con with such a cute an emotional part loved it angads a cry baby sorry but that was really cute wonder whts their plan about ak
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Posted: 18 years ago
its awesome and cute part. i hope next time u will continue soon. i am not mad at u but i am sad this its so nice ff and i have wait like for whole month for just one part thats not fair šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

can u tell when u goona continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
di, that was fascinating...but let me tell u, U KNOW HOW LONG YOU MADE ME WAIT! it wasnt funny, im mad at you for that but i cant stay too mad at you for long so i forgive you in advance šŸ˜†

back to the story it was wonderful i especially like the part where angad felt sorry for seeing his friend leave, its like they are brothers but you cant even tell if they are friends or brothers, thats what i like most, and secondly how kripa fumed after finding out about the girls kissing him....well i wrote what i had to, and we can talk l8r!

BUT PLZ UPDATE SOON, WARNA MERA KYA HO GA, abhi tak kripa aur angad have "CLICKED" šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hello fellow readers,

i know that di, amneet, was not able to update for while, and you must be really mad, but GIVE HER A BREAK! i know i might sound rude, but are you people FORGETTING THAT SHE STILL HAS NOT RECOVERED COMPLETELY! anyways just wanted to say, she has updated, and she is very sorry, but dont pressure too much, she isnt completely healed, and she needs time to recover!

i again apologise for being rude, but my di's health is more important then the ff, once again i am sorry, but plz dont get mad at her she is trying her level best to make her readers happy, and at the same time she is trying to recover 😳

SO PLZ KEEP PATIENT AND DONT GET MAD AT HER! this is not a warning and its not supposed to be meant to scare readers away, but nothing is more important then di's health, hope u understand and once again im sorry 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mintfresh

awesum part glad u enjoyed it
keep it up di says thank you and keep reading, as u still have to read angad and kripa's "clicking" scenesšŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: toobz 50

hey amneet where r u she is rite here and she just updated šŸ˜†???

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part 😊
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx for continuing...awesome part...but u better continue sooner this time...we all love ur fanfic...its just getting better and better...so cont soon...

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