Silly Story: Famous Jyotish

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Trishna was having a troubling day with Janki around, so she decided to go for a walk to cool her mind off..........

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Suddenly, right after Trishna snuck out of the house and thought she was safe from Janki, Janki pops out in front of her.

Janki: AHA! Where do u think your going?!!!

Trishna: Me-mein, Mein tho garden ko pani dehne ja rahi thi...hehe.

Since Trishna said she was helping out, Janki said ok, and left.

Trishna: Oh god, yeha se jaldi baag Janki devi ki ane se pehle.

Meanwhile, Sauvarna follows Trishna since she doesn't trust her.

.........While walking she saw..............

THE GREAT EKTA KAPOOR!!!!! LAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!

Trishna is soooo happy that she runs to greet her and trips and falls.

Trishna: OWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! Meri saar!!!!!!! aye aye! Aab kya karoon? Janki devi ne dekh liya tho hasenge aur phir saari zindagi mujhe uski haasi sune paregi. Mujhe Jaldi se kuch karna parega!

To cover up, Trishna goes to a great jyotish.

RAM RAM....JYOTISH....

There was a BIG sign with a picture of a jyotish on it. And under the picture it said: "Agar tumhe madat chahiye, to under aajao-aur paise ke saath. No money-No Help."

Trishna walked inside and saw many people doing things together, but what?

In the next part....Trishna finds herslef more than just a cure for her headache.

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Trishna walked past the strange people and into a room.....

Trishna: Dekhiya, Mein yaha aap ki madat ki liye aye hoon, kya aap mere madat kaar saktey hai? Aur, woh saab jo bahaar hain, saab...teek hai na?

Jyotish: Haan, Mein Tumhari madat kaar sakti hoon, likin iss ki liye tumhey bohoth mahengi paregi. And haan, woh saab yeha har roz ati hain meri darshaan karni ki liye.

Trishna: Oh, teek hai matlab woh saab pagal hai. Aur haan, You don't have to worry, aap ko chinta kaar ne ki koi zaaroorat nahi hai,aapko jinta paisa chahiye, woh mil jayegi.

Jyotish: Nahin! Paisa nahin, mujhe kucch aur chahiye.

Trishna: Kya? Aap ko kya chahiye? Mein aap ko dehni ko tayar hoon. Bolye bolye.

Jyotish: MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! *coughs, ahem* haan haan, mujhe, mujhe....

tumhari teddy bear chahiye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Trishna: *Shocked* KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOO!! NOT MY TEDDY BEAR!!!!!!!! Its my favorite teddy bear!! Mein nahin doongi!!!!!!!!! *Runs out the door* but the Jyotish runs after her and the people who were sitting down, just stared at them running.

Then suddenly, Trishna wakes up and finds herself in a hospital.

Trishna: Mein Kahaan hoon?

Nurse: oh good madam, you have awaken, Janki ji has said to give you these medicines, time to rise and shine!! MWWAHAHAHAH!!!!


DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!

FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS WHEN TRISHNA FINDS OUT THE TRUTH ABOUT HER VISIT TO THE JYOTISH!!! YOU WILL FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED NEXT WEEK!! TELL ME IF YOU LIKE THE STORY SO FAR!! 😃

Edited by MereJannuSyeed - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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your pics keep on changing.. trishna, after a few lines, was modern.. she became the pre-leap trishna again after some time... good work!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cruizer

your pics keep on changing.. trishna, after a few lines, was modern.. she became the pre-leap trishna again after some time... good work!

hahahah, yeah, its kind of hard to get pics from the same time line that fits the plot.haha😆 but thanks.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha this is great, plz keep going!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh yeah pliz keep going..it's funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats funny keep it up 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😃 I'm so glad everyone likes it, I will update very soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice .. except the coordination of trishna's pre-leap and post-leap images ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lolz, if anyone has any ideas for the rest of the story, you can PM me. 😃

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