TS-Confessions Teaser UPDATED page 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 months ago
#21

Will look forward to more updates. 😊

But i didn't quite like that Armaan is demanding and aggressive , accusatory and jealous about Abhiras boss etc. he has pushed Abhira away, hidden things and she has no reason to tell him everything if she doesn't want to.  He cannot demand Abhiras attention and trust. He needs to work for it with sincerity and humility. 

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Pinecone

Will look forward to more updates. 😊

But i didn't quite like that Armaan is demanding and aggressive , accusatory and jealous about Abhiras boss etc. he has pushed Abhira away, hidden things and she has no reason to tell him everything if she doesn't want to.  He cannot demand Abhiras attention and trust. He needs to work for it with sincerity and humility. 


He will calm down. Don't worry I am not going to write him agressive or Jealous.

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Posted: 4 months ago
#23

Amazing update, loved armaan confession. Excited to read on how Dadi sa will bring truth and support abhira. 


Please update soon 

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Posted: 4 months ago
#24

Loved it!! So well written!! Thank you!!! So glad you updated!! Because there are a lot of stories on the forum that haven't been updated in ages!!!!

Do you have an update schedule in mind t9 hel0 tide is over? If so, please do share.  Thanks 

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Posted: 4 months ago
#25

Loved both the parts. waiting for an update

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Posted: 4 months ago
#26

Amazing part,waiting 4 nxt

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Posted: 4 months ago
#27

Teaser


Abhira (tears in her eyes)-Aap meri mumma ke bhai ho ?


Kairav (smiling widely)-Ha...Tumhari mumma meri choti behen thi....Kahan hai Akshu ? Tum yaha ho to ?


Abhira's lips quivered.Tears started to fall from her eyes...Kairav & Muskaan were scared..What was wrong ? Why was Abhira so sad.....


Armaan (trying to comfort Abhira)-Akshara mam ki death ho gai hai.....


Kairav and Muskaan were shattered....

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Posted: 4 months ago
#28

First chapter was damn good! The Goenka's smiley7missing this on the forum.


Abhira didn't accept them, not like her mother. Loved her, well done! smiley32


Fl that isn't mahaan and so on smiley31


Please tag me if possible.


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Posted: 4 months ago
#29

Amazing teaser. Excited to read more 


Please update soon 

Posted: 4 months ago
#30

Beautifully written both parts.....awesome.... Update soon.. 🍀😇