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Vivaan wants to break up with a girl who loves him. What is he hiding?

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Enchanted hearts Part 1

 Thank you  ingenuity_phoenix for the lovely cover pages.





I thank my friend ingenuity_phoenix for suggesting title for this SS. I dedicate this story to  ingenuity_phoenix who suggested me to take inspiration from the Malayalam movie Sufiyum Sujatayum for Shrenu’s track and Tu jhoothi main makkar for Adnan Jennifer’s track.

MY DEAR FRIEND TIFFANYVAYCHILINGUM HAD GIVEN  ME A LIST OF A FEW ACTORS TO CAST ONE OF THEM OPPOSITE JENNIFER IN THIS SS.BUT I WAS CONFUSED WHICH ACTOR TO BE CHOSEN.SO I THANK INGENUITY_PHOENIX FORSUGGESTING ADNAN KHAN OPPOSITE JENNIFER FOR THIS SS.I DEDICATE THIS STORYTO TIFFANYVAYCHILINGUM WHO WANTS ADNAN JENNIFER JODI.

VIVAAN-REEMA TRACK IS SLIGHTLY INSPIRED FROM THE PARALLEL TRACK OF TU JHOOTHI MAIN MAKKAR.



A wedding was going on.

The couple was Alekh and Sadhana.

Sadhana's sisters Genda and Reeva embraced her happily.

Reeva:We are so happy for you Sadhana di.

Genda:I am glad that you could marry the person you love unlike me.No one should have my fate.

They all felt sad for Genda.

Genda's husband Varun got hurt overhearing it.

Sadhana:Genda...you are talking as if I am deeply in love with Alekh.It's an arranged marriage.We have not even talked to each other.

Genda:But you were in a dream world after seeing his photograph.

Reeva:That's true.That shows that you are crazily in love with Alekh jeeju.

Sadhana blushed.




After reaching home,Varun talked to Genda.

Varun:I heard you talk to your sister that she is lucky to marry the person she loved unlike you.Does that mean you are unlucky to marry me?

Genda was silent.

Varun blasted at her:Then why did you marry me?You could have married your ex-lover.

Genda's eyes got filled up with tears.

Genda:I would not have married you if I had a choice.I was forced to marry you.

Varun felt sad and walked out of the room.He burst into tears.

Genda remembered her past moment.




Flash back...

Genda was walking on the road.A car passed by.Mud water got splashed at her.

Genda got irritated.

Genda:What a pathetic driver!

The car got stopped and a man came out of the car.

He:I am sorry.

Suddenly he noticed that she was completely drenched with dirty water.He burst into laughter.Genda got irritated.

Genda:Because of you,I am in this condition.But you are making fun of me?How dare you?

He:I am really sorry.Suddenly I lost my control and laughed.I won't repeat it.Again I am sorry.

Genda:You keep your 'sorry' with you.

Genda walked away angrily.He just smiled.




Present....

Sadhana entered the bedroom.

Alekh smiled at her.Sadhana blushed.

Alekh:Come...sit near me Sadhu.

Sadhana was surprised as he called her 'Sadhu'.

Sadhana:Sadhu?

Alekh:Ya...you did'nt like it?

Sadhana:I loved it.

Alekh:You look so cute that I felt like calling you by a cute nickname.

Sadhana blushed.

Alekh:Come near me.

Sadhana sat near him shyly.

Alekh:You tell me which toy you like.I have many toys.We will play with your favourite toys today.

Sadhana was stunned.

Sadhana:Playing with toys?Why?

Alekh:Maa said that if I get married I will get a friend to play with.Won't you play with me?

Sadhana was shocked and upset.She did not know how to react.

Sadhana thought:That means Alekh is mentally retarded.Such a big betrayal from his family.

Seeing Alekh's sad face she felt sad for him.

Sadhana:I will play with you.

Alekh became very happy.

They both played with toys.





Sadhana went near Alekh's mother Vasundara.

Sadhana:Mummiji,I want to talk to you.

Vasundara:I know what you want to tell me.You understood Alekh's condition.Right?

Sadhana:Yes.Why did you betray us?Why did you hide the truth from us?

Vasundara:Because if I had told you the truth,you would not have married him.The doctor said that a good wife can cure my son.That's why I wanted this wedding to happen.

Sadhana:But it's cheating.I cannot tolerate cheating.I am leaving.

Vasundara was shocked.

Vasundara:I can provide all kinds of comforts to you.If you leave,you will lose all your comforts.You are from a middle class family.I can even harm your parents and sisters.Don't forget that.

Sadhana got angry:You got me married to you mentally retarded son through cheating and now you are blackmailing me?You think I give value to a luxurious life?I want only a normal married life.If I don't get it,I don't need to stay here.

Vasundara:Then remember that your parents will be harmed.

Sadhana was shocked.

Vasudara walked away smirking.

Sadhana thought:I can't tell this to my family.They all are happy for me.If they know the truth,they will be shattered.




The frustrated Sadhana went to the nearby Shiv temple.

Sadhana:Hey Shivji....that evil woman has put me in a difficult situation.Please give me the strength to punish her.

She started doing thandav there.

She turned into a Naagin.

Sadhana:Vasundara....you threatened me that you will harm my family.I will not leave you.




A couple was having coffee together with a smile.They were Vivaan and Reema.

Their friend Puneet smiled at them.

Puneet:I am a break up consultant.I have helped many couples to break up.But I always look upto Vivaan and Reema as role models in love.They are a couple who does not need break up.




Vivaan went near Puneet.

Vivaan:Puneet...I need your help.

Puneet:Tell yaar.

Vivaan:Please help me to break up with Reema.

Puneet was shocked.

Puneet:What did you say?

Vivaan:You heard it right.I want to break up with Reema.

Puneet:But why?I considered you both as an ideal couple.You both love each other a lot.

Vivaan:But love is not enough for a relationship.

Puneet:But I can't do this break uo.

Vivaan:You are helping everyone else to break up.Then why can't you help your own friend?

Puneet:Because I break only the couples who don't love each other.

Vivaan:Please try to understand.Reema is too bubbly and childish for a serious guy like me.We are not a good match.

Puneet:Then why don't you directly break up with her?

Vivaan:Because I can't hurt her.She herself has to break up with me.

Puneet:You want a break up without hurting her.That means you love her.

Vivaan was silent.

Puneet:This break up is strange.Tell Reema that your parents won't give you the share of property.She may back out.

Vivaan:Good idea.




Vivaan met Reema.

Vivaan:Reema....my parents are giving all the properties to my sister.They are very partial towards her.If you live with me,you will suffer from poverty.So you can escape from my family.You can cancel this wedding.

Reema felt sad.

Reema looked at him emotionally.

Reema:Do you think that I value your property more than you?No Vivaan.I love you and not your property.

Vivaan looked at her emotionally in disbelief.

Reema:There is a dance party in the evening.Come for the party.Ok?

Vivaan nodded.

Reema:We will be staying in a resort.So pack your bags and come.

Vivaan:Ok.




Vivaan told everything to Puneet.

Vivaan:Your plan became a flop.

Puneet:Reema proved that she really loves you.Why do you want to break up with her Vivaan?

You said you want to break up with Reema because of her childish nature.But she was so mature when you told her about the property issue.Not only that.You are a detective who has many enemies because of your profession.Reema could have left you for her safety.Still she chose to be with you.That shows her maturity.Tell me Vivaan.Is this the real reason for wanting a break up with her?

Vivaan became dull.

He said in his mind:I can't tell you the reason Puneet.But even you will take the same decision if you were in my place.

Vivaan:Puneet..just shut up and help me.

Puneet nodded.




Vivaan and Puneet went for the dance party.

Reema introduced a girl to Puneet.

Reema:This is my best friend Reeva.Reeva...this is Vivaan's best friend Puneet.

Reeva:Hi!

Puneet was lost in Reeva.

Puneet:Hi!

Everyone started dancing.

Reeva was dancing joyfully.Puneet was mesmerized by her dance.

Raat Ye Karamjali Raat
Ye Sanak Chadhi Raat
Besharam Badi Hai

Aaj Karegi Mere Saath
Ye Koyi Khurafaat
Peechhe Hi Padhi Hai

Ow Raat Ye Karamjali Raat
Ye Sanak Chadhi Raat
Besharam Badi Hai

Aaj Karegi Mere Saath
Ye Koyi Khurafaat
Peechhe Hi Padhi Hai







Honi To Koyi
Ghalat Baat

Pakki Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Vivaan and Reema were dancing.

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine

Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Ghalti Hai Mauke Ki
Mera Dosh Nahi Hai
Kitni Tikayi Hai Mujhe
Hosh Nahi Hai

Hona Kya Hona Kya
Hona Ab 90 Ml Se
Litreon Mein Pike Bhi
Santosh Nahi Hai

Sakhi Aur Pilane Ko
Mare Jaa Rahe Ladke
Capacity Ke Mamle
Mein Saare Hain Kadke

Pi Ke Bhi Pi Ke Bhi
Pi Ke Bhi Jo Tika Raha
Saath Le Jaaungi
Girebaan Pakad Ke



Par Yeh Inayat Kal Subah
Tak Ki Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Puneet also started dancing.

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Jis Bar Mein Pairon Ki
Tere Dhool Padi Naa
Daaru Wahan Ki
Piyakkadon Ko Chadhi Naa

Waise To Maikhanon Ka
Main Bhi Hoon Farishta
To Fir How Come Meri
Nazar Kabhi Tujhse Ladi Naa

Aaj Ki Pehli Mulaqaat
Se Chhidi Hai Jo Baat
Dilchasp Badi Hai

Ki Saari Khurafaat
Ho Jaaye Lage Haath
Kya Soch Rahi Hai

Lagta Hai Dono
Ki Yeh Raat
Lucky Hai

Maine Bhi Maine Bhi
Maine Bhi
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai(
Tu Jhoothi Main Makkaar).

 

They took rooms in the sea resort.


Puneet knocked at the door of Reeva.Reeva opened the door.

Puneet was mesmerized by her wet curls.Her hair was wet as she had just taken bath.

Puneet:Good morning!

Reeva:Good morning!

Puneet:I came here to ask you something.Are you single or in a relationship?

Reeva:I am single.

Puneet became very happy.

Puneet:I am so glad that you are single.

Reeva:Why?

Puneet:Because I fell for you at the first sight itself.

Reeva was surprised.

Reeva asked him with a smile:What?Don't you think that you are too fast?

Puneet:Maybe.But in this case I prefer to be fast.Because I don't want to lose you to someone else by becoming slow.

Reeva smiled:Crazy!

Reeva closed the door.Puneet just smiled.

Puneet:Crazy for you.

.

I dedicate this SS to my friend Salley145 who wanted an Alekh-Sadhana story about a mentally retarded boy and a normal  girl.


Looks like Genda envies Sadhana of marrying Alekh. Shocking to know Alekh hasn't grown up mentally. Sadhana's question for Vasundhara was valid as it is a question of her entire life. Sadhna and Alekh's toy playing scenes are unusual. Vasundhara thought from mother's perspective, but she never thought about others and her threats mean that she is evil. Vivaan wanting to breakup with Reema was shocking.  Bubbliness shouldn't be the criteria to breakup. Waiting to know the real reason of Vivaan to break up with Reema.Genda's statement would hurt anyone and Varun's anger is justified. Hope she patches up with Varun and Sadhana takes it as a challenge to cure Alekh. Puneet and Revva's first meeting, song sequences and dialogues are romantic. 

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Enchanted hearts Part 2

 Reeva was drinking tea at the resort restaurant.Puneet sat opposite to her.

Puneet:Hi!

Reeva:Hi!

Puneet:You look very cute while drinking tea.

Reeva was blushing.

Kahani Ki Meri Saathiya
Hai Zubaan Tu Hi
Kahani Ki Meri Saathiya
Hai Zuban Tu Hi

Reeva:You are very good at giving compliments.But why are you giving me compliment now?

Puneet:As I told you before I fell in love with you.Will you love me?

Khwabon Se Bhi Haseen Jo Lage
Wo Subah Tu Hi
Hai Meri Bandagi Mein Koyi
To Dua Tu Hi

Reeva:Like I told you before you are crazy.Just because you asked me to love you,how can I love you?It should come from inside naturally.

Puneet showed her a puppy face.

Puneet:But I will keep trying.

Puneet walked away.

She smiled:Crazy!





Reema leaned towards Vivaan's lips.Vivaan was lost in that moment.

Suddenly he realised that Reema was going to kiss him and he moved backward.Reema was stunned.She went close to him.

Reema:What happened Vivaan?This is such a romantic atmosphere.Nice resort...beautiful beach..Then what happened to you?

Vivaan thought:How can I tell Reema that we are going to break up?

Vivaan:But I think it's not the right time.

Reema:Guess you are keeping everything for our honeymoon.Ok...no problem.

Vivaan gave her a pale smile.





Reeva was enjoying in the sea water.

Puneet went near her.

Puneet:Can I ask you something?You are not showing any interest to love me.Is it because you prefer time pass affairs?

Reeva:I prefer love.But only if I get someone special I can fall in love.I can't fall in love within a day.

Puneet looked at her deeply and said:But I can love you thousand times in a day.

She just smiled and walked away.

Ke Tujhse Hi Jaadui Jaadui
Jaadui Jaadui
Jaadui Lage Ye Zindagi






Sadhana turned into a serpent 

(Thank you very much Salley for making Sara's Naagin edit and surprising me).


and tried to bite Vasundara from behind.Vasundara did not see the serpent there.Before she could bite her,Alekh appeared there.He got scared seeing the serpent.

Alekh:Maa...there is a snake behind you.

Sadhana got tensed.

Vasundara turned back in shock.By that time Sadhana had turned into her human form.

Vasundara:There is no snake here beta.

Alekh:But I saw.

Suddenly Vasundara got a phone call to attend a meeting.

Vasundara:I have to leave now Alekh beta.Mumma will be back soon.

Vasundara stared at Sadhana and ordered:Look after my son.

Vasundara went out.

Alekh looked at Sadhana in fear.

Alekh:I saw the snake turning into you.How?

Sadhana became upset.

She went closer to Alekh 

and cupped his face in her palms.She stared at his eyes.

Sadhana:I am erasing your memory.You should forget what you saw Alekh.

Alekh forgot everything.

Alekh:Shall we play Sadhu?

Sadhana:Yes.

They went to play.





Reeva was walking along the beach.Puneet went near her.

Puneet:Hey...would you like to join me for a small date?Just to have milk shake.After all the weather is quite hot.Cold milk shake will do good.

Reeva:Ok.

They both walked to the outdoor restaurant and ordered milk shake.

Both were sipping milk shake and having casual talk.

Puneet was staring at Reeva.

Ke Tujhse Hi Jaadui Jaadui
Jaadui Jaadui
Jaadui Lage Ye Zindagi

Reeva:Why are you staring at me?

Puneet:You are so beautiful that I am not able to take my eyes off you.

She blushed.

Hai Jeene Ki Mere
Ab Koyi Toh Wajah Tu Hi
(Tu Jhoothi Main Makkaar).

 Genda remembered her past.



Flash back...

Genda went to her college auditorium.It was Talent's day.

They invited Aman Khan to sing.Aman came to the stage to sing.

Genda was surprised as he was the one with whom she had a fight when because of his car she got drenched with muddy water.

Genda was lost in his music.

Genda went near Aman after he finished singing.

Seeing Genda,Aman got surprised.

He asked her sarcastically:You came here to continue fighting with me?

Genda was embarrassed.

Genda:No.I came here to appreciate you.You sang well.

He smiled:Thank you.I did'nt know that you were in the same college.

Genda:Me too.

Aman:Your good name?

Genda:Genda.I have to go now.Because I have a dance to perform.

Aman:Sure.





Genda started dancing on the stage.

Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup
Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup
Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup ..



Hulchul hulchul ho gayi teri honth hai kyon chup
Hulchul hulchul ho gayi teri baithe hain gupchup
Pyaare pyaare chehre ne karte hain ishaara
Dekha teri aankhon ne hai sapna koi pyaara
Humse gori na tu sharma kehde humse zara
Humse gori na tu sharma kehde humse zara

Kehna hi kya ye nein ik anjaan se jo mile









Chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile
Jinko kabhi main na jaanoon
Vo humse hum unse kabhi na mile
Kaise mile dil na jaanoon
Ab kya karein kya naam lein
Kaise unhein main pukaroon

Kehna hi kya ye nein ik anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile
Jinko kabhi main na jaanoon
Vo humse hum unse kabhi na mile
Kaise mile dil na jaanoon
Ab kya karein kya naam lein
Kaise unhein main pukaroon

 

Pehli hi nazar mein kuchh hum kuchh tum


Ho jaate hain yoon gum
Neinon se barse rimjhim rimjhim
Humpe pyaar ka saawan
Sharam thodi thodi humko aaye to nazrein jhuk jaayein
Sitamb thoda thoda humpe shokh hwaa bhi kar jaayein
Aisi chale aanchal uthay dil mein ek toofan uthay
Hum to lut gaye khade hi khade

Kehna hi kya ye nein ik anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile


Armaan naye aise dil mein khile
Jinko kabhi main na jaanoon
Vo humse hum unse kabhi na mile
Kaise mile dil na jaanoon
Ab kya karein kya naam lein
Kaise unhein main pukaroon

Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup
Gumsum gumsum gupchup gumsum gupuchup ..
Hulchul hulchul ho gayi teri honth hai kyon chup
Hulchul hulchul ho gayi teri baithe hain gupchup
Pyaare pyaare chehre ne karte hain ishaara
Dekha teri aankhon ne hai sapna koi pyaara
Humse gori na tu sharma kehde humse zara
Humse gori na tu sharma kehde humse zara

In honthon na maanga sargam sargam
Tu aur tera hi pyaar hai
Aaj dhoondhe hai jisko hardam hardam
Tu aur tera hi pyaar hai
Mehfil mein bhi tanha hai dil aise dil aise
Tujhko kho na de darrta hai ye aise ye aise
Aaj mili aisi khushi jhoom uthi duniya ye meri
Tumko paaya to paayi zindagi

Kehna hi kya ye nein ik anjaan se jo mile


Chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile
Jinko kabhi main na jaanoon
Vo humse hum unse kabhi na mile
Kaise mile dil na jaanoon
Ab kya karein kya naam lein
Kaise unhein main pukaroon

Kehna hi kya ye nein ik anjaan se jo mile


Chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile
Kehna hi kya(Bombay).

Aman and his best friend Niranj were watching it.

Aman was lost in her dance.

Niranj asked him:It seems that you are not able to take your eyes off her.

Aman became shy.

Aman:Nothing like that.

Niranj:I can see it my dear friend.

Aman blushed.




Genda was in her college library.Aman sat near her.

Aman:Hi!

Genda:Hi!

Aman:I saw your dance.You are a beautiful dancer.

Genda:Thank you.

Aman:When you were dancing I could not stop looking at you.You were that beautiful.

Genda blushed.

Present...

At night...

Genda was dressed to have the karwachauth ceremony.While walking she slipped and before she fell down,Varun caught her.

She remembered a similar past moment with Aman.



Flash back...

Once Aman and Genda collided with each other and both fell down.Genda was on top of Aman.

They were lost in each other's eyes.

They came back to senses and moved away from each other shyly.



Present...

Genda moved away from Varun.

Varun:Genda...I held you only to protect you,not to touch you.So no need to feel disgusted with my touch.

She was silent.

She took the sieve and viewed the moon.She chanted kirtan.

She moved towards Varun to view Varun through it.She imagined Aman there with a smile and did the karwachauth ceremony.

Varun broke her fast.

Genda broke Varun's fast imagining him as Aman.

Varun said painfully:I know that you took the karwachauth vrath for Aman,not for me.No husband should have my fate.

Genda became upset and looked at him painfully.

Reeva was sitting on the beach looking at the stars.Puneet sat near her.

Both were silent.Reeva broke the silence.

Reeva:Why are you not saying anything?

Puneet:I have only one thing to tell you."I love you"which I already told you many times.Now i have nothing more to say.

Reeva smiled.

Ke Tujhse Hi Jaadui Jaadui
Jaadui Jaadui
Jaadui Lage Ye Zindagi

Puneet:I can see love in your eyes too for me.

Main Poore Ka Poora Hoon
Main Ab Nahi
Ke Usmein Se Aadha Hai Tu

Reeva:Really?Why do you think so?

Puneet:Otherwise whenever I say 'I love you' to you,instead of smiling you would have been angry with me.

Reeva smiled.

Ya Mumkin Hai Mujhmein Hi
Rehna Laga
Mujhse Bhi Jyada Hai Tu
(Tu Jhoothi Main Makkaar).

Sadhana's hand got pricked while playing with a broken toy.Alekh became very upset.

Alekh:Blood is coming.Is it really paining Sadhu?

Sadhana:No Alekh.It's a small injury.Only a few drops of blood are there.Don't get scared.

Alekh:Don't leave it like that Sadhu.

Alekh wiped the blood drops with cotton.He put ointment on her finger.

Sadhana was touched by his behaviour.

She thought:Though Alekh is like a kid,now he showed maturity.It's surprising.

Suddenly Alekh broke the toy completely with his leg(He has worn shoes).

Sadhana was shocked.

Sadhana:What did you do Alekh?

Alekh:I don't want the toy which hurt my Sadhu.

Sadhana thought:What kind of behaviour is this?




Genda switched on the TV.

She was shocked to hear the news.

"The famous singer Aman Khan passed away due to cardiac arrest during his stage performance".

Genda was shattered and cried.Varun was shocked.

Genda:I took Karwachauth vrat for Aman.Then why did God take his life so fast?

Varun felt sad.

Genda felt so weak that she felt like fainting.Varun held her hand.Genda embraced him emotionally.She was not in her senses.Varun embraced her back and caressed her.

He did not know how to comfort her.




Puneet and Reeva were sitting at the beach and watching the sea waves.Puneet leaned towards her cheek to kiss her.Reeva got irritated.

Reeva:Stop it Puneet.I did not give you the permission to come closer to me.

Puneet became dull.

Puneet:I thought you love me.That's why I....

Reeva:Just because I smiled at you and spent some time with you it does'nt mean that I love you.

Puneet was shattered.

Puneet:The way you smiled at me...your facial expressions...I saw love in everything.That's why I thought so.

Reeva:Don't expect anything like that from me Puneet.

Puneet:I will conquer your heart Reeva.

Reeva:Don't waste your time.It's not going to happen ever.

Reeva walked away leaving Puneet in pain.


Edited by jasminerahul - 4 months ago
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Sad partsmiley19

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Very emotional part dear

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Part 2

Emotional update... nicely written

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Reeva and Puneet have a different concept of falling in love. Reeva is looking for deeper feelings before she declares anything.

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Vasundara escaped this time. We can understand her plight as a mother but she does not deserve any sympathy for what she did.

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Genda is not able to forget Aman. Varun can only watch painfully.

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Posted: 4 months ago

Puneet complimenting Reeva and the latter's blushes seemed that Reeva feels for him. However, I  think Puneet is rushing out instead of allowing things to take its course. Romantic song sequences. Reeva's being rude to Puneet for trying to kiss her was natural as she told him that she can't falll in love overnight. Genda and Aman complimenting each other after unpleasant incident seemed that Genda would choose Aman over Varun. The KC scenes of Varun and Genda seemed that Genda didn't have anything to do with that ritual as she thought about Aman. Aman's death was shocking. Usually you don't kill a character. I wonder how come you decided to kill Aman. Shocking that Sadhana became a serpent and developed supernatural powers. Shocking that she went to bite Vasundara. Alekh stopping that incident on time was because of his presence of mind. Sadhana  managing to make Alekh forget what he saw was natural.  Any  wife having the power to make a person on what he saw would have done the same. Sadhana getting injured and Alekh tending to her wounds is a passionate scene. Alekh breaking the tip that hurt Sadhana is Shocking. Sad that Vivaan avoided Reema's kiss. Looks like Vivaan is putting Reema in darkness. Waiting to know Reema's reaction about the breakup.

Edited by kavitha_r - 4 months ago