Something About You- MG || (Part 42|Page 51) - Page 7

Wat an update superb story is getting interesting

No but excited to read 😊

Part 4

Nice update… amazingly written 

at least Maan wanted to help Geet

Geet's curiosity were reasonable

her inner thoughts well portrayed

sad seeing her low confidence

well Maan is attending his family party

great that Geet is catering that the same party

I am sure Maan had something to do with this

of cos the ladies want to impress Maan

why was Maan excluded by his family?

Maan clearly hates these ladies that are after him for his money

so they know not to approach him

as expected Maan noticed Geet

but she assumed he would not

liked how Geet handled the situation

pleased seeing Maan's concern for her

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

not surprised that Maan danced with Geet

Geet certainly did not anticipate this

everyone were astounded

angry that they taunted Geet

they were clearly jealous

Geet leaving was understandable

update soon

4

nice update

geet clear her side to maan 

geet get contract of catering in maan's family's party

maan dance with geet shocking everyone  

Part 4

Fascinating and Hilarious 

So Geet has managed to cater for the Khurana family.

while I enjoyed Maan observing her 

and finally when their eyes meet , he knew it's Geet 

she had thought Maan would mock at her but rather he once again

seems impressed with her , of course she is a real woman in his eyes 

very much different to the high class women who all looks the same .

oh lovely the time for dancing and Maan takes Geet to the floor and they certainly

must have danced beautiful 

First 3 chapters were like fillers, now the story begin from here

 Loved it. 

Nice update, Maan geet meeting happened once again and they danced wow, the story getting interesting, update soon

Wonderful update! Aww Geet catering to Maan’s family party. He recognised her immediately, & now stalking her.. that dance was beautiful.. feels like a beginning to something very interesting.. eager for more.. thanks for continuous updates.. gives a feeling of watching a serial daily waiting for the next 

This sounds like something worth reading,  need more romance between :) 😀 😍😍😍

Star Commenter Award

We are again starting our Star commenter Awards with this story. As i say, your comments are my fuel. More the comments utni hi jaldi energy I get to post the next update.

Congratulations to the following winners!

Early Bird Award- Gold.Abrol

Star Commenter Winner- Khwaishfan

Special Mention-  KingAli Aatiya

While we are at it, let's guess how the story will progress in the next parts and any song that comes to your mind about the story. Let’s have some fun!!!

Part 5

His fingers slowly trace her face mask to pull it off.

She resists. 

He stops.

But miracle did happen, he did dance with a girl at a party.

Koi maane naa maane those few minutes were captivating.

Geet jaldi se goes back to her pasta station.

She takes her bare minimum stuff and flees the area.

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Maan’s Point of View-

After their first meeting and he getting the room rent from her; somehow, she remained in his mind.

Maybe because he didn't expect her to cave in. As no cunning woman would have

Or he blames the incessant TV and YouTube ads being played for some B grade cream where she had appeared.  

Or incessant repeat telecast of daily soap where she was a side actor.

They were not in contact but whenever he switched on any entertainment, she would appear.

He even remembers sasural simar ke kitne episode mein aayi wo; yaa muhaason ke liye kaunsi cream achi hai.

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Due to that party dance fiasco & Geet fleeing; organizers ne Geet ko pay karne se manaa kr diya

Geet was naturally really upset coz it was a high-profile contract. Kaafi market se paisa uthaya tha usne to complete the work ab they are not paying.

Ab usko kya uska catering business bhi band karna padega? Geet wonders

She was begging the organizers & also the people she had borrowed from.

The Poor girl is in utter shock and mess all because of Maan. Kya kare wo? Even if money is returned. Reputation is not returned... cannot be in entertainment... cannot be in catering... all paths in her life have been blocked. Kya kare woh?

Maan was also somewhat superficially aware of her troubles, this is just their high-class snobbery...he pulled her to dance. Then why are they making her pay for it and not paying her due for her honest work?

He realizes her situation. But he cannot help her outright. For one thing she may not accept his help. And secondly if people find out he helped out a little no name nobody, her troubles will only keep increasing. There are many people who wouldn't think twice to hurt and use her to get to him.

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Geet’s family was already into food business. This whole chattering gig was her trying to build upon that and expand on it.

Abhi ye sab ke baad, she was feeling all the negative things plus extra stressed, worried and feeling pressured from her family side.

Funds ka loss phir bhi ek baar manage ho jayega... but her dad and brother have lost confidence in her abilities... 

It wasn't right... it was her idea... her groundwork... her contacts... her pleading begging appeasing clients to get so many opportunities for catering till now...

It was her blood sweat and tear indeed.

Her family side her father and brother only provided the food... everything from getting the contracts to management of staff at site and to completing the job was her hard work.

And yet... one time she had to cook pasta... this disaster happened.

She was so afraid of being mocked... of being told 'we told you so' ... of once again being told to keep her high reaching ideas to herself. And don't try to reach for the stars.

She was afraid to go home and face the music ... but she had to go as she did not have any money to stay in the city and pay the rents.

So, she went... going back at late night stealthily opening the door trying to make as little noise as possible... all way tip toeing to her room... only to overhear a hushed conversation coming from her father's study.

Undoubtedly her father and brother were discussing what to do about this fiasco... how to manage the lost funds.

For a moment Geet felt grateful and happy to have this sort of silent unconditional support from her family... maybe it was just her first dream that was wrong... they won't stop her from doing what they think is 'respectable' business.

Feeling as if all her burdens have been put down, Geet turned back to go to her room. But stopped again. 

Brother-What do we tell Geet?

Father-What is there to tell. From the beginning I knew she can't do it. Didn't I say this is not for her? I knew she was going to mess up and we would have to clean up her mess as always.

Brother- We have to come up with a permanent way out. If we tell her everything is handled she will again try to...

Father- No... we can't let her ruin this catering business we have started up with so much effort. Let's just tell her she is out coz of her inability to handle a small event. 

Brother-Hmm... let's tell her to come up with the lost funds if she wants to be part of our catering business.

Father- Yes... Yes...that's how it should be... and even if she does come up with it... let's not let her run around shamefully anymore.

Brother-Yes, it’s better if she was working in the back kitchen from the start. Doesn’t she know about her own face? Insisting on cooking live. I knew it will end up in some disaster!

Father-Yes... anyways her cooking skills are good enough... better she helps out in the back kitchen... we can let her do this if she comes up with the lost funds.

Brother- Otherwise she is totally out

Father- Agreed... so, the next job...

Geet heard her father and brother talk and felt cold all over again... wasn't burning her hair and chopping it off enough? What did her brother mean she didn't know her face?

Didn't she know it and want to leverage it(be an actress)? But nooo... that was not respectable, and this is out of her capabilities... huh...

She scoffed internally... feeling her heart turn cold and shatter a bit once more.

Their business they said... she knew her chauvinistic father and brother very well... once they start calling it theirs, she really can't be a part of it... no matter if she can return the funds or get more clients... she will be seen as just an annoying kitchenhand.

She silently went up to get and started packing her things feeling suffocated and directionless. 

Everything is restricted. What she can do... what she can say... what she can even eat and dress up as... at this rate...

Geet shuddered getting more chilled... would she really end up in some man's kitchen... unseen unheard... a tool for only making babies and doing household chores?

She hurried up packing her things... no matter where she has to go. She has to go. Anywhere. Somewhere.